第16讲 英语作文（上）（复习讲义）（上海高考专用）2026年春季高考英语

专题16 英语作文（上） 目录 考情分析与命题趋势 1 知识体系构建 2 考点精析与突破 4 考点一：叙议结合类作文（难点） 4 考点二：书信邮件应用文类作文（重点） 13 实战精练与提升 34 考情解读 一、考试要求 核心题型与载体 主要分为应用文写作和夹叙夹议 / 议论文写作两类，均强调 “真实语境下的有效表达”： 1. 应用文：高频载体为书信（建议信、回信、邀请信等）、通知、演讲稿、倡议信，情境紧扣校园生活（如给校友提烹饪建议、社团招新）或社会热点（文化交流、环保倡议），任务明确（如 “提建议 + 说明理由”“推荐活动 + 邀请参与”）。 2. 夹叙夹议 / 议论文：多以材料解读（如 2025 年 “Don’t be afraid of wetting your feet when you want to learn how to swim”）、现象话题（如 “数字化学习的未来”“慢生活与快节奏平衡”）为背景，要求 “谈理解 + 结合具体事例”（夹叙夹议）或 “亮观点 + 论证分析”（议论文）。 核心要求 1. 内容与逻辑 · 应用文：需覆盖题目所有要点（如建议信需含 “建议内容 + 理由 + 期待”），避免遗漏；内容需具体，如推荐文化活动要提及 “豫园灯会的手工灯笼”“弄堂艺术体验” 等细节，而非泛谈 “有趣”。 · 夹叙夹议 / 议论文：论点明确（如名言解读需提炼 “勇于实践”“突破舒适区” 等核心哲理），事例真实贴切（优先个人经历，如 “第一次组织校园义卖”“学视频剪辑的尝试”），且需点明事例与道理的关联（避免 “事例与观点两张皮”）；议论文论证需用举例、对比、因果等逻辑，避免空洞。 2. 格式与语域 · 应用文：严格遵循格式（书信含 “称呼 - 正文 - 结尾敬语 - 署名”，通知含 “标题 - 对象 - 正文 - 落款”）；语域适配受众（给校长的信用 “Yours sincerely”，给同学的信可用 “Best regards”）。 · 夹叙夹议 / 议论文：无固定格式，但需结构清晰（多为 “总 - 分 - 总”，夹叙夹议常用 “解读观点 - 叙述事例 - 点明关联” 框架），语言正式且连贯。 3. 语言与词数 · 语言：准确优先（避免语法 / 拼写错误），适度用高级表达（如非谓语、复合句；句式需多样，长短句交错。 · 词数：通常要求 120-150 词，过短（少于 70 词）会大幅扣分，过长易导致逻辑松散。 评分关键 从内容（10 分）、语言（10 分）、组织结构（5 分） 三维评分： · 内容：充实、扣题得高分，遗漏要点或离题得分低； · 语言：准确且有多样性（复杂句式 + 高级词汇）得优，错误多影响理解得分低； · 组织结构：全文流畅紧凑得高，缺乏衔接、结构混乱得分低。 二、命题分析 题型与分值 应用文（占比约 40%）；夹叙夹议 / 议论文（占比约 60%）。总分 25 分，按 “内容（10 分）、语言（10 分）、组织结构（5 分）” 三维评分。 题材特征 聚焦 “人与自我、人与社会、人与自然” 三大主题；融入中华优秀传统文化与上海本土文化，凸显文化自信。 核心考查 1. 应用文：内容完整、格式规范、语域适配、语言准确 2. 夹叙夹议 / 议论文：观点明确、事例贴切、事理关联、逻辑连贯 命题特点 立德树人价值引领、情境真实实用、开放思辨、文化浸润、反拨教学（关注语用能力） 知识梳理 考点精讲 · 考点一：叙议结合类英语作文 解题策略 夹叙夹议文是一种比较常见的写作文体,。无论记人还是叙事都要通过叙述、描写来加以表达, 把人物的经历或行为、发生的事情/事件用一定的顺序和语言技巧叙述出来。在叙述过程中“人以事显, 事由人生”, 人和事是密不可分的。高考作文一般都不会单纯的记叙某事，而是夹叙夹议。围绕主题开展叙述、讨论—结论段（结尾部分Concluding paragraph）对全文的总结和概括。值得注意的是近年试题中经常出现记叙与结论相结合的叙议形式。 部分 内容 细节 引言 引入主题 引入话题，吸引读者的注意力，并清晰地阐明主题 记叙 事例叙述 具体事例或解释或描述，可以是一个亲身经历或观察到的事件 议论 论述观点 对事例进行分析，阐述其与主题的关联，并提出自己的观点 结尾 总结全文 总结升华，呼应开头，给读者留下深刻的印象 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市曹杨中学2025-2026学年学年高三上学期期中英语试卷 假设你是明启中学学生李华。你常阅读一个英文学习类网站，上面一位博主最近发文，邀请读者分享他们在课堂外学到的重要一课。写一篇短文投稿到该网站，介绍你的一次经历。内容须包括： (1) 简要描述这次经历 (如一次志愿活动、团队合作、旅行或比赛等) ； (2) 说明你从中学到的东西； (3) 谈谈这次经历对你的影响。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                               An Unforgettable Lesson Outside the Classroom     I’m Li Hua from Ming Qi Middle School. Last summer, I participated in a volunteer teaching activity in a remote village. We taught local children English and basic science knowledge, and organized fun games to spark their curiosity.     During the activity, I found that many children had a strong desire for knowledge but lacked learning resources. I realized that helping others isn’t just about giving materials, but about inspiring their passion for learning and building their confidence.     This experience made me cherish my own learning opportunities more. It also taught me the importance of empathy and responsibility. Now, I’m more willing to help those in need and understand that a small act of kindness can make a big difference. I’ll continue to take part in such activities and spread the power of care. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，向一个英文学习类网站投稿，分享课堂外学到重要一课的经历，需涵盖经历描述、所学内容及经历影响三方面内容。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：participate in → take part in 激发：spark → inspire/ stimulate/ arouse 渴望：desire → longing 差异，影响：difference → impact 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last summer, I participated in a volunteer teaching activity in a remote village. 拓展句：Last summer, I participated in a volunteer teaching activity in a remote village, where I gained a precious life lesson. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I realized that helping others isn’t just about giving materials, but about inspiring their passion for learning and building their confidence. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和not just... but...的句式) 【高分句型2】Now, I’m more willing to help those in need and understand that a small act of kindness can make a big difference. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) · 考点二：书信邮件应用文类作文 解题策略 应用文是一种与日常生活、学习或工作密切相关, 实用性很强的文体, 包括书信(或电子邮件)等, 每种类别的应用文都有各自的结构和行文特点。 · 题型聚焦实用性：近 5 年真题以书信（含建议信、感谢信、咨询信）和通知为主，占比超 80%，偶见演讲稿（如 2023 年 “校园文化节倡议演讲”），均围绕 “解决实际问题” 或 “传递具体信息” 设计，无复杂抒情类文体。​ · 话题绑定校园与生活：90% 以上题目紧扣高中生日常场景，如 “建议学校优化图书馆服务”（2022 年）、“邀请外教参加班级毕业聚会”（2021 年）、“通知同学参加志愿者招募会”（2020 年），极少涉及陌生领域，降低背景知识门槛。​ · 要求隐含 “细节导向”：题干不仅明确文体和核心目的，还会限定关键信息，如 “需说明建议的 2 个具体理由”“要包含活动时间、地点及报名方式”，若遗漏细节会直接扣 1-2 分（满分 15 分，细节分占 3-4 分）。​ Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市浦东复旦附中分校2025-2026学年高三上学期9月第二次测试英语试题 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近收到表弟王磊的邮件(如下所示)，回复他一封邮件，内容须包括： (1) 对明启中学的介绍； (2) 你对于如何做好初高中衔接的建议。 