Unit 5 单元主题写作满分15篇精练-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元重难点精讲精练全突破（人教版2024）

Unit 5 单元主题写作满分精讲精练15篇 （题型突破) 1、 写作主题 本单元的写作是围绕着“食物制作”这一话题展开，涉及“饮食与健康”。写作内容要求学生通过使用制作食物的常用句型介绍某种食物的制作过程，包括所需要的食材、制作步骤和注意事项等，能恰当地使用顺序连接词连贯文章。人称多用第二人称，时态主要用一般现在时。 二、主题分析 三、写作积累 （一）.常用的词汇：1. 常用食材 肉类: pork, beef, chicken, fish, shrimp, egg 蔬菜: tomato, potato, cabbage, carrot, onion, garlic 主食: rice, noodle, dumpling 2. 美味形容词 味道: delicious, tasty, sweet, sour, spicy, salty, fresh 口感: crispy, soft, tender, smooth, juicy 3. 烹饪动词 fry（炒）, steam（蒸）, boil（煮）, stir-fry（翻炒）, add（加入）, cut（切） （二）.常用的句型句式：开头句（任选其一）： Among all kinds of food, my favorite is... When it comes to my favorite dish, I always think of... I have tried many dishes, but ... is my favorite. 主体段描述： It is made from...（食材） It tastes... and smells...（味道） The dish looks... with...（外观） To make this dish, you need to...（简要制作过程） 结尾句： I like it not only because..., but also because... Every time I eat it, I feel happy and satisfied. It has become an important part of my life. 4、 写作步骤 开头段：直接点题，说出你最喜欢的菜是什么 主体段：详细介绍这道菜的特点 主要食材和外观 味道和口感 制作过程（简要） 结尾段：表达你对这道菜的喜爱之情 五、例题精讲 1．假如你是李辉，你的英语笔友Luther对中式菜肴很感兴趣，来信想要了解你上周在学校烹饪社团学做的“西红柿鸡蛋面”。请你根据以下提示，跟他说一说它的烹饪步骤。 食材准备：西红柿洗净切小块，蔬菜洗净备用。 烹饪过程： （1）油入热锅，倒入西红柿翻炒，加盐少许，1分钟后加入3—4碗热水； （2）水开后，打入鸡蛋，放入面条，3分钟后搅拌一下； （3）放入蔬菜，再煮3分钟即可。 注意： （1）短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （2）文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； （3）词数80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Luther, I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese dishes. Let me tell you how to make tomato and egg noodles. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【答案】例文 Dear Luther, I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese dishes. Let me tell you how to make tomato and egg noodles. First, wash the tomatoes and cut them into small pieces. You should also clean the vegetables and set them aside. Then, heat some oil in a pot and put the tomatoes into the pot to stir-fry. After that, add some salt. After a minute, you can pour in three or four bowls of hot water. After the water boils, put eggs into the pot and add noodles. You should stir them after 3 minutes. Finally, put the vegetables in and cook for another 3 minutes. The delicious noodles are ready. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：文章围绕制作西红柿鸡蛋面的步骤展开，考生应注意按照逻辑顺序进行描述，并确保步骤完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开篇直接引出介绍制作面条的方法。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。按照制作面条的顺序，从准备食材、烹饪过程到完成制作进行详细描述。 第三步，书写结语。表达期待对方的回复。 [亮点词汇] ①cut...into...把……切成…… ②set aside留出，搁置一旁 ③heat some oil热油 ④stir-fry翻炒 ⑤pour in倒入 [高分句型] Finally, put the vegetables in and cook for another 3 minutes. (祈使句) 六、写作精练 1. 王梅的英国朋友 John对中国的美食很感兴趣。下面是 John发给她的电子邮件中的部分内容，请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复一封英文邮件。 You know I like Chinese food very much because it’s really delicious. Could you tell me some information about Chinese food? Oh, my mother’s birthday is coming and I plan to cook a Chinese dish named fried eggs with tomatoes for her as a gift. Can you teach me how to make the dish? 提示： 注意：（1）须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题，提示仅供参考，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear John, I’m really glad to know that you are interested in Chinese food. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Wang Mei 【答案】例文 Dear John, I’m really glad to know that you are interested in Chinese food. There are so many kinds of yummy Chinese dishes! Every place in China has its own special food. Sichuan food, for example, is very spicy. It’s not hard to cook fried eggs with tomatoes. First, cut the tomatoes into small pieces. Next, break some eggs into a bowl and whip them. Then, put the eggs in a pan and fry them with oil. After that, put the tomatoes in the pan. Don’t forget to add some salt. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Wang Mei 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍中国食物； 第二步，根据图片提示介绍如何制作西红柿炒鸡蛋； 第三步，书写结语，期待对方的来信。