内容正文:
主题5促进中学生“五育并举”的发展
&勤于动手,乐于实践,敢于创新
●中考命题角度探究
陕西中考
2024陕西书面表达:叙述栽培植物的经历和感受
中考命题
角度探究
德育:乐于助人,如何做一名新时代的好少年
全国视野
美育:美育知识,艺术课程,引导审美情趣
劳育:劳动实践的经历与感受,劳动精神,倡导参加劳动实践活动
●教材单元主题链接
人教版
八(上)U8 Cooking
八(下)U8 Literature and music
八(下)U3 Chores and permission
九(全)U9 Music and movies
阶
课本句型促写作
©课本句型积累
1.I suppose tree planting is very important work.It's also a great way to learn about nature.
开头句
2.There are many kinds of music in the world.Music makes people happy.Good music brings people
comfort and peace of mind.Everyone loves music but different people have different tastes.
3.To live more healthily and happily,we are supposed to learn more new life skills.
1.
Doing chores helps to develop children's independence and teaches them how to look after themselves.
[人教八(下)U3]
2.I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores.[人教八(下)U3改编]
3.Since students live in one house with their parents,they should know that everyone should do their part
in keeping it clean and tidy.[人教八(下)U3]
劳动
4.I often do some cleaning at home and I like a clean and tidy house..[外研七(下)M2改编]
实践
5.Students are able to learn necessary life skills by taking cleaning or cooking lessons in school.
中
6.It seems that doing some housework such as cooking and cleaning is good for us.
间
7.Some students are interested in taking part in social practice activities while others plan to do
句
housework.
8.It's important to learn some basic life skills,like cooking,washing clothes and tidying up our rooms.
美育
1.I like smooth music that helps me relax after a long week at work.[人教九(全)U9
知识
2.It's our duty to value and spread Chinese culture.
3.The reason why we plan a visit to a tea house is that we can learn a lot about tea culture there.
智育
1.
(学习
Daniel always thinks carefully when he works.He plans everything well.[译林牛津七(下)M7]
2.
We should deal with the difficulties we meet wisely.It can help us become better persons.
方法)
1.Carrying out labor education makes school life more colorful and meaningful.
2.Leaming life skills is necessary for us,because what we depend on is what we learn.
结尾句
3.I'm sure the earlier we leam to be independent,the better our future will be.
Instead of being afraid of challenges,we should try our best to solve the problems in our study and life.
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⑨课本句型变式练
◆句子翻译
1.小组学习也是了解合作的好方法。(Tip:f's also a great way to learn about..…)
2.学生们应该参加一些劳动活动,比如打扫教室或种树。(Tip:be supposed to do sth.)
3.参加志愿活动使我们能够学会更关心他人和社会。(Tip:be able to do sth.)
4.学着管理自己的时间和事务能培养我们的独立性。(Tip:develop one's independence)
5.我认为对我们学生来说,在家做家务很重要。(Tip:I think it is important for sb.to do sth.)
6.学生们应该在保持教室整洁方面尽自己的一份力。(Tip:do one's part in)
7.尊重老师、帮助有困难的同学是我们的责任。(Tip:t's our duty to do sth.)
8.我们应该在美术课上尽力创作优美的作品。(Tip:try one's best to do sth.)
◆句式升格
9.We should take art classes seriously.Art classes teach us to find beauty.(Tip:The reason why...is that...)
10.
We should try different methods.We solve math problems.(Tip:when)
二阶典例探究明思路
热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德。作为中学生,我们要积极参加
劳动实践。你校英语报发起了以“Enjoy Labor,.Enjoy Life”为主题的征
审题四要素:
文活动,请你根据写作要求,简单介绍你经常参加的劳动,从中得到的
审体裁:记叙文
收获和你的建议,认真完成写作任务。……
审人称:第一人称为主
●The labor you do at school,at home or in the community(cleaning the审时态:一般现在时为主
classroom,cooking and washing dishes,helping the elderly,...);
审要点:在学校、家里或社区做的
.The things you get from labor (learning skills,a sense of pride,...);
劳动,劳动中取得的收获和你的
●Your suggestion.