Dear Li Ming, I hope this email finds you well. I’m thinking about following in your footsteps and applying to your high school, so I’d love to ask you some questions. What are the school and the life there like? And, more importantly, how did you handle the jump from junior to senior high? I’ve heard it’s a big change, and I could use some tips on how to make the transition smoother. I’d really appreciate any advice you can give me. Thanks a bunch, and let’s catch up soon! Take care, Wang Lei ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Wang Lei, It’s great to hear from you! I’m glad to tell you something about my school. Mingqi High School is an excellent choice. Our campus boasts modern facilities, including a well-equipped library and science labs. Teachers here are supportive, encouraging students to explore interests through clubs like debate and robotics. The atmosphere is both challenging and collaborative, helping us grow academically and socially. Regarding the transition to senior high, my advice is as follows. Firstly, why not adjust your learning habits? High school coursework is more demanding, so preview lessons and review notes regularly. Besides, you should manage your time wisely. You can use planners to balance academics and extracurriculars. Lastly, remember to stay positive whenever you meet difficulties. You may turn to your friends or teachers for help if necessary. I’m sure you’ll thrive here! Let’s chat more over the weekend. All the best, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给表弟王磊回邮件，介绍自己的学校明启中学，并给对方关于如何做好初高中衔接的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→ delighted 选择：choice→ option 鼓励：encourage→ inspire 明智地：wisely→ judiciously 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Our campus boasts modern facilities, including a well-equipped library and science labs. 拓展句：Our campus boasts modern facilities, which include a well-equipped library and science labs. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The atmosphere is both challenging and collaborative, helping us grow academically and socially.（运用了现在分词作状语） 【高分句型2】Lastly, remember to stay positive whenever you meet difficulties.（运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句） 【来源】上海市控江、复兴、市西、松二、金山、奉贤六校2025-2026学年高三上学期期中联考英语试卷 假设你是明启中学学生李华。你在一份英文杂志上读到一篇关于”一位年轻人坚持照顾老人十年”的报道，深受感动。请你给该杂志的“读者来信”（Letters to the Editor）栏目写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）你对“在现代社会中助人为乐的重要性”的看法； （2）结合你自己帮助他人或被他人帮助的经历，说明你的观点。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Editor, I’m Li Hua, a student from Mingqi High School. I was deeply moved by the report about the young person who has taken care of the elderly for ten years. In modern society, helping others is of great importance. It not only warms those in need but also builds a friendly community. When people support each other, we feel less lonely and more connected. I once helped an elderly neighbor carry groceries and fix her broken window. She thanked me warmly and shared stories from her youth. That experience made me realize helping others brings simple joy. Last winter, I got lost in a rainstorm and a stranger lent me an umbrella. Their kindness made me determined to keep helping others. Such small acts can make a big difference. I hope more people will follow the young person’s example and spread kindness.                                                                                                                                                                        Yours sincerely,             Li Hua 【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给杂志的“读者来信”栏目写一封邮件，内容包含对“在现代社会中助人为乐的重要性”的看法，并结合自身经历说明观点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感动：moved → touched 非常重要：of great importance → be very significant 社区：community → neighborhood 孤独的：lonely→ isolated 坚定的：determined → resolute 2.句式拓展 同义句转化 原句：Such small acts can make a big difference. 拓展句：It is such little deeds that can have a great impact. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 I was deeply moved by the report about the young person who has taken care of the elderly for ten years. (运用了who引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】 In modern society, helping others is of great importance. (运用了动名词短语作主语) 实战训练 一、名校试题 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市敬业中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中英语试题 假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。你校正与一所英国高中共同筹备一场以“Colors of Our Campus”为主题的线上艺术展，你的一幅摄影作品也将参展。请你用英语给笔友Emily写一封邮件，内容须包括： （1）简要介绍这项活动； （2）简要描述你的作品； （3）说明你的作品展现了校园的哪一特色。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市延安中学2025-2026学年高三上学期9月评估英语试题 假如你是民启中学高三学生李明，学校即将举办英语演讲比赛，主题为“Don’t count the days. Make the days count.”请写一篇演讲稿参赛。你的文章必须包括： 1.你对主题的理解；2.结合自己亲身经历进行阐述。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市控江、复兴、市西、松二、金山、奉贤六校2025-2026学年高三上学期期中联考英语试卷 假设你是明启中学学生李华。