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该初中英语单元复习课件系统梳理了“规则”话题的写作知识体系，涵盖主题范畴（人与自我、人与社会）、文体特征（议论文、日记）、素材积累（句型、名言）及写作步骤，通过话题分析、范文剖析与写作训练的逻辑串联，帮助学生构建从话题理解到规范表达的完整知识网络。 其亮点在于“素材积累-范文升格-分层训练”的创新复习策略，如通过“家规讨论（3a）-日记写作（3b）”活动链，引导学生分析规则合理性并提出修改建议，培养批判性思维（思维品质），结合衔接词训练与同伴互评表（学习能力）提升语言组织与自主学习能力。这种设计既让学生夯实写作基础，又助力教师实施分层教学，提高复习效率。

单元话题写作 Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes. Tang原创英语课件 1 话题分析 本单元以“规则”为话题，结合此话题就学校和家庭的各种规章制度进行了论述。在本单元话题作文的命题过程中，命题人通常会让你就学校或家庭的某些规章制度谈一谈自己的看法。写作时多用第一人称，时态主要用一般现在时，表达观点时要有理有据，不能偏激。 本单元写作情境属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“做人与做事”和“人与社会” 主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这两个主题群，涉及子主题“自我认识， 自我管理，自我提升”和“良好的人际关系与人际交往”。常见的写作任务是 根据实际情况或文字提示，写出谈论家规、校规等规章制度的短文，并能 适当发表自己的见解，体裁多为记叙文或议论文。 3 ◆开头句 ①In order to make families better,a lot of families have their own rules. ②Life is always full of all kinds of rules. So is our school. ◆中间句 ① First of all,it’s necessary for us to realize the importance of traffic safety. ②Teenagers are too young to make their own decisions. 4 ◆结尾句 ① In short,if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves,we will grow up safely and healthily. ②Although these rules are strict,they are good for my growth. 【名言积累】 ①Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.无规矩不成方 圆。 ②A nation has its rule and a family also has one！国有国法，家有家规! 5 俗话说：“无规矩不成方圆”。为了营造良好的家庭氛围，使子女养成 良好的生活习惯，每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家规。请根据以下内容提 示，先简要介绍Mary和Tom的家规，然后说说你家的家规（2-3条）并谈谈 自己的感受。 要求： 1.100词左右（标题和开头已给出， 不计入总词数）； 2.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 6 ▶▶审题指导 1.文体：议论文 2.人称：第一人称和第三人称 3.时态：一般现在时 4.写作要点：①Mary的家规； ②Tom的家规； ③我的家规及对这些家规的看法 7 ▶▶思路点拨 8 ▶▶范文赏析 _________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ ______ _________________ ①she is not allowed to talk while eating. Her parents think it’s a bad behavior.For Tom,he can’t watch TV or play the mobile phone at home. If he does so,his parents will be angry with him. And going to bed before ten is a must.②His parents think it’s good for his health. Nothing Can Be Accomplished Without Rules In order to make families better,a lot of families have their own rules. In Mary’s family, 9 Every family has its own rules.③There are also some rules in my family.④First,⑤my parents care much about my exam results.I’m not allowed to make mistakes because of carelessness.⑥Second,going out at night is not allowed. If I do want to hang out with my friends at night,I must ⑦let my parents know. You may think my parents put too much pressure on me by making such strict rules. But I can understand them because they really want me to have a bright future. 10 Nothing Can Be Accomplished Without Rules In order to make families better,a lot of families have their own rules. In Mary’s family,talking while eating is a bad behavior,① ____ she is not allowed to do that. For Tom,he can’t watch TV or play the mobile phone at home. 升格技巧 技巧一：巧 用逻辑连词 升格① so 11 If he does so,his parents will be angry with him. And going to bed before ten is a must. In his parents’ eyes,② ____________________________________________ （早睡早起身体好）. 技巧二：巧 用谚语升格 ② early to bed and early to rise is good for health 续表 12 Every family has its own rules.③ ______________ （我家也是） ④ ______________（一方面）,my parents ⑤ ________________________（非常关注） my exam results. I’m not allowed to make mistakes because of carelessness.⑥ _________________（另一方面）,going out at night is not allowed. If I do want to hang out with my friends at night,I must ⑦ __________________（和……保 持联系） my parents all the time. You may think my parents put too much pressure on me by making such strict rules. But I can understand them because they really want me to have a bright future. 技巧三：巧 用倒装句升 格③ 技巧四：巧 用衔接词升 格④⑥ 技巧五：巧 用短语升格 ⑤⑦ So does mine. For one thing pay too much attention to For another thing keep in touch with 续表 13 With a partner, discuss some rules at home that you agree or disagree with. Make some notes in the chart. Rule Why you agree or disagree with it How you think the rule should be changed can’t play computer games can’t watch TV 3a Agree-playing computer games may get in the way of our schoolwork. Play as few games as possible Disagree-Sometimes we need to relax so that we can study better. Should be allowed to watch TV programs on weekends Write a diary entry explaining which rule(s) you do not agree with at home and how you think the rule(s) should be changed. 3b Use the following expressions to help you: I do not agree with… I think I should be allowed to ... I would like to ... I could … if I ... 思路点拨 内容：你认为哪一条家规不合理、理由及应该如何修改 文体：应用文(日记)；日记的主体部分为议论文           人称：以第一人称为主                            时态：以一般现在时为主 话题引出 → （Beginning） ↓ ↓ ↓ ↗1. 