建议
Enjoy Labor,Enjoy Life
It is well-known that loving labor is a traditional Chinese virtue.
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②写作剖析
一、构思:框架导图&参考表达
例:作为一名中学生,我在日常生活中经常参加劳动活
Beginning-一介绍
动。(翻译)
些自己在学校、家
参考表达:
①do labor activities:
和社区的劳动实
践
②do volunteer work
例:我会做志愿工作去帮助老人和残疾人。(翻译)
参考表达:①learn
I have got a strong feeling of pride.I have become more
some basic life skills;
and more independent and responsible.(not only...but
Body一介绍劳动收获
②a strong feeling of
also.连接)
pride;③not only..
but also...
参考表达:①
believe that从句;
例:让我们积极参与到劳动活动中。(翻译)
Ending一写结语,
给青少年一些建议
②encourage sb.to
do sth.;③Let's take
an active part in sth.
二、落笔:连句成篇&独立写作
Enjoy Labor,Enjoy Life
It is well-known that loving labor is a traditional Chinese virtue.
“构思”答案:As a middle school student,I often take part in labor activities in everyday life..;I do volunteer work
to help the elderly and the disabled.;I have not only got a strong feeling of pride but also become more and more
independent and responsible.;Let's take an active part in labor activities.
三阶写作实战提能力
一、“恰同学少年,风华正茂;书生意气,挥斥方遒。”为践行教育部提出的“五育并举”,培养“德、智、体、美、
劳”全面发展的时代新人,学校开展争当“五星少年”的活动。假如你是李华,请你根据写作要求,写一份英
文自荐报告。
1.你已得到德智体三颗星,请说明理由(如严于律己,友爱互助;努力学习;健康饮食等):
2.对于还未得到的美劳两颗星,你将怎么做(如你准备学习一门艺术,学会做家务等)。
参考词汇:morality(道德),intelligence(才智)
要求:
1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥:
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
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How to Become a Five-star Student
I'm Li Hua.I want to be a five-star student.Here is my report.
二、自主学习不仅是获取知识的重要方式,更是一种终身学习的态度。为了帮助同学们了解自主学习的重要
性,激发学习的热情,你校英语社团将组织以“The Power of Self-directed Learning”为题的经验交流会,你将作
为班级代表发言,请你根据写作要求,用英语写一篇发言稿。
.What is the meaning of self-directed learning?(choosing knowledge to learn,interests)
What self-directed learning experiences have you had?
.What do you think of self-directed learning?
要求:
1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名);
4.词数:不少于70。(标题已给出,但不计入总词数。)
The Power of Self-directed Learning
Reflecting
©
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⑨
How well can you do these things?
Very well
OK
Needs work
·I can keep my writing paper clean.(2分)
口
口
口
.I can use correct English expressions in writing.(5)
口
口
口
·I can write all the points..(5分)
口
口
口
My article is clearly structured and well organized.(3)
口
口
口
Self-assessment
Overall comment
Peer review
Teacher's assessment
Total score:
/15
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friends in the club.
In my opinion,reading is a lifelong journey.We can see the
world in books.Let's read together.
主题4身心健康,抗挫能力,珍爱生命的
意识&日常体育活动,重大体育赛事,
体育精神
一阶课本句型促写作
1.Students should pay much more attention to daily exercise.
2.It is necessary for teenagers to learn to face difficulties bravely.
3.Teamwork in sports activities is of great importance to students.
4.It is a good choice for us students to go to bed and get up early.
5.There is no doubt that doing sports makes our bodies strong.
6.We should be friendly to our classmates and be brave to try new
sports with them.
7.Playing ball games with friends can keep us in a good mood.
8.When we feel upset,we can spend time with our teachers or good
friends.
9.The more we take part in outdoor sports,the healthier our bodies
and minds will be.
10.We should never give up exercising because it's hard to stay
healthy both in body and mind without it.
二阶典例探究明思路
How to Improve Physical Strength
It's very important to improve middle school students'physical
strength.Good physical strength can keep us energetic and help us
enjoy life better.
