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单元话题·梯度训练 专题J878书面表达 单元话题中心 题型特训 Unit 7 The natural world 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 内 容 提 要 一、 初阶练手 Passage 1 – 6 二、 进阶提升 Passage 7 -10 Passage 1 今天，英语老师刚进教室就发现希沃白板上留有一幅由AI根据唐朝诗人柳宗元的《江雪》生成的图片，于是灵机一动，要求学生仔细观察这副图片，然后用英语写一篇短文来描述这幅寒江独钓图。 写作要求：1. 按一定方位顺序描述这张图片，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 词数为80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 有用词汇：bamboo hat n. 斗笠    coir raincoat n. 蓑衣    fisherman n. 渔夫 Now follow me to enjoy an amazing picture—Fishing in Snow. Look over here! ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 海洋环境对全球生态起着至关重要的作用，作为一名中学生，我们也应该为保护海洋生态环境做一些力所能及的事情。假如你是张兵，你们学校的海洋协会正在组织以“Save the ocean animals, save ourselves”为主题的活动，请你根据思维导图用英文写一封倡议书，呼吁大家保护海洋生物。 要求： 1. 包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥。 2. 表达清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确。 3. 80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 My dear friends, I’m Zhang Bing, a member of the Ocean Association. I’m here to share something about the ocean animals with you.__________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s work together for a better earth! Passage 3 围绕你最喜欢的山川或者河流景点，以“My favourite mountain/river”为标题写一篇不少于80词的英文短文。 内容提示： 1. What is your favourite mountain/river? 2. List at least two reasons why you like it. 3. How do you feel about it? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 假设你是李辉。你校英语报“Protect the Environment”专栏面向全校学生征集主题宣传稿，需要用英语向大家宣讲环保的重要性以及作为中学生应怎样保护环境。请你以“Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!”为题，用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。 要求：（1）条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； （ 2）词数80左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。 Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part! The earth is the only home for everyone on it._____________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s do our part to save the earth! Passage 5 大自然是美丽的。然而近年来，自然灾害频发，引起了全球对环境保护以及动物保护的思考。请你根据下面的问题，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁全体师生保护大自然。 1. Why is it important to protect the natural world? 2. What problems does the nature face? 3. What should we do to protect the natural world? 注意：(1)词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； (2)短文应包括所有要点，可进行适当发挥以使文章连贯； (3)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Protect the natural world Good morning, everyone!Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about protecting the natural world. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 6 我们每个中国人都以自己的祖国为傲。请以“My motherland—China”为题，用英语介绍一下我们的祖国。 提示： 1. 历史； 2. 位置：亚洲东部； 3. 河流和高山； 4. 名胜古迹（places of interest）； 5. 人民正努力使自己的国家更加富强。 要求： 1. 要点齐全，语言流畅，书写规范； 2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。 My motherland—China China is my motherland._____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 7 假如你是李华，请以“Protecting the forests”为题，从森林的重要性，人类活动对它的影响，它面临的问题等方面撰写一篇文章，呼吁人们保护森林。 注意：1.短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.词数90左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。 Protecting the forests Forests are of great importance._________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 8 美丽的草原对地球生态很重要，请你以“Protecting the grasslands”为题，根据下面提示写一篇90词左右的短文，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示：1. 草原的重要性（至少两点）； 2. 人类活动对草原的危害； 3. 保护草原的建议。 Protecting the grasslands Grasslands are important. Many animals live there, like_____________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 9 水是生命之源。《长江保护法》 护佑一江清水向东流！我们同样要保护好家乡的河流。学校英文网站将开展题为“Protecting rivers around us”的征文活动, 请结合上文内容和下列提示写一篇英语短文投稿。 提示: 1. Why should we protect the rivers? 2. What can we do to protect them? 注意事项: (1)词数: 90词左右(文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数) ; (2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息; (3)文章必须包含所有要点, 可适当发挥, 使短文连贯、通顺。 