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写作技巧点拨
、巧用衔接词
作用
连接词(组)》
表示并列
and;both...and...;not only...but also...;either...or...;neither...nor...;as well as
表示转折
but;yet;however;while;though;instead;unluckily;unfortunately;after all;otherwise
first(ly);second(ly);third(ly);to begin with;to start with;first of all;at last;in the end;
表示顺序
next;then;after that;finally
表示递进
besides;what's more;what's worse;in addition
when;while;as;now;at present;recently;before;after;after a while;at first;later;soon;
表示时间
suddenly;as soon as;from now on;till
表示条件
if;unless;as long as
表示原因
because;because of;as;for;since;thanks to;for the reason that
表示结果
so;therefore;as a result;so...that...
though;although;even if;no matter what/how/who/when;whatever;however;whoever;
表示让步
whenever
表示目的
so that;in order that/to;so as to
表示对比
while;on the one hand...,on the other hand...
表示举例
for example;for instance;such as;like;take...for example
表示观点
in my opinion;in my view;as for me;from my point of view;as far as I'm concerned
表示解释说明in fact;actually;in addition;in that case
表示强调
in fact;above all
表示概括
in a word;in short;in conclusion;on the whole;generally speaking;all in all
二、句式丰富
1.巧用it相关的句型
(1)fs+a.(+for/ofsh.)+to do sth.做某事(对某人来说)是…的。/(某人)做某事是…的。
It's so kind of you to help me work out this problem.
(2)It is of great importance/help/use/..(for sb.)to do sth.做某事(对某人来说)是很重要的/有帮助的/有用
的/…
It is of great importance for us to develop good study habits.
(3)It's time to do/.for/that..是(做)…的时间了。
It's time to take action.
(4)t'sone's duty to do sth.做某事是某人的责任。
It's our duty to keep and spread our traditional culture.
(5)It is reported/said/believed/expected that...据报道/据说/人们相信/预计.
It is believed that good habits help us make more achievements.
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2.巧用比较等级句型
在写作中恰当运用形容词和副词的比较等级,可以使句型结构更丰富,表达更多样化。
常用的句型有以下几种:
(1)原级:as+形容词/副词原级+as.…
He thinks math is as difficult as English.
(2)比较级:“the+比较级.,he+比较级..”表示“越…,就越.”
“比较级+and+比较级/more and more+多音节形容词/副词原级”表示“越来越..”
DThe more we communicate with our parents,the fewer problems we will have.
2Online payment makes our lives more and more convenient.
(3)最高级:one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数,表示“最.…的…之一”
“he+序数词+形容词最高级+可数名词单数+比较范围”表示“.…中第…最…的…”
DPlastic pollution is one of the most serious environmental problems in the world.
2China is the third largest country in area in the world.
3.巧用There be句型
(1)Our school has lots of rules,and all of us should follow them.
-There are lots of rules in our school and all of us should follow them.
(2)We hope that every student will have a computer on their desks in the future.
-We hope that there will be a computer on every student's desk in the future.
4.巧用感叹句
(1)Looking back at the days we spent together,we were happy.
-Looking back at the days we spent together,how happy we were!
(2)The astronaut in Tiangong Classroom has taught us a lot of useful knowledge.
>What useful knowledge the astronaut in Tiangong Classroom has taught us!
5.巧用主从复合句
(1)状语从句
DIt is impolite of children to cut in.Their parents are talking.
-It is impolite of children to cut in when their parents are talking.(
2I think you'd better relax.You finish the two days'work.
→I think you'd better relax after you finish the two days'work.(时间)
3It will rain tomorrow.We will stay at home.
→If it rains tomorrow,we will stay at home.(条件)
He is young.He has the dream of being a hero like his father.
-Although he is young,he has the dream of being a hero like his father.(
5Lily decides to learn Chinese well.She wants to work in China in the future.
一→Lily decides to learn Chinese well because she wants to work in China in the future.(原因)
6We should keep on protecting the environment.We can have a better earth.
-We should keep on protecting the environment so that we can have a better earth.(
DMike studied very hard.He improved much in all his subjects this term.
Mike studied so hard that he improved much in all his subjects this term.(
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(2)定语从句
先行词
例句
The man is making a speech.The man is my father.
人
→The man who/,that is making a speech is my father.(先行词作主语)
I'll never forget those days.We spent those days together.
事物
→'ll never forget those days that/,which we spent together..(先行词作宾语)
I remember the day.We met on that day for the first time
时间
→I remember the day when we met for the first time.(先行词作状语)
This is a small town.I was born in the small town.
地点
→This is the small town where I was born.(先行词作状语)
6.
巧用倒装句
(1)In this way,we can learn English well.
-Only in this way can we learn English well.
(2)We didn't have supper until he returned home.
-Not until he returned home did we have supper.
三、评分标准
档次
分值
语言要求
较好地完成了规定的写作任务。
包含了所有内容要点,能围绕要点适当发挥,内容具体、丰富,词数符合要求;应用了较丰
五档
13~15分
富的语言结构和词汇,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯,表达清楚,书写规范;没有或几乎
没有语言错误。
基本完成了规定的写作任务。
四档
10≈12分
包含了所有内容要点,并有一定发挥,内容比较丰富,词数符合要求;应用的语言结构和
词汇能满足任务要求,句子较通顺,表达较清楚,书写较为规范;有少量语言错误。
完成了部分写作任务。
三档
7~9分
包含了多数内容要点,并有所发挥,内容不够丰富、具体,词数较少;句子不够通顺,行文
不够连贯,书写不够规范;语言错误稍多。
仅完成少数写作任务。
二档
4~6分
只包含了少数内容要点,内容过少;多数语句不完整,表达不清晰,行文不连贯,书写不规
范;语言错误较多。
未能完成写作任务。
一档
0~3分
只包含了1个内容要点或所写内容与题目要求几乎无关,内容过少;语言不通顺,用词很
不准确,书写难辨:错误过多,几乎难以读懂。
评分说明:相同的错误不重复计算。
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