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主题8促进中学生“五育并举”的发展(2024兰州卷)
①中考话题角度解读
1.甘肃近6年中考:2024年兰州卷
我眼中的马拉松
2.全国视野:①德育:乐于助人,如何做一名新时代好少年;②美育:美育知识,艺术课程,引导审美情趣:③劳
育:劳动实践的经历与感受,劳动精神,倡导参加劳动实践活动;④参加体育运动,倡导健康理念
①教材单元链接
八(上)Unit8烹饪
八(下)Unit3家务和许可
八(下)Unit8文学和音乐
人教
九(全)Unit9音乐和电影
九(全)Unit11感受
七(下)Unit2表演开始
七(下)Unit7运动和健康
八(下)Unit2种植物
冀教
九年级Unit4故事和诗歌
九年级Unit5研究科学
九年级Unit6电影和剧院
阶
课本句型促写作
©课本句型积累
1.Planting trees is a great way to learn about nature
种树是了解大自然的好方法。
冷
2.There are all kinds of music in the world.Music makes people happy.
头
世界上有各种各样的音乐。音乐能让人快乐。
肉
3.Life skills are necessary for us teenagers.To live more healthily and happily,we are supposed
to learn more new life skills.生活技能对我们青少年来说是必不可少的。为了更健康、更快
乐地生活,我们应该学习更多新的生活技能。
1.Students are able to learn necessary life skills by taking cleaning or cooking lessons in school.
学生们可以通过在学校上清洁课或烹饪课来学习必要的生活技能。
2.Doing chores helps to develop children's independence and teaches them how to look after
角度1
themselves..做家务有助于培养孩子们的独立性,并教会他们如何照顾自已。[人教八(下)U3]
劳动
3.I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores and share housework.我认为孩
实践
子们学习如何做家务和分担家务活是很重要的。[人教八(下)U3改编]
4.Since children live in one house with their parents,they should know that everyone should do
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their part in keeping it clean and tidy.既然孩子们和他们的父母住在同一个房子里,他们就
间
应该知道,每个人都应该为保持房间的干净整洁尽自己的一份力。[人教八(下)U3]
句
L.I like smooth music that helps me relax after a long week at work.我喜欢舒缓的音乐,它能帮
角度2
助我在一周漫长的工作后放松下来。[人教九(全)U9]
美育
2.What's more,Beijing Opera is also an important part of Chinese culture.
知识
而且,京剧也是中国文化的重要组成部分。
角度3
智育
We should deal with the difficulties we meet wisely.They can help us become better persons.
(学习
我们应该明智地应对遇到的困难。它们能帮助我们成为更优秀的人。
方法)
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续表
1.I often exercise at the park because I love the clean air and sunshine.
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角度4
我经常在公园锻炼,因为我喜欢那里清新的空气和阳光。[人教七(下)U8]
间
体育
句
2.When we play sports such as running,playing basketball,or swimming,our hearts get stronger.
运动
当我们进行跑步、打篮球或游泳等体育运动时,我们的心脏会变得更强。
1.Carrying out labor education makes school life more colorful and meaningful.
开展劳动教育让学校生活更加丰富多彩且富有意义。
2.Learning life skills is necessary for us,because what we depend on is what we learn.
学习生活技能对我们来说是必要的,因为我们所依赖的正是我们所学到的东西。
结尾句
3.I'm sure the earlier we learn to be independent,the better our future will be.
我确信我们越早学会独立,我们的未来就会越好。
4.Instead of being afraid of challenges,we should try our best to solve the problems in our
study and life.我们不应该害怕挑战,而应该尽力解决学习和生活中的问题。
L.Life lies in movement..生命在于运动。
2.Virtue is far fairer than beauty.美德远胜于美貌。
俗语/谚语
3.Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。
4.No pain,no gain..一分耕耘,一分收获。
Q课本句型变式练
◆句子翻译
1.这也是通过小组学习了解合作的好方法。(Tip:a great way to do sth.)
2.学生们应该参加劳动活动,比如打扫教室或种树。(Tip:be supposed to do sth.)
3.通过参加志愿活动,青少年能够培养责任感。(Tip:be able to do sth.)
4.学着管理自己的时间和事务,能培养孩子的独立性。(Tip:develop one's independence)
5.我认为对我们学生来说,在家和父母分担家务很重要。(Tip:it is important for sb..to do sth.)
6.学生们应该在保持教室整洁方面尽自己的一份力。(Tip:do one's part in)
7.我们应该在美术课上尽力创作优美的作品。(Tip:try one's best to do sth.)
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二阶典例探究明思路
以劳动托起中国梦!假如你是李华,身为中学生的你在社交平台发布
了劳动实践课(Labor Practice Class)的作品一牛肉面,美国粉丝Mike留言
审题四要素:
向你询问劳动实践课的相关情况,如下图所示。请根据提示,回复一封邮件。
审体裁:应用文
…
审人称:第一人称为主
@Li Hua
审时态:一般过去时与一般
I can't believe a middle schooler made this!What other things did you
现在时
do in Labor Practice Class?How did you feel about it?E-mail me!
