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该高中英语高考复习资料聚焦读后续写核心考点，围绕叙事逻辑构建、情感描写深化、高级词汇语法运用三大模块，按“类型分析-构思布局-语言提升”逻辑层次展开，通过考点梳理（故事山模式、冲突分析）、方法指导（心理/动作/环境描写技巧）、真题训练（零诊模拟题及范文赏析）环节，帮助学生建立续写框架和解题思路。 资料采用“分析-模仿-创新”三步教学法，结合家庭情感类文本，引导学生分析范文中的独立主格结构和情感转折，培养思维品质与语言能力。设置例句仿写、段落续写、全文创作分层练习，配合即时反馈和个别辅导，确保学生突破难点，为教师精准把控复习节奏提供有力支撑。

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写）可积累文本，绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 四川省成都市第七中学2024-2025学年度下期高2026届零诊模拟考试 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Amanda and Susie might be sisters, but they'd never got on(故事背景信息). You'd think they would, with only two years between them. Yet from the minute Susie was born, Amanda knew the baby resented her(冲突？). Now, despite being in their fifties(注意年龄信息), the hatred was still fresh in their minds. The only thing they had in common was that they both adored their mother(表语从句). Then one day, when Amanda was in the classroom,teaching(现在分词短语做伴随动作)a particularly challenging group of teenagers, her father rang with the terrible news that their mother had died suddenly(同为语从句). Both sisters were stricken with grief, but Susie, who'd been looking after her granddaughter when she got the call, was also upset that their father hadn't informed her first. Then their father told them about their mother's will. “She's left you the painting." He seemed to be addressing them both the painting - the source of one of their biggest childhood arguments(两人隔阂的原因). Their mother had decided that it would be nice to have a photo of both her girls. “Did Mum leave the portrait to me?” asked Amanda. No, Susie wanted to say. Surely her mother couldn't have been so biased. “In fact," replied their father, “she's left it to both of you.” “How's that going to work?”" asked Amanda. “We live miles apart." “Thankfully,” muttered Susie. Amanda shot her a displeased look. “The will demands that you each have it for six months and then swap over, for as long as you both live.(遗嘱的要求)’ So, every six months Amanda and Susie drove to a service station between their homes and carefully handed over the painting(情节推动点，接触就是情感的基础). Two years passed. The funny thing was that the sisters saw more of each other than they had done for years(表从). Sometimes Susie tried to start a conversation, and Amanda claimed she had to dash. Sometimes it was the other way round. But then came a bright winter day(倒装句) when Susie turned up for the handover, and her sister wasn't there. Amanda was often late, but never three hours late(重要的衔接点，冲突点). She wasn't even replying to Susie's “Where were you” texts. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: All kinds of thoughts ran through Susie's head as she drove to the hospital. Paragraph 2: “I think that's the first time you've ever said those words to me.” Amanda squeezed her sister's hand. 四川省成都市第七中学2024-2025学年度下期高2026届零诊模拟考试 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Amanda and Susie might be sisters, but they'd never got on. You'd think they would, with only two years between them. Yet from the minute Susie was born, Amanda knew the baby resented her. Now, despite being in their fifties, the hatred was still fresh in their minds. The only thing they had in common was that they both adored their mother. Then one day, when Amanda was in the classroom,teaching a particularly challenging group of teenagers, her father rang with the terrible news that their mother had died suddenly. Both sisters were stricken with grief, but Susie, who'd been looking after her granddaughter when she got the call, was also upset