你在一份英文杂志上读到一篇关于”一位年轻人坚持照顾老人十年”的报道，深受感动。请你给该杂志的“读者来信”（Letters to the Editor）栏目写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）你对“在现代社会中助人为乐的重要性”的看法； （2）结合你自己帮助他人或被他人帮助的经历，说明你的观点。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市建平中学2025-2026学年高三上学期10月阶段测试英语试题 假如你是明启中学学生李华。你校即将举办名为“After-School Life”的主题论坛。你将作为学生代表在会上发言，分享你对当代高中生课余生活方式的观察与思考。请你写一篇英语发言稿，内容必须包括： 1. 将你所观察到的同学们的课余生活方式进行分类； 2. 具体描述每一类生活方式的特点及其对同学们的影响。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市进华中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试卷 假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。近期，你校英语报就“社交媒体时代，你是否会在朋友圈屏蔽父母或老师(hide a Moments post from parents or teachers)?”这一话题征集观点。请你结合自身或身边同学的例子，写一篇文章投稿，内容需包括： 1.描述你或他人的相关经历; 2.分析这一行为背后的原因： 3.谈谈你对此现象的看法。 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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市宜川中学2025-2026学年高三10月月考英语试卷 假设你是明启中学的王华，你校学生会将举办主题为“Looking for the Chinese Spirit”的英语演讲比赛，请你作为参赛者写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 描述生活中最感动你的一个人或一件事，并说明其体现了怎样的中国精神； 2. 你获得的启发及感受。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是江薇中学高三学生张芯，学校计划引入人形机器人，以优化校园服务、提升学习体验。你校英文报现向全体学生征集建议，希望确定一个最适合引入机器人的岗位。你对此颇感兴趣。请写一封邮件给校报负责老师，内容需包括： (1) 设置的具体岗位和岗位职责； (2) 推荐该岗位的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、真题演练 (2023年6月上海高考英语作文) 你是明启中学高三学生吴磊，你校英语节即将举行主题为“ 快乐童年”的展览，邀请每个同学提供一件生活中物品参展，并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读，要求描述展品以及选择原因。  内容必须包括： 1）对该物品的简要描述 2）你选择该物品参展的原因 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 16 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题16 英语作文（上） 目录 考情分析与命题趋势 1 知识体系构建 2 考点精析与突破 4 考点一：叙议结合类作文（难点） 4 考点二：书信邮件应用文类作文（重点） 13 实战精练与提升 34 考情解读 一、考试要求 核心题型与载体 主要分为应用文写作和夹叙夹议 / 议论文写作两类，均强调 “真实语境下的有效表达”： 1. 应用文：高频载体为书信（建议信、回信、邀请信等）、通知、演讲稿、倡议信，情境紧扣校园生活（如给校友提烹饪建议、社团招新）或社会热点（文化交流、环保倡议），任务明确（如 “提建议 + 说明理由”“推荐活动 + 邀请参与”）。 2. 夹叙夹议 / 议论文：多以材料解读（如 2025 年 “Don’t be afraid of wetting your feet when you want to learn how to swim”）、现象话题（如 “数字化学习的未来”“慢生活与快节奏平衡”）为背景，要求 “谈理解 + 结合具体事例”（夹叙夹议）或 “亮观点 + 论证分析”（议论文）。 核心要求 1. 内容与逻辑 · 应用文：需覆盖题目所有要点（如建议信需含 “建议内容 + 理由 + 期待”），避免遗漏；内容需具体，如推荐文化活动要提及 “豫园灯会的手工灯笼”“弄堂艺术体验” 等细节，而非泛谈 “有趣”。 · 夹叙夹议 / 议论文：论点明确（如名言解读需提炼 “勇于实践”“突破舒适区” 等核心哲理），事例真实贴切（优先个人经历，如 “第一次组织校园义卖”“学视频剪辑的尝试”），且需点明事例与道理的关联（避免 “事例与观点两张皮”）；议论文论证需用举例、对比、因果等逻辑，避免空洞。 2. 格式与语域 · 应用文：严格遵循格式（书信含 “称呼 - 正文 - 结尾敬语 - 署名”，通知含 “标题 - 对象 - 正文 - 落款”）；语域适配受众（给校长的信用 “Yours sincerely”，给同学的信可用 “Best regards”）。 · 夹叙夹议 / 议论文：无固定格式，但需结构清晰（多为 “总 - 分 - 总”，夹叙夹议常用 “解读观点 - 叙述事例 - 点明关联” 框架），语言正式且连贯。 3. 语言与词数 · 语言：准确优先（避免语法 / 拼写错误），适度用高级表达（如非谓语、复合句；句式需多样，长短句交错。 · 词数：通常要求 120-150 词，过短（少于 70 词）会大幅扣分，过长易导致逻辑松散。 评分关键 从内容（10 分）、语言（10 分）、组织结构（5 分） 三维评分： · 内容：充实、扣题得高分，遗漏要点或离题得分低； · 语言：准确且有多样性（复杂句式 + 高级词汇）得优，错误多影响理解得分低； · 组织结构：全文流畅紧凑得高，缺乏衔接、结构混乱得分低。 二、命题分析 题型与分值 应用文（占比约 40%）；夹叙夹议 / 议论文（占比约 60%）。总分 25 分，按 “内容（10 分）、语言（10 分）、组织结构（5 分）” 三维评分。 题材特征 聚焦 “人与自我、人与社会、人与自然” 三大主题；融入中华优秀传统文化与上海本土文化，凸显文化自信。 核心考查 1. 应用文：内容完整、格式规范、语域适配、语言准确 2. 夹叙夹议 / 议论文：观点明确、事例贴切、事理关联、逻辑连贯 命题特点 立德树人价值引领、情境真实实用、开放思辨、文化浸润、反拨教学（关注语用能力） 知识梳理 考点精讲 · 考点一：叙议结合类英语作文 解题策略 夹叙夹议文是一种比较常见的写作文体,。无论记人还是叙事都要通过叙述、描写来加以表达, 把人物的经历或行为、发生的事情/事件用一定的顺序和语言技巧叙述出来。在叙述过程中“人以事显, 事由人生”, 人和事是密不可分的。高考作文一般都不会单纯的记叙某事，而是夹叙夹议。围绕主题开展叙述、讨论—结论段（结尾部分Concluding paragraph）对全文的总结和概括。值得注意的是近年试题中经常出现记叙与结论相结合的叙议形式。 部分 内容 细节 引言 引入主题 引入话题，吸引读者的注意力，并清晰地阐明主题 记叙 事例叙述 具体事例或解释或描述，可以是一个亲身经历或观察到的事件 议论 论述观点 对事例进行分析，阐述其与主题的关联，并提出自己的观点 结尾 总结全文 总结升华，呼应开头，给读者留下深刻的印象 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市曹杨中学2025-2026学年学年高三上学期期中英语试卷 假设你是明启中学学生李华。你常阅读一个英文学习类网站，上面一位博主最近发文，邀请读者分享他们在课堂外学到的重要一课。写一篇短文投稿到该网站，介绍你的一次经历。内容须包括： (1) 简要描述这次经历 (如一次志愿活动、团队合作、旅行或比赛等) ； (2) 说明你从中学到的东西； (3) 谈谈这次经历对你的影响。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                               An Unforgettable Lesson Outside the Classroom     I’m Li Hua from Ming Qi Middle School. Last summer, I participated in a volunteer teaching activity in a remote village. We taught local children English and basic science knowledge, and organized fun games to spark their curiosity.     During the activity, I found that many children had a strong desire for knowledge but lacked learning resources. I realized that helping others isn’t just about giving materials, but about inspiring their passion for learning and building their confidence.     This experience made me cherish my own learning opportunities more. It also taught me the importance of empathy and responsibility. Now, I’m more willing to help those in need and understand that a small act of kindness can make a big difference. I’ll continue to take part in such activities and spread the power of care. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，向一个英文学习类网站投稿，分享课堂外学到重要一课的经历，需涵盖经历描述、所学内容及经历影响三方面内容。