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05.咨询信
[体裁阐述] 询问信主要用于询问与活动、广告及安排相关的具体信息。
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1.Delighted/ Thrilled/ Overjoyed to learn/ know that you ..., I am writing to make some inquiries about ../ I am wondering if you could provide me some specific/ relevant information about…
获悉/得知你.,我写信是想向您询问一些相关的问题/我想知道您是否能够提供一些关于…的信息。
2.Knowing/ Learning that…I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding / concerning…我写信想看看您是否能提供一些关于……的具体信息。
3. The questions I need to consult are listed as follows. 我需要咨询的问题如下。
4.I've seen your advertisement on the Internet, and I'd like to know something more about your online English course. 我在网上看到了你们的广告,我想了解更多关于你们在线英语课程的信息。
5. I'm more than delighted to join in the competition to be held in our school. However, I feel puzzled about how to make preparations for it. So I'm writing to consult you about it.
我非常高兴能参加我们学校即将举行的比赛。然而,我对如何为此做准备感到困惑。所以我写信来咨询你。
6.Word came that our school will hold a class meeting related to Chinese traditions. Since this activity will be presented on the English website, I'd like to know whether you can offer me some guidance.
有消息说,我们学校将举行一次与中国传统有关的班会。由于这项活动将在英文网站上发布,我想知道您是否可以为我提供一些指导。
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1.To begin with, frankly speaking/ to be frank/ to be honest honestly speaking, I would like to know/ acquire ..(首先,坦率地说我想知道....)
2.In addition,/ Additionally,/Besides, I would be extremely grateful if you could inform me../ I would appreciate it if you could inform me…(此外,如果您能告诉我...,我将不胜感激。)
3.Last but not least, as far as I'm concerned , it is not clear to me..(最后但并非最不重要的是,就我而言,我不清楚..)
4. Another point I am not certain about is… 我还不确定的另外一点是……
5 I’d also like some help / information on… 我还想知道一些有关……的帮助/信息。
6. The questions I need answering are listed as follows… 下列是我想咨询的问题。
7.I have no idea which traditional Chinese food is more popular among students like you. I wonder if you could provide some advice for me. 我不知道哪种中国传统食物在像你这样的学生中更受欢迎。我想知道你能不能给我一些建议。
8.I'd like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.
我想知道这门课程要付多少钱,住宿是否包括在内
9.I'd be grateful if you could let me know / I would appreciate it if you could inform me of sth/if there are any special requirements for the course in advance.
如果你能提前告诉我这门课程有什么特殊要求,我将不胜感激。
10.At present, I have difficulty in choosing from a wide range of choices. I'd be more than happy if you have any other suggestions. 目前,我很难从各种各样的选择中做出选择。如果你还有其他建议,我会非常高兴的。
11.Could you be so kind as to inform me of the time arrangement for the course? 你能告诉我课程的时间安排吗?
12.If there is anything else that needs special attention, please inform me at your convenience.
如果还有什么需要特别注意的,请在方便的时候通知我。
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1.I would appreciate it if you could give me some conductive advice/ put forward some practical proposals in detail. (如果你能详细地给我解释一下这些问题,我会很感激的。
2. I would appreciate it if you could answer my questions/ reply to me at your earliest convenience. Best wishes! /如果您能尽快回答我的问题,我将不胜感激。最美好的祝福!)
3.Could you be so kind as to send me some…on the above-mentioned aspects?能否针对上述问题寄些相关的…给我?
4.Thank you for your kindness and your timely attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.谢谢您的善意,对于这封信的及时关注我将不胜感激。
5.I’m looking forward to / eagerly waiting for a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.我盼望着您尽早回复。
6.I would greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience. /Your prompt response would be greatly appreciated.请在方便的时候尽早回复,我将不胜感激/非常感谢您的及时回复。。
7. Thank you so much for taking the time to respond to my questions above and I’m look forward to hearing from you soon. 非常感谢您抽出时间回答我的上述问题,我期待着很快收到您的来信。
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Dear----,
I am …(自我介绍). Having read …(信息来源) ,. I feel interested and want to join in/participate in/get involved in…(活动). I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with some specific information regarding/concerning…(要询问的内容). The questions I need to consult are listed as follows.
To begin with, could you be so kind to tell me…(第一个问)?Besides/in addition/additionally, I would also like to know.. (第二个问题). Last but not least , I wonder…(第三个问题) 。
Thank you for your kindness, and your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
典题实战
(2021·全国甲卷改编)假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友克里斯(Chris),向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:1.阐明写信事由;2.征求建议;3.表示感谢。注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Chris,
How are you doing recently? Our school will hold a class meeting themed traditional Chinese culture, which will be showed on the English website, so I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
As we all know, China has abundant and unique traditional cultures, including tea culture, Peking opera, Chinese calligraphy, etc. Therefore, it is difficult for me to decide which aspects are more popular among foreigners. I hope you can tell me your preferences. With your passion for traditional Chinese culture, I believe you can help me out.
I would appreciate it if you could share your opinion with me. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
2.你校英文报将增设主题为“讲好中国故事”的栏目,你是栏目负责人李华,请你给外教Kate写邮件咨询她对栏目的建议。内容包括:1. 介绍设想;2. 咨询建议。
Dear Kate,
I hope this email finds you well.I am Li Hua, the person in charge of the school English newspaper’s new column “Sharing Chinese Stories”. I am writing to seek your advice on this column.
The column will share China's history, culture, science and technology, education and other topics in the form of short stories, to make China voice better heard. How do you think we can better tell Chinese stories to our exchange students? Plus we find ourselves in a dilemma on how to attract more readers.We are also wondering if there is any better way to improve the quality and impact of our program.
We would appreciate it if you could give us some advice of value. Your favorable reply will be highly expected.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3.假设你是红星中学高二学生李华,当你得知你校和另外一所国际学校计划共同筹办一场“最美中国”现场书画比赛,号召书画爱好者踊跃参加,你有意参加此次活动,请你给组委会用英文写封咨询信,内容包括:
1.参赛作品种类 2.是否自备书画工具 3.其他需要询问的内容
Dear Sir/Madam,
I heard that our school and another international school planed to jointly organize a “most beautiful China” live calligraphy and painting competition. Most of the students think highly of this live painting competition, which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art. I also want to participate in it. I am writing to ask about the information.
First, I want to know the different kinds of the painting entries. Second, I would like to know whether we should take the painting tools with us. Last but not least, I want to know when the results will be announced.
I would appreciate it if you can offer me some relevant information.
4. [2025·宁波十校高三联考]假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习。你对当地一个社区在网上发布的志愿者招募信息十分感兴趣,于是给该社区写信,内容包括:
1.说明报名原因; 2.询问相关情况; 3.表达你的期待。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Fascinated by your volunteer recruitment advertisement online, I'm writing to extend my intense anticipation to participate and enquire about some relevant information.
Long for fitting in with the local society and extending my abilities to help others, I find this work exactly caters to my expectations. I wonder if you could inform me about detailed arrangements, thus guaranteeing appropriate preparations for the work in advance. Hopefully, I could be given the golden opportunity to get involved in your program and enrich my experience.
I'm grateful for your attention and looking forward to your prompt reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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