内容正文:
Unit 1 Time to Relax. (写作提升)
如何介绍自己的爱好
⭐典例导引⭐
本单元的话题是“爱好”,写此类作文时,一般先点明自己的爱好是什么。接着,追溯爱好的萌芽历程,详述起始时间与缘由。最后,阐释爱好给自己带来的积极影响。此类作文体裁为记叙文,多以第一人称叙述,时态主要涉及一般过去时与一般现在时。行文过程中,可巧妙运用本单元所学的动词不定式作宾语补足语等语法结构。本单元相关话题写作素材有:
(1)My favourite free-time activity is... 我最喜欢的休闲活动是......
(2)I find it fun to... 我发现......很有趣。
(3)It makes me feel happy to.... 令我很高兴......。
(4)It's a great way to ...这是……的一种好方式。
(5)But most importantly,it lets me....但是最重要的是,这让我......
(6)It gives me such a sense of.... 它给我一种......感。
(7)I think it's interesting to see... and... 我认为看到......和......很有趣。
⭐典例剖析⭐
每个人都有自己的爱好,学校英文报开展以“My hobby”为题的征文大赛,请你以这个题目写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容包括:
1. 说出你的一个爱好;
2.你是如何培养这个爱好的(开始时间、起因等);
3.这个爱好对你的影响(至少两点)。
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⭐思维导图⭐
⭐范文介绍⭐
⭐素材宝库⭐
词汇积累
一.主题词汇积累
兴趣爱好
1.hobby业余爱好
2.interest兴趣
3.favourite特别喜欢的(人或事) join参加
4.a fan of...……迷
5.play basketball/football打篮球/踢足球
6.be interested in对……感兴趣
7.love/like/enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
谈论好处
1.the importance of teamwork 团队合作的重要性
2.help me keep fit帮我保持健康
3.be good for对……有好处
4.bring me a lot of fun给我带来很多乐趣
5.give us knowledge给予我们知识
6.so much fun如此多的乐趣
交友经历
1.at first起初
2.at last最终,最后
3.make friends交朋友
4.share the joy of...分享……的乐趣
5.with one’s help在某人的帮助下
6.offer to do sth.主动提出做某事
7.help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
句型积累
开头句
1.I love/enjoy/like...very much.我非常喜欢……
2.I’m really interested in...我对……很感兴趣。
3.My hobby is...我的爱好是……
中间句
1.与爱好的好处有关
It is great fun to...……有巨大的乐趣。
It can help/make/give me...它可以帮助/使/给我……
It is good for...它对……有好处。
It feels great to do sth.做某事感觉很棒。
2.与交友有关
I want to make friends and share the joy of...我想交朋友并分享……的乐趣。
He always helps me...in his free time.他总是在空闲时间帮我……
We often...together after class/school.下课/放学后,我们经常一起……
With his help, my...improved a lot.在他的帮助下,我的……提升了很多。
结尾句
In my opinion/view, ...在我看来,……
I love my hobby very much.我非常喜欢我的爱好。
谚语名句
1.Interest is the best teacher.兴趣是最好的老师。
2.A hobby plays an important role in our daily life.爱好在我们的日常生活中起着重要的作用。
3.Hobbies are an important step to knowledge.爱好是获得知识的重要一步。
⭐专项训练⭐
1.爱因斯坦曾言:“热爱和兴趣是最好的老师。”相信你一定也有一个或多个自己的爱好。请以“My Hobby”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下自己的爱好及其原因。
写作要求:
1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数60左右。
My Hobby
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【答案】
My Hobby
Today, I want to talk about my hobby. My hobby is playing the piano.
Every day after school, I spend thirty minutes playing the piano. Sometimes it is hard to learn, but I like it. At school, I join the piano club. We meet every week and share our feelings. It’s great to play with other club members.