First of all,playing basketball is a great choice.It not only
helps make us more active but also develops teamwork.When
playing basketball,students need to move,pass and shoot together,
which teaches them to work with others.Secondly,a balanced diet is
also very important.We should eat more fruits and vegetables.These
foods provide necessary energy for daily activities.Besides,getting
enough sleep is necessary.Having a good sleep helps our bodies
recover and grow better.
By doing these,middle school students can have stronger
bodies.In this way,we can grow up healthily and study and live
better.
三阶写作实战提能力
These days,we have more time to do sports.We experienced
more and surely made progress.As for me,I can't forget my friend
Wang Gang.
Wang Gang is good at playing basketball,but I wasn't.Wang
Gang saw this and came to help me.He showed me how to move the
ball and taught me how to pass or catch the ball.After that,he
encouraged me to play basketball with others.He had a great
influence on me.I started to play better and better.
The more I play it,the more I like it.Now we're both in the
class team.I will never forget his help and I will help others
like him!
主题5促进中学生“五育并举”的发展
&勤于动手,乐于实践,敢于创新
一阶课本句型促写作
1.It's also a great way to leam about working together through group
study.
2.Students are supposed to take part in some labor activities,like
cleaning the classroom or planting trees.
3.Taking part in volunteer activities makes us be able to care more
about others and society.
4.Learning to manage our own time and things can develop our inde-
pendence.
5.I think it is important for us students to do housework at home.
6.Students should do their part in keeping the classroom clean.
7.It's our duty to respect our teachers and help classmates in need.
8.We should try our best to create beautiful works in art classes.
9.The reason why we should take art classes seriously is that they
teach us to find beauty
10.We should try different methods when we solve math problems.
二阶典例探究明思路
Enjoy Labor,Enjoy Life
It is well-known that loving labor is a traditional Chinese virtue.
As a middle school student,I often take part in labor activities
in everyday life.For example,I clean the classroom and playground
with my classmates at school.I do some cooking,wash clothes and
tidy rooms at home.And in the community,I do volunteer work to
help the elderly and the disabled.
By doing these,I've learnt some basic life skills to take care of
myself.Besides,I have not only got a strong feeling of pride but also
become more and more independent and responsible.
All in all,I believe that labor education is important for our
development and I encourage all teenagers to actively experience
labor activities.Let's take an active part in labor activities.
三阶写作实战提能力
一、
How to Become a Five-star Student
I'm Li Hua.I want to be a five-star student.Here is my report.
I have already got three stars.First,I am strict with myself and
always help others,so I have the star of morality.Second,I study
hard,read many books and get good grades,so I get the star of intel-
ligence.Third,I eat healthily and do sports every day,so I am
strong and get the star of health.
However,I still need to work hard for the stars of art and labor.I
am going to learn painting to improve my sense of beauty.I will also do
more housework at home,such as cooking and cleaning.
I will try my best to be a five-star student.
二、
The Power of Self-directed Learning
In my opinion,self-directed learning means choosing what to
learn by ourselves,rather than having someone make us learn it.It's
all about seeking knowledge according to our own interests.
I have an experience of self-directed learning.I was really inter-
ested in making model planes.Since there was no such class at
school,I decided to learn it by myself.I read lots of books about how
planes work,watched many online videos,and tried making models
time after time.During this period,I ran into many problems,but I
kept finding ways to solve them on my own.
Self-directed learning helps us become better learners and make
good preparations for future challenges.Let's start self-directed learn-
ing and find out how much we can do!
主题6自我认识,自我管理,自我提升&
职业启蒙,职业精神
一阶课本句型促写作
1.I hope to plan study time well and finish homework on time.
2.I dream of becoming/being a science teacher in the future.
3.I'm always ready to learn new skills for my photography hobby.
4.I'm popular in the school painting club because I often share
simple drawing skills.
5.She is polite to every member in the chess club.
6.I spend an hour practicing playing the violin every evening
because I want to be a violinist.
7.Working hard and never giving up will help us make our dreams
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