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高中英语 读后续写练习与讲解
读后续写17:偶遇溺水事故
I’d been restless all morning, feeling uncomfortable and not able to put my finger on why. Everything seemed all right. I had a wonderful breakfast with my mother, but I was sitting on the sofa holding the front page of the newspaper and not really reading it. Something was wrong, but I didn’t know what.
My mother didn’t seem to notice my distraction (分心). She busied herself making a new quilt (被子). I sat and stared at the backyard through the door, trying to figure out what was bothering me. I needed to be somewhere. I didn’t know where, but I knew it wasn’t here inside the house. I headed for the front door and my hand automatically went to my pocket for my car keys. But then something told me I wasn’t going to be driving anywhere. I needed to go for a walk.
I stepped out onto the porch (门廊), wondering where I was supposed to go. Apparently, my legs had an idea because I found myself starting off on one of my normal morning walks. This time, however, I turned north after going one block and walked up a street that I’d never taken before.
After I’d covered a few blocks, I began to hear two female voices, and one of them was crying sharply. A voice in my head said “Hurry” and I found myself running toward the sound. I ran up to a house. Two women stood in front of the house. One of them was dressed in swimwear. She was the one crying.
“My baby!” she shouted, staring down at a little girl lying still on the green grass. “My baby’s dead?” The other woman stood there next to her, holding her hand. She saw me approaching and said, “They were swimming in the backyard. I think her daughter’s drowned (淹死).”
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Hearing this, I remembered that in college I’d been trained in CPR (心肺复苏).
Time was passing slowly and my heart was waiting in expectation.
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Paragraph 1:Hearing this, I remembered that in college I’d been trained in CPR (心肺复苏).听到这,我突然想起大学时学过心肺复苏术(心肺复苏)。
1. 说实话,我不确定自己能否正确且成功的做到。
,I .
2. 但是,面对这样的紧急状况,我毫不犹豫地决定救这个溺水的女孩。
, ,I the drowned girl .
3. 我立即跪在女孩身旁,检查呼吸后,将双手放在她胸口,开始进行心肺复苏。
I , and to carry out CPR.
4. 我内心充满紧张且额头上冒出了汗珠。
and the sweat .
5. 在那一刻,没有任何言语能准确描述我的心情。
, .
Paragraph 2:Time was passing slowly and my heart was waiting in expectation.时间仿佛凝固,我的心在忐忑中等待。
6. 与此同时,女孩的母亲和另一位女士站在我身边,脸上写满了担忧。
,the girl's mom and the other woman with
.
7. 幸运的是,没过多久,女孩的心脏开始再次跳动,她恢复了意识/醒了过来。
, and she
.
8. 我们都如释重负地叹了口气,脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。
We all with .
9. 女孩的母亲激动地将我拥入怀中,激动地向我表达感激之情。
The girl's mom and .
10. 在那一刻,我所有的负面情绪都烟消云散,我感觉极其平静且为自己感到自豪。
,all my and I felt .
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校对版
Paragraph 1:Hearing this, I remembered that in college I’d been trained in CPR (心肺复苏).听到这,我突然想起大学时学过心肺复苏术(心肺复苏)。
1. 说实话,我不确定自己能否正确且成功的做到。
To be honest,I was not sure whether I could do it correctly and successfully.
2. 但是,面对这样的紧急状况,我毫不犹豫地决定救这个溺水的女孩。
However,facing the emergent situation,I decided to save the drowned girl without hesitation.
3. 我立即跪在女孩身旁,检查呼吸后,将双手放在她胸口,开始进行心肺复苏。
I knelt down beside the girl instantly,checked her breath and placed my hands on her chest to carry out CPR.
4. 我内心充满紧张且额头上冒出了汗珠。
My heart was filled with nervousness and the sweat appeared on my forehead.
5. 在那一刻,没有任何言语能准确描述我的心情。
At that moment,no words could exactly describe my feeling.
Paragraph 2:Time was passing slowly and my heart was waiting in expectation.时间仿佛凝固,我的心在忐忑中等待。
6. 与此同时,女孩的母亲和另一位女士站在我身边,脸上写满了担忧。
At the same time,the girl's mom and the other woman stood beside me with a concerned look on their faces.
7. 幸运的是,没过多久,女孩的心脏开始再次跳动,她恢复了意识/醒了过来。
Fortunately,it wasn't long before the girl’s heart began to beat again and she regained consciousness/woke up.
8. 我们都如释重负地叹了口气,脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。
We all sighed in relief with bright smiles crossing our faces.
9. 女孩的母亲激动地将我拥入怀中,激动地向我表达感激之情。
The girl's mom gathered me into her arms and expressed her gratitude excitedly.在那一刻,我所有的负面情绪都烟消云散,我感觉极其平静且为自己感到自豪。
At that moment,all my negative emotion disappeared and I felt extremely calm and proud of myself.
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参考范文
Paragraph 1:听到这,我突然想起大学时学过心肺复苏术(心肺复苏)。说实话,我不确定自己能否正确且成功的做到。但是,面对这样的紧急状况,我毫不犹豫地决定救这个溺水的女孩。我立即跪在女孩身旁,检查呼吸后,将双手放在她胸口,开始进行心肺复苏。我内心充满紧张且额头上冒出了汗珠。在那一刻,没有任何言语能准确描述我的心情。
Hearing this, I remembered that in college I’d been trained in CPR (心肺复苏).To be honest,I was not sure whether I could do it correctly and successfully.However,facing the emergent situation,I decided to save the drowned girl without hesitation.I knelt down beside the girl instantly,checked her breath and placed my hands on her chest to carry out CPR.My heart was filled with nervousness and the sweat appeared on my forehead. At that moment,no words could exactly describe my feeling. (65)
Paragraph 2:时间仿佛凝固,我的心在忐忑中等待。与此同时,女孩的母亲和另一位女士站在我身边,脸上写满了担忧。幸运的是,没过多久,女孩的心脏开始再次跳动,她恢复了意识/醒了过来。我们都如释重负地叹了口气,脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。女孩的母亲激动地将我拥入怀中,激动地向我表达感激之情。就在那一刻,我所有的负面情绪都烟消云散,我感觉极其平静且为自己感到自豪。
Time was passing slowly and my heart was waiting in expectation.At the same time,the girl's mom and the other woman stood beside me with a concerned look on their faces.Fortunately,it wasn't long before the girl’s heart began to beat again and she regained consciousness/woke up.We all sighed in relief with bright smiles crossing our faces.The girl's mom gathered me into her arms and expressed her gratitude excitedly.At that moment,all my negative emotion disappeared and I felt extremely calm and proud of myself. (72)
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