I love playing the piano because the music can make me happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:文章应围绕个人爱好展开,重点介绍爱好内容及其原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你的爱好——弹钢琴;
第二步,描述将弹钢琴这个爱好融入日常生活和学校社交;
第三步,说明喜欢弹钢琴的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
②join加入
③share分享
[高分句型]
I love playing the piano because the music can make me happy.(because引导的原因状语从句)
2.业余爱好能陶冶我们的情操、提高我们的文化素养、增加生活的乐趣。作为一名中学生,你在忙碌的学习之余喜欢做些什么?请根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的业余爱好。
要点:(1)你的业余爱好是什么;
(2)你为什么有这样的爱好;
(3)它给你带来了什么变化。
要求:(1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
(2)词数100左右。
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【答案】
Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I. One of my hobbies that I’d like to share is playing soccer.
I play it at least twice a week. One of the main reasons is that it can help us relax. As students, we have much pressure from school, so the best way to relax is through exercise. It’s healthy for the mind and the body. Besides, I like playing soccer with my best friend who is very good at soccer because I can learn from him.
Through playing soccer, I become much stronger than before. At the same time, I know the deep meaning of teamwork.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山说明爱好(如阅读),并简要描述频率或起源。
第二步,解释爱好的原因(如放松、学习知识),用具体例子支持。
第三步,总结爱好带来的积极变化(如提升能力、丰富生活)。
[亮点词汇]
①One of………之一
②would like to do sth想要做某事
③at least至少
④help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
⑤pressure压力
⑥like doing sth喜欢做某事
⑦be good at擅长
⑧At the same time同时
[高分句型]
①One of the main reasons is that it can help us relax. (that引导表语从句)
②As students, we have much pressure from school, so the best way to relax is through exercise. (so引导的结果状语从句)
③Besides, I like playing soccer with my best friend who is very good at soccer because I can learn from him. (who引导的定语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
3.每一个人都有爱好,请根据以下思维导图写一篇文章,分享你的爱好。
内容包括:
1. 你的爱好是什么?
2. 为什么喜欢它?
3. 如何通过爱好交朋友?
4. 你从中的收获是什么?
写作要求:
1. 词数为70词左右;
2. 结合所给要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My hobby
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【答案】
My hobby
My hobby is playing basketball. I started to play it three years ago.
I like it because it is exciting and helps me keep fit. It also helps me relax after school. I often play basketball with my classmates and we help each other improve our skills. Through basketball, I have made new friends who also love sports. I have learned teamwork and become more confident.
Playing basketball makes my life happier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的爱好;
第二步,具体阐述喜欢它的原因,如何通过爱好交朋友以及爱好给自己带来了什么收获;
第三步,总结对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①keep fit保持健康
②help each other相互帮助
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①I often play basketball with my classmates and we help each other improve our skills.(并列句)
②Through basketball, I have made new friends who also love sports.(定语从句)
4.爱好是校园生活里的“小乐趣”,它能让我们的课余时光更精彩。作为初中生,你的爱好是什么?请以“My Hobby and My School Life”为题,根据下面所给信息,写一篇短文。
注意事项:
1. 内容涵盖所有要点,适当拓展,全文连贯通顺。
2. 文中不得提及个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
3. 词数70左右。
My Hobby and My School Life
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【答案】
My Hobby and My School Life
Reading is my favorite hobby because it is so interesting and meaningful. I joined the Reading Club at school last year. In the club, we often share different books with each other and talk about the stories we read. I not only learn a lot of new knowledge through reading, but I also make many friends. It makes my school life much more colorful and fun.
【详解】①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据题干中的提示要点介绍自己的爱好和学校生活,可适当增加细节。写作时,注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,点明自己的爱好;
第二步,介绍自己参加了什么俱乐部以及在俱乐部做什么;
第三步,表达爱好如何使校园生活更好。
[亮点词汇]
①interesting有趣的
②share分享
③each other彼此
④not only...but also不但……而且
[高分句型]
Reading is my favorite hobby because it’s so interesting. (动名词作主语)
5.你校英语社团正在开展以“Making Friends Through my Hobby”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语短文,向社团投稿。
要求:
1. 词数70左右;
2. 文中须包含以下要点,所给词汇仅供参考选择使用;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
要点
参考词汇
What is your hobby?