that their father hadn't informed her first. Then their father told them about their mother's will. “She's left you the painting." He seemed to bead dressing them both the painting - the source of one of their biggest childhood arguments. Their mother had decided that it would be nice to have a photo of both her girls. “Did Mum leave the portrait to me?” asked Amanda. No, Susie wanted to say. Surely her mother couldn't have been so biased. “In fact," replied their father, “she's left it to both of you.” “How's that going to work?”" asked Amanda. “We live miles apart." “Thankfully,” muttered Susie. Amanda shot her a displeased look. “The will demands that you each have it for six months and then swap over, for as long as you both live.’ So, every six months Amanda and Susie drove to a service station between their homes and carefully handed over the painting. Two years passed. The funny thing was that the sisters saw more of each other than they had done for years. Sometimes Susie tried to start a conversation, and Amanda claimed she had to dash. Sometimes it was the other way round. But then came a bright winter day when Susie turned up for the handover, and her sister wasn't there Amanda was often late, but never three hours late. She wasn't even replying to Susie's “Where were you” texts. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: All kinds of thoughts ran through Susie's head as she drove to the hospital. Paragraph 2: “I think that's the first time you've ever said those words to me.” Amanda squeezed her sister's hand. 1. 读后续写类型分析及构思布局 类型：家庭情感类（姐妹矛盾与和解） 构思思路： 主题：通过母亲遗物（画作）的交接，推动姐妹关系从对立到和解。 布局： 第一段（医院）：Susie的担忧与自责，回忆冲突根源，发现Amanda的脆弱。 第二段（和解）：通过对话和肢体动作（如握手）体现情感突破，呼应母亲遗愿。 框架提炼： 段落 内容重点 衔接原文 1 Susie的心理活动、医院场景 母亲去世、画作交接、Amanda失联 2 姐妹对话、情感和解 童年矛盾、母亲遗愿 续写注意事项： 承接原文： 保留姐妹对立的人设（如Susie的埋怨、Amanda的冷漠）。 延续“画作”象征意义（母亲的爱与姐妹纽带）。 巧妙设计： 利用医院场景制造紧张感，通过Susie的视角揭示Amanda的隐情（如健康问题）。 用“第一次说这些话”呼应童年矛盾，体现成长。 2. 故事山模式与原文分析 故事山模式： 阶段 原文内容 续写发展 冲突引入 姐妹长期不和 Susie担心Amanda 上升动作 画作交接惯例 医院寻找原因 高潮 Amanda失联 揭露Amanda生病 回落 姐妹对话 情感和解 结局 - 画作象征和解 衔接点与关键分析： 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Susie敏感，Amanda固执 “Surely her mother couldn't have been so biased.” 情感层次 表面敌意，深层牵挂 “Sometimes Susie tried to start a conversation...” 关键情节点 母亲遗嘱、画作交接 “The will demands that you each have it for six months...” 隐含线索 画作象征母爱与和解 “the painting - the source of one of their biggest childhood arguments” 冲突点 交接日Amanda缺席 “her sister wasn't there... never three hours late” 心理描写 Susie的焦虑与自责 “All kinds of thoughts ran through Susie's head” 动作描写 姐妹互动细节 “Amanda shot her a displeased look” 环境描写 服务站交接场景 “drove to a service station between their homes” 情感转折 从怨恨到担忧 “The funny thing was that the sisters saw more of each other...” 3. 读后续写例句 & 高级替换词 动作描写 1. Her hands trembled as she clutched the steering wheel. （她的手紧握方向盘，微微颤抖。） 2. Amanda shot her a displeased look before turning away. （阿曼达不悦地瞪了她一眼，然后转身离开。） 3. Susie’s fingers fumbled with the wrapping of the painting. （苏茜的手指笨拙地摆弄着画作的包装。） 4. She dashed toward the hospital entrance, her breath ragged. （她冲向医院入口，呼吸急促。） 5. The nurse gestured toward the emergency room with a solemn expression. （护士表情严肃地指了指急诊室。） 6. Amanda weakly lifted her hand to brush away a tear. （阿曼达虚弱地抬手擦去眼泪。） 7. Susie’s footsteps echoed in the empty corridor. （苏茜的脚步声在空荡的走廊里回响。） 8. He hesitated before handing her the fragile portrait. （他在递给她那幅易碎的肖像画前犹豫了一下。） 9. She slumped into the chair, exhaustion washing over her. （她瘫坐在椅子上，疲惫感席卷而来。） 10. Their eyes met, and for a moment, the old resentment flickered. （他们对视了一眼，旧日的怨恨一闪而过。） 