Protecting rivers around us Rivers are very important to us._____________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 10 春天是个适合出游的季节，一群来自澳大利亚的交流学生即将来我校参观。作为东道主，你打算带他们 游览江阴。请先根据提示给他们写一篇短文介绍下江阴的情况。 注意：     短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；     第 3、5 要点的内容须用 1-2 句展开合理想象，作适当发挥；     字数 90 词左右。 1）. 中国最美丽的城市之一，历史悠久, 名人辈出。 2）. 青山绿水，自然美景，名胜多，黄山湖公园是人们放松的好去处； 3）. 在过去的几年里，……，所以环境正变 得越来越好； 4）.江阴的季节与澳大利亚的相反。春天是游览江阴的最好时间. 5）.江阴还有……我希望…… ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8 / 8 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $单元话题·梯度训练 专题J878书面表达 单元话题中心 题型特训 Unit 7 The natural world 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 内 容 提 要 一、 初阶练手 Passage 1 – 6 二、 进阶提升 Passage 7 -10 Passage 1 今天，英语老师刚进教室就发现希沃白板上留有一幅由AI根据唐朝诗人柳宗元的《江雪》生成的图片，于是灵机一动，要求学生仔细观察这副图片，然后用英语写一篇短文来描述这幅寒江独钓图。 写作要求：1. 按一定方位顺序描述这张图片，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 词数为80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 有用词汇：bamboo hat n. 斗笠    coir raincoat n. 蓑衣    fisherman n. 渔夫 Now follow me to enjoy an amazing picture—Fishing in Snow. Look over here! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Now follow me to enjoy an amazing picture——Fishing in Snow. Look over here! There is snow everywhere. Along the riverside, we can see all the mountains covered with heavy snow. On the riverbanks, we can’t see any sand or roads but many trees. The tall green trees faraway become white, too. In the air, it is snowing heavily. We can’t see any birds flying in the sky. On the river, there is an old fisherman on a boat. He is wearing a coir raincoat and a bamboo hat. He puts his heart into fishing. What a nice picture it is! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图描述类短文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：需按方位顺序描述图片，涵盖雪景、景物及人物等要点，通过细节刻画营造画面氛围。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明写作意图，引出要描述的“寒江独钓图”； 第二步，以“处处皆雪”为核心，按方位顺序依次描述雪景：江边群山覆雪，河岸树木被雪覆盖，空中大雪纷飞无飞鸟，江面上渔船与渔夫的状态； 第三步，以感叹句总结画面，突出其美感。 [亮点词汇] ①be covered with被……覆盖 ②put one’s heart into全神贯注于 ③faraway遥远的 [高分句型] Along the riverside, we can see all the mountains covered with heavy snow. (过去分词短语作后置定语) Passage 2 海洋环境对全球生态起着至关重要的作用，作为一名中学生，我们也应该为保护海洋生态环境做一些力所能及的事情。假如你是张兵，你们学校的海洋协会正在组织以“Save the ocean animals, save ourselves”为主题的活动，请你根据思维导图用英文写一封倡议书，呼吁大家保护海洋生物。 要求： 1. 包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥。 2. 表达清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确。 3. 80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 My dear friends, I’m Zhang Bing, a member of the Ocean Association. I’m here to share something about the ocean animals with you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s work together for a better earth! 【答案】例文 My dear friends, I’m Zhang Bing, a member of the Ocean Association. I’m here to share something about the ocean animals with you. Ocean animals are in great danger, and pollution is the main reason. Many industrial wastes are poured into the sea, making the water dirty. So they lose their homes and find it hard to survive. Ocean animals are very important to us—they are like our sea friends. We can protect them in simple ways. We should use less plastic to cut down pollution and stop overfishing, too. Let’s take action now to save them. After all, saving ocean animals means saving ourselves. Let’s work together for a better earth! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“思维导图”中保护海洋动物的介绍要点，适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开头指出海洋动物面临的危险及污染是主要原因，并说明污染的具体表现和后果； 第二步：阐述海洋动物对人类的重要性，并提出具体的保护措施； 第三步：总结全文，呼吁立即行动保护海洋动物，强调保护海洋动物就是保护人类自己。 [亮点词汇] ①in great danger处于极大危险中 ②industrial wastes工业废料 ③lose their homes失去家园 ④find it hard to survive发现很难生存 ⑤cut down pollution减少污染 [高分句型] ①Many industrial wastes are poured into the sea, making the water dirty. (现在分词making作结果状语，表明工业废料排放的后果) ②After all, saving ocean animals means saving ourselves. (动名词saving作主语，强调保护海洋动物的深层意义) Passage 3 围绕你最喜欢的山川或者河流景点，以“My favourite mountain/river”为标题写一篇不少于80词的英文短文。 