基于教材文本的应用文写作 Unit1 Wish you were here Reading课件 2024-2025学年高中英语译林版选择性必修第三册

该高中英语课件聚焦介绍地方的应用文写作，以译林B6U1 Reading文本为导入，引导学生分析范文结构（引言、主体含自然风景/文化/活动、结论）及写作技巧（比喻修辞、倒装句式等），通过提供句式模板（如引言用“...像...展开魅力”）搭建学习支架，帮助学生从模仿范文过渡到独立写作。 其亮点在于融合语言能力与思维品质，通过“写作圈”小组合作（分角色设计结构、优化语言、审核语法）和真题链接（投稿介绍地方），引导学生将范文技巧迁移到家乡文化介绍（如潍坊云门山“寿”字、风筝节等）。采用任务型教学，学生在实践中提升语言表达和迁移能力，增强家国情怀，教师可借助结构化模板和真实情境任务提高教学实效。

基于教材文本的应用文写作 —— 以译林B6U1 Wish you were here: Reading 为例 1 By the end of this section, students will be able to: identify the structure and analyze the language features of the model article; comprehend and grasp the four writing techniques used in the model article; apply the four writing techniques to write an introduction to Weifang in class; create an article on a new place with the learned techniques after class. Teaching Objectives 01 4 02 5 ZI BO 1 7 Wish you were here In-class writing task: Promote your hometown 6 随着全国多地旅游爆火，广大网友纷纷化身家乡宣传大使为家乡代言，请你为Chinese National Geography 写一篇短文来介绍你的家乡。要点包括： 7 Introduction Conclusion (B6U1 Reading) Main body Main body 01 Introduction 02 Main body 03 Conclusion Natural scenery Unique cultures Tourist activities STRUCTURE Writing tip 1: Clear Structure 9 Writing tip 2: Descriptive language Canada is like a blooming flower, unfolding with breathtaking beauty and richness to win the heart of those who enjoy what it has to offer. Simile (明喻) Rhetorical device (修辞手法) ? Effect ? Introduction Descriptive adjectives Weifang is like , unfolding with breathtaking beauty and richness to win the heart of those who enjoy what it has to offer. a timeless and vibrant (生动多彩的) scroll Introduction Main body To the east of the Pacific coast rise the grand Rocky Mountains, which are home to high peaks and deep valleys carved by ice and water. Inversion (倒装) Natural scenery Why? Rocky Mountains 12 To the south of the Shandong plains the famous Yunmen Mountain, which features a giant “shou” (longevity) character carved upon its cliff. 7 Main body Natural scenery stands 13 8 If you are looking for something off the beaten track, you may visit the Cape Breton Island, where you can dance to fiddle tunes and enjoy the cultures and traditions of Celtic settlers. Main body Unique cultures Non-restrictive relative clause (非限制性定语从句) B6U1 Grammar and usage the Cape Breton Island 14 If you want to dive into the profound cultural heritage, don’t miss the World Kite Museum and the Yangjiabu Folk Culture Village, _____________________________ _____________________________ _____________________________ Main body Unique cultures where you can discover a splendid collection of kites from around the globe and the art of traditional woodblock paintings. Woodblock painting 15 In Montreal, one of the largest French-speaking cities in the world, you can sample the food with a typical French flavor and see the original buildings in the French style of architecture. Main body Tourist activities (What to do/eat) Apposition (同位语) In Montreal, one of the largest French-speaking cities in the world, you can sample the food with a typical French flavor and see the original buildings in the French style of architecture. Montreal 16 Main body Tourist activities (What to do/eat) In Weifang, , you can both the Kite Capital of the World witness hundreds of kites coloring the sky during the annual International Kite Festival and sample the local delicacies like “Chaotian Pot” and Hele Noodles. Writing tip 3: Varied sentence patterns 17 Main body To the south of the Shandong plains stands the famous Yunmen Mountain, which features a giant “shou” (longevity) character carved upon its cliff. (1) If you want to explore the profound cultural heritage, don’t miss …, where you can discover a splendid collection of kites and the art of traditional woodblock paintings. (2) , in Weifang, the Kite Capital of the World, you can witness hundreds of kites coloring the sky during the annual International Kite Festival and sample local delicacies like “Chaotian Pot” and Hele Noodles. Apart from its natural scenery, Weifang is also a city with unique cultures. Besides/What’s more… Writing tip 4: Proper linking devices Apart from its geographical diversity, Canada’s many rural and urban areas reflect the diversity of its residents. From the towering mountain peaks to the depths of the forests to the urban centers, Canada’s geographical wonders, ethnic groups and their cultures make it a unique place to live and visit, and visitors are always welcome! Conclusion Conclusion From the giant “longevity” character on the mountain to the colourful kites in the sky to the delicious local cuisine, Weifang’s natural wonders, unique cultures, and appealing tourist activities make it a unique place to visit, and visitors are always welcome! 遇/见/最/好/的/你 Weifang is like a timeless and vibrant scroll, unfolding with breathtaking beauty and richness to win the heart of those who enjoy what it has to offer. To the south of the Shandong plains stands the famous Yunmen Mountain, which features a giant “longevity” character carved upon its cliff. And the slow-flowing Bailang River gently embraces the city. Apart from its natural scenery, Weifang is also a city with unique cultures. If you want to dive into the profound cultural heritage, don’t miss the World Kite Museum and the Yangjiabu Folk Culture Village, where you can discover a splendid collection of kites and the art of traditional woodblock paintings. What’s more, in Weifang, the Kite Capital of the World, you can witness hundreds of kites coloring the sky during the annual International Kite Festival and sample local delicacies like “Chaotian Pot” and Hele Noodles. Weifang’s natural wonders, unique cultures, and appealing tourist activities make it a unique place to visit, and visitors are always welcome! (B6U1 Project) After-class writing task: Voice Its Charm 22 真题链接： 假定你是李华，你校英文网站新增了Amazing China 栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括： （1）该地方的总体介绍； （2）该地方的特色（如文化、景点等）。 注意： （1）词数不少于80词： （2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 23 Introducing a place Introduction …is like…, revealing/unfolding its… to win the heart of those who enjoy what it has to offer. Main body: natural scenery unique cultures tourist activities … … Apart from its natural scenery, … is also a city with unique cultures. If you want to…, don’t miss…, where… In…, a city/place…, you can… Conclusion From...to...to…, … is indeed a unique place to visit, and visitors are always welcome! (B6U1 Integrated skills) 24 Form groups of four students; Decide your roles: Group leader: lead and supervise all team members to complete the writing task on time; Structure designer: help design the structure and illustrate the key points when necessary; Language master: provide suggestions concerning the word choice & sentence structures; Reviewer: examine the writing carefully to avoid any grammatical mistakes. Complete your own draft of the writing task (individual work); Evaluate the drafts and provide constructive feedback for improvement (group work). Writing circle Thank you! (B6U1 Welcome to the unit) 26 $