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②many kinds of 许多种类 ③cut into把……切碎 ④put into把……放入 [高分句型] ①There are so many kinds of yummy Chinese dishes! （There be句型） ②Don’t forget to add some salt. （否定祈使句） 2. .劳动教育受到学校和社会的广泛关注。你的学校积极响应，劳动课上老师让大家利用周末时间为家长做一道西红柿牛肉面。请你根据以下提示信息描述一下西红柿牛肉面的做法。 提示信息： 1. What do you need to make beef and tomato noodles? 2. How do you make them? 3. What do you think of labor education? 要求：1. 短文须包括提示中的三个要点，可适当发挥。2. 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。3. 词数不少于80。 参考词汇：labor education劳动教育 【答案】 This week, we are asked to make beef and tomato noodles for our parents as part of our labor education class. Itˈs a great chance to① learn how to cook and show our love to our family. To make beef and tomato noodles, you need some beef, tomatoes, noodles, salt, and a little bit of soy sauce. First②, cut the beef into thin slices and the tomatoes into small pieces. Next②, pour some water in a pot and bring it to a boil. Add the noodles and cook them until they are soft. Then②, in another pan, fry the beef slices until they are brown. Add the tomato pieces and cook them together with the beef. Finally②, mix the noodles with the beef and tomato mixture, add some salt and soy sauce, and itˈs ready to serve. Labor education helps us learn new skills and understand the value of③ hard work. It also makes us more independent and responsible. 亮点评析 1．Itˈs a great chance to…为后续内容提供了自然的过渡，在“to”之后可以展开具体的内容，这种结构能够帮助作者更好地组织思路。 2．“First”“Next”“Then”“Finally”等顺序词能够有效地连接各个句子，使文章的过渡更加自然、流畅。 3．“the value of”直接引导读者关注某个主题或对象的重要性。这种表达方式能使读者迅速抓住文章的主旨。 3. 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想向你学习如何包粽子。请你结合表格内容的提示，给你的朋友Peter写一封英文电子邮件，告诉他如何包粽子。 Ingredients (材料) rice, beans, dates (枣), leaf (leaves) Tools (工具) string (细绳), pot (锅) Steps (步骤) wash… keep…in the water for hours make a cone (锥体) shape with... put...into the cone tie (绑)… boil (煮)… and enjoy… 要求： 1. 必须包含表格中所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 2. 词数80左右，开头与结尾已给，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Peter, How are you? I hear you want to know how to make zongzi. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, How are you? I hear you want to know how to make zongzi. I learnt how to make zongzi this Dragon Boat Festival. To make zongzi, we need to have rice, beans, dates, some leaves, some strings and a pot. How do we make zongzi? First, we need to wash the rice. Then, we keep the rice in the water for hours. Next, we make a cone shape with the leaves. After that, we put the rice, beans and dates into the cone. And then, we tied zongzi with strings. In the end, we boil zongzi in a pot. When it is ready, we can enjoy the delicious food. It’s interesting to make zongzi. You can try to make zongzi by yourself. And don’t forget to share your experience with me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出包粽子的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体讲述介绍包粽子的步骤； 第三步，书写结语。总结包粽子的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①need to do sth. 需要做某事 ②put sth. into. sw. 把某物放进某处 ③try to do sth. 尝试做某事 [高分句型] ①When it is ready, we can enjoy the delicious food. (when引导时间状语从句) ②It’s interesting to make zongzi. (it作形式主语) ③And don’t forget to share your experience with me. (否定祈使句） 4. “一粥一饭，当思来处不易；半丝半缕，恒念物力维艰。”爱惜粮食，自古以来是中华民族的优良传统之一。 某英文网站正在开展以“践行光盘，从我做起”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你是怎么做的以及这样做的好处。 提示词语：virtue（美德），cherish（珍惜）， eat up，order，leftovers（剩余饭菜），save 提示问题： ● What do you do to cherish food in your daily life? ●What benefits can it bring? It’s one of our traditional virtues to cherish food. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 It’s one of traditional virtues to cherish food. Therefore, I’m trying to live up to the virtues of thrift. In my daily life, I eat as much as I can and don’t throw leftovers away. Even when I go out to have dinner with friends and family, I order food on a regular basis and try not to waste it. To cherish food is to respect the work of others, because grain is the fruit of farmers’ labor. On an individual level, saving food reduces costs and on a national level, it makes the country’s food reserves more abundant. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己平时如何珍惜粮食。 第二步，介绍爱惜粮食能带来什么好处。 [亮点词汇] ①live up to实践 ②as much as I can尽我所能 ③throw leftovers away把剩菜扔掉 [高分句型] ①Even when I go out to have dinner with friends and family, I order food on a regular basis and try not to waste it. (when引导时间状语从句) ②To cherish food is to respect the work of others, because grain is the fruit of farmers’ labor. (because引导原因状语从句) 5. 2024年四川省中小学生”用英语讲好中国故事”爱国主义主题展示活动即将开始，请以“一道中国传统美食”为主题，写一篇演讲稿进行投稿。 写作要点： 1. 简单介绍一道中国传统美食。 2. 介绍这道中国传统美食的制作方法。 写作要求： 1. 短文须包含所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不提及真实的人名、地名和校名； 3. 词数不少于80词，题目和开头语已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：ingredient n.（食品的）成分，原料；要素，因素 Ladies and Gentlemen, There are so many traditional dishes in China. Today, I’d like to introduce ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Ladies and Gentlemen, There are so many traditional dishes in China. Today, I’d like to introduce you a kind of traditional Chinese food—zongzi. Here are the ways to make it. To make this special food, we need to have rice, reed leaves, red dates, honey and sugar. First, wash and mix up all the ingredients. Next, put the rice and red dates into the reed leaves and add some sugar. Then fold the leaves, put them into the pot and cook for about an hour. Finally, add some honey as needed. Chinese food is popular all over the world. I welcome you to taste more traditional Chinese food. You will be satisfied with them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，介绍一道传统美食，注意要点齐全，写作中，避免语法错误，保证语句通顺，逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接文章开头，引出自己要介绍的美食； 第二步，具体介绍如何制作粽子； 第三步，最后总结，并发出邀请。 [亮点词汇] ①need to do sth需要做某事 ②all over the world全世界 ③be satisfied with对……感到满意 [高分句型] ①Here are the ways to make it.（倒装句） ②To make this special food, we need to have rice, reed leaves, red dates, honey and sugar.（动词不定式作目的状语） 6. 假如你是李华，近日，你的美国好友Jack在一家中餐厅吃到了煎堆，他非常喜欢，现发来邮件向你询问煎堆的相关信息。请你根据以下思维导图的提示给他回复一封英文邮件。 注意： （1）邮件须包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）不能照抄原文；不得在文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名； （3）语句连贯，词数80左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Dear Jack, I’m glad to know you like jiandui. Now let me tell you something about it. Yours, Li Hua 81．例文 Dear Jack, I’m glad to know you like jiandui. Now let me tell you something about it. Jiandui is one of the traditional foods in Guangdong. And we usually have it on Chinese New Year. The round shape of jiandui means reunion and the golden color means wealth. In Guangdong, jiandui has a history of over 300 years. To make jiandui, you should prepare sticky rice powder, sugar and sesame seeds. First, mix the sticky rice powder and water together. Turn the mixture into small round balls with sugar in them. Next, pour sesame seeds onto the outside of the round balls. Then, fry the round balls in hot oil until they turn golden. Now you can just enjoy them. It’s easy to make, isn’t it? Try it yourself next time. Yours, Li Hua 81．[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，涵盖了煎堆的相关信息及制作方法，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的（已给出）； 第二步，先介绍煎堆的基本情况，包括它是广东的传统食物、食用时节、象征意义以及历史。 第三步，再详细说明制作煎堆所需的材料和具体步骤。 [亮点词汇] ①traditional foods传统食物 ②sticky rice powder糯米粉 ③sesame seeds芝麻籽 [高分句型] ①To make jiandui, you should prepare sticky rice powder, sugar and sesame seeds.（动词不定式作目的状语） ②It’s easy to make, isn’t it?（反意疑问句） 7. 3．“人间烟火气，最抚凡人心。”从手到口，从口到心， 中国人延续着对世界和人生特有的感知方式。或地方特色，或家常便饭，只要端起碗筷，总有一道美食触动了你的味蕾。请以”Special Food Full of Memories”为题分享一下你和美食之间的故事吧。 要点提示： 1. 介绍最触动你的一道美食； 2. 谈谈这道美食为什么特殊； 3. 分享这道美食曾带给你的回忆。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Special Food Full of Memories Everyone has their own favorite cuisine. Some people like to eat meat, while others like to eat vegetables. But my favorite dish is steamed eggs. Its approach is very simple. You only need a few eggs, cooking oil, and some leeks. When it is brought to the table, its color is very tempting, ranging from yellow to green. I like it not because it is so delicious, but because my family was relatively poor in the early years. The only eggs in my family were either sold for money, or steamed eggs were only available when there were guests at home. But at that time, we were only allowed to eat when the guests finished eating. So when we ate the few eggs left, it was very delicious. So whenever I eat steamed eggs, I remember the memories of that time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，适当增添细节，完善作文内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍最触动你的一道美食； 第二步，介绍这道美食特殊的原因； 第三步，介绍这道美食曾带给你的回忆。 [亮点词汇] ①at that time那时 ②the memories of...……的回忆 [高分句型] When it is brought to the table, its color is very tempting, ranging from yellow to green. (when引导的时间状语从句及被动语态) 8. 王梅的英国朋友 John对中国的美食很感兴趣。下面是 John发给她的电子邮件中的部分内容，请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复一封英文邮件。 You know I like Chinese food very much because it’s really delicious. Could you tell me some information about Chinese food? Oh, my mother’s birthday is coming and I plan to cook a Chinese dish named fried eggs with tomatoes for her as a gift. Can you teach me how to make the dish? 提示： 注意：（1）须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题，提示仅供参考，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear John, I’m really glad to know that you are interested in Chinese food. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Wang Mei 【答案】例文 Dear John, I’m really glad to know that you are interested in Chinese food. There are so many kinds of yummy Chinese dishes! Every place in China has its own special food. Sichuan food, for example, is very spicy. It’s not hard to cook fried eggs with tomatoes. First, cut the tomatoes into small pieces. Next, break some eggs into a bowl and whip them. Then, put the eggs in a pan and fry them with oil. After that, put the tomatoes in the pan. Don’t forget to add some salt. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Wang Mei 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍中国食物； 第二步，根据图片提示介绍如何制作西红柿炒鸡蛋； 第三步，书写结语，期待对方的来信。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②many kinds of 许多种类 ③cut into把……切碎 ④put into把……放入 [高分句型] ①There are so many kinds of yummy Chinese dishes! （There be句型） ②Don’t forget to add some salt. （否定祈使句） 9. 俗话说“民以食为天”。为了引起大家对健康饮食的重视, 学校英语校刊正在开展以“Healthy Eating”为题的征文活动, 请你根据以下要点提示写一篇短文投稿。 1. 健康饮食的重要性和益处； 2. 你身边的同学或朋友存在的不良饮食习惯； 3. 你的建议。 要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数不少于90。 Healthy Eating _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Healthy Eating Healthy eating is important for both our body and mind. Food can give us energy and make us strong. Some of my friends have bad eating habits. They like eating junk food and often go to school without breakfast. These eating habits are bad for them. I think everyone should have healthy eating habits. First, it’s important to keep a balanced diet. Different kinds of food provide us with different nutrients we need. Second, don’t eat too much junk food. Third, we should eat three meals a day on time. In these ways, we’ll be strong and healthy, and focus on our studies better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、介绍健康饮食的重要性和益处； 第二步、介绍身边的同学或朋友存在的不良饮食习惯； 第三步、给出自己的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ②be bad for…对……有害 ③keep a balanced diet保持饮食平衡 ④provide sb. with sth.为某人提供某物 ⑤too much太多 ⑥focus on专注于 [高分句型] ①I think everyone should have healthy eating habits.(宾语从句) 10. 假如你是王明，请根据以下内容提示， 以“How to Make Myself Better”为题， 写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何塑造更好的自己。 1. What can you do to keep healthy? 2. What can you do to study better? 3. How can you open your eyes? … 注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校； 词数60—80； 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Make Myself Better As a middle school student, I think I should have a healthy life and try my best to make myself better. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to Make Myself Better As a middle school student, I think I should have a healthy life and try my best to make myself better. I drink a lot of water and eat vegetables every day. And I hardly eat junk food. I usually do sports to keep fit. In the evening, it is helpful for me to read some books after I finish my homework. When I have problems, I often ask my friends or teachers to help me. To open my eyes, I think travelling is the best way. When I travel around the world, I can learn something new and enrich my knowledge. I hope I can do something useful every day and make myself better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇给出写作要点的材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：本题要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何塑造更好的自己。文中需包括自己做什么能保持健康，做什么能学的更好，如何开阔自己的视野。注意语句连贯，条理清楚，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先做什么能保持健康，例如多喝水，多吃蔬菜，不吃垃圾食品，经常锻炼。 第二步，做什么能学的更好。完成作业后，多阅读。有问题向老师朋友寻求帮助。 第三步，如何开阔自己的视野。旅行是很好的开阔眼界的方法。我能够学到一些新知识并丰富自己的知识。 [亮点词汇] ①try my best 尽我最大的努力 ②keep fit 保持健康 [高分句型] ①It is helpful for me to read some books after I finish my homework.  (It作形式主语） ②When I travel around the world, I can learn something new and enrich my knowledge. (when引导的时间状语从句） 11. 和家人一起烹饪，是温馨与爱的交融。挑选食材、切配烹饪，每一步都充满了默契与欢笑，传递着关怀，品味着家的味道。请参考图片及文字信息，描述一次你和父母一起做饭的难忘经历，简单谈谈烹饪过程，以及你的感受或收获。 要求： 1. 80—120词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： I had an unforgettable cooking experience with my parents.   ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I had an unforgettable cooking experience with my parents. I still remember the special day clearly, which was Chinese New Year and also my mom’s birthday. We decided to make a big dinner together to celebrate. We chose dishes like Cola chicken wings, Mapo Tofu, Fried eggs with tomatoes, and Twice-cooked pork. I helped Mom with the eggs and tomatoes, cracking and stirring eggs, before frying them with chopped tomatoes. Dad handled the other dishes, slicing beef and potatoes. The kitchen was full of laughter and delicious smells. After hours of cooking, our meal was ready. It tasted amazing! This experience not only taught me how to make new dishes but also highlighted the value of teamwork. Cooking with my parents made us closer and created wonderful memories. I hope we can cook together more often in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括文字及图片提示信息，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍难忘烹饪经历的时间和目的； 第二步，具体描述烹饪过程； 第三步，阐述这次烹饪经历带来的收获和感受。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth. 决定做某事 ②be full of 充满 [高分句型] ①Cooking with my parents made us closer and created wonderful memories. (动名词作主语) ②I still remember the special day clearly, which was Chinese New Year and also my mom’s birthday.  (which引导非限制性定语从句) 12. 请以 “My Favourite Snack” 为题，介绍你最喜欢的一种零食。 内容包括： (1) 你最喜欢的零食是什么； (2) 这种零食的特点及喜欢的原因； (3) 这种零食对你的意义。 要求： (1) 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； (2) 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； (3) 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等) ； (4) 词数：80词左右 (标题已给出，不计入总词数) 。 My Favourite Snack __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favourite Snack My favourite snack is popcorn. It’s made up of small white pieces, looking like little clouds. Once popped, it becomes light and super crispy. The moment I open the bag, a good smell fills the air, making my mouth water. My love for popcorn began when I was a child. At weekends, my family would gather in the living room to watch movies, and popcorn was a must. Its satisfying crunch added extra fun to our movie nights. Popcorn is more than just a snack to me. It represents precious family time and countless happy memories. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，用于介绍最喜欢的零食； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，描述过去的经历时用了一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括最喜欢的零食、特点及喜欢原因、这种零食的意义，考生应注意涵盖所有要点，并适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明“我最喜欢的零食是爆米花”，引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“外观、口感、气味”等方面描述了爆米花的特点，并讲述了喜欢爆米花的原因以及它对自己的特殊意义； 第三步，书写结语。表达爆米花对自己有更深的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①be made up of 由……组成 ②the moment 一……就…… ③make one’s mouth water 使某人垂涎欲滴 ④more than just 不仅仅 [高分句型] ①It’s made up of small white pieces, looking like little clouds.（现在分词作伴随状语） ②The moment I open the bag, a good smell fills the air, making my mouth water.（the moment引导时间状语从句，现在分词作结果状语） 13. 假如你是李华，你校英文专栏正在寻找校园小美食家， 请你根据表格内容及要求用英语写一篇短文， 向该英文专栏进行投稿， 介绍你最喜欢的一道菜及制作方法。 名称 炒土豆(stir-fried potatoes)   做法 土豆冲洗干净备用 土豆切块 锅烧热(heat)， 加油 (oil) 放入土豆块翻炒 (stir-fry)，加适量盐 要求：（1）短文须包括表格内容中所有要点； （2）条理清晰， 行文连贯， 可适当发挥； （3）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；   （4）词数80左右。 Everyone has his or her favorite food. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Everyone has his or her favorite food. As for me, my favorite food is stir-fried potatoes. Let me share my way to cook it with you. To begin with, prepare two or three potatoes and wash them. Then, what I should do is to cut them into small pieces. Next, heat the pot for half a minute and pour some oil into the pot. After that, put the potatoes and stir-fry them. At the same time, I would like to add some peppers. In fact, it’s up to you whether you add peppers or not. And then add some salt to the potatoes. At last, put the potatoes on a big plate. Now it’s time to enjoy the delicious stir-fried potatoes. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接给出的开头，点明自己最喜欢的食物是炒土豆； 第二步，详细介绍如何制作炒土豆； 第三步，写出总结。 [亮点词汇] ①To begin with首先 ②cut them into small pieces把他们切成小块 ③At the same time同时 ④In fact事实上 [高分句型] ①Let me share my way to cook it with you. (祈使句) ② Now it’s time to enjoy the delicious stir-fried potatoes. (It’s time to do sth.句型) 14. 如今有很多“美食博主”在网络上分享各种美食及做法。假如你最喜欢的一道菜是“柠檬凤爪 (Lemon Chicken Feet)”，你也想拍摄自己的美食vlog并发布在网络上。请你根据以下提示，为你的视频写一份英语文案。80词左右。 制作原料 chicken feet 2 lemons 3 chillies garlic 调味品 vinegar soy sauce sugar salt 制作步骤: 鸡爪剪掉指甲 (nails) 后洗净，煮大约15分钟； 将辣椒、大蒜切碎，柠檬切片后放入碗中，并加入醋、酱油、糖和盐； 鸡爪放入碗中，和配料混合均匀，放入冰箱冷藏5—6小时后方可享用。 How to Cook Lemon Chicken Feet ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】高分范文 How to Cook Lemon Chicken Feet Lemon Chicken feet are my favourite food and today I’d like to share my way of making it with you! To cook this tasty dish, we need to prepare some chicken feet, 2 lemons, 3 chillies, some garlic and some seasonings, including vinegar, soy sauce, sugar and salt. First, cut off all the chicken nails and wash the chicken feet. Next, cook them for about 15 minutes. Then, cut up the chillies and garlic, and cut the lemons into thin pieces. After that, put them all in a large bowl and add some seasonings. Finally, put the chicken feet in the bowl and mix them well. Oh, there’s one more thing. Don’t forget to put the dish in the fridge. It’ll be ready in about 5-6 hours. It’s very easy to make this dish. Do you want to give it a try? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一材料作文； ②时态：“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容描述做柠檬凤爪的过程，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明自己最爱的美食，引出话题； 第二步，根据表格提示，详细描述如何做柠檬凤爪，包括原料、调味品和烹饪步骤； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①share sth with sb 和某人分享某物 ②need to do 需要做某事 ③cut off 切断 ④cut up 切碎 ⑤forget to do 忘记做某事 [高分句型] ①To cook this tasty dish, we need to prepare some chicken feet, 2 lemons, 3 chillies, some garlic and some seasonings, including vinegar, soy sauce, sugar and salt. (to do作目的状语) ②It’s very easy to make this dish. (it’s adj to do句型，it为形式主语) 15. 王梅的英国朋友John对中国的美食很感兴趣，下面是John给她发的电子邮件中的部分内容，请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复一封80词左右的英文邮件。 提示： Dear John, I am really happy to know you like Chinese food. China is very famous for its food in the world. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Mei 【答案】例文 Dear John, I am really happy to know you like Chinese food. China is very famous for its food in the world. I like the fried eggs with tomatoes very much, too. It is easy to make and it’s delicious. I am sure your mother will love it. First, wash two tomatoes and cut them into pieces. Next, break three eggs and mix them in a bowl. Third, pour some oil into the pan and heat it until it is hot. Pour the eggs in and cook them for a moment. Take them out. Fourth, put the tomatoes in and cook them. Last, put the eggs back into the pan and mix them with the tomatoes! Don’t forget to add some salt to the dish. I think cooking for our parents is a good way to show our love to them! I hope to get your letter soon! Yours, Wang Mei 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍一道中国菜——西红柿炒鸡蛋； 第二步，根据图片提示介绍如何制作西红柿炒鸡蛋； 第三步，书写结语，表达期望收到对方回复。 [亮点词汇] ①for a moment一会儿 ②take out取出，拿出 ③forget to do sth忘记做某事 [高分句型] ①Don’t forget to add some salt to the dish.（祈使句） ②I think cooking for our parents is a good way to show our love to them!（宾语从句） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 5 单元主题写作满分精讲精练15篇 （题型突破) 1、 写作主题 本单元的写作是围绕着“食物制作”这一话题展开，涉及“饮食与健康”。写作内容要求学生通过使用制作食物的常用句型介绍某种食物的制作过程，包括所需要的食材、制作步骤和注意事项等，能恰当地使用顺序连接词连贯文章。人称多用第二人称，时态主要用一般现在时。 二、主题分析 三、写作积累 （一）.常用的词汇：1. 常用食材 肉类: pork, beef, chicken, fish, shrimp, egg 蔬菜: tomato, potato, cabbage, carrot, onion, garlic 主食: rice, noodle, dumpling 2. 美味形容词 味道: delicious, tasty, sweet, sour, spicy, salty, fresh 口感: crispy, soft, tender, smooth, juicy 3. 烹饪动词 fry（炒）, steam（蒸）, boil（煮）, stir-fry（翻炒）, add（加入）, cut（切） （二）.常用的句型句式：开头句（任选其一）： Among all kinds of food, my favorite is... When it comes to my favorite dish, I always think of... I have tried many dishes, but ... is my favorite. 主体段描述： It is made from...（食材） It tastes... and smells...（味道） The dish looks... with...（外观） To make this dish, you need to...（简要制作过程） 结尾句： I like it not only because..., but also because... Every time I eat it, I feel happy and satisfied. It has become an important part of my life. 4、 写作步骤 开头段：直接点题，说出你最喜欢的菜是什么 主体段：详细介绍这道菜的特点 主要食材和外观 味道和口感 制作过程（简要） 结尾段：表达你对这道菜的喜爱之情 五、例题精讲 1．假如你是李辉，你的英语笔友Luther对中式菜肴很感兴趣，来信想要了解你上周在学校烹饪社团学做的“西红柿鸡蛋面”。请你根据以下提示，跟他说一说它的烹饪步骤。 食材准备：西红柿洗净切小块，蔬菜洗净备用。 烹饪过程： （1）油入热锅，倒入西红柿翻炒，加盐少许，1分钟后加入3—4碗热水； （2）水开后，打入鸡蛋，放入面条，3分钟后搅拌一下； （3）放入蔬菜，再煮3分钟即可。 注意： （1）短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （2）文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； （3）词数80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Luther, I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese dishes. Let me tell you how to make tomato and egg noodles. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 六、写作精练 1. 王梅的英国朋友 John对中国的美食很感兴趣。下面是 John发给她的电子邮件中的部分内容，请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复一封英文邮件。 You know I like Chinese food very much because it’s really delicious. Could you tell me some information about Chinese food? Oh, my mother’s birthday is coming and I plan to cook a Chinese dish named fried eggs with tomatoes for her as a gift. Can you teach me how to make the dish? 提示： 注意：（1）须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题，提示仅供参考，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear John, I’m really glad to know that you are interested in Chinese food. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Wang Mei 2. .劳动教育受到学校和社会的广泛关注。你的学校积极响应，劳动课上老师让大家利用周末时间为家长做一道西红柿牛肉面。请你根据以下提示信息描述一下西红柿牛肉面的做法。 提示信息： 1. What do you need to make beef and tomato noodles? 2. How do you make them? 3. What do you think of labor education? 要求：1. 短文须包括提示中的三个要点，可适当发挥。2. 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。3. 词数不少于80。 参考词汇：labor education劳动教育 3. 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想向你学习如何包粽子。请你结合表格内容的提示，给你的朋友Peter写一封英文电子邮件，告诉他如何包粽子。 Ingredients (材料) rice, beans, dates (枣), leaf (leaves) Tools (工具) string (细绳), pot (锅) Steps (步骤) wash… keep…in the water for hours make a cone (锥体) shape with... put...into the cone tie (绑)… boil (煮)… and enjoy… 要求： 1. 必须包含表格中所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 2. 词数80左右，开头与结尾已给，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Peter, How are you? I hear you want to know how to make zongzi. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4. “一粥一饭，当思来处不易；半丝半缕，恒念物力维艰。”爱惜粮食，自古以来是中华民族的优良传统之一。 某英文网站正在开展以“践行光盘，从我做起”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你是怎么做的以及这样做的好处。 提示词语：virtue（美德），cherish（珍惜）， eat up，order，leftovers（剩余饭菜），save 提示问题： ● What do you do to cherish food in your daily life? ●What benefits can it bring? It’s one of our traditional virtues to cherish food. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 2024年四川省中小学生”用英语讲好中国故事”爱国主义主题展示活动即将开始，请以“一道中国传统美食”为主题，写一篇演讲稿进行投稿。 写作要点： 1. 简单介绍一道中国传统美食。 2. 介绍这道中国传统美食的制作方法。 写作要求： 1. 短文须包含所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不提及真实的人名、地名和校名； 3. 词数不少于80词，题目和开头语已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：ingredient n.（食品的）成分，原料；要素，因素 Ladies and Gentlemen, There are so many traditional dishes in China. Today, I’d like to introduce ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 假如你是李华，近日，你的美国好友Jack在一家中餐厅吃到了煎堆，他非常喜欢，现发来邮件向你询问煎堆的相关信息。请你根据以下思维导图的提示给他回复一封英文邮件。 注意： （1）邮件须包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）不能照抄原文；不得在文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名； （3）语句连贯，词数80左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Dear Jack, I’m glad to know you like jiandui. Now let me tell you something about it. Yours, Li Hua 7. 3．“人间烟火气，最抚凡人心。”从手到口，从口到心， 中国人延续着对世界和人生特有的感知方式。或地方特色，或家常便饭，只要端起碗筷，总有一道美食触动了你的味蕾。请以”Special Food Full of Memories”为题分享一下你和美食之间的故事吧。 要点提示： 1. 介绍最触动你的一道美食； 2. 谈谈这道美食为什么特殊； 3. 分享这道美食曾带给你的回忆。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 王梅的英国朋友 John对中国的美食很感兴趣。下面是 John发给她的电子邮件中的部分内容，请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复一封英文邮件。 You know I like Chinese food very much because it’s really delicious. Could you tell me some information about Chinese food? Oh, my mother’s birthday is coming and I plan to cook a Chinese dish named fried eggs with tomatoes for her as a gift. Can you teach me how to make the dish? 提示： 注意：（1）须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题，提示仅供参考，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear John, I’m really glad to know that you are interested in Chinese food. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Wang Mei 9. 俗话说“民以食为天”。为了引起大家对健康饮食的重视, 学校英语校刊正在开展以“Healthy Eating”为题的征文活动, 请你根据以下要点提示写一篇短文投稿。 1. 健康饮食的重要性和益处； 2. 你身边的同学或朋友存在的不良饮食习惯； 3. 你的建议。 要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数不少于90。 Healthy Eating _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10. 假如你是王明，请根据以下内容提示， 以“How to Make Myself Better”为题， 写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何塑造更好的自己。 1. What can you do to keep healthy? 2. What can you do to study better? 3. How can you open your eyes? … 注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校； 词数60—80； 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Make Myself Better As a middle school student, I think I should have a healthy life and try my best to make myself better. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11. 和家人一起烹饪，是温馨与爱的交融。挑选食材、切配烹饪，每一步都充满了默契与欢笑，传递着关怀，品味着家的味道。请参考图片及文字信息，描述一次你和父母一起做饭的难忘经历，简单谈谈烹饪过程，以及你的感受或收获。 要求： 1. 80—120词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： I had an unforgettable cooking experience with my parents.   ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12. 请以 “My Favourite Snack” 为题，介绍你最喜欢的一种零食。 内容包括： (1) 你最喜欢的零食是什么； (2) 这种零食的特点及喜欢的原因； (3) 这种零食对你的意义。 要求： (1) 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； (2) 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； (3) 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等) ； (4) 词数：80词左右 (标题已给出，不计入总词数) 。 My Favourite Snack __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13. 假如你是李华，你校英文专栏正在寻找校园小美食家， 请你根据表格内容及要求用英语写一篇短文， 向该英文专栏进行投稿， 介绍你最喜欢的一道菜及制作方法。 名称 炒土豆(stir-fried potatoes)   做法 土豆冲洗干净备用 土豆切块 锅烧热(heat)， 加油 (oil) 放入土豆块翻炒 (stir-fry)，加适量盐 要求：（1）短文须包括表格内容中所有要点； （2）条理清晰， 行文连贯， 可适当发挥； （3）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；   （4）词数80左右。 Everyone has his or her favorite food. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14. 如今有很多“美食博主”在网络上分享各种美食及做法。假如你最喜欢的一道菜是“柠檬凤爪 (Lemon Chicken Feet)”，你也想拍摄自己的美食vlog并发布在网络上。请你根据以下提示，为你的视频写一份英语文案。80词左右。 制作原料 chicken feet 2 lemons 3 chillies garlic 调味品 vinegar soy sauce sugar salt 制作步骤: 鸡爪剪掉指甲 (nails) 后洗净，煮大约15分钟； 将辣椒、大蒜切碎，柠檬切片后放入碗中，并加入醋、酱油、糖和盐； 鸡爪放入碗中，和配料混合均匀，放入冰箱冷藏5—6小时后方可享用。 How to Cook Lemon Chicken Feet _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15. 王梅的英国朋友John对中国的美食很感兴趣，下面是John给她发的电子邮件中的部分内容，请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复一封80词左右的英文邮件。 提示： Dear John, I am really happy to know you like Chinese food. 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