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：participate in → take part in 激发：spark → inspire/ stimulate/ arouse 渴望：desire → longing 差异，影响：difference → impact 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last summer, I participated in a volunteer teaching activity in a remote village. 拓展句：Last summer, I participated in a volunteer teaching activity in a remote village, where I gained a precious life lesson. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I realized that helping others isn’t just about giving materials, but about inspiring their passion for learning and building their confidence. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和not just... but...的句式) 【高分句型2】Now, I’m more willing to help those in need and understand that a small act of kindness can make a big difference. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) · 考点二：书信邮件应用文类作文 解题策略 应用文是一种与日常生活、学习或工作密切相关, 实用性很强的文体, 包括书信(或电子邮件)等, 每种类别的应用文都有各自的结构和行文特点。 · 题型聚焦实用性：近 5 年真题以书信（含建议信、感谢信、咨询信）和通知为主，占比超 80%，偶见演讲稿（如 2023 年 “校园文化节倡议演讲”），均围绕 “解决实际问题” 或 “传递具体信息” 设计，无复杂抒情类文体。​ · 话题绑定校园与生活：90% 以上题目紧扣高中生日常场景，如 “建议学校优化图书馆服务”（2022 年）、“邀请外教参加班级毕业聚会”（2021 年）、“通知同学参加志愿者招募会”（2020 年），极少涉及陌生领域，降低背景知识门槛。​ · 要求隐含 “细节导向”：题干不仅明确文体和核心目的，还会限定关键信息，如 “需说明建议的 2 个具体理由”“要包含活动时间、地点及报名方式”，若遗漏细节会直接扣 1-2 分（满分 15 分，细节分占 3-4 分）。​ Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市浦东复旦附中分校2025-2026学年高三上学期9月第二次测试英语试题 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近收到表弟王磊的邮件(如下所示)，回复他一封邮件，内容须包括： (1) 对明启中学的介绍； (2) 你对于如何做好初高中衔接的建议。 Dear Li Ming, I hope this email finds you well. I’m thinking about following in your footsteps and applying to your high school, so I’d love to ask you some questions. What are the school and the life there like? And, more importantly, how did you handle the jump from junior to senior high? I’ve heard it’s a big change, and I could use some tips on how to make the transition smoother. I’d really appreciate any advice you can give me. Thanks a bunch, and let’s catch up soon! Take care, Wang Lei ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Wang Lei, It’s great to hear from you! I’m glad to tell you something about my school. Mingqi High School is an excellent choice. Our campus boasts modern facilities, including a well-equipped library and science labs. Teachers here are supportive, encouraging students to explore interests through clubs like debate and robotics. The atmosphere is both challenging and collaborative, helping us grow academically and socially. Regarding the transition to senior high, my advice is as follows. Firstly, why not adjust your learning habits? High school coursework is more demanding, so preview lessons and review notes regularly. Besides, you should manage your time wisely. You can use planners to balance academics and extracurriculars. Lastly, remember to stay positive whenever you meet difficulties. You may turn to your friends or teachers for help if necessary. I’m sure you’ll thrive here! Let’s chat more over the weekend. All the best, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给表弟王磊回邮件，介绍自己的学校明启中学，并给对方关于如何做好初高中衔接的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→ delighted 选择：choice→ option 鼓励：encourage→ inspire 明智地：wisely→ judiciously 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Our campus boasts modern facilities, including a well-equipped library and science labs. 拓展句：Our campus boasts modern facilities, which include a well-equipped library and science labs. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The atmosphere is both challenging and collaborative, helping us grow academically and socially.（运用了现在分词作状语） 【高分句型2】Lastly, remember to stay positive whenever you meet difficulties.（运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句） 【来源】上海市控江、复兴、市西、松二、金山、奉贤六校2025-2026学年高三上学期期中联考英语试卷 假设你是明启中学学生李华。你在一份英文杂志上读到一篇关于”一位年轻人坚持照顾老人十年”的报道，深受感动。请你给该杂志的“读者来信”（Letters to the Editor）栏目写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）你对“在现代社会中助人为乐的重要性”的看法； （2）结合你自己帮助他人或被他人帮助的经历，说明你的观点。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Editor, I’m Li Hua, a student from Mingqi High School. I was deeply moved by the report about the young person who has taken care of the elderly for ten years. In modern society, helping others is of great importance. It not only warms those in need but also builds a friendly community. When people support each other, we feel less lonely and more connected. I once helped an elderly neighbor carry groceries and fix her broken window. She thanked me warmly and shared stories from her youth. That experience made me realize helping others brings simple joy. Last winter, I got lost in a rainstorm and a stranger lent me an umbrella. Their kindness made me determined to keep helping others. Such small acts can make a big difference. I hope more people will follow the young person’s example and spread kindness.                                                                                                                                                                        Yours sincerely,             Li Hua 【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给杂志的“读者来信”栏目写一封邮件，内容包含对“在现代社会中助人为乐的重要性”的看法，并结合自身经历说明观点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感动：moved → touched 非常重要：of great importance → be very significant 社区：community → neighborhood 孤独的：lonely→ isolated 坚定的：determined → resolute 2.句式拓展 同义句转化 原句：Such small acts can make a big difference. 拓展句：It is such little deeds that can have a great impact. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 I was deeply moved by the report about the young person who has taken care of the elderly for ten years. (运用了who引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】 In modern society, helping others is of great importance. (运用了动名词短语作主语) 实战训练 一、名校试题 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市敬业中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中英语试题 假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。你校正与一所英国高中共同筹备一场以“Colors of Our Campus”为主题的线上艺术展，你的一幅摄影作品也将参展。请你用英语给笔友Emily写一封邮件，内容须包括： （1）简要介绍这项活动； （2）简要描述你的作品； （3）说明你的作品展现了校园的哪一特色。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Emily, I’m writing to share exciting news. Our school is co-hosting an online art exhibition themed “Colors of Our Campus” with a British high school. Luckily, one of my photos will be exhibited. My entry captures the cherry blossom path at dawn. Soft pink petals fall gently on the stone steps while sunlight filters through the branches, painting golden spots on the ground. Meanwhile, a group of students laugh happily in the scene.  It is this photo that displays our campus’s blend of natural beauty and youthful vitality. The blooming cherry blossoms represent the charm of nature here, and the students’ smiles reflect the warm, energetic atmosphere that makes our campus unique. I can’t wait to see the works from your school. I hope you can be fond of my photo! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给笔友Emily写一封邮件，介绍学校举行的线上艺术展和自己即将参展的摄影作品。 【详解】1.词汇积累 同时：meanwhile→simultaneously 透过：filters through→dapple through 呈现：display→showcase 充满活力的：energetic→dynamic 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：I’m writing to share exciting news. Our school is co-hosting an online art exhibition themed “Colors of Our Campus” with a British high school. 拓展句：I’m writing to share exciting news that our school is co-hosting an online art exhibition themed “Colors of Our Campus” with a British high school. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Soft pink petals fall gently on the stone steps while sunlight filters through the branches, painting golden spots on the ground.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作结果状语) 【高分句型2】It is this photo that displays our campus’s blend of natural beauty and youthful vitality.(运用了强调句型) 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市延安中学2025-2026学年高三上学期9月评估英语试题 假如你是民启中学高三学生李明，学校即将举办英语演讲比赛，主题为“Don’t count the days. Make the days count.”请写一篇演讲稿参赛。你的文章必须包括： 1.你对主题的理解；2.结合自己亲身经历进行阐述。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear teachers and fellow students,    The theme “Don’t count the days. Make the days count.” powerfully reminds us that life isn’t about passively marking time, but actively filling it with meaning. It urges us to focus on quality, not just quantity.     I truly learned this during my preparation for the college entrance exam. Initially, I was obsessed with counting down the days left, feeling anxious and overwhelmed by the sheer number. Every glance at the calendar deepened my stress. Then, I realized this approach was futile. I decided to stop counting and start working hard. Instead of dwelling on “how many days,” I focused on “what can I achieve today?” I set concrete goals for each day, like mastering a grammar point or revising 50 vocabulary words, which transformed my experience. Each completed goal made me feel accomplished and in control. The days started to feel valuable and productive, not just fleeting moments counted down.     Let’s all embrace this spirit. Stop merely counting the days passing by. Focus on making every single day count through purposeful action and growth. Thank you! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇主题为“Don’t count the days. Make the days count.”的演讲稿，参加学校即将举办的英语演讲比赛，说明自己对主题的理解，并结合亲身经历进行阐述。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 关注：focus on→concentrate on 起初、开始：initially→originally 沉迷于：be obsessed with→be addicted to 珍贵的：valuable→precious 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句：It urges us to focus on quality, not just quantity. 