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第一部分 主题写作分类诵读
三、写作范文分类诵读
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主题6 人际交往与志愿服务[2021]
1. How to Get on Well with Classmates
Dear schoolmates,
As is known to all, part of growing up is learning to live with people
with different kinds of disagreements. Nowadays, many teenagers have
difficulty in getting on well with their classmates. Here is some advice.
Firstly, we're expected to show respect to our classmates who respect
us in return, which means we shouldn't laugh at anyone. Besides, it's essential
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to understand each other. ① Understanding is like a bridge which can
help to cross the gap between our classmates and us. What's more, it's
a good idea to communicate with our classmates often. In this way, we
can easily solve the conflict and get chances to express our opinions to
each other. Last but not least, ② when talking to classmates, I suggest that
we should talk more about the topics that friends like, or the topics that
we all like so that more people are involved in our conversation.
In short, if you can do the things above, you can communicate with
your classmates easily.
The Students' Union#6
| 范文赏析
①明喻修辞+which引导定语从句,生动具象化理解的价值,感染力强。
②that引导两个并列的定语从句,清楚地交代了交际话题的选择策略,实
操性强;so that引导目的状语从句,自然衔接交际话题选择的目的。#10
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| 亮点词句
have difficulty(in)doing sth. 做某事有困难
be expected to do sth. 应该做某事
cross the gap between… and… 跨越……和……之间的鸿沟
solve the conflict 解决冲突
be involved in 参与
As is known to all,… 众所周知,……
It's essential to do sth. 做某事是重要的。#18
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2. Friendship
In our lives, everyone needs friends. Friendship is of great importance
to everyone. In my opinion, ① it is like a bridge that connects people's
hearts, allowing us to share joys and sorrows with friends and support
each other.
Friends can often do something that we are all interested in. After
class, I often take part in club activities or watch movies with my friends.
On the weekend, we sometimes go for a picnic in the park to relax
ourselves, which leaves all of us lasting memories.#21
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How can we strengthen our friendships? Firstly, we should help
each other when needed. Secondly, ② friendship is like a flower that needs
to be nourished. We can go out for dinner or travel together during holidays.
Finally, trust is the most important aspect of any friendship. We should
always be loyal to our friends.
③ As long as we can be honest with our friends, support each other
and show mutual respect, our friendships will grow stronger over time.#23
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| 范文赏析
①巧用比喻的手法阐述了友谊的重要性和价值,并用现在分词短语作结果
状语扩写细节。
②巧将友谊比作需要滋养的花朵,语言生动、形象,且准确使用高级词汇
nourish。
③As long as引导条件状语从句,总结了使友谊更牢固的秘诀,点明文章主
题。#28
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| 亮点词句
nourish v.滋养
share joys and sorrows with 与……分享喜怒哀乐
support each other 互相支持
lasting memories 持久的记忆
strengthen friendships 增进友谊
be loyal to sb. 对某人忠诚
be honest with sb. 对某人诚实
show mutual respect 互相尊重#37
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3. How to Cooperate with Others
Hello, ladies and gentlemen!
As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily lives.
I'll give you some advice which can help you cooperate with others more
efficiently and happily.#40
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First of all, you should realize the importance of cooperation. ①As
the old saying goes, “Many hands make light work.” If you put all your efforts
into one thing, you will certainly achieve success more quickly. What's more,
you are supposed to have a conversation with others when you have different
opinions. ② Arguing with others doesn't make any sense, but talking can
calm you down rapidly. Last but not least, respect others all the time.
③ Only if you regard your partner as your friend can you get along well
and cooperate well.
I do believe through my suggestions, you can make progress in
cooperating. Thanks for your listening!#42
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| 范文赏析
①谚语“众人拾柴火焰高”运用恰当,生动地论证了合作的力量。
②动名词短语 作主语,增加句式多样性;巧用not…but…对比结构,清晰
区别“争论”与“交谈”的不同效果,逻辑性强。
③Only if引导条件句位于句首,主句部分倒装,强调尊重的前提性,句式
新颖且高级。#47
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| 亮点词句
cooperate with 与……合作
put one's efforts into 把某人的精力投入到……
have a conversation with与……交谈
make sense 有意义
calm down 使冷静下来
make progress in doing sth. 在做某事上取得进展#54
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4. Volunteer at the Library
During the May Day holiday, I had a great time joining in a special
social practice activity. On Wednesday, May 1st, I went to Shaanxi Library
for volunteer work.#56
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I did many tasks during my time there. Firstly, ① I helped to sort the
books by topic, which can help readers find books quickly and explore
topics that interest them. Secondly, I made many bookmarks to help
readers keep track of their progress in books. Then, to enhance reading
experience of the readers, I reminded them to follow rules like not
answering phones or eating in the library. Furthermore, ② I offered guidance
to readers on how to use the library resources effectively.#57
After completing all the work, I got a strong sense of pride and
satisfaction when receiving praise from others. ③ As the saying goes, “The
rose's in her hand, the flavor in mine.” I will make an effort to continue
my volunteer work to spread the virtue of helping others.#58
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| 范文赏析
①which引导的非限制性定语从句嵌套that引导的定语从句,阐释了图书分
类的好处,逻辑缜密。
②巧用“疑问词+不定式”结构作介词宾语,清晰传递服务内容,丰富文章
细节。
③引用谚语“赠人玫瑰,手有余香”,印证奉献精神,自然升华主题。#63
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| 亮点词句
bookmark n.书签
keep track of 记录,跟踪进展
enhance reading experience 增强阅读体验
remind sb. to do sth. 提醒某人做某事
offer guidance to sb. on sth. 在某事上为某人提供指导
make an effort to do sth. 努力做某事
spread the virtue 传播美德#71
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