Reading.../ collecting.../ playing basketball/...
How does it help you become friends?
share... with.../ talk about.../ do...together/...
What can you learn from your hobby?
get knowledge about.../ learn the spirit of cooperation (合作)/...
Everyone has hobbies. For me, ______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Everyone has hobbies. For me, I like playing basketball best.
If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. By playing basketball, I have made many friends who have the same hobby as me. We often share something about basketball with each other.
At the same time, by playing basketball, I not only get knowledge about basketball, I also learn the spirit of cooperation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇征文,主题为“Making Friends Through my Hobby”;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,包括介绍自己的爱好、爱好如何帮助自己交朋友以及从爱好中学到了什么,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“Everyone has hobbies”来引出自己的爱好;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“自己的爱好、爱好如何帮助自己交朋友以及从爱好中学到了什么”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语。总结爱好带来的益处。
[亮点词汇]
①have hobbies 有爱好
②play basketball 打篮球
③have the same hobby as 与……有相同的爱好
[高分句型]
①By playing basketball, I have made many friends who have the same hobby as me.(定语从句)
②At the same time, by playing basketball, I not only get knowledge about basketball, I also learn the spirit of cooperation.(“not only...but also...”句型)
6.良好的兴趣爱好对我们的学习和生活带来很大的帮助。为鼓励同学们积极发展自己的兴趣爱好, 校英文杂志“Hobby World”专栏开展以“My favourite hobby”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下写作要点,用英语写一篇60词左右的短文投稿。
写作要点:
1.你最喜欢的一项爱好是什么?
2.你是如何开展这项爱好的?(时间、地点等)
3.这项爱好给你带来什么好处?(至少两点)
写作要求:
1.内容必须包含所提示的信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息(校名、班级、姓名等真实信息)。
参考词汇: bring(v.带来) knowledge(n.知识) colorful(adj.多彩的)
My favourite hobby
My favourite hobby is _____________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
My favourite hobby
My favourite hobby is reading. I often spend two hours reading books in the library at weekends. And I’m interested in novels as well as history books. Besides, I often take part in reading competitions. Reading brings me a lot. First, some interesting stories can bring me pleasure. Second, reading is a good way to improve my writing skills. I will be able to write better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:需包含爱好内容、开展方式、两点好处。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山说明爱好是阅读;
第二步:说明开展爱好的时间和地点;
第三步:清晰说明两点好处。
[亮点词汇]
①at weekends在周末
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
Second, reading is a good way to improve my writing skills.(不定式作定语)
7.爱因斯坦说,热爱和兴趣是最好的老师,你一定也有一个或多个自己的爱好。假设你爱好阅读,请你根据下面的表格提示写一篇发言稿,和大家分享你的爱好吧。
内容
参考词汇
Your hobby
reading
Its benefits (益处)
fun, get knowledge, get better at writing...
Your hope
share the joy of reading together...
要求:1. 包括所有提示内容,可适当拓展;
2. 语言通顺,条理清楚,70词左右;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
Hello, everyone!
I’m happy to stand here to share my hobby with you. __________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Hello, everyone!
I’m happy to stand here to share my hobby with you. My hobby is reading. I enjoy reading books because it is really fun. When I read books, I can get lots of knowledge—like interesting stories and cool facts about animals or nature. Also, reading helps me write better, because I learn nice words from books.
I hope everyone can love reading and read more good books. Let’s share the joy of reading together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:需覆盖表格中所有内容(爱好、益处、希望),可适当补充细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,直接点明个人爱好是阅读;
第二步,分点阐述阅读的益处,说明能获取多样知识,补充阅读对提升写作的帮助及原因,论据具体且贴合学生生活;
第三步,书写结语,发出爱阅读、多读书的倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy reading books喜欢读书
②get lots of knowledge获取大量知识
③learn...from...从……学习
[高分句型]
①I enjoy reading books because it is really fun.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②I hope everyone can love reading and read more good books.(宾语从句)
8.爱好是我们生活中的重要部分。英语老师请每位同学写一份英文发言稿,描述你的爱好是什么,你通常做些什么,以及你能从这个爱好中获得什么。
提示词语: enjoy, interesting, fun, knowledge, friend
提示问题: 1. What is your hobby?