不赞成的原因→2. （Main Body） ↘3. ↓ ↓ 总结观点→ （Ending） Family rules you disagree Why you disagree How it should be changed There are many rules in my house. I do not agree with... This is because... I think I should... I hope my parents will allow me to… Outline Writing tips Pay attention to the structure. Beginning—Family rules you disagree Body—Why you disagree Ending -- How it should be changed Try to make sentences differently. I think I should be allowed to … I would like to … I could … if … I do not agree with the idea that … Try to use some linking words First; next; however; what’s more; in a word; all in all … 4th April, Sunday There are many rules in my house. I do not agree with the rule that I must be home for dinner every day. This is because the rule affects my social life. It takes away opportunities for me to spend time with my friends. As a result, my life is quite boring sometimes. I think I should be allowed to have dinner with my friends once in a while. For example, I would like to hang out with my classmates after dinner on some Fridays. I hope my parents will allow me to do this if I promise not to stay out too late and if there is no important family activity on those days. Sample 假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严格，你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题，根据提示，简要介绍你的家规，并谈谈你的看法。 提示： 1.不准穿耳洞，不准戴耳环，不准抽烟、喝酒； 2.先写作业再看电视; 3. 早睡早起，不准熬夜； 4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友，帮助父母做家务。 要求： 1.熟练运用所学知识，条理清楚，逻辑合理。 2.书写规范。 3.词数：80 左右 How many steps(步骤)of writing: _______ ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ 5 1. Analyse the topic. “审” 2. List an outline. “列” 3. Connect sentences into an article. “连” 4. Correct the article. “改” 5. Copy it into the paper. “誊” It’s time to write. 假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严格，你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题，根据提示，简要介绍你的家规，并谈谈你的看法。 提示： 1.不准穿耳洞，不准戴耳环，不准抽烟、喝酒； 2.先写作业再看电视; 3. 早睡早起，不准熬夜； 4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友，帮助父母做家务。 要求： 1.熟练运用所学知识，条理清楚，逻辑合理。 2.书写规范。 3.词数：80 左右 1. Analyse the topic. “审” style of writing(体裁):__________ tense(时态)：___________ person(人称): ______ key points(要点):__________________ I 一般现在时 说明文 family rules 假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严格，你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题，根据提示，简要介绍你的家规，并谈谈你的看法。 提示： 1.不准穿耳洞，不准戴耳环，不准抽烟、喝酒； 2.先写作业再看电视; 3. 早睡早起，不准熬夜； 4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友，帮助父母做家务。 要求： 1.熟练运用所学知识，条理清楚，逻辑合理。 2.书写规范。 3.词数：80 左右 2. Make an outline. “列” My family rules how many paragraphs(段落): ____ para.1: ______________________________ para.2: ______________________________ ______________________________ para.3: ______________________________ 3 My name is___. I’m a___. I have ___. my family rules opinions (I think/agree that...) (First...second...third...finally...) Linking words(连接词): 表并列：and, both...and... 表转折：but, however... 表因果：because, so, as a result... 表递进：not only...but also..., what’s more 表结果：so...that..., such...that... 表先后：first, second, third, next, finally... 表时间：when, while, after, before... 3. Connect sentences into an article. “连” Time for writing Possible Version: My name is Li Hua. I am a middle school student. My parents are strict with me. There are many rules in my family. Let me tell you about them. First, I can’t get ears pierced or wear earrings. I am not allowed to smoke or drink, either. Second, I have to finish my homework before watching TV. What’s more, I must go to bed and get up early. Staying up late is not allowed for me. Last, I must not talk back to my parents. I need to care about my family and friends, and I am required to help with housework at home. I think some of my family rules are strict. However, I know that they are made to make me become better and better. My Family Rules Enjoy a video. What can you learn from this video? 1.Our growth needs rules. 我们的成长需要规则。 2.Nothing can be done without rules.无规矩不成方圆。 3.A nation has its rule and a family also has one! 国有国法，家有家规！ 4. Correct the article. “改” Peer-evaluation check list Yes No 1. Can you picture the experience the writer wrote about? 2. Does it have a correct structure? 3. Are there any spelling mistakes and punctuation errors? 4. Are the verbs in proper tenses? 5. Does it include all the information required? Exchange your articles, evaluate it and then help each other correct them. 交换文章，先做出评价然后互相帮助修改。 写作训练三升入九年级之后，你的学习压力越来越大，你有没有和父母就周末能否外出产生争执？请根据表格中所给的信息，写一篇英语短文。 父母的观点 你的观点 在家复习功课 放松自己 好好休息 …… 帮助父母做家务 …… 　要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2．必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥；3．文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4．词数：100词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 I often argue with my parents about whether teenagers should go out on weekends after I stepped into Grade 9. My parents think that teenagers should stay at home to go over their lessons.Teenagers should also have enough time to have a good rest on weekends.Also，teenagers are supposed to help their parents do some housework.In my opinion，we teenagers need to go out with our friends for fun_ so that we can relax ourselves after a busy week.And we can share ideas with each other.What's more，we can also take some _exercise together to keep healthy.So I think teenagers should be allowed to go out on weekends. 1.Polish your passage. 2.Talk about your home rules with your classmates and exchange your views. Homework 29 Lavf58.20.100 $