Unit3 夯基赋能·直击高考之读后续写-【优学精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第二册教用课件(人教版)

夯基赋能·直击高考之读后续写 1 自然场景往往指的是故事发生的时间、地点、环境、气候及景物。在读后续写中，自然场景描写最主要的功能是描绘出人物活动或故事发生的背景、反应人物心情、烘托气氛并推动故事情节的发展。自然场景描写通常包括美好的自然场景描写及恶劣的自然场景描写。 印度小男孩赢得寄宿家庭的心 返回首页 1．“美好的自然场景”描写 (1)阳光、蓝天、白云 *The sky was cloudless. The sunshine was bright.　天空万里无云，阳光明媚。 *When I drew the curtains back, the warm sunlight flooded in. 当我拉开窗帘时，温暖的阳光照了进来。 返回首页 *When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin.　沐浴在阳光下，我感觉琥珀般的阳光亲吻着我的每一寸肌肤。 *I was immediately impressed by the blue sky with thick silver lining clouds drifting around. 镶着银边的云朵漂浮在碧空中，我立刻被此景所打动。 返回首页 (2)花、鸟、草、风 *There are many kinds of flowers blooming in the corner of the park, even in autumn. I smell the fresh scent with cool breeze. How sweet! 即使是在秋天，公园的角落里也开着各种各样的花。我闻到随着凉爽的微风而来的清新香气。多么美好啊！ 返回首页 *Surrounded by nature's orchestra, you could almost taste the fresh air, filled with the sweet scent of blossoming flowers, and hear the sound of chirping birds echoing through the air. 置身于大自然的交响乐中，你几乎能感受到充满盛开花朵的甜蜜香气，并能听到在空中回荡的鸟儿鸣叫的声音。 *The grass/grassland flowed like a sea of green over the hill, dotted with the purple flowers. 草地像一片绿色的海洋在山上流淌，点缀着紫色的花朵。 返回首页 *The wind, soft and cold, danced through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.　柔和而凉爽的风在树枝间翩翩起舞，吹动着散布在山坡上的灌木丛。 返回首页 (3)山水风景 *As the small boat moved gently along the river, he was left speechless by the mountains being silently reflected in the water. 小船缓缓地沿着江面移动，群山静静地倒映在水中，他激动得说不出话来。 *He passed milky white waterfalls and mountains in many shades of blue. 他经过了乳白色的瀑布和深浅不一的蓝色山脉。 返回首页 *When he saw the mists rising from the river and the soft clouds surrounding the mountain tops, he was reduced to tears. 当他看到河里升起的薄雾和山顶周围的柔软的白云时，他流下了眼泪。 *From where he stood, he could see different shades of green. 从他站的地方，他可以看到深浅不一的绿色。 返回首页 2. “恶劣的自然场景”描写 (1)风、雨 *It was actually very calm，but she could see that the wind was picking up.The branches of the trees were swinging and the garbage bin had tipped over.　看似很平静，但她看得出来风越来越大。树枝在摇摆，垃圾桶也倒了。 返回首页 *Something dreadful had happened. The wind was shaking the house, rattling the windows, banging a piece of iron on the roof and making her bed tremble. 可怕的一幕发生了。风把房子吹得摇摇晃晃的，震得窗户咯咯作响，一块铁在屋顶上砰砰作响，她的床也在颤抖。 *The frosty air blew in, cutting like knife. 冷风吹来，像刀割一样。 返回首页 *The frigid gusts of wind stung their faces. 一阵阵寒风刺痛着他们的脸颊。 *On that dark and stormy night, the waves were crashing and the winds were howling. 在那个漆黑的暴风雨之夜，海浪狂卷，大风呼啸。 *Rain started to come down hard，making it almost impossible to see the trees in her front yard through the window.　雨下得很大，透过窗户，她几乎看不到前院里的树。 返回首页 *It seemed that it would rain forever. The water would rise inch by inch, covering the grass, trees and even houses. 雨好像不会停了。河水会一寸一寸地上涨，淹没草地、树木甚至房屋。 *The most violent storm appeared to approach rapidly.　最猛烈的暴风雨似乎很快就要来了。 *The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against the house. 大雨倾盆而下，溪流涌起，狂风吹着房子。 返回首页 (2)云、雪 *Over the valley，the grey clouds marched in from the ocean. They piled in together and settled low over the west. 在山谷上空，从海洋方向飘来灰色的云。它们慢慢累积，低低地挂在西边的天空。 *The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds.　乌云密布，黑云压顶。 返回首页 *The sky was overcast, and the whole world seemed to be enveloped in a huge gray quilt. 天空乌云密布，整个世界仿佛被一条巨大的灰色被子包裹着。 *Clouds gathered, driven by the rising wind. 风越来越大，云聚集在一起。 *Dark clouds were indeed forming. And they seemed to be moving quickly across the sky. 乌云正在积聚，它们似乎正在天空中快速移动。 返回首页 *It was snowing and cold. Nobody would be coming past. There was no phone signal. 雪一直下，天气非常冷。没有人会经过。也没有电话信号。 *Towards noon，there had come the snow, driven along the street by the northwest wind, and whitening the roofs and sidewalks. 快到中午的时候，已经下起了雪，被西北风吹得沿着街道飘来，把屋顶和人行道都染白了。 *It was a heavy snowfall, in great flakes and it lay, thick.　大雪纷飞，堆积在地上，厚厚的一层。 返回首页 (3)洪水 *A swollen river had flooded the road. 河水涨起来了，淹没了道路。 *Half way across the road，the rushing water grabbed hold of his vehicle, sweeping it off the road.　刚走过一半，湍急的水流就困住了他的车，并把他的车冲出了路面。 *With the water rising quickly, he was shaken with fear.　水涨得很快，他吓得浑身发抖。 返回首页 (4)冷、热 *I couldn't feel my hands or my toes from the cold.　我的手和脚趾都冻得失去了知觉。 *It had been a bitterly cold day, and a cutting wind had blown for some time. 那是一个非常冷的日子，刺骨的风不停地吹。 *The air that has been hot all day becomes heavy. It hangs over the trees, presses the heads of the flowers to the ground, and sits on my shoulders.　天气闷热，感觉沉甸甸地挂在树上，花也抬不起来头，压在我的肩膀上。 返回首页 阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 [1]When Devon's sister, Lil, went off to college, Devon's stomach felt all twisty. Then Mom said that Kapil, a high-school student from India, would be staying in their house and living in Lil's room, for they were the host family. The piece of news made Devon's stomach feel worse, as he missed his sister so much. “What if I can't understand him？” Devon asked. “He speaks English well，” Mom said. 返回首页 [2]On Kapil's first day, he exchanged some small talk with Devon before disappearing into his new room. Lil's room, Devon reminded himself. As days went on, Kapil started spending more time in the rest of the house. He was in the kitchen a lot, whose cooking always filled the air with steam and spice that made Devon's eyes water. “Smells wonderful！” Mom exclaimed. When Lil called a few days later, Devon told her about Kapil's cooking. “Lucky! I love Indian food！” Lil said. “But it seems too spicy for me，” replied Devon. 返回首页 [3] One day, Mom had to work late. “Kapil will stay with you until I get home，” she explained. Devon's stomach twisted. Lil had always stayed with him when Mom had to work late. 返回首页 [4]When Devon got home from school, Kapil greeted him at the door. “Would you like a snack？” Kapil asked. Devon shrugged. Lil and he used to cook together after school, which they called “making messes”. Kapil opened the refrigerator. “How about a yogurt？” “I had one at breakfast，” responded Devon in a cold voice. Kapil opened a cupboard and smiled. “Wait here.” He returned with a package. “I'll cook an Indian snack，” he announced. Kapil pulled 返回首页 out the thin small cracker (饼干), poured oil into a pan and fried the cracker. Then the kitchen was filled with spicy smells. After a while, Kapil handed Devon a plate with the sizzling pancake on it. “Papadum (印度薄饼)，” he said. “Made from bean flour.” 注意：续写词数应为150个左右。 返回首页 Devon's stomach twisted again.___________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ Looking at the empty plate, Devon said to Kapil, “Let's make messes！”___________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 返回首页 【When & Where】 [1]Then Mom said that Kapil, a high-school student from India, would be staying in their house and living in Lil's room, for they were the ____________. [2]On Kapil's first day, he exchanged some small talk with Devon before disappearing into _____________. [3] One day, Mom had to __________． [4]When Devon _____________________,Kapil greeted him at the door. 