2. What do you do to develop (发展) your hobby?
3. What benefits (好处) can you get from your hobby?
My Hobby
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【答案】
My Hobby
Hobbies play an important part in our life. I enjoy reading books in my free time. Reading is really interesting.
To develop this hobby, I often go to the library on weekends. There are all kinds of books there. I can choose the ones I like. I also borrow books from my friends and exchange our thoughts about the books.
I can get a great many benefits from reading. I can get a lot of knowledge from books which open up a new world for me. Besides, I can also make many friends who have the same hobby. We share our favorite books and feelings. It’s really fun. So, let’s enjoy our hobbies!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,要求写一篇关于自己爱好的英文发言稿。
②时态:时态主要为一般现在时。
③提示:给出了写作要点,包括爱好是什么、如何发展爱好以及从爱好中能获得什么,需围绕这些要点展开,不可遗漏,也可适当增添细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直接点明自己的爱好是什么。
第二步,描述为了发展这一爱好所做的事情。
第三步,阐述从爱好中获得的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s free time 在某人的空闲时间
②open up 打开,开启
③make friends 交朋友
[高分句型]
①Reading is really interesting. (动名词作主语)
②I can get a lot of knowledge from books which open up a new world for me. (which引导的定语从句修饰books)
9.学校的英语广播电台正在开展以“My Hobby”为题的征文活动,请你根据下面的思维导图写一篇英语短文,参加此次活动。
注意:
1.不少于60词;
2.文中必须包含思维导图中的所有要点内容,可适当发挥;
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My Hobby
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【答案】
My Hobby
I am David from Class 3, Grade 7. Now I’d like to share my hobby here.
My hobby is reading books. I like to read all kinds of books. Reading books became my hobby when I was 10 years old. Both my parents think it is a good hobby. And they buy a lot of books for me. I think reading books can open my eyes to the world. What’s more, it is also good for my study.
I read books in my free time. I plan to read books for one hour on weekdays, and three hours on weekends. I enjoy it very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。分别从你的爱好是什么、你什么时候有这个爱好的、你父母觉得你的爱好怎么样、你能从这个爱好中得到什么以及你对这个爱好有什么计划等方面介绍自己的爱好。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②what’s more此外
③be good for对……有好处
④plan to do sth计划做某事
[高分句型]
①Reading books became my hobby when I was 10 years old. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think reading books can open my eyes to the world. (宾语从句)
10.每个人都有不同的爱好。爱好可以给我们带来很多乐趣,让我们交到新朋友,学习更多知识。假如你是Lucy,一名12岁的初中生,请以“My hobby”为题,根据以下提示,写一篇短文,介绍自己的爱好。
提示:1. 你的爱好是什么?什么时候开始这个爱好?平时什么时候做爱好相关的事情?
2. 如何发展爱好?参加了什么和爱好相关的活动?
3. 经常和谁分享爱好?
4. 谈谈爱好给你带来了什么益处?
要求:1. 词数70词以上。
2. 文中不得有真实人名、校名等。
3. 适当发挥,使内容充实连贯。
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【答案】
My hobby
My hobby is reading. I started reading when I was 8 years old. I usually read books after finishing my homework.
To develop my hobby, I joined a reading club at school. We share book recommendations and discuss stories every week. I often share my hobby with my friend Lily. We exchange interesting books and talk about our favorite characters.
Reading brings me many benefits. It helps me learn new knowledge and become more creative. I love my hobby because it makes my life more colorful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己的爱好,可适当增添细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的爱好是什么、何时开始这个爱好的及平时如何做与爱好相关的事情;
第二步,介绍自己是如何发展爱好的及参加的相关活动,并表达和谁分享爱好;
第三步,表达这个爱好给自己带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②talk about谈论
③more creative更有创造力的
[高分句型]
①I started reading when I was 8 years old. (when引导时间状语从句)
②To develop my hobby, I joined a reading club at school. (不定式作目的状语)
11.“知之者不如好之者,好之者不如乐之者。”中国古语早已点明爱好的价值。在“双减”政策助力学生全面发展的当下,培养一项兴趣爱好更成为丰富生活、提升素养的重要方式。请你以“My Hobby”为题,写一篇英语短文。内容需包含:
1. 你最喜欢的具体爱好是什么?(如阅读、绘画、运动等)
2. 你具体是怎么做的?
