Unit 2 Success 高考写作单元训练十一 课件-2026届高三英语北师大版（2019）选择性必修第一册

高 考 写作单元训练十一 选择性必修 UNIT 2　SUCCESS 1 一 文本叙述 Step 1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子) 1.詹森过去是个百万富翁，然而他放弃了百万家财。 Jason used to be a millionaire，but he ________________ his millions． 2.他住在一个只有二手家具的小宿舍里，他的东西都是从慈善商店买的。 He lives in a small dormitory room ____________________________，who gets his things ________________． turned his back on with only second-hand furniture from charity shops 一 文本叙述 Step 1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子) 3.很乐意放弃富人的生活方式，把自己的钱财都捐赠出去。 Jason is pleased to ______ the lifestyle of a rich man and _________ all his money． 4.这给他的生活带来了快乐和成功感。 This brings him ____________________________ in life give up give away happiness and a sense of success 一 文本叙述 Step 1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子) 5.他认为他的成就感来自帮助别人并找到生活的真谛。 He thinks ______________________ comes from helping others and _________________________． 6.正如詹森所说的，成功不是看你有多少钱，而是看你如何理解生活的真谛。 As Jason says，success is not measured by how much money you have __________________________________________． his sense of achievement finding true meaning in life but by how you understand the true meaning of life 一 文本叙述 Step 2．衔接成文(利用恰当的过渡衔接词语连句成篇) Jason used to be a millionaire，but he turned his back on his millions．Today he lives in a small dormitory room with only second-hand furniture，who gets his things from charity shops．Jason is pleased to give up the lifestyle of a rich man and give away all his money．And this brings him happiness and a sense of success in life．He thinks his sense of achievement comes from helping others and finding true meaning in life．As Jason says，success is not measured by how much money you have but by how you understand the true meaning of life． 二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 续写微情景 Step 1．第一步　单句写作 1.当谈及父母给的零用钱时,一些致力于学习、有抱负的学生倾向于购买实用的东西,比如书和笔。(devote oneself to) When we talk about the allowance from our parents,some ambitious students who 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　their studies 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　,such as books and pens.  devote themselves to tend to buy practical things 二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 续写微情景 Step 1．单句写作 2. 另外一些人则会买一些有趣的东西,比如零食、CD或流行的衣服。然而,他们中的一些人花费大量的时间和金钱玩电脑游戏,这引起了极大的关注。(in fashion) Others buy enjoyable things like snacks,CDs or clothes that 　　　　 　; however,a few of them spend enormous time and money 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　and it has caused great concern.  3.归结起来就是:对学生来说,正确使用零花钱是很重要的。(boil down to) 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　:it’s of great importance for students to spend the allowance in the right way.  are in fashion (in) playing computer games　 (in) playing computer games　 二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 续写微情景 Step 1．单句写作 4.感谢父母的辛勤劳动,如果我们把钱浪费在无意义的事情上,我们学生应该为自己感到内疚。记住要做对世界有影响的事情,并努力取得成功。(appreciate;strive;get on) 　　　　　　　 　　　　　　,we students should feel guilty of ourselves if we waste money doing something meaningless. Remember to do 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　,and 　　　　　　　　　　. 　　　　　 　　　　　　 Appreciating our parents’ hard work what makes a difference to the world strive to get on 二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 续写微情景 Step 2．句式升级 1.用when it comes to句型升级句1 2.用定语从句升级句2 When it comes to the allowance from our parents,some ambitious students who devote themselves to their studies tend to buy practical things,such as books and pens. Others buy enjoyable things like snacks,CDs or clothes that are in fashion;however,a few of them spend enormous time and money in playing computer games,which has caused great concern. 二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 续写微情景Step 3．连句成篇(将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文) When it comes to the allowance from our parents,some ambitious students who devote themselves to their studies tend to buy practical things, such as books and pens.Others buy enjoyable things like snacks,CDs or clothes that are in fashion;however,a few of them spend enormous time and money (in) playing computer games,which has caused great concern.It boils down to this:it’s of great importance for students to spend the allowance in the right way.Appreciating our parents’ hard work,we students should feel guilty of ourselves if we waste money doing something meaningless.Remember to do what makes a difference to the world,and strive to get on. 三 续写能力--片段描述 Step 1．储备词汇(记牢本单元可用于描写的词汇) 情感描写 determined；optimistic；committed；enthusiastic；appreciative；guilty 动作描写 drop out；reject；skip；hire；apply oneself to sth．；collapse 环境描写 dormitory；furniture；platform Step 2．续写练笔(完成下面的续写片段并背诵) 我的表弟一直热衷于电子游戏，并且专注于电子游戏。他是如此沉迷以至于废寝忘食。因为他的大学拒绝接受他，他不得不退学。直到那时，他才发现舒适地住在一间配有家具的宿舍里是多么幸运。站在火车站的月台上，他感到内疚，并且决心放弃这个习惯。 My cousin was always _________________________ and would__________________. He was so addicted to them that he skipped meals and stayed up late．_________________________________________________．Not until then did he realise how lucky it was to live comfortably_________________________________________．______________________________________________________________________________________． apply himself to them enthusiastic about video games Because his college rejected him，he had to drop out in a dormitory which was equipped with furniture Standing on the platform of the railway station，he felt guilty and was determined to give up the habit 三 续写能力--片段描述 非常感谢收看 13 $