心理描写 1. A wave of guilt crashed over her as she recalled her harsh words. （回想起自己刻薄的话语，一阵愧疚感涌上心头。） 2. Doubt gnawed at her—had she been too stubborn all these years? （怀疑啃噬着她的心——这些年她是否太固执了？） 3. Her mind raced with worst-case scenarios. （她的脑海里闪过各种最坏的情况。） 4. A strange mix of anger and worry churned inside her. （愤怒和担忧在她心里奇怪地交织着。） 5. For the first time, she questioned whether their feud was worth it. （她第一次质疑，她们的争执是否值得。） 6. A pang of regret shot through her when she saw Amanda’s pale face. （看到阿曼达苍白的脸，一阵悔恨刺痛了她。） 7. She couldn’t shake the feeling that she’d failed her mother. （她无法摆脱一种辜负了母亲的愧疚感。） 8. The weight of their unspoken words hung heavily between them. （那些未说出口的话沉重地悬在她们之间。） 9. Her heart clenched at the thought of losing her sister for good. （想到可能永远失去姐姐，她的心揪紧了。） 10. A flicker of hope sparked in her chest—maybe things could change. （她心中闪过一丝希望——也许事情会有转机。） 环境描写 The hospital corridor stretched endlessly, its fluorescent lights harsh. （医院的走廊似乎没有尽头，荧光灯刺眼。） Outside, the winter wind howled, rattling the windows. （外面，冬风呼啸，拍打着窗户。） The sterile smell of antiseptic filled the air. （空气中弥漫着消毒水的刺鼻气味。） The dim lighting in the room cast long shadows. （房间里昏暗的灯光投下长长的影子。） Raindrops tapped against the glass like impatient fingers. （雨滴像不耐烦的手指一样敲打着玻璃。） The silence in the car was thick with unspoken tension. （车里的沉默中充满了未说出口的紧张。） The service station was eerily empty at this late hour. （深夜的服务站空荡荡的，有些诡异。） The portrait lay between them, a silent witness to their feud. （那幅肖像画摆在她们之间，默默见证着她们的争执。） The ticking of the clock only amplified her anxiety. （时钟的滴答声只让她的焦虑更加明显。） A single beam of sunlight broke through the heavy clouds. （一束阳光穿透厚重的云层。） 4. 高级替换词 & 常见搭配解析 (1) 高级替换词（按场景分类） 普通词汇 高级替换 适用场景 angry resentful（怨恨的） 长期矛盾 sad grief-stricken（悲痛欲绝的） 亲人去世 look glance / glare（瞥 / 怒视） 人物互动 say mutter / whisper（嘟囔 / 低语） 对话描写 walk stagger / stride（蹒跚 / 大步走） 动作细节 (2) 常见搭配 & 词法解析 be stricken with grief（悲痛欲绝） 近义词：devastated, heartbroken 反义词：overjoyed, elated 例句： Both sisters were stricken with grief when their mother passed away. He was stricken with grief after losing his best friend. shot her a look（瞪了一眼） 近义词：glared at, gave a sharp glance 反义词：smiled warmly 例句： Amanda shot her a displeased look before turning away. He shot me a warning look, and I fell silent. a flicker of hope（一线希望） 近义词：a glimmer of hope 反义词：despair 例句： A flicker of hope sparked in her chest when she saw the rescue team. Despite the bad news, there was still a flicker of hope. gnaw at sb.（折磨某人） 近义词：torment, haunt 反义词：comfort 例句： Guilt gnawed at her as she recalled her harsh words. The thought of failure gnawed at him day and night. hang heavily between them（沉重地悬在两人之间） 近义词：loom over, weigh on 反义词：ease the tension 例句： The unspoken truth hung heavily between them. The memory of their fight still hung heavily in the air. (3) 可积累的语料 & 生词短语 短语/生词 词义 例句 resent (v.) 怨恨 She resented her sister for always getting more attention. bias (n.) 偏见 The will seemed to show a clear bias toward Amanda. swap (v.) 交换 They agreed to swap the painting every six months. feud (n.) 长期不和 Their feud had lasted for decades. stagger (v.) 蹒跚 He staggered into the room, exhausted. 总结 动作描写：多用 tremble, fumble, dash, slump 等动词增强画面感。 心理描写：可用 gnaw at, flicker of hope, pang of regret 等表达复杂情感。 环境描写：通过 howling wind, sterile smell, dim lighting 等营造氛围。 高级替换：避免重复，如用 resentful 代替 angry，grief-stricken 代替 sad。 固定搭配：如 be stricken with grief, shot a look, hang heavily 等，使表达更地道。 5. Possible Versions(3) Version 1： Paragraph 1: All kinds of thoughts ran through Susie's head as she drove to the hospital. The windshield wipers squeaked in rhythm(环境描写), but Susie's mind was anything but calm. Every argument they'd had echoed louder with each passing mile(无灵主语句). Though Amanda often acted distant, Susie knew, deep down, she cared about her, as a sister. As the hospital came into view, her pulse quickened(). What if Amanda was seriously ill? What if the last time they spoke would be remembered for silence? Pushing open the hospital door(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she rushed into the room and took Amanda's hand gently. "I was so afraid something had happened. I don’t want to lose you." Paragraph 2: "I think that's the first time you've ever said those words to me." Amanda squeezed her sister's hand. Susie’s breath caught, but she didn’t let go. "I should have said them sooner," she admitted, her voice cracking like thin ice(独立主格). Amanda gave a weak smile. "Better now than never, right?" The moment hung in the air(无灵主语句), fragile and honest(adj做补语). The very portrait from their mother, their past quarrel, the endless handovers(名词并列做主语)—it all seemed so far away now. Amanda reached for the water on her bedside table, and Susie helped her. "Let’s visit each other even when we don’t need to swap our mother’s painting," Susie suggested. Amanda nodded. For once, the silence between them wasn’t heavy—it was full of healing. 【加分语法点】 虚拟语气：What if the last time they spoke would be remembered... 替换词：might be remembered / could end up being remembered 省略句：Better now than never 替换：It’s better now than never / Saying it now is better than never 【亮点词语】 情绪：her breath caught → held her breath；voice cracking → unsteady voice 动作：squeezed her sister’s hand；reached for the water → stretched her arm 【表达积累】 thin ice → fragile relationship；echoed louder → replayed vividly Example: Her voice cracked like ice under pressure. He reached out, not for the glass, but for comfort. Every mile pushed her deeper into memory. The silence between them was no longer hostile—it was healing. Version 2 Paragraph 1: All kinds of thoughts ran through Susie's head as she drove to the hospital. Each flash of streetlight reminded Susie of something left unsaid(无灵主语句). Years of quarrel, hatred, and silence now felt foolish(主动表被动). Amanda had always been the quieter one, never showing hurt(现在分词做伴随动作), but that didn’t mean she didn’t feel it. The icy road mirrored the chill between them. As Susie pulled into the hospital lot, she whispered to herself, “Don’t let this be too late.” She ran down the hallway, breathless(adj做主语补语), finally opening the door to find Amanda half-asleep under pale fluorescent lights(现在分词短语做后置定语). Sitting beside her(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Susie touched her hand and said softly, "I'm really glad you're okay, Amanda. I’ve missed you more than I thought." Paragraph 2: "I think that's the first time you've ever said those words to me." Amanda squeezed her sister's hand. Susie felt tears sting her eyes. “I guess I’ve always been too proud to admit it,” she confessed. Amanda nodded. “And I always pretended it didn’t matter.” A silence stretched between them—this time, not awkward, but necessary. "Maybe Mum gave us that painting not to argue over, but to bring us back together," Susie said. Amanda chuckled. “A six-month reunion plan.” They both laughed, and something inside them began to shift. It wasn’t a grand gesture, but it was real(递进句式). They stayed like that for a while, hand in hand, no longer sisters in name only(独立主格). 