09-Unit 5 夯基赋能·直击高考之读后续写-【优学精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册教用课件(人教版)

该高中英语课件聚焦读后续写，核心知识点涵盖场景、动作、心理、有效对话及修辞等写作手法。课堂从回读原文、利用“拉平效应”模仿语言导入，通过分类讲解各手法功能（如场景描写提供背景、动作描写推动情节），再以练习题巩固，构建“理论-实例”学习支架，帮助学生实现续写与原文的连贯一致。 其亮点在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，通过表格清晰分类修辞等手法，结合实例辨析题（如辨别“It was sunny...refreshed”含场景与心理描写），理论联系实际。采用“讲解-练习”模式，学生能提升语言模仿与运用能力，教师可借助结构化内容高效开展教学，助力学生写出连贯生动的续写文本。

UNIT 5 LANGUAGES AROUND THE WORLD 夯基赋能·直击高考之读后续写 1 为了确保所写内容和语言与原文的连贯性和一致性，需要回读原文，利用“拉平效应”， 创造性地模仿和使用原文中的语言。在续写的语篇中，适当使用原文的写作手法，能有效地提高续写文本和原文的连贯性和一致性。写作手法包括： 2 ①场景描写 场景描写指的是描写特定的时间与地点内的人物活动和环境细节。场景描写包括事情发生的时间及地点、自然环境及社会场景等。场景描写可以充当背景信息，提供人、物、事的具体设定。其次，场景描写可以表达人物的感情、情绪，可以随着情节的发展有所变化，甚至可以提示、推动情节的发展，增强语篇的代入感 ②动作描写 动作描写指的是描写人物在具体情况下的行为举止，是情节发展的具体体现。恰到好处的动作描写不仅可以塑造生动的人物形象，还可以反映人物的情感态度及心理变化，并最终反映人物的性格特点及思想品质 3 ③心理描写 心理描写指的是描写人物在具体情况下的看法、感受、情感及心理活动，并由此反映人物的性格特点及思想品质。心理描写除了对心理的直接描写，还可以结合动作描写及场景描写，共同构建有意义、紧凑的语篇 ④有效对话 有效对话是记叙文中塑造人物的一个重要手段。对话的有效性首先需要符合人物设定，这样的对话不仅能够有效地推动情节的发展，而且能够增加叙述的生动性。此外，对话语言也需要符合记叙文的语言特点——生活化、简单化及去书面化 续表 4 ⑤修辞 修辞是增加语言生动性的最佳手段。恰当的修辞可以引起共鸣，使抽象的情境具体化。常见的修辞手法有：明喻、暗喻、拟人、夸张、排比 续表 5 请辨别以下句子所包含的写作手法，并用上述的①②③④⑤为其选择写作手法（有的句子可多选）。 1.I spotted my neighbor, Monica, working in her garden one day when I returned home from school.____ 2.It was sunny, and the smell of cut grass made me feel refreshed.______ 3.I popped my head over the fence, and Monica and I got talking.____ ② ①③ ② 6 4.“I've seen you're very good at using a lawn mower （割草机） and gardening tools,” Monica said. “There's a hedge （树篱） growing over the pathway near here. It's so overgrown that it becomes a headache for the passers-by. I was planning to cut it back myself. Would you like to help out?”____ ④ 5.We wheeled Monica's garbage can down to the hedge, which the community council was responsible for. All three of us cut it with shears （大剪刀） until a trouble-free pathway came in sight.____ ② 7 6.Mr. Brown, a wheelchair user, was grateful that he didn't have to make a detour （绕行） any more to pass the hedge.____ ③ 7.Encouraged by his words, I suggested doing more for our community, to make it a better place.When we first started, we just made the best of the equipment we already had in my parents' garage. But as time went on, donations came in from the local community. Our garage got filled up quickly with brushes, gardening tools, and even donated power tools like leaf blowers. With everything ready, our first project was to clean the beautiful park near our houses, which looked a bit run-down.________ ①②③ 8 8.Ivan was in charge of painting the fence around, Monica cleared the lawn with a leaf blower, and I was responsible for repairing the benches where our neighbors usually sat at their leisure.________ ①②⑤ 9.After two weeks' hard work, we felt stunned when stepping back and appreciating the clean and brand new small park.____ 10.My heart swelled with pride because our efforts paid off.____ ③ ③ 9 $