内容提示： 1. What is your favourite mountain/river? 2. List at least two reasons why you like it. 3. How do you feel about it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My favourite river My favourite river is the Yangtze River. It is the longest river in China and one of the most important rivers in the world. I like the Yangtze River for several reasons. Firstly, it has a rich history and culture. Along the river, there are many ancient cities and historical sites, which tell the story of China’s long history. Secondly, the scenery along the Yangtze River is breathtaking. From the majestic Three Gorges to the vast plains, every part of it shows the beauty of nature. When I think about the Yangtze River, I feel a deep sense of pride. It’s not only a river, but also a symbol of our nation’s spirit. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，主题为介绍自己最喜欢的自然景观（山川或河流）。 ②时态：以一般现在时为主，用于表达普遍事实与个人感受。 ③提示：内容应包括河流（或山川）的名称、喜欢的原因（至少两点）以及个人情感，注意结构清晰、衔接自然。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，介绍你最喜欢的河流或山川的名称及基本信息； 第二步：分条说明喜欢的理由（如自然风光、历史文化、个人体验等）； 第三步：结尾表达情感或总结升华主题，体现热爱与自豪。 [亮点词汇] ①think about 想到 ②feel a deep sense of pride 感到深深的自豪 ③not only...but also... 不但……而且…… [高分句型] ①Along the river, there are many ancient cities and historical sites, which tell the story of China’s long history.（非限制性定语从句） ②When I think about the Yangtze River, I feel a deep sense of pride.（时间状语从句） ③It’s not only a river, but also a symbol of our nation’s spirit.（not only…but also结构） Passage 4 假设你是李辉。你校英语报“Protect the Environment”专栏面向全校学生征集主题宣传稿，需要用英语向大家宣讲环保的重要性以及作为中学生应怎样保护环境。请你以“Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!”为题，用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。 要求：（1）条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； （ 2）词数80左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。 Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part! The earth is the only home for everyone on it. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s do our part to save the earth! 【答案】例文： Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part! The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It provides all the resources we need for survival, from fresh water to rich land. However, human activities cause serious problems. Climate change, pollution, and loss of biodiversity are now harming it. Our planet is crying for our help now. As middle school students, we have the power to make a difference and help save the earth! To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees, and reducing pollution. Saving animals and recycling things are necessary as well. Let’s do our part to save the earth! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇宣传稿； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括地球的重要性、当前面临的环境问题、中学生的环保行动等，需条理清晰、行文连贯地展开阐述。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引入主题，强调地球对人类的重要性。 第二步：阐述当前地球面临的环境问题，指出这些问题的严重性及对地球的危害，提出中学生应采取的环保行动。 第三步：总结全文，呼吁全校学生共同参与环保行动。 [亮点词汇] ①provide sth. for sb.为某人提供某物 ②cause serious problems造成严重问题 ③make a difference有影响，起作用 [高分句型] ①It provides all the resources we need for survival, from fresh water to rich land. (省略引导词的定语从句) ②To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees, and reducing pollution.  (动词不定式作目的状语) Passage 5 大自然是美丽的。然而近年来，自然灾害频发，引起了全球对环境保护以及动物保护的思考。请你根据下面的问题，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁全体师生保护大自然。 1. Why is it important to protect the natural world? 2. What problems does the nature face? 3. What should we do to protect the natural world? 注意：(1)词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； (2)短文应包括所有要点，可进行适当发挥以使文章连贯； (3)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Protect the natural world Good morning, everyone!Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about protecting the natural world. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Protect the natural world Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about protecting the natural world. The natural world belongs to all of us. I think everybody should take on the responsibility of environmental protection. There are many environmental problems nowadays. For example, people cut down trees for production. Rubbish is often thrown into rivers and lakes, and many of them are polluted. Luckily, there are many things we can do to protect the natural world. We should sort the rubbish into different groups so that it can be reused and recycled better. Besides, we should learn to save energy, such as not leaving taps running all the time. Let’s take action to save our world together! That’s all. Thanks for your listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先强调保护大自然的重要性，并列举大自然现在面临的问题，例如砍伐树木、垃圾污染水体等； 第二步，提出保护自然的行动举措，例如从垃圾分类、节约能源等方面给出可操作的做法； 第三步，呼吁大家保护自然，书写结语，结束演讲。 [亮点词汇] ①belong to 属于 ②take on the responsibility 承担责任 ③environmental protection 环境保护 ④cut down 砍伐 ⑤polluted 受污染的 ⑥save energy 节约能源 ⑦take action 采取行动 [高分句型] ①I think everybody should take on the responsibility of environmental protection. (省略that的宾语从句) ②We should sort the rubbish into different groups so that it can be reused and recycled better. (so that引导的目的状语从句) Passage 6 我们每个中国人都以自己的祖国为傲。请以“My motherland—China”为题，用英语介绍一下我们的祖国。 提示： 1. 历史； 2. 位置：亚洲东部； 3. 河流和高山； 4. 名胜古迹（places of interest）； 5. 人民正努力使自己的国家更加富强。 要求： 1. 要点齐全，语言流畅，书写规范； 2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。 My motherland—China China is my motherland. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My motherland—China China is my motherland. It’s an old country with a very long history of more than 5,000 years. China lies in East Asia. There are many places of interest in my country, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and so on. They are well-known around the world. China has many famous rivers and mountains. The Yangtze River is the longest river in my country. Mount Huang is famous in the world. Chinese people are trying to make the country richer and stronger. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给“提示”完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍中国的历史、位置以及一些名胜古迹； 第二步，介绍中国的河流和高山以及中国人民所作出的努力。 [亮点词汇] ①more than超过 ②lie in位于 ③around the world全世界 ④the longest最长的 ⑤try to do sth.努力做某事 [高分句型] There are many places of interest in my country, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and so on. (there be句型) Passage 7 假如你是李华，请以“Protecting the forests”为题，从森林的重要性，人类活动对它的影响，它面临的问题等方面撰写一篇文章，呼吁人们保护森林。 注意：1.短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.词数90左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。 Protecting the forests Forests are of great importance. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Protecting the forests Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate. However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming or other purposes. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Telling more people about protecting forests is also very important. Let’s take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示信息写作，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，强调森林的重要性； 第二步，根据提示信息描述森林面临的问题； 第三步，呼吁人们保护森林。 [亮点词汇] ①provide…with…为……提供…… ②cut down砍伐 ③take action采取行动 ④make a difference产生影响，有所作为 [高分句型] ①Telling more people about protecting forests is also very important. (动名词作主语) ②Let’s take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference. (祈使句) Passage 8 美丽的草原对地球生态很重要，请你以“Protecting the grasslands”为题，根据下面提示写一篇90词左右的短文，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示：1. 草原的重要性（至少两点）； 2. 人类活动对草原的危害； 3. 保护草原的建议。 