拓展句：It urges that we should focus on quality, not just quantity. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The theme “Don’t count the days. Make the days count.” powerfully reminds us that life isn’t about passively marking time, but actively filling it with meaning. (运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句。） 【高分句型2】I set concrete goals for each day, like mastering a grammar point or revising 50 vocabulary words, which transformed my experience.（运用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。） 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市控江、复兴、市西、松二、金山、奉贤六校2025-2026学年高三上学期期中联考英语试卷 假设你是明启中学学生李华。你在一份英文杂志上读到一篇关于”一位年轻人坚持照顾老人十年”的报道，深受感动。请你给该杂志的“读者来信”（Letters to the Editor）栏目写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）你对“在现代社会中助人为乐的重要性”的看法； （2）结合你自己帮助他人或被他人帮助的经历，说明你的观点。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Editor, I’m Li Hua, a student from Mingqi High School. I was deeply moved by the report about the young person who has taken care of the elderly for ten years. In modern society, helping others is of great importance. It not only warms those in need but also builds a friendly community. When people support each other, we feel less lonely and more connected. I once helped an elderly neighbor carry groceries and fix her broken window. She thanked me warmly and shared stories from her youth. That experience made me realize helping others brings simple joy. Last winter, I got lost in a rainstorm and a stranger lent me an umbrella. Their kindness made me determined to keep helping others. Such small acts can make a big difference. I hope more people will follow the young person’s example and spread kindness.                                                                                                                                                                        Yours sincerely,                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua 【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给杂志的“读者来信”栏目写一封邮件，内容包含对“在现代社会中助人为乐的重要性”的看法，并结合自身经历说明观点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感动：moved → touched 非常重要：of great importance → be very significant 社区：community → neighborhood 孤独的：lonely→ isolated 坚定的：determined → resolute 2.句式拓展 同义句转化 原句：Such small acts can make a big difference. 拓展句：It is such little deeds that can have a great impact. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 I was deeply moved by the report about the young person who has taken care of the elderly for ten years. (运用了who引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】 In modern society, helping others is of great importance. (运用了动名词短语作主语) 4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市建平中学2025-2026学年高三上学期10月阶段测试英语试题 假如你是明启中学学生李华。你校即将举办名为“After-School Life”的主题论坛。你将作为学生代表在会上发言，分享你对当代高中生课余生活方式的观察与思考。请你写一篇英语发言稿，内容必须包括： 1. 将你所观察到的同学们的课余生活方式进行分类； 2. 具体描述每一类生活方式的特点及其对同学们的影响。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Mingqi High School. Today, I’d like to share my observations on our after-school life, which I’ve grouped into three main types. First, some students are deeply engaged in academics — attending tutoring classes or doing extra exercises. While this boosts their grades, it often leads to stress and burnout. Second, others spend most of their free time on digital devices — scrolling through social media or playing games. Though relaxing, this can harm eyesight and reduce face-to-face interaction. Finally, a growing number of students join clubs, sports, or volunteer work. This not only builds teamwork and confidence but also balances study with fun. In my view, a healthy after-school life should mix relaxation, social connection, and personal growth. Let’s make our free time meaningful — not just busy, but truly enriching! Thank you! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文中的发言稿，主题为“课余生活观察与思考”。要求考生作为学生代表，在论坛上对高中生课余生活方式进行分类、描述特点并分析影响。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 课余生活：after-school life → extracurricular activities 促进，提高：boost → enhance 导致：lead to → result in 在我看来：in my view → as far as I’m concerned 2. 句式拓展 句型转换 原句：This not only builds teamwork and confidence but also balances study with fun. 拓展句：Not only does this build teamwork and confidence but also balances study with fun. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Today, I’d like to share my observations on our after-school life, which I’ve grouped into three main types.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】While this boosts their grades, it often leads to stress and burnout. （运用了while引导的让步状语从句）This not only builds teamwork and confidence but also balances study with fun.（运用“not only...but also...”