一审——审要素 host family his new room work late got home from school 返回首页 【Who】 Devon, Lil(Devon's sister)，______(a high-school student from India) 【What & Why】 [1]“What if I _________________ him？” Devon asked. “He speaks English well，” Mom said. [2]When Lil _______ a few days later, Devon told her about Kapil's cooking. “Lucky! I love Indian food！” Lil said. “But it seems __________ for me，” replied Devon. Kapil can't understand called too spicy 返回首页 [4]“I'll cook an _____________，” he announced. Kapil pulled out the thin small cracker, poured oil into a pan and fried the cracker. [4]After a while, Kapil handed Devon ________ with the sizzling pancake on it. “Papadum，” he said. “Made from bean flour.” Indian snack a plate 返回首页 【How】 [1]When Devon's sister, Lil, went off to college, Devon's stomach felt all _______． [1]The piece of news made Devon‘s stomach feel ________，as he _______ his sister so much. [3]Devon's stomach ________. [4]“I had one at breakfast，” responded Devon ______________． twisty worse missed twisted in a cold voice 返回首页 Having Kapil around turned out to be a ________________________ time. 二定——定主题：正能量原则 wonderful and enjoyable 返回首页 根据第一段段首句可知，下文续写内容为： [Question 1] What did Devon do? [Answer] __________________________________________________ [Question 2] How did Devon feel? [Answer] ________________________________________________ [Question 3] What happened at last？(和第二段段首句衔接) [Answer] ___________________________________________ 三构思——QA模式：构思每段三个微情节 He was hesitant but decided to take a small bite. He enjoyed the papadum, which made Kapil happy. Devon finished the whole plate of papadum. 返回首页 根据第二段段首句可知，下文续写内容为： [Question 1] What did Devon do? [Answer] _________________________________ [Question 2] What did they do and feel then? [Answer] _______________________________________ [Question 3] What moral would the story express? [Answer] ________________________________________________ _______________________________________ He explained how to make messes. They had a good time cooking together. Having Kapil around turns out to be a wonderful and enjoyable time while Lil was away. 返回首页 特别关注语言协同： 模仿原文的亮点词汇、语法结构和亮点句型。 Devon's stomach twisted again.____________________________ ___________________________________________________________ Looking at the empty plate, Devon said to Kapil, “Let's make messes！”__________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 四成文——梳理思路，完成正文 返回首页 One possible version： Devon's stomach twisted again. He stared at the strange-looking papadum, hesitant to take a bite. But Kapil's expectant look encouraged him to take a small bite.(微情节一：德文的心理活动) To his surprise, the flavors burst in his mouth in a pleasant way. It was spicy but also had a unique taste that he never experienced before. 返回首页 Devon couldn't help taking another bite and then another.“Wow, it is amazing！” Devon exclaimed, his eyes lighting up.(微情节二：德文尝试后感到惊喜) Kapil grinned from ear to ear, happy to see Devon enjoying his cooking. Before long, Devon had finished the whole plate of papadum.(微情节三：卡皮尔的反应) 返回首页 Looking at the empty plate, Devon said to Kapil, “Let's make messes！” Then Devon explained what he and Lil did in the past.(微情节一：德文向卡皮尔发出邀请) Kapil's face instantly lit up with a wide, beaming smile that reached his eyes. Their laughter filled the kitchen as they embarked on a cooking adventure together. They spent the rest of the evening sharing stories and creating a mix of new and exciting snacks.(微情节二：德文和卡皮尔开始厨房冒险) Devon realized that having Kapil around wasn't so bad after all. In fact, it might just turn out to be a wonderful and enjoyable time with him while Lil was away.(微情节三：德文的感悟) 返回首页 (2023·全国甲卷完形填空)Many years ago, I bought a house in the Garfagnana, where we still go every summer. The first time we stayed there, we heard the chug-chug-chug of a motorbike making its way down the hill toward us. It was a neighbor called Mario, coming to bring us a box containing some tomatoes and a bottle of wine. It was a very nice gesture for him to make. But when we looked at the tomatoes, 返回首页 返回首页 返回首页 　背铺灰语料，积续写基石 返回首页 [话题] 人与自我——人生感悟——透过表面，感受内在 [内容概要] 多年前作者在加尔法尼亚纳购房，邻居马里奥送来了其貌不扬的西红柿和葡萄酒，味美如儿时，由此感悟到不要以貌取“物”。 返回首页 [注释] ①心理描写 ②作者感悟到不要以貌取“物” ③作者感受到加尔法尼亚纳的味道 返回首页 $