Protecting the grasslands Grasslands are important. Many animals live there, like_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Protecting the grasslands Grasslands are important. Many animals live there, like horses, sheep and cows. Without grasslands, soil might wash away during rain. Now people are hurting grasslands in two main ways. Too many animals are eating grass. If horses, sheep and cows eat too much grass, nothing grows back. Besides, some people cut down grass to grow crops. This kills plants and makes the soil weak. To save the grasslands, our governments make rules to stop people from using grasslands wrongly. Let farmers take turns grazing their animals. This gives grass time to grow back. Let’s do something to save the grasslands. Grasslands are not empty fields——they are homes for animals! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点清晰明确，可适当补充细节，突出保护草原这一核心主题。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍草原的重要性； 第二步，再阐述人们破坏草原的两种主要方式； 第三步，最后提出保护草原的措施，重点说明政府制定规则以及推行轮牧。 [亮点词汇] ①live there 生活在那里； ②wash away 冲走； ③grow back 重新生长。 [高分句型] ①Many animals live there, like horses, sheep and cows.（用like列举具体动物）； ②To save the grasslands, our governments make rules to stop people from using grasslands wrongly.（不定式表目的）。 Passage 9 水是生命之源。《长江保护法》 护佑一江清水向东流！我们同样要保护好家乡的河流。学校英文网站将开展题为“Protecting rivers around us”的征文活动, 请结合上文内容和下列提示写一篇英语短文投稿。 提示: 1. Why should we protect the rivers? 2. What can we do to protect them? 注意事项: (1)词数: 90词左右(文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数) ; (2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息; (3)文章必须包含所有要点, 可适当发挥, 使短文连贯、通顺。 Protecting rivers around us Rivers are very important to us._____________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Protecting rivers around us Rivers are very important to us. They provide clean water for us, so it’s our duty to protect them wisely. However, many rivers have been seriously polluted. To solve these problems, some actions must be taken. First, we should stop people from throwing litter into the rivers. Second, some laws should be made to prevent factories from pouring dirty water into the rivers. Last, it’s necessary to plant more trees on both sides of the rivers because trees can keep soil in place during storms. The rivers will be more beautiful if we protect them well. 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示问题，写出为什么要保护河流以及具体的保护措施等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，提出建议可以多用情态动词，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 Passage 10 春天是个适合出游的季节，一群来自澳大利亚的交流学生即将来我校参观。作为东道主，你打算带他们 游览江阴。请先根据提示给他们写一篇短文介绍下江阴的情况。 注意：     短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；     第 3、5 要点的内容须用 1-2 句展开合理想象，作适当发挥；     字数 90 词左右。 1）. 中国最美丽的城市之一，历史悠久, 名人辈出。 2）. 青山绿水，自然美景，名胜多，黄山湖公园是人们放松的好去处； 3）. 在过去的几年里，……，所以环境正变 得越来越好； 4）.江阴的季节与澳大利亚的相反。春天是游览江阴的最好时间. 5）.江阴还有……我希望…… _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Welcome to Jiangyin, one of the most beautiful cities in China! It has a long history and delivers many talented people. Here the water is clean and the mountains are green. What’s more, there are many places of interest and natural beauty. Among them Huangshan Lake Park is a good place for people to relax. In the past few years, our government has taken actions to improve the environment so that the city is becoming better and better. The seasons in Jiangyin are opposite to those in Australia. Spring is the best season to take a trip around Jiangyin. Besides, the people in Jiangyin are friendly and the food is delicious. I believe you’ll have a wonderful time in my hometown! 【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。要求以根据提示给一群来自澳大利亚的交流学生，写一篇短文介绍下江阴的情况的文章。提示要点共5点，要求短文须包括所有内容要点；第 3、5 要点的内容须用 1-2 句展开合理想象，作适当发挥。本文时态主要是一般现在时，但第3点在写过去几年的情况变化时，用到现在完成时。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。 【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 1 / 14 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $