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多彩、有意义的学校生活[222]
1.Activities During the 15-minute Break
At our school,we often have fun with different activities during the
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15-minute break.Some students enjoy skipping rope,whilepe
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①巧用对比连接词while,清晰对比两类活
fer kicking shuttlecock.You can also find students playing badminton or
动偏好,避免简单句堆砌。
table tennis.For a bit of fun,a few even play with hula hoops.All these
②Not only.but also..递进句型突出跳绳的
activities help us relax,relieve stress,and keep us healthy and strong.
两大优势,逻辑性强且富有说服力」
My favorite activity,without doubt,is skipping rope.Why?Not
③通过I real山y hope+宾语从句,强烈地传递
期望;运用地道表达make the most of提出倡
only is it fun and a little bit challenging,but it also makes me stronger.
议,搭配目的状语o relax.,建议具体且有感
Every time I skip rope,I feel energetic and happy inside.Best of all,it
helps me forget my worries for a while.
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skip rope跳绳
In short,these break-time activities are truly good for us.They help
kick shuttlecock踢毽子
us stay in a good mood and get ready for the next class.realy hope
relieve stress缓解压力
every student can find an activity they enjoy and make the most of this
stay in a good mood保持好心情
get ready for为…做好准备
short break to relax and feel refreshed.
make the most of充分利用
2.Colorful School Activities
During my junior high school life,I had the chance to participate in
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a variety of school activities,such as singing competitions and art festi-
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DHowever.表转折,引出令自己印象深刻的
vals.However,one event that truly left a lasting impression on me
运动会,衔接连贯;hat引导定语从句,修饰
was the yearly sports meeting.
evento
The sports meeting was an exciting event,with various competitions
②because引导原因状语从句,将体育竞技
升华为团队精神教育,立意升华。
taking place.Our class participated in the relay race.With the efforts of
③结尾用which引导非限制性定语从句,
the four runners,we managed to win the championship in the race.
展望未来。
Through this sports meeting,I not only learned valuable lessons but also■亮点词句
gained lots of joy.I firmly believe that such a sports meeting is highly
highlight n.最精彩的部分
participate in参与
meaningful because it reminds us of the importance of teamwork and the
a variety of各种各样的
spirit of pulling together to fight for goals.
leave a lasting impression on sb.给某人留下
In conclusion,the sports meeting was one of the highlights of my
深刻的印象
school life.m looking forward to participating in more activities in the
win the championship赢得冠军
remind sb.of sth.使某人想起某事
future,which will offer new chances for learning and personal develop-
in conclusion最后,总而言之
ment.
I firmly believe that..我坚信…
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3.给学弟学妹的一封信
Dear 8th-graders,
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How exeited I feeyho lifewth you buy
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and stressful,I still find the Junior Three life colorful and meaningful.
①用感叹句开篇,易引发读者共鸣
There is no denying that we have more homework to do every day.How-
②Though引导让步状语从句,展示初三生
ever,I always take part in various activities to enrich my life and improve
活既有忙碌和压力,也是多彩和有意义的。
my skills.In addition,the more challenging schoolwork has made me a
③because引导原因状语从句,直观揭示了
better learner.
To help you do well in Junior Three,I'd like to give you a few sugges-
微笑的心理价值,增强了建议的合理性。
tions.First of all,remmber tormilecause tishyo
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feel better about yourself.What's more,never put off what you should do in addition
today until tomorrow.Finish your tasks on time and prepare everything well
according to schedule依照计划时间
according to schedule.Lastly,try to kick off your bad habits,such as
kick off one's bad habits改掉某人的坏习惯
staying up late to play games and paying little attention to the basic
knowledge of every subject.
pay attention to注意
Wish you all the best.
There is no denying that.不可否认的是
Li Hui…
4.A Course that I Want My School to Offer
I'm glad that our school will have more after-school classes which can
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be helpful in making students interested in study and making our school life
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colorful.For me,I want the school to start a class named Computer Pro-
①s引导原因状语从句,简洁,点明个人规
gramming.
划与课程的关联,增强说服力
By learning programming,we can explore the mystery of some apps
②巧妙运用了make it+ad山.(+for sb.)+to
with people who share the commn interests with us.Thou this
do sth.句型与what引导的宾语从句,可见
作者扎实的语言基本功。
I wish to know about computer programming ahead of time as it's my
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dream major at university.In addition,I hope to learn how to make easy
computer programming计算机编程
mini programs to make our life easier.
explore the mystery of探索…的奥秘
And I have two suggestions that I would like to give to my teachers.
ahead of time提前
To begin with,I hope teachers can use some simple examples to make
dream major梦想专业
it easier for us to understand what we are going to learn.Besides,I
would like to do sth.想要做某事
believe it must be a good idea to hold programming competitions now and to begin with首先,第-
then.In this way,we can be encouraged to practice the knowledge we I believe it must be a good idea to...
have learned in real life.
一定是个好主意。
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