3. 这个爱好给你的学习或生活带来了哪些好处?(如锻炼思维、陶冶性情、缓解压力等)
要求:1. 词数80-100左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名称;
3. 内容完整,逻辑清晰,语言通顺。
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【答案】
My Hobby
My favorite hobby is reading. I think it’s a wonderful way to explore new worlds.
I usually read for about half an hour every day before going to bed. On weekends, I often spend a whole afternoon reading in the library, which is very quiet and has countless books.
Reading brings me many benefits. Firstly, it greatly improves my English skills, especially my vocabulary. Secondly, it helps me relax after a long day of study. Most importantly, reading teaches me a lot of knowledge that I can’t learn from textbooks.
I really enjoy my hobby.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作提示已给出,可适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明自己喜欢阅读;
第二步,介绍自己通常每天睡觉前读半个小时左右;周末经常花一整个下午在图书馆读书;
第三步,介绍读书带来的好处,包括:提高英语水平,帮助放松以及学到很多从课本上学不到的知识;
第四步,写出结语,表示很享受读书。
[亮点词汇]
①explore new worlds探索新世界
②spend a whole afternoon reading花一下午的时间阅读
③improves my English skills提高了我的英语技能
④helps me relax帮助我放松
⑤Most importantly最重要的是
[高分句型]
①I think it’s a wonderful way to explore new worlds. (省略that的宾语从句)
②On weekends, I often spend a whole afternoon reading in the library, which is very quiet and has countless books. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
③Most importantly, reading teaches me a lot of knowledge that I can’t learn from textbooks. (that引导的限制性定语从句)
12.假设你是李华,学校英语角将于下周五举办“My hobby”主题演讲活动。请你写一篇英文发言稿,向同学们介绍你的一个爱好。
内容包括:
1. 你的爱好是什么 (如阅读、绘画、运动等);
2. 你是如何开展爱好 (时间、地点、……);
3. 爱好带给你的收获。
注意:
(1) 词数为70词以上 (开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
My hobby
My dear classmates,
We know everyone has a hobby._____________________________________________________________
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【答案】
My hobby
My dear classmates,
We know everyone has a hobby. I want to share my hobby with you here. My hobby is reading. I usually read books in the school library or at home on weekends. I enjoy different types of books, such as science fiction and history. Reading not only helps me relax but also enhances my knowledge. Through reading, I have learned about different cultures and improved my English. I hope you can also find a hobby that brings you joy.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文为演讲稿;
时态:主要使用一般现在时;
提示:根据提示要点介绍自己的爱好,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,无单词拼写及语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:明确爱好,直接回答题目要求。
第二步:描述开展爱好的时间、地点和方式。
第三步:说明收获 (放松、增长知识、提升英语),并以鼓励听众结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
②read books读书
③different cultures不同的文化
[高分句型]
①Reading not only helps me relax but also enhances my knowledge. (运用了not only...but also并列结构)
②Through reading, I have learned about different cultures and improved my English. (运用了现在完成时)
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如何介绍自己的爱好
⭐典例导引⭐
本单元的话题是“爱好”,写此类作文时,一般先点明自己的爱好是什么。接着,追溯爱好的萌芽历程,详述起始时间与缘由。最后,阐释爱好给自己带来的积极影响。此类作文体裁为记叙文,多以第一人称叙述,时态主要涉及一般过去时与一般现在时。行文过程中,可巧妙运用本单元所学的动词不定式作宾语补足语等语法结构。本单元相关话题写作素材有:
(1)My favourite free-time activity is... 我最喜欢的休闲活动是......