Mike
提示:1.向Mke分享你在本学期劳动实践课中做过的三项活动;
2.你的收获与成长;
审要点:
3.邀请对方分享劳动体验。
①分享做过的三项活动;
要求:1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点;
②介绍自己的收获:
2.条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
③邀请对方分享劳动体验。
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
4.词数:80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How's it going?
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
②写作剖析
一、构思框架
1.I want to share the interesting experience of my Labor Practice Class with you.
Beginning
引出主题
(用“would like to do sth.”升格句子)
2.首先,我学会了做一些美味的食物,比如牛肉面。(汉译英)
分别介绍在
3.其次,我和同学们一起种了一些蔬菜。(汉译英)
Body
劳动课上的
三项活动
4.Third,I took part in a volunteer activity to fix things
.(补充说明为哪里的人修理东西)
5.It helps me become more independent and makes me understand the value of labor.
Ending
介绍自己的
(用“on the one hand.on the other hand.”升格句子)
收获与成长
6.I have realized that every job is meaningful and we should respect every worker.
(用“be of great meaning”与“be supposed to'”升格句子)
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文
高阶范文
Dear Mike,
Dear Mike,
How's it going?I want to share the interesting
How's it going?I would like to share the interesting
experience of my Labor Practice Class with you.
experience of my Labor Practice Class with you.This term we
This term we had labor practice class.We did a lot
had labor practice class.We did a lot of different things in it.
of different things in it.First,I leamed to cook
First,I learned to cook some delicious food,like beef
some delicious food,like beef noodles.Second,I noodles.Second,I planted some vegetables with my
planted some vegetables with my classmates.Third,
classmates.Third,I took part in a volunteer activity to fix
I took part in a volunteer activity to fix things.
things for the people in our community.
I have learned many practical skills from the
I have learned many practical skills from the labor class.
labor class.It helps me become more independent On the one hand,it helps me become more independent.
and makes me understand the value of labor.I have
On the other hand,it makes me understand the value of
realized that every job is meaningful and we should
labor.I have realized that every job is of great meaning and
respect every worker.
we are supposed to respect every worker.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Yours,
Li Hua
Li Hua
三阶写作实战提能力
(2025平凉二模)中学生“五项管理”之一的“体质管理(Health Management)”倡导我们积极参与体育运
动。体育运动不但可以帮助学生增强自信,而且有助于我们实现体育强国之梦。《21世纪英文报》Teen Talk
栏目现面向全国中学生发起征文。请你以“Doing Sports Makes Me
”为题,写一篇不少于80词的短
文参赛。
要求:1.先补全题目:
2.内容包括提示中所有的写作要点;
3条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
4.文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息。
Sports I like
My sports habits
Doing Sports Makes Me_
The importance of doing sports
The advice on doing sports
Doing Sports Makes Me
442.to make our neighborhood more beautiful
3.Sharing interesting books and reading aloud can bring us
closer.
4.like carrying heavy bags or buying food
5.I believe small actions can make a big difference
三阶写作实战提能力
My Neighborhood
My name is Li Hua.I live in Hongmei Neighborhood.
It's a beautiful and quiet neighborhood.There's a beautiful
park near here.People always take a walk in it.And there's a
supermarket in our neighborhood,so it's very convenient for us
to do some shopping.My neighbors are very friendly to each
other.As the saying goes,"A neighbor is better than a distant
relative."I have a new neighbor,Peter.He lives on the fifth
floor.As a policeman,he is kind-hearted and ready to help
others.When people are in trouble,they usually ask him for
help.Another neighbor is Mr.Li,a sixty-year-old man,who
always helps people fix old things.Everyone in our neighborhood
likes them.
It's really comfortable for me to live in my neighborhood.I'm
lucky to have so many nice neighbors.
主题7规则与安全意识
一阶课本句型促写作
1.These school rules play an important part in keeping order in
our school.
2.It's necessary for us to wait for everyone to sit down before
starting a meal.
3.We are supposed to finish our homework before watching TV
according to the family rules.
4.If you ride a bike on the road,you should wear a helmet to
protect yourself.
5.In my opinion,the rule of no running in the hallway is
necessary to prevent accidents.
6.Only when we follow the safety rules can we avoid dangerous
situations at school.
7.I hope to be allowed to choose my own dream.
二阶典例探究明思路
1.However,some people don't behave themselves well in tourist
attractions when traveling.
2.It's not only impolite but also harmful to the environment
around us.
3.It should also be stopped because flowers are beautiful and we
should protect them.
4.Let's take action right now and travel in good manners.
三阶写作实战提能力
Keep Safety in Mind
Safety is very important in our life.I think we should keep
safety in mind.But how can we keep safe?Here are some
suggestions.
First,we should eat healthy food instead of junk food.For
example,we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables.
