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主题4自我认识,自我管理,自我提升2017
1.一封自荐信
Dear Sir or Madam,
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I'm Li Hua.I am writing to sign up as a volunteer of the International
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Cultural Exchange Activity.I'm sure I have confidence in myself to do
O运用高级短语have a good command of
this job well.
(精通,熟练掌握)和communicate fluently
(流利地沟通)替代简单表达,充分展现语
Firstly,I have a good knowledge of traditional Chinese history and
言能力。
culture.Also,I'm pretty interested in spreading Chinese culture.For
②who引导定语从句,具体阐明教师职责,
example,I often talk about the customs of traditional Chinese festivals with
使梦想更具体、形象;巧用高级表达regard
several foreign pen pals.In addition,I have a good command of English
.s,将志愿机会视为职业起点。
and I can communicate with foreigner in English fluently.Lastly,I have
③介词短语开头,丰富句式结构;过渡副词
always dreamed of being a teacher who teaches foreigners Chinese and I Meanwhile(与此同时)自然衔接参与活动
regard this chance as my start to become a little Chinese teacher.I'm sure I的双重意义,体现志愿服务的核心价值。
will not only teach them well but also make friends with them if I am picked.■亮点词句
By working as.avouter in the civy,hope I help our foreign have cfidene n对…有信心
friends know more about Chinese culture..Meanwhile,I wish to get useful]life have a good knowledge of精通,熟悉
skills while serving others.Please choose me to be an honorable volunteer.
be interested in对…感兴趣
Thank you for reading the letter!
regard..as..把…视作.
wish to do sth.希望做某事
Yours,
honorable volunteer光荣的志愿者
Li Hua
2.Self-management
Self-management is of great importance to us.In my opinion,I can
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manage myself well.Not only do I stick to a regular routine of going to
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bed and getting up early every day,but I have also developed a daily habit
ONot only置于句首引导部分倒装句,突出
作者的自律,语义连贯,表达高级。
of exercising for at least an hour.Besides,I'm able to organize my time
②用I hold a strong belief that..(我坚信)
well to achieve a good balance between study and break time.
句型表明作者提升自我的坚定信念,同时
To further improve my self-management skills,I plan to take some激励读者做出行动。
action.First of all,I will make a simple daily to-do list and complete it on
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time.Secondly,I intend to reward myself with small treats as a way to
regular routine规律的作息
achieve a balance between..and..在.…f和
motivate myself to achieve my goals.Last but not least,I will seek the
…之间取得平衡
support of my parents to remind me when I can't keep myself away intend to do sth.打算做某事
from something attractive.
reward sb.with sth.用某物奖励某人
All in all,self-management is of great importance to our personal
motivate sb.to do sth.激励某人做某事
growth.hold a strong belief that I will achieve great progress by impro
achieve one's goals实现某人的目标
seek the support of sb.寻求某人的支持
ving my self-management skills.
keep...away from..使…远离…
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3.A Shining Moment
How time flies!It's time to say goodbye to my junior high school life.
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Looking back,a shining moment stands out.
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I still remember that I gave an English speech in public and won a
①现在分词短语作状语,自然引出回忆,
stands out短语生动点题。
good prize last year.To prepare for the speech,I practiced carefully,
②so..tht..引导结果状语从句,生动刻画
recorded my voice and asked my English teacher for advice.She喜悦之情,感染力强。
encouraged me to practice hard and helped me with my pronunciation
③引用谚语(滴水穿石),权威印证论点,
增强说服力。
and body language.Finally,I gave the speech confidently on the stage.
④用隐喻修辞(挑战即机遇)升华主旨,结
When my name was announced I was so excited that I couldn't stop
尾展望富有感召力。
jumping.
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This experience has taught me that effor leads to growth.Just as
announce.宣布
opportunity n.机会
the saying goes,"Constant dripping wears away the stone.Even small
stand out脱颖而出,突出
progress builds courage.Now I realize that challenging ourselves is the
prepare for为…做准备
ask sb.for advice向某人寻求建议
opportunity to shine.In high school,I look forward to taking part in more
encourage sb.to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
activities.Every challenge will be a chance to create new shining moments.
help sb.with sth.在某方面帮助某人
4.The Moment When I Realized My Own Growth
As far as I'm concemed,growth is happening all the time inou
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life as we are always experiencing things and then grow up.The first time I
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realized that I had grown up was when I learned to arrange my own study
①as引导原因状语从句,动态呈现成长的
本质,happening用词生动。
and life.
②过去分词短语Faced with(面对)作状语,
Till today,I can still clearly remember how terrible the beginning of
简洁地呈现了困境,有效地做好了背景
my Junior One was!Faced with a sudden increase in subjects I became
铺垫。
really anxious.However,every day after school,I just left my study
③as long as引导条件状语从句,简洁地提
炼出成长法则,有力地升华了文章主旨。
behind and played with my friends.When it was time to go to bed,I deeply
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regretted wasting my time.Having realized I would fall behind my
arrange.安排
classmates,I decided to arrange my time in detail.Since then,Ifol-all the time一直,总是
lowed it strictly and gradually I found great improvements in my study and become anxious变得焦虑
life
regret doing sth.后悔做过某事
decide to do sth.决定做某事
From my experience,I have learned that as long as we can reflect
in detail详细地
on ourselves from time to time and fix our problems in time,we will grow
reflect on反省
faster.
from time to time不时地,偶尔
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