(2)I find it fun to... 我发现......很有趣。
(3)It makes me feel happy to.... 令我很高兴......。
(4)It's a great way to ...这是……的一种好方式。
(5)But most importantly,it lets me....但是最重要的是,这让我......
(6)It gives me such a sense of.... 它给我一种......感。
(7)I think it's interesting to see... and... 我认为看到......和......很有趣。
⭐典例剖析⭐
每个人都有自己的爱好,学校英文报开展以“My hobby”为题的征文大赛,请你以这个题目写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容包括:
1. 说出你的一个爱好;
2.你是如何培养这个爱好的(开始时间、起因等);
3.这个爱好对你的影响(至少两点)。
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⭐思维导图⭐
⭐范文介绍⭐
⭐素材宝库⭐
词汇积累
一.主题词汇积累
兴趣爱好
1.hobby业余爱好
2.interest兴趣
3.favourite特别喜欢的(人或事) join参加
4.a fan of...……迷
5.play basketball/football打篮球/踢足球
6.be interested in对……感兴趣
7.love/like/enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
谈论好处
1.the importance of teamwork 团队合作的重要性
2.help me keep fit帮我保持健康
3.be good for对……有好处
4.bring me a lot of fun给我带来很多乐趣
5.give us knowledge给予我们知识
6.so much fun如此多的乐趣
交友经历
1.at first起初
2.at last最终,最后
3.make friends交朋友
4.share the joy of...分享……的乐趣
5.with one’s help在某人的帮助下
6.offer to do sth.主动提出做某事
7.help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
句型积累
开头句
1.I love/enjoy/like...very much.我非常喜欢……
2.I’m really interested in...我对……很感兴趣。
3.My hobby is...我的爱好是……
中间句
1.与爱好的好处有关
It is great fun to...……有巨大的乐趣。
It can help/make/give me...它可以帮助/使/给我……
It is good for...它对……有好处。
It feels great to do sth.做某事感觉很棒。
2.与交友有关
I want to make friends and share the joy of...我想交朋友并分享……的乐趣。
He always helps me...in his free time.他总是在空闲时间帮我……
We often...together after class/school.下课/放学后,我们经常一起……
With his help, my...improved a lot.在他的帮助下,我的……提升了很多。
结尾句
In my opinion/view, ...在我看来,……
I love my hobby very much.我非常喜欢我的爱好。
谚语名句
1.Interest is the best teacher.兴趣是最好的老师。
2.A hobby plays an important role in our daily life.爱好在我们的日常生活中起着重要的作用。
3.Hobbies are an important step to knowledge.爱好是获得知识的重要一步。
⭐专项训练⭐
1.爱因斯坦曾言:“热爱和兴趣是最好的老师。”相信你一定也有一个或多个自己的爱好。请以“My Hobby”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下自己的爱好及其原因。
写作要求:
1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数60左右。
My Hobby
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2.业余爱好能陶冶我们的情操、提高我们的文化素养、增加生活的乐趣。作为一名中学生,你在忙碌的学习之余喜欢做些什么?请根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的业余爱好。
要点:(1)你的业余爱好是什么;
(2)你为什么有这样的爱好;
(3)它给你带来了什么变化。
要求:(1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
(2)词数100左右。
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3.每一个人都有爱好,请根据以下思维导图写一篇文章,分享你的爱好。
内容包括:
1. 你的爱好是什么?
2. 为什么喜欢它?
3. 如何通过爱好交朋友?
4. 你从中的收获是什么?
写作要求:
1. 词数为70词左右;
2. 结合所给要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My hobby
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4.爱好是校园生活里的“小乐趣”,它能让我们的课余时光更精彩。作为初中生,你的爱好是什么?请以“My Hobby and My School Life”为题,根据下面所给信息,写一篇短文。
注意事项:
1. 内容涵盖所有要点,适当拓展,全文连贯通顺。
2. 文中不得提及个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
3. 词数70左右。
My Hobby and My School Life
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5.你校英语社团正在开展以“Making Friends Through my Hobby”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语短文,向社团投稿。
要求:
1. 词数70左右;
2. 文中须包含以下要点,所给词汇仅供参考选择使用;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
要点
参考词汇
What is your hobby?
Reading.../ collecting.../ playing basketball/...
How does it help you become friends?
share... with.../ talk about.../ do...together/...
What can you learn from your hobby?
get knowledge about.../ learn the spirit of cooperation (合作)/...
Everyone has hobbies. For me, ______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.良好的兴趣爱好对我们的学习和生活带来很大的帮助。为鼓励同学们积极发展自己的兴趣爱好, 校英文杂志“Hobby World”专栏开展以“My favourite hobby”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下写作要点,用英语写一篇60词左右的短文投稿。
写作要点:
1.你最喜欢的一项爱好是什么?
2.你是如何开展这项爱好的?(时间、地点等)
3.这项爱好给你带来什么好处?(至少两点)
写作要求:
1.内容必须包含所提示的信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息(校名、班级、姓名等真实信息)。
参考词汇: bring(v.带来) knowledge(n.知识) colorful(adj.多彩的)
My favourite hobby
My favourite hobby is _____________________________________________________________________
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7.爱因斯坦说,热爱和兴趣是最好的老师,你一定也有一个或多个自己的爱好。假设你爱好阅读,请你根据下面的表格提示写一篇发言稿,和大家分享你的爱好吧。
内容
参考词汇
Your hobby
reading
Its benefits (益处)
fun, get knowledge, get better at writing...
Your hope
share the joy of reading together...
要求:1. 包括所有提示内容,可适当拓展;
2. 语言通顺,条理清楚,70词左右;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
Hello, everyone!
I’m happy to stand here to share my hobby with you. __________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.爱好是我们生活中的重要部分。英语老师请每位同学写一份英文发言稿,描述你的爱好是什么,你通常做些什么,以及你能从这个爱好中获得什么。
提示词语: enjoy, interesting, fun, knowledge, friend
提示问题: 1. What is your hobby?
2. What do you do to develop (发展) your hobby?
3. What benefits (好处) can you get from your hobby?
My Hobby
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9.学校的英语广播电台正在开展以“My Hobby”为题的征文活动,请你根据下面的思维导图写一篇英语短文,参加此次活动。
注意:
1.不少于60词;
2.文中必须包含思维导图中的所有要点内容,可适当发挥;
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My Hobby
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10.每个人都有不同的爱好。爱好可以给我们带来很多乐趣,让我们交到新朋友,学习更多知识。假如你是Lucy,一名12岁的初中生,请以“My hobby”为题,根据以下提示,写一篇短文,介绍自己的爱好。
提示:1. 你的爱好是什么?什么时候开始这个爱好?平时什么时候做爱好相关的事情?
2. 如何发展爱好?参加了什么和爱好相关的活动?
3. 经常和谁分享爱好?
4. 谈谈爱好给你带来了什么益处?
要求:1. 词数70词以上。
2. 文中不得有真实人名、校名等。
3. 适当发挥,使内容充实连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11.“知之者不如好之者,好之者不如乐之者。”中国古语早已点明爱好的价值。在“双减”政策助力学生全面发展的当下,培养一项兴趣爱好更成为丰富生活、提升素养的重要方式。请你以“My Hobby”为题,写一篇英语短文。内容需包含:
1. 你最喜欢的具体爱好是什么?(如阅读、绘画、运动等)
2. 你具体是怎么做的?
3. 这个爱好给你的学习或生活带来了哪些好处?(如锻炼思维、陶冶性情、缓解压力等)
要求:1. 词数80-100左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名称;
3. 内容完整,逻辑清晰,语言通顺。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12.假设你是李华,学校英语角将于下周五举办“My hobby”主题演讲活动。请你写一篇英文发言稿,向同学们介绍你的一个爱好。
内容包括:
1. 你的爱好是什么 (如阅读、绘画、运动等);
2. 你是如何开展爱好 (时间、地点、……);
3. 爱好带给你的收获。
注意:
(1) 词数为70词以上 (开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
My hobby
My dear classmates,
We know everyone has a hobby._____________________________________________________________
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