【亮点词语】 情绪：tears sting her eyes → eyes brimmed with tears；too proud to admit → emotionally distant 动作：opened the door to find → pushed in to see；hand in hand → fingers interlaced 【表达积累】 fluorescent lights → cold lighting / hospital glow · Example: Silence isn’t always empty—it sometimes speaks volumes. She had always worn pride like armor. The six-month reunion plan was brilliant in disguise. They weren’t just sisters anymore—they were friends. Version 3 Paragraph 1: All kinds of thoughts ran through Susie's head as she drove to the hospital. The road blurred past as Susie’s eyes welled with tears she didn’t know she’d held in for years. Amanda was difficult—always serious, always reserved—but Susie wasn’t easy either. The thought that this drive might end without a chance to fix things(同位语从句) twisted in her chest(无灵主语句). Their last exchange had been completed, full of tension. Why hadn't she just said what she felt? As she entered the hospital, her steps faltered at the sight of Amanda resting, hooked to a medical machine(过去分词短语做后置定语). Walking over(现在分词做伴随动作), Susie leaned close and murmured, “You scared me. I don’t know what I’d do if something happened to you.” Paragraph 2: "I think that's the first time you've ever said those words to me." Amanda squeezed her sister's hand. Susie looked down, a sad smile playing on her lips(独立主格). “I should have said them long ago,” she replied. Amanda’s fingers tightened slightly. “So should I.” They both laughed, surprised at the echo of their words(过去分词短语做主语补语). For the first time, they weren’t arguing—they were agreeing. Susie glanced at the portrait Amanda had brought, leaning against the wall(现在分词短语做伴随动作), finger tracing it emotionally(独立主格). “You know,” she said, “maybe that painting did more than just decorate our walls.” Amanda nodded. “It held our memories, with our mother—even the tough ones.” They stayed together that night, sisters once more, not out of obligation, but by love. 【亮点词语】 情绪：tears she didn’t know she’d held → bottled-up grief；twisted in her chest → gnawed at her 动作：leaned close and murmured；fingers tightened slightly → slight pressure of reassurance 【表达积累】 sad smile → bittersweet smile；not out of obligation → willingly, wholeheartedly Example: Some words take decades to be spoken, but seconds to matter. The quiet between them wasn’t empty—it was full of healing. That night, the portrait watched not enemies, but family. Her hand no longer pulled away—it held on. One possible version: All kinds of thoughts ran through Susie’s head as she drove to the hospital. The road was icy, and her hands trembled as she seized the wheel tightly, Amanda's indifference, their fights, the years of distance(名词短语并列) - all played in her mind like scenes from an old film. Yet beneath the resentment was a fear(完全倒装句) she had never admitted: the fear of losing her sister. The drive felt endless. When she finally arrived, she found Amanda lying still in a dim hospital room, pale an d fragile(adj做补语). “I'm here,", Susie whispered,her voice low, her eves shining with tears(独立主格刻画人物). “I think that's the first time you've ever said those words to me." Amanda squeezed her sister's hand. Her touch was weak but warm. “I’m sorry," Susie said, her voice trembling(独立主格刻画人物). “ I didn't mean to stay angry for so long." Amanda gave a tired laugh. “Me too," she replied with a smile that softened every sharp edge of their past. The sisters stared at each other. In that exact moment, the painting, their mother's will, their arguments - none of them mattered now. Years of bitterness faded into a quiet understanding. Outside, snow began to fall(环境描写), covering the world in silence(现在分词做伴随动作), like a fresh start. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $