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Unit3Communication Workshop Ss’ worksheet (Period 2)
Self-check:
( ) I used linking words correctly.
( )I used cause and effect correctly.
( )I included all the information from my diagram.
( )I used all Key Words and Key Expressions correctly.
( ) I double-check spelling, grammar and punctuation.
Peer-review checklist:
( ) Is the paper interesting? If not , how could it more interesting, for example, give more information?
( )Does it make sense? If not, what could the writer do to make it better, for example, show cause and effect relationship more clearly?
( ) Does it answer your questions about the writer’s favorite inventor or scientist? If not , what else would you like to know?
( ) Did the student use Key Words and Key Expressions correctly? If not, circle any mistakes.
( ) Is the spelling, grammar and punctuation correct? If not , circle where the student had problems.
( ) Do you have any other suggestions?
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Unit 3 Creativity
Communication Workshop
(第二课时)
北京市第十中学 王正平
1. 结合自己和课本的范文,就写作的结构、内容、语言等几个方面进行评价和修改;
2. 根据评价的反馈,修改写作内容;
教 学 目 标
如何引导学生对作文进行评价指导?
怎样的评价才不流于形式?
写作评价的思考
Do you remember?
Task:
Tu Youyou has become the first Chinese woman to win a Nobel Prize, for her work in helping to create an anti-malaria (['æntiːməl'eəriə] 抗疟疾的 ) medicine.
We will hold an English speech competition about “My Favorite Scientist/Inventor”. We need all of you to hand in your stories about your favorite scientist /inventor.
What is his/her name? What was his /her major achievement? Why did they make their invention? How did he /she succeed? Why is the achievement important? What do you learn from him/her?
Please tell us in at least 60 words.
话题回顾
Your ideas…
What kind of writing will be a good one?
Good Writing
c
要点齐全
l
有逻辑
y
语言准确
j
句式丰富
.
……
时态、词的用法、拼写、大小写、句式
评价标准
Edit Time
Can you make them better?
Self-check:
( ) I used linking words correctly.
( )I used cause and effect correctly.
( )I included all the informat