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人与自然
主题10环境污染及原因,环保意识和行为(2023省卷)
①中考话题角度解读
1.甘肃近6年中考:2023年省卷—“拯救地球,让我们尽自已的一份力!
2.全国视野:①垃圾分类:②绿色校园:③节约用水:④低碳生活:⑤保护动植物
3.热点角度:绿水青山就是金山银山:绿色发展
①教材单元链接
人教
七(下)Unit5动物园的动物
九(全)Unit13保护环境
冀教
八(下)Unit3动物是我们的朋友
八(下)Unit8拯救我们的地球
阶
课本句型促写作
©课本句型积累
1.Pollution is one of the biggest problems in the world today.
污染是当今世界最大的问题之一。[译林牛津八(下)U8]
2.The earth is our home.Therefore,it is our duty to take action to protect it.
开头句
地球是我们的家园。因此,采取行动保护它是我们的责任。
3.As is known to everyone,animals are our friends.However,many kinds of animals are in
danger now.众所周知,动物是我们的朋友。然而,如今许多种类的动物正处于危险之中。
1.I've already tried my best to protect the environment.I recycle.I don't throw away things if I
don't want them any more.I turn off the lights when I leave a room.我已经尽我所能保护环境
了。我会回收利用物品。如果有些东西我不再需要了,我也不会随便扔掉。离开房间时,
我会关灯。[外研九(上)M12]
角度1
2.To cut down air pollution,we should take the bus or subway instead of driving.Also,we can
保护
ride a bike.t's good for health and it doesn't cost anything.为了减少空气污染,我们应该乘
环境
坐公共汽车或地铁,而不是开车。此外,我们还可以骑自行车。这对健康有益,而且不花费
的做
中
任何费用。[人教九(全)U13]
法
间
3.It's wise for people to choose public transport or ride bicycles.
句
人们选择公共交通或骑自行车是明智的。[译林牛津八(下)U8]
4.We can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth.
我们可以通过缩短淋浴时间以及刷牙时关掉水龙头来节约用水。
角度2
1.What's more,we should advise the government to make laws so that wild animals can get
保护
enough protection.此外,我们应该建议政府制定法律,以便野生动物能得到充分的保护。
动植
2.As students,we can plant trees.And we can also organize some activities to ask people to stop
物的
cutting down trees.作为学生,我们可以种树。我们还可以组织一些活动,呼吁人们停止砍
行为
伐树木。
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续表
1.At a green school,every class collects waste which can be recycled or used again.
在绿色校园里,每个班级都会收集可以回收或再次利用的废弃物。[外研九(上)M12]
角度3
中
2.Students at a green school also learn ways to save energy and recycle at home.That means less
共建
间
wase.绿色校园的学生们还会学习在家节约能源和回收利用的方法。这意味着更少的废弃
绿色
句
物。[外研九(上)M12]
校园
3.Each of us students is a cleaner.If we see garbage,we will actively pick it up and put it in the
bi,我们每个学生都是清洁工。如果看到垃圾,我们会主动把它捡起来扔进垃圾桶。
1.Though pollution is heavy now,I don't think it's hopeless.If everyone starts to do something,
the world will be saved.尽管现在污染很严重,但我认为并非毫无希望。如果每个人都开始
做些什么,世界将会被拯救。[外研九(上)M12]
2.We cannot hope for rapid change,but let's take these simple steps today so that we will save the
结尾句
world for our grandsons and granddaughters tomorrow..我们不能期望变化一蹴而就,但让我们
从今天开始采取这些简单的行动,为我们的子孙后代守护这个世界。[外研九(上)M12]
3.So together,our actions can make a difference and lead to a better future!因此,只要我们齐
心协力,我们的行动就能带来改变,引领我们走向更美好的未来![人教九(全)U13]
⑨课本句型变式练
◆句子翻译
1.我们学校最大的问题之一是太多塑料瓶被扔掉。(Tip:One of the biggest problems..)
2.正如所有学生所知,多植树有助于保持空气清洁。(Tip:As is known to sb.)
3.周末在公园捡垃圾对环境保护有好处。(Tip:be good for)
4.如果我们都开始回收废旧纸张、金属和玻璃,我们就能节省大量的资源。(Tp:f)
5.我们会向老师学习在日常生活中节约能源的方法。(Tip:learn ways to save energ罗y)
6.我们开始收集旧书并重复使用它们,以减少浪费。(Tip:start to do sth.)
7.即使是像离开时随手关灯这样的小事,也能在保护我们的地球方面起到作用。(Tip:make a difference)
◆句式升格
8.We pick up litter on the playground after PE class.The ground stays clean.(Tip:so that)
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二阶典例探究明思路
(2023甘肃省卷)假设你是李辉。你校英语报“Protect the Environment”
专栏面向全校学生征集主题海报及宣传稿,需要用英语向大家宣讲环保的意
审题四要素:
义及作为中学生怎样保护环境。请你根据以下海报提示,以“Save the Earth:
审体裁:说明文
Let's Do Our Part!”为题,用英语给专栏写一篇稿件
审人称:第一人称为主
USE ME
审时态:一般现在时
审要点:
①节约用水;
②种更多的树:
③阻止污染;
④拯救动物;
⑤回收利用;
要求:1.包括提示中所有的写作要点;
⑥骑自行车…
2.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3.稿件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息;
4.词数:80左右。题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Save the Earth:Let's Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it.It's crying for our help now.
