08-Unit 5 Period 5 Writing-【优学精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册教用课件(人教版)

该高中英语课件围绕“语言学习”主题，聚焦应用文写作（语言学习问题的博客）和场景微续写（舞台上的紧张时刻），通过典题呈现、审题谋篇、遣词造句、衔接成篇及实战演练，搭建从基础审题到独立写作的学习支架，助力学生掌握英语写作方法。 其亮点在于融合单元词汇句式（如native, refer to）与结构化写作指导，通过“审题-词汇-句式-靓化表达”步骤提升语言能力，如用现在分词改写句子优化表达；微续写积累紧张场景短语（heart racing, frozen in place）和金句，培养思维品质。学生能提升写作逻辑与细节描写能力，教师可直接使用支架素材高效教学。

UNIT 5 LANGUAGES AROUND THE WORLD 1 Period 5 Writing 主题引领 情境写作 2 1 写作一 应用文写作（语言学习问题的博客） 2 写作二 场景微续写（舞台上的紧张时刻） 3 PART 01 写作一 应用文写作（语言学习问题的博客） 4 假定你是李华,你在网上看到一些网友发帖子询问关于如何学习英语的问题。请你写一篇英语博客,就如何学习英语提出一些实用建议。要点包括: 1.回复他们的询问; 2.给出建议:使用APP、多查阅并阅读英语文章、寻找以英语为母语的学习伙伴; 3.给予鼓励。 注意:写作词数应为80个左右。 返回导航 5 &1& 审题谋篇 返回导航 6 &2& 遣词造句 巧妙对接单元词汇 1._______ adj. 出生地的;本地的 2.________ 查阅 3.________ 放弃 4._____________ 观点 5.__________________ 在……方面有困难 6.___________ n. 词汇 native refer to give up point of view have trouble with... vocabulary 返回导航 7 巧用单元句式、语法 ［第一段］ 回复帖子 1.从网上的帖子中,我了解到你们在学习英语方面有困难。我写这篇博客是为了给大家一些建议。（省略that的宾语从句） From posts on the Internet, I've learnt __________________________ ___________________. I am writing the blog to offer you some tips. （that） you have trouble with English learning 返回导航 8 ［第二段］ 给出方法、建议 2.在我看来,你们可以借助一些在线应用程序来提高英语口语。 ______________________, you can improve your spoken English with the help of some online APPs. From my point of view 3.此外,通过查阅并阅读英语文章,你们可以扩大词汇量,更好地理解词语。 Besides, _______________________________________, you can ______________________ and better understand it. by referring to and reading English articles enlarge your vocabulary 返回导航 9 4.最后但同样重要的是,找一个以英语为母语的学习伙伴来练习是明智之举,通过那样你就可以提升你的口语交际能力。 Last but not least, ___________________________________________ __________,through which you can improve your communication skills. it is wise to find a native English study partner to practise 返回导航 10 ［第三段］ 给予鼓励 5.正如一句老话所说,熟能生巧。只要你们一直努力,永不放弃,你们总有一天会成功的。 Just as an old saying goes, practice makes perfect. ___________________________________________, you will be successful one day. As long as you keep trying and never give up 返回导航 11 靓化表达促提升 6.用现在分词短语作状语改写句1 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Learning that you have trouble with English learning from posts on the Internet, I am writing the blog to offer you some tips. 7.用“not only...but also...”改写句3 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Besides, by referring to and reading English articles, you can not only enlarge your vocabulary, but also better understand it. 返回导航 12 &3& 衔接成篇 ___________________________________________________________ One possible version: Learning that you have trouble with English learning from posts on the Internet, I am writing the blog to offer you some tips. 返回导航 13 From my point of view, you can improve your spoken English with the help of some online APPs. Besides, by referring to and reading English articles, you can not only enlarge your vocabulary, but also better understand it. Last but not least, it is wise to find a native English study partner to practise, through which you can improve your communication skills. Just as an old saying goes, practice makes perfect. As long as you keep trying and never give up, you will be successful one day. 返回导航 14 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友迈克（Mike）正在学习汉语，他在博客中询问你如何提高汉语水平。请你用英语给他回帖，就如何提高汉语水平向他提出建议，内容包括： 1.多听、多说汉语； 2.每周看中国电影和电视剧； 3.参加汉语听写比赛以及唱中文歌曲。 返回导航 15 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________ One possible version: Dear Mike， I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble with Chinese learning. My suggestions are as follows. 返回导航 16 To begin with, I suggest that you should practise listening to and speaking Chinese as often as possible. What's more, it's a good idea to watch a couple of Chinese films or TV series every week. Thirdly, I think you can join in some activities which are beneficial to you， such as Chinese dictation competitions and singing Chinese songs. 返回导航 17 As long as you keep up practicing, you will make great progress in Chinese. I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning Chinese. Yours， Li Hua 返回导航 第一段回复帖子 1.I have learnt that you have some difficulty/trouble with English pronunciation. 我了解到你在英语发音方面有些困难。 2.I'm glad to read your blog asking for my advice on how to improve English listening skills. 我很高兴读了你向我征求关于如何提高英语听力技能建议的博客。 返回导航 19 第二段给出方法、建议 1.First of all, I think we should memorize as many words as possible, especially their pronunciation. 首先，我认为我们应该记住尽可能多的单词，尤其是它们的发音。 2.What's more, we can also do some listening exercises. 此外，我们还可以做一些听力练习。 3.Keeping a diary is an effective way to improve your writing skills. 写日记是提高写作水平的一个有效方法。 续表 返回导航 20 第三段给予鼓励或祝愿 1.Don't worry if you have any trouble （in） studying English, and just take your time. 如果你在学习英语的过程中遇到困难，不要着急，慢慢来。 2.Good luck with your English learning! Hope all your hard work will pay off soon！ 祝你在英语学习方面好运！希望你所有的努力都能很快得到回报！ 续表 返回导航 21 第三段给予鼓励或祝愿 3.I wish your hard work a good result， and I will be quite proud of your achievement. 祝你的努力学习能取得好成绩，我会为你的成绩感到骄傲。 续表 返回导航 22 PART 02 写作二 场景微续写（舞台上的紧张时刻） 23 词汇积累 ［情感描写］ attitude， despite， ups and downs， regard， appreciate， point of view ［动作描写］ refer to， major， struggle， beg， demand， relate to 返回导航 24 佳句积累 ［心理描写］ The words felt strange on my tongue, and the grammar would not stay in my head. ［情感描写］ It felt like my brain had doubled in size. ［对比］I used to get high marks in English， but now I'm having a lot of trouble with my listening. 续表 返回导航 25 佳句积累 ［排比］ If I'm talking to a close friend， I can...But if I'm talking to someone who isn't very close to me，I must...If I'm talking to someone senior to me， then I should... ［主旨升华］One language sets you in a corridor for life. Two languages open every door along the way. 续表 返回导航 26 ［场景呈现］ 终于轮到我了。当我站在舞台上时，我能感觉到我的心狂跳，手掌出汗。我紧张得大脑一片空白。我想逃跑，但我的腿太虚弱了，动不了。尽管不被允许，我还是试图去查阅我的笔记。我的手抖得厉害，演讲稿从我手中滑落，掉到了地上。尽管夏天很热，我还是出了一身冷汗。“请帮帮我！”一个绝望的声音在我脑海中响起。 返回导航 27 Finally came my turn. 1.___________________（as引导时间状语从句）, I could feel my heart pounding wildly and my palms sweating. I was 2.____________________________________________（so...that...）. I wanted to run away, but my legs were too weak to move. 3.______________________________, even though it was not allowed. 4._________________________（独立主格结构）， the speech paper slipped out of my hand and fell to the floor. 5.______________________（介词短语作状语）, I broke into a cold sweat. “Please help me!” a voice of desperation ringing in my mind. As I stood on stage so nervous that my mind went completely blank I struggled to refer to my notes My hands shaking severely Despite the hot summer 返回导航 28 短语必记 1.heart racing 心跳加速 2.sweat pouring down汗如雨下 3.break out in a cold sweat突然冒出一身冷汗 4.hands shaking手在发抖 5.a lump in the throat喉咙哽咽 6.butterflies in the stomach紧张，忐忑不安 返回导航 29 短语必记 7.frozen in place僵住 8.be rooted to the spot定在原地 9.one's knees feel weak某人（吓得）膝盖发软 10.make one's hair stand on end 使某人毛骨悚然 11.have one's heart in one's mouth 某人的心提到嗓子眼 12.let out a scream of horror 发出惊声尖叫 续表 返回导航 30 必背金句 1.Her heart was racing as she stepped onto the stage, nervous about the crowd's reaction. 她踏上舞台时，心跳加速，担心观众的反应。 2.He could feel the cold sweat forming on his forehead as the deadline approached. 随着截止日期临近，他感到额头上冒冷汗。 续表 返回导航 31 必背金句 3.I was so nervous that my hands were shaking uncontrollably. 我紧张得双手不由自主地发抖。 4.Her stomach churned with anxiety as she waited for the test results. 她在等待测试结果时，胃里一阵阵翻滚，充满了焦虑。 续表 返回导航 32 必背金句 5.He stood frozen in place, unable to move a muscle as the terrifying figure approached. 当那个可怕的身影靠近时，他僵住了，动弹不得。 6.I could feel the butterflies in my stomach as I waited for the important phone call. 等待那通重要的电话时，我感到忐忑不安。 续表 返回导航 33 必背金句 7.Her voice trembled as she tried to explain, her fear almost overtaking her words. 她试图解释时，声音颤抖，恐惧几乎压过了她的话语。 8.He could hardly breathe, his mind racing with terrifying thoughts. 他几乎无法呼吸，脑中充满了可怕的想法。 续表 返回导航 34 $