Second,we can do more exercise and make sure we are safe
when we are doing sports.Third,we are supposed to be careful
when surfing on the Intemet.Don't tell your personal information to
strangers.Fourth,we must pay attention to traffic safety when we
are crossing the road.Never cross the red light.Fifth,playing with
fire is not allowed.Otherwise,a fire accident may happen.Last
but not least,it's also important for us to take care of our money.
In a word,if everyone is careful enough,I think we'll be
safer and healthier.I hope all the students have a safe and
healthy life all the way.
主题8促进中学生“五育并举”的发展
一阶课本句型促写作
1.It's also a great way to learn about working together through
group study.
2.Students are supposed to take part in some labor activities,
like cleaning the classroom or planting trees.
3.By taking part in volunteer activities,teenagers are able to
develop a sense of responsibility.
4.Learning to manage their own time and things can develop
children's independence.
5.I think it is important for us students to share housework with
our parents at home.
6.Students should do their part in keeping the classroom clean.
7.We should try our best to create beautiful works in art class.
二阶典例探究明思路
1.I would like to share the interesting experience of my Labor
Practice Class with you.
2.First,I learned to cook some delicious food,like beef noodles.
3.Second,I planted some vegetables with my classmates.
4.for the people in our community
5.On the one hand,it helps me become more independent.On
the other hand,it makes me understand the value of labor.
6.I have realized that every job is of great meaning and we are
supposed to respect every worker.
三阶写作实战提能力
Doing Sports Makes Me Strong
Recently,sports have been very popular with many
people.In my opinion,doing sports makes me strong because it
builds up both my body and mind.
Of all the sports,I like running best.I was short and thin
before,so my father always took me out for running.At first,I
usually felt tired and wanted to give up.But my father
encouraged me to stick to it.Now running has become an
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important part of my life.At the sports meeting this year,I even
won first prize in the 1,500-meter race.Since then,with the
good habits of doing sports,I have been stronger and stronger
and I don't fear any difficulty.
In a word,I like running because doing sports makes me
strong.It can also let my brain have a good rest and help me study
better.But when you do exercise,you must be careful.Don't hurt
yourself.
主题9文化习俗、节假日与庆祝活动
一阶课本句型促写作
1.It is meaningful for young people to learn traditional culture.
2.What makes the Dragon Boat Festival special for me is the
story of Qu Yuan and the spirit of never giving up in dragon
boat races.
3.Traditional Chinese painting is one of the most important ways
to show the beauty of our country.
4.Zongzi during the Dragon Boat Festival carries people's
wishes to family members.
5.Gansu is famous for its rich cultural treasures
6.We are proud of our rich traditional art forms.
7.Let's work together to pass on traditional skills and tell
Chinese stories well.
8.Traditional festivals are bright symbols of our cultural
confidence.
二阶典例探究明思路
1.Here are my reasons.
2.attract many people easily
3.They are not only convenient to watch but also easy to share
on the Internet.
4.This makes us have a deeper understanding of the beauty of
traditional Chinese culture.
5.because many foreigners now like to watch short videos about
Chinese culture
6.In a word,we should try our best to spread our traditional
Chinese culture.
三阶写作实战提能力
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Festival
Dear teachers and students,
I'm glad to share my favorite traditional Chinese festival-
the Spring Festival.It usually falls in January or February.
During the festival,people clean their houses,put up red
couplets,and have big dinners together.
Last Spring Festival,my whole family made dumplings.My
grandmother taught me how to wrap them.Though my first
dumpling looked strange,everyone smiled and praised me.That
warm moment filled my heart with happiness.
The Spring Festival means family reunion and new
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beginnings.It reminds us to value family love and pass down
Chinese traditions.Let's spread the beauty of this festival
worldwide!
Thank you!
人与自然
主题10环境污染及原因,环保意识和行为
一阶课本句型促写作
1.One of the biggest problems in our school is that too many
plastic bottles are thrown away.
2.As is known to all students,planting more trees helps keep
the air clean.
3.Picking up litter in the park on weekends is good for
environmental protection.
4.If we all start to recycle waste paper,metal and glass,we can
save a lot of resources.
5.We will leam ways to save energy in daily life from our
teachers.
6.We start to collect old books and reuse them to reduce waste.
7.Even small acts like turning off the lights when you leave can
make a difference in protecting our planet.
8.We pick up litter on the playground after PE class so that the
ground stays clean.
二阶典例探究明思路
1.we have the power to make a difference and help save
the earth
2.To protect the earth
3.1choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop
pollution 2 make sure to always throw trash in the
proper bins
4.we can make a positive impact on the environment
三阶写作实战提能力
Save Water
Ladies and gentlemen,water is essential for all living
things,and without it,life on Earth would not exist.As we all
know,water resources are wasted because of the growing
population and the development of industries,and it is our
responsibility to save them.
I have realized the importance of saving water through my
daily life experiences.For example,I used to leave the tap
running while brushing my teeth,but now I turn it off to save
water.I also encourage my family to reuse water whenever
possible,such as using waste water from washing vegetables to
water plants.
Let us all take action to save water and protect our planet
for future generations.Every drop counts,and together,we can
make a difference.
Thank you!