②写作刮析
一、构思框架
承接开头
呼吁大家
1.As middle school students,
Beginning
保护地球
(用“have the power to do sth.”及“make a difference”
来呼吁大家保护地球
2.
,(用动词不定式表明保护环
具体介绍作
境的目的)we can start by saving water,.planting more trees,.and reducing pollution..
Body
为中学生怎
3.We can also①
(用“choose to do sth.”和
样保护环境
“instead of”介绍环保的具体做法),and②
(用“make sure to do sth..”来描写垃圾分类)
4.By doing our part,
Ending
宣讲环保
的意义
(用“make a positive impact on”来描写这些措施对环境的影响)and create a
better future for ourselves and generations to come.
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文
高阶范文
Save the Earth:Let's Do Our Part!
Save the Earth:Let's Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on
The earth is the only home for everyone on it.It's crying
it.It's crying for our help now.As middle school
for our help now.As middle school students,we have the
students,we should save the earth!
power to make a difference and help save the earth!
We can start by saving water,planting more
To protect the earth,we can start by saving water,
trees,and reducing pollution.We can save
planting more trees,and reducing pollution.We can save
animals and recycle whenever possible.We can
animals and recycle whenever possible.We can also choose to
also ride a bike and always throw trash in the
ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop pollution,and
proper bins.
make sure to always throw trash in the proper bins.
By doing our part,we can protect the
By doing our part,we can make a positive impact on
environment and create a better future for
the environment and create a better future for ourselves and
ourselves and generations to come.
generations to come.
三阶写作实战提能力
水是生命之源,动物、植物、人类都离不开水,没有水,地球上就没有生命存在。你校将举办以“Save
Water”为主题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请你根据思维导图中的提示信息,写一篇英语演讲稿,结合
自己的经历谈谈你对节约用水的看法。
要求:1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点:
2.条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥:
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
4.词数:80左右。
Save Water
Problems
Measures
population
industry↑
Save Water
52important part of my life.At the sports meeting this year,I even
won first prize in the 1,500-meter race.Since then,with the
good habits of doing sports,I have been stronger and stronger
and I don't fear any difficulty.
In a word,I like running because doing sports makes me
strong.It can also let my brain have a good rest and help me study
better.But when you do exercise,you must be careful.Don't hurt
yourself.
主题9文化习俗、节假日与庆祝活动
一阶课本句型促写作
1.It is meaningful for young people to learn traditional culture.
2.What makes the Dragon Boat Festival special for me is the
story of Qu Yuan and the spirit of never giving up in dragon
boat races.
3.Traditional Chinese painting is one of the most important ways
to show the beauty of our country.
4.Zongzi during the Dragon Boat Festival carries people's
wishes to family members.
5.Gansu is famous for its rich cultural treasures
6.We are proud of our rich traditional art forms.
7.Let's work together to pass on traditional skills and tell
Chinese stories well.
8.Traditional festivals are bright symbols of our cultural
confidence.
二阶典例探究明思路
1.Here are my reasons.
2.attract many people easily
3.They are not only convenient to watch but also easy to share
on the Internet.
4.This makes us have a deeper understanding of the beauty of
traditional Chinese culture.
5.because many foreigners now like to watch short videos about
Chinese culture
6.In a word,we should try our best to spread our traditional
Chinese culture.
三阶写作实战提能力
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Festival
Dear teachers and students,
I'm glad to share my favorite traditional Chinese festival-
the Spring Festival.It usually falls in January or February.
During the festival,people clean their houses,put up red
couplets,and have big dinners together.
Last Spring Festival,my whole family made dumplings.My
grandmother taught me how to wrap them.Though my first
dumpling looked strange,everyone smiled and praised me.That
warm moment filled my heart with happiness.
The Spring Festival means family reunion and new
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beginnings.It reminds us to value family love and pass down
Chinese traditions.Let's spread the beauty of this festival
worldwide!
Thank you!
人与自然
主题10环境污染及原因,环保意识和行为
一阶课本句型促写作
1.One of the biggest problems in our school is that too many
plastic bottles are thrown away.
2.As is known to all students,planting more trees helps keep
the air clean.
3.Picking up litter in the park on weekends is good for
environmental protection.
4.If we all start to recycle waste paper,metal and glass,we can
save a lot of resources.
5.We will leam ways to save energy in daily life from our
teachers.
6.We start to collect old books and reuse them to reduce waste.
7.Even small acts like turning off the lights when you leave can
make a difference in protecting our planet.
8.We pick up litter on the playground after PE class so that the
ground stays clean.
二阶典例探究明思路
1.we have the power to make a difference and help save
the earth
2.To protect the earth
3.1choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop
pollution 2 make sure to always throw trash in the
proper bins
4.we can make a positive impact on the environment
三阶写作实战提能力
Save Water
Ladies and gentlemen,water is essential for all living
things,and without it,life on Earth would not exist.As we all
know,water resources are wasted because of the growing
population and the development of industries,and it is our
responsibility to save them.
I have realized the importance of saving water through my
daily life experiences.For example,I used to leave the tap
running while brushing my teeth,but now I turn it off to save
water.I also encourage my family to reuse water whenever
possible,such as using waste water from washing vegetables to
water plants.
Let us all take action to save water and protect our planet
for future generations.Every drop counts,and together,we can
make a difference.
Thank you!