强调积极影响，体现辩证思维；动词“builds”和“balances”精准有力） 5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市进华中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试卷 假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。近期，你校英语报就“社交媒体时代，你是否会在朋友圈屏蔽父母或老师(hide a Moments post from parents or teachers)?”这一话题征集观点。请你结合自身或身边同学的例子，写一篇文章投稿，内容需包括： 1.描述你或他人的相关经历; 2.分析这一行为背后的原因： 3.谈谈你对此现象的看法。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    In the age of social media, the question of whether to hide Moments posts from parents or teachers has become a common topic among students. I have a classmate, Tom, who once hid his Moments posts from his parents. He shared a series of pictures of a late-night party with friends. He thought his parents wouldn’t approve of these pictures.   This behavior mainly stems from the generation gap. Parents and teachers, with their different life experiences and values, may have higher expectations and stricter rules. Students, on the other hand, long for freedom and self-expression. They worry that their actions might be misinterpreted or criticized, so they choose to hide certain posts to avoid potential conflicts.   In my opinion, while it’s understandable that students want their privacy, completely hiding posts from parents and teachers isn't the best solution. Open communication is key. We should try to have honest conversations with them, sharing our thoughts and feelings. 【导语】这是一篇应用文。近期，考生所在校英语报就“社交媒体时代，你是否会在朋友圈屏蔽父母或老师”这一话题征集观点。请考生一篇文章投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 避免：avoid→evade 源于：stem from→originate from 完全地：completely→totally 选择：choose→select 2.句式拓展： 同义句 原句：He shared a series of pictures of a late-night party with friends. He thought his parents wouldn’t approve of these pictures. 拓展句：He shared a series of pictures of a late-night party with friends, which he thought his parents wouldn’t approve of. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】I have a classmate, Tom, who once hid his Moments posts from his parents.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型 2】 In my opinion, while it’s understandable that students want their privacy, completely hiding posts from parents and teachers isn’t the best solution.（运用 while 引导让步状语从句及that引导的主语从句） 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市宜川中学2025-2026学年高三10月月考英语试卷 假设你是明启中学的王华，你校学生会将举办主题为“Looking for the Chinese Spirit”的英语演讲比赛，请你作为参赛者写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 描述生活中最感动你的一个人或一件事，并说明其体现了怎样的中国精神； 2. 你获得的启发及感受。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Our country is catching the world’s attention with its vigor and power. What is it that drives China to achieve so much in recent years? The Chinese Spirit is the answer. Pony Ma inspires me most with his successful stories and principles of business. Once an ordinary computer college graduate, he founded Tencent, one of the biggest success stories ever created in the Internet Industry. He dreamed big dreams and held on to his dreams along the way. Together with his sharp insight, his company launched QQ and Wechat, which are globally accepted as most popular messaging and social media apps. Pony Ma best embodies the Chinese spirit of dream and resilience. From him, I find the power of being unreasonable. As a young man, I should not limit my ambition to the paper scores. Instead, I should figure out what my dream is and strive hard for it. To fulfill my dream, I will be motivated to enrich my knowledge and expand my horizons against all odds. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿参加主题为“Looking for the Chinese Spirit”的英语演讲比赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 吸引：catch→draw 创建：found→establish 坚守：hold on to→stick to 不合理的：unreasonable→absurd 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Once an ordinary computer college graduate, he founded Tencent, one of the biggest success stories ever created in the Internet Industry. 拓展句：Once an ordinary computer college graduate, he founded Tencent, which is one of the biggest success stories ever created in the Internet Industry. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Together with his sharp insight, his company launched QQ and Wechat, which are globally accepted as most popular messaging and social media apps. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Instead, I should figure out what my dream is and strive hard for it. (运用了what引导宾语从句) 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是江薇中学高三学生张芯，学校计划引入人形机器人，以优化校园服务、提升学习体验。你校英文报现向全体学生征集建议，希望确定一个最适合引入机器人的岗位。你对此颇感兴趣。