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中职英语——写作
1.【写作内容】某地“美丽乡村(Beautiful Village)”项目吸引了不少外宾,暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的导游。假如你是李华,希望成为其中的一员。请你根据下列提示内容,给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信,并在信中展示自己的优势。
(1)友好和耐心;
(2)擅长讲故事;
(3)在英语演讲比赛中得过奖。
【写作要求】正文约100个英文单词,文中不可出现你自己的真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】信息完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides. I’d like to be one of them. I think I am suitable for the job.
First of all, I am friendly and patient. I am active in many activities. Besides, I speak English well and have won several prizes in English speaking competitions. I am also good at telling stories, so I can introduce local culture to foreigners in English. Most importantly, I have visited the beautiful village many times and I can help foreigners better understand the life of the village.
I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。“美丽乡村”项目需要一些擅长英语的导游,李华想成为其中一员,所以要向负责人王先生写一封自荐信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad→ happy
首先:first of all→ firstly
除此之外:besides→ in addition
擅长:be good at→ do well in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am active in many activities.
拓展句:I am active in many activities when I am free.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides. (运用了that引导的名词性从句)
【高分句型2】I would be thankful if I could be given the chance. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
1.【写作内容】假如你是李华,你要去广州出差,请给广州的朋友Tom写一封邮件,请他帮你预定酒店,信中要包括到达及离开广州的时间,订一间单人房。
【写作要求】正文约40个英文单词,文中不可出现你自己的真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】信息完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Tom,
I will be on business in Guangzhou next week from May 2nd to May 8th. Would you please book a hotel for me? I’d like a single room,which would be located in the center of the city. So it would be easy for me to visit the city. Thanks a lot.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。讲述了李华请求汤姆在广州为他预订一间位于市中心的单人间酒店。
【详解】1.词汇积累
位于:located - situated
商业:business - commerce
感谢:thanks - gratitude
中心:center - middle
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I will be on business in Guangzhou next week.
拓展句:I will be in Guangzhou next week where I will be on business.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It would be located in the center of the city. So it would be easy for me to visit the city. (使用了so连接的并列句)
【高分句型2】I’d like a single room,which would be located in the center of the city. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
1.【写作内容】学生会组织二年级的学生于本周六上午去参观博物馆。请用英语写一则书面通知,要求学生明天早上七点半在校门口集合,并请遵守博物馆的规则。
【写作要求】正文约40个英文单词,文中不可出现你自己的真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】信息完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
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【答案】例文:
Notice All the students in Grade Two are required to visit the museum this Saturday morning. We will meet at the school gate at half past seven. Please obey the rules of the museum when visiting. Don’t be late.
Students’ Union
Nov. 28th.
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生写一则去博物馆的书面通知,介绍时间及应遵守的相关规则。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
要求:be required to→ be supposed to
碰面:meet→ gather
参观:visit→ call on
遵守:obey→ follow
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:All the students in Grade Two are required to visit the museum this Saturday morning.
拓展句:All the students who are in Grade Two are required to visit the museum this Saturday morning.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Please obey the rules of the museum when visiting. (运用了祈使句)
【高分句型2】
Don’t be late. (运用了祈使句)
1.【写作内容】假定你是李华,学校食堂正向学生收集意见,你认为食堂菜品种类较少,荤菜价格较高,用餐环境可改善等。请你给食堂经理写一封信,内容要点包括:
1.你认为食堂存在的问题。
2.食堂可改善的地方。
【写作要求】正文约40个英文单词,文中不可出现你自己的真实姓名、学校等信息
【评分标准】信息完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
Dear manager,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Manager,
As I know that you are eager to enhance the canteen service, I’d like to share some of my ideas.
The food tastes good and we can enjoy ourselves while having meals. However, the variety of cuisines is limited. Dishes are almost similar during weekdays and there are only a few on the weekends. Besides, the price of meat dishes is a little higher.
Thanks for taking my advice into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校食堂正向学生收集意见,李华认为食堂菜品种类较少,荤菜价格较高,用餐环境可改善等,于是写信给食堂经理,表达自己的意见。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
意见:idea → opinion
美味的:good → delicious
有限的:limited → finite
此外:besides → what’s more
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, the price of meat dishes is a little higher.
拓展句:Besides, the price of meat dishes which / that are served in our canteen is a little higher.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As I know that you are eager to enhance the canteen service, I'd like to share some of my ideas. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】The food tastes good and we can enjoy ourselves while having meals. (运用了and连接的并列句)
1.【写作内容】假定你是李华。你近期参与了学校的AI辅助英语学习活动,请给外国朋友Tom写封邮件,分享学习收获。
【写作要求】正文约60个英文单词,文中不可出现你自己的真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】信息完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? I am writing to tell you an activity I have participated in recently which is about how to use AI to help English learning. It can not only help to correct grammar mistakes in writing, but also act as an speaking instructor. In addition, the efficiency of searching information is greatly improved. What a useful tool it is!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Tom写封邮件,分享参与学校的AI辅助英语学习活动的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→ take part in
帮助:help→ assist
纠正;修正:correct→ fix
有用的,实用的:useful→ practical
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In addition, the efficiency of searching information is greatly improved.
拓展句:In addition, when we use AI to search for information, the efficiency is greatly improved.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to tell you an activity I have participated in recently which is about how to use AI to help English learning. (运用省略关系代词that引导的定语从句、which引导的定语从句以及“how+动词不定式”的句子结构)
【高分句型2】It can not only help to correct grammar mistakes in writing, but also act as an speaking instructor. (运用not only … but also …的句子结构)
1.[写作内容]假如你是李华,昨天你在学校丢了一本你的好朋友送给你的书,也是你最喜爱的书之一。今天回学校后发现有人捡到并放到了学校的失物招领处。你决定给学校的广播站写封信感谢这位同学。
[写作要求]正文40个英文单词,文中不可出现你自己的真实姓名、学校等信息。
[评分标准]信息完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
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【答案】例文:
Dear schoolmate,
I don’t know who you are, but I really appreciate your kindness. Yesterday I lost a book in our school. I was very upset because it is one of my favorite books. What's more, it is my birthday gift which was given by my best friend.
I must thank you again for what you did. Your help really means a lot to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。李华在学校丟了一本好朋友送的书,今天回学校后发现有人捡到并放到了学校的失物招领处。需要写封信感谢这位同学。
【详解】1.词汇积累
同学:schoolmate→ schoolfellow
感激:appreciate→ be grateful for
丢失:lose→ drop off
而且:what’s more→ besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Yesterday I lost a book in our school.
拓展句:Yesterday I lost a book, which happened in our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was very upset because it is one of my favorite books. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, it is my birthday gift which was given by my best friend. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
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