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主题7和谐家庭与社区生活[2023:2018
1.Family-the Thing I Value the Most
There are many thing we should value in our lives.Th mos pre
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cious thing to me,of course,is my family.The reasons and my acts are as
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follows
①通过插入语of course直抒胸臆,强调自
To begin with,my family offers me warmth,which encouragesme
己最珍贵的东西是家人。
②which引导非限制性定语从句,具象化了
to go on whenever I meet problems.What's more,they teach me a lot and
家庭给予“我”的温暖。
help me build correct values.All these help me become a better person.
③地道习语put oneself in one's shoes(设身
I my daily life,I always put myself in my family members shoes.
处地地为某人着想)生动地诠释了作者在
For instance,I always take care of their feelings,like listening patiently
乎家人的感受。
when chatting with them.Also,I do housework with my parents whenever
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I have time.This not only helps create sweet memories for us,but also precious
build correct values建立正确的价值观
reduces their stress.
for instance例如
All in all,I really value my family,and I love each member in my
chat with和…聊天
family deeply.
reduce stress减轻压力
2.My Family Rules
As the ying goes,"As a couy s its lawsfamily aso need
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rules."The following are my family rules.
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①通过引用古谚语,自然引入家规主题,充
To begin with,not only do I have to be honest and friendly,but I also
分凸显了作者深厚的文化底蕴。
have to show my respect to others.Besides,it's my duty to share some
②Though引导让步状语从句,彰显规则的
housework and keep good communication with my parents.Both of them
弹性,体现家庭教育的智慧。
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are very important to help build a loving family environment.What's more,
keep good communication with与…保持
I'm supposed to exercise for half an hour every day to keep fit.Thoug
良好的沟通
my family rules seem to be strict,I'm allowed to arrange my time by seem to do sth.似乎/好像做某事
myself on weekends.Therefore,I can play with my friends or hang out to
,arrange time安排时间
breathe fresh air呼吸新鲜空气
breathe fresh air outside on weekends.
pass down from generation to generation代代
In my opinion,family rules should be passed down from generation
to generation because they can carry the family's spirit and wisdom to the
If'sone's duty to do sth.做某事是某人的
责任。
young.All in all,my family rules are great and they make it possible for
make it-+ad.+for sb.to do sth.使做某事对
me to live in such a wonderful family.
某人来说是…的
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3.Harmonious Neighborhood Relationships
Enjoynmou neighbrhnd isn of traditional
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virtues.
Icannot be denied that my neighbor has truly put this into
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①动名词短语作主语,将抽象美德转化为
practice through her own actions.
具体行动,呼应标题,奠定温暖基调。
My neighbor was a teacher who was warm-hearted.On a windy after-
②使用It cannot be denied that..句型,表示
noon,I came back home and knocked at the door many times,but no one
“不可否认,…”,强调了邻居对美德的
践行,说服力强。
answered.After hearing my knock,she asked me what happened and I
目As soon as引导时间状语从句,凸显提供
told her my problem.She lent her phone to me to give my mother a call,
帮助的及时性,使人物形象立体化。
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after myself for several days because my father was away on business.
harmonious neighborhood和谐邻里,和谐
社区
y neighbor heard the she ffered to take ce of me
,traditional virtues传统美德
When you give a rose,you leave fragrance in your hand.I will also put..into practice将.…付诸实践
be away on business出差
show kindness to people around me just like my neighbor.
主题8日常体育活动,体育精神[2025]
1.My Sports
The advantages that exercise brings to us are beyond our imagina-
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tion.First of all,sports can make us stronger,more confident and relaxed.
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Moreover,it can help to develop our overal ability.ee
①点明主题,说明运动对学生的重要性。
it's+ad.+for sb.to do sth.和so that句式的
necessary for us students to take exercise regularly so that we can have a
使用也为文章增添了亮点。
healthy body and mind.
②as long as引导的条件状语从句很好地为
To encourage students to take an active part in sports,schools are文章结尾,再次强调坚持运动的必要性。
expected to take some measures.To start with,schools should offer☐亮点词句
more special PE courses,like swimming lessons,.so that students can beyond one'simagination超乎某人的想象
develop one's overall ability发展某人的综合
choose their favorite sports according to their interests.Additionally,
能力
schools can hold great sports events that include different sports to fire
take an active part in积极参加
the students'passion for sports and help them realize that sports can be
take measures采取措施
interesting,too.
to start with首先,第一
All inall,onas you stick to doing sports,you will meet your
hold great sports events举办大型体育赛事
self better.But remember to keep yourself safe when exercising.
fire one's passion for sth.,点燃某人对某事的
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