请写一封邮件给校报负责老师，内容需包括： (1) 设置的具体岗位和岗位职责； (2) 推荐该岗位的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Teacher, I’m Zhang Xin, a Senior 3 student. I’m writing to suggest introducing a robot as a campus service assistant, which I think will greatly improve our school life. The robot’s main duties include managing the lost and found — keeping items that students lose and helping owners get them back. It can also guide visitors around our campus and answer simple questions about school rules or facility locations. Additionally, it can remind students of important dates like exam weeks or activity deadlines. I recommend this role because lost items are common at school, and teachers are often too busy to handle them well. The robot can work all day to provide timely help, which saves everyone’s time. This robot will make our campus service more efficient and convenient. I hope my suggestion is helpful. Yours sincerely, Zhang Xin 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高三学生张芯的身份，给校报负责老师写一封邮件，就学校计划引入人形机器人确定岗位一事提出建议，内容涵盖具体岗位、岗位职责及推荐理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 改善：improve → enhance 主要的：main → primary 引导：guide → lead 忙碌的：busy → occupied 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：It can also guide visitors around our campus and answer simple questions about school rules or facility locations. 拓展句：Not only can it guide visitors around our campus, but also it can answer simple questions about school rules or facility locations. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to suggest introducing a robot as a campus service assistant, which I think will greatly improve our school life.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】I recommend this role because lost items are common at school, and teachers are often too busy to handle them well.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 二、真题演练 (2023年6月上海高考英语作文) 你是明启中学高三学生吴磊，你校英语节即将举行主题为“ 快乐童年”的展览，邀请每个同学提供一件生活中物品参展，并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读，要求描述展品以及选择原因。  内容必须包括： 1）对该物品的简要描述 2）你选择该物品参展的原因 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 解题思路： 1.描述选择物品：可以选择一件与快乐童年有关的物品，一本喜欢的童话书或者一个陪伴自己成长的玩具 2.解释原因：解释为什么选择了该物品参展，可以从个人情感回忆和影响等方面进行阐述，说明该物品与快乐童年之间的联系。 常用表达： 介绍外形： long, white, high ,round, square, big small , shape,color, pink, brown  介绍用途： be used to； be applied to； be used for different purposes 介绍材料质地：be made of/ from； steel; iron copper,  plastic; leather;wood;cloth;  cotton 句型： 1. It is …… centimeters long. 2.It is……centimeters in length and…… centimeters in width. 3. It is made in/of/from 4. The problem it may bring is  5. It can be used to 6. It is convenient for…… 参考范文1:       I’m Wu Lei.For the "Happy Childhood" exhibition, I have chosen to exhibit my cherished Barbie doll. This special doll was given to me by my mother, and she has been my constant companion throughout my entire childhood. With her beautiful black hair, pink skirt, and captivating big eyes, she exudes a sense of elegance and charm. I enjoyed dressing her up and experimenting with different styles, making her even more stunning. The Barbie doll holds immense sentimental value to me, as she played a significant role in my childhood. She was not just a toy; she became my confidante and my dearest friend. During moments of sadness or conflict with my peers, I would turn to her and pour out my heart. She patiently listened, providing solace and comfort during my loneliest and darkest days. Her presence was a source of strength and understanding.    Reflecting upon my childhood, memories of this beloved Barbie doll never fail to surface. She remains a symbol of unwavering companionship and a source of joy. Regardless of the circumstances, she was always there, faithfully accompanying me. Through this exhibition, I aim to share the significance of this doll in my life and evoke a sense of nostalgia and appreciation for the simple joys and cherished connections of childhood. 参考范文2：    I'm glad to know that our school is organizing an English festival with the theme “Happy Childhood”, where each student is invited to provide an item from their life to be exhibited. After much consideration, I have decided to exhibit my favorite childhood book, “The Adventures of Peter Rabbit ” The Adventures of Peter Rabbit is  a classic children's book.  It tells the story of a rabbit named Peter and his exciting adventures in McGregor's  Garden.  I chose this book for the exhibition because it represents the joy and innocence of my early years. It reminds me of the carefree  days of my childhood where I could immerse myself in the enchanting word of stories.  By exhibiting this book, I hope to share the happiness and wonder of my childhood with others. I believe that everyone deserves to experience the joy of a carefree and imaginative childhood. 语篇分析： 今年作文，围绕人与自我的新课标主题，再次体现关注学生心理健康和个人成长。关注社会生活，关注世道人心，关注励志成长，这是高考作文立足现实的体现，也是高考作文核心价值观的体现。所以考生们在备考的时候，应多关注这类个人成长的话题    1 / 16 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $