内容正文:
Our greatest weakness lies in giving up. The most certain way to succeed is always to try just one more time.
—Thomas Edison
我们最大的弱点在于放弃。成功的必然之路就是不断地重来一次。
——托马斯·爱迪生
Onwards and upwards
主题语境:人与自我——勇往直前、永不放弃的精神
UNIT 2
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Section Ⅳ
Writing—Writing about an experience
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于个人经历的文章,属于记叙文。此类文章主要介绍事件的原因、过程(包括人物、时间、经过等)以及结果。
Ⅰ.谨记写作范式
Ⅱ.积累话题素材
1.交代此次经历发生的时间、地点与相关人物
(1)交代时间的常用表达: one day、the other day、last week/month、a few days/weeks/months ago、“when I was...years old”、(a) long time ago、at six o'clock in the morning、at/on the weekend、by the end of last term、during the summer holiday、on Sunday morning等
(2)交代地点的常用表达:in one's office、on one's way to school、on one's way home、at the end of the street、at the foot of the mountain、at the airport等
(3)常用句型:
①Last week,an exchange student called...from...came to our school.
②Last weekend,our school invited a craftsman to teach us...
③In order to help him/her to know more about...,I prepared a series of activities.
2.推动情节发展(事情经过)
常用表达:then、suddenly、immediately、in addition、while、when、as、not...until...等
3.介绍经历的结果或谈自己的感想
(1)常用表达:at last、finally、luckily/fortunately、to one's surprise、feel tired/delighted...
(2)常用句型:
①Personally,I think that...
②What surprised/attracted/delighted/...us most was that...
③Through this meaningful/...activity,we learnt something that can't be learnt in class.
④He/She was very grateful for/appreciative of what I had done for him/her,and said he/she was deeply impressed with...
⑤While working,I realised...
⑥What an unforgettable experience!
假设你是李华,上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”的活动。请用英语为校英文报写一篇报道,分享你的本次经历。内容包括:
1.活动的过程;
2.收获与感想。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Step 1 审题谋篇·定框架
定人称
以第一人称为主
定时态
以一般过去时为主
定框架
第一段:交代时间、组织方、活动主题;
第二段:描述活动内容;
第三段:对本次活动的总体评价。
began with a lecture
Step 2 要点翻译·用佳句
1.上周末,我参加了由我们学校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”的活动。
Last weekend, I the “Getting to Know the Plants around Us” activity .
2.我们很高兴在黎明时分开始探索我们周围的植物世界的旅程。
We to explore the world of the plants around us.
3.本次活动以当地植物学家的讲座开始。
The activity by a local botanist.
participated in
organised by the Students' Union of our school
were delighted to start our journey at dawn
exist in this world
4.这位植物学家向我们介绍了各种植物的不同特性和用途。
The botanist taught us about of various plants.
[升级] 用定语从句合并句3和句4
5.然后我们在大自然中散步,观察和收集不同植物的样本。
We then went on a walk in nature
.
6.这些各种各样的植物生存在这个世界上。
These varieties of plants .
the different characteristics and uses
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plants.
to observe and collect samples of
different plants
7.我了解了用于医疗的植物。
I learnt about plants that are used .
8.我也了解了那些为动物提供食物和庇护的植物。
I also learnt about those plants that .
[升级] 用连词as well as连接句7和句8
for medical purposes
provide food and shelter for animals
I learnt about plants that are used for medical purposes as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.
9.我也对植物在维持我们的生态系统平衡中所起的作用有了更深的理解。
I also for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
10.总的来说,有这样一个宝贵的经历是值得的。
Overall,it was worthwhile .
gained a greater appreciation
having/to have such a valuable experience
Step 3 连句成篇·达美文
Last weekend, I participated in the “Getting to Know the Plants around Us” activity organised by the Students' Union of our school.We were delighted to start our journey at dawn to explore the world of the plants around us.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist,who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plants.We then went on a walk in nature to observe and collect samples of different plants.I learnt about plants that are used for medical purposes as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall,it was worthwhile having/to have such a valuable experience.
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