考前押题08 英语作文题（期末复习专项训练）高一英语上学期沪教版

考前押题08英语作文题（期末专项训练） 话题归纳·内容导航 话题1申请信 话题4建议信 话题2议论文 话题5表达想法 话题3投稿 话题6个人经历 话题通关·靶向提分 话题1申请信 Passage 1 学校正在招募暑期支教志愿者，你有意申请参加此次志愿服务，请写封申请信，需包含以下内容： 1.你为什么申请这个岗位？ 2.对此岗位，你有什么优势？ 3.如果你被录用，你将会怎么做？ Passage 2 明启中学将组织学生开展为期三天的研学活动，现有三个主题，分别为：“访问友校”“走进大学“深入 企业”。假如你是该校学生李华，请写一封申请信给负责人，报名参加其中一项活动，内容须包括： 1.你选择的主题： 2.你希望学到的内容； 3.你想学这些内容的理由。 话题2议论文 Passage 1 有些人喜欢把亲友参加某些活动的信息发布在微信朋友圈里，让大家为他的亲友投票。 针对这一现象，请谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包含： ●是否赞成这种做法 ●赞成或反对的理由 ●你的建议注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。 Passage 2 假设你是明启中学高一学生李明。你校拟为高一学生增设“唐诗英译(Translating Tang Poem㎡s into English)”社 团，并就此征询学生意见。请写封邮件给负责人朱老师，在邮件的主体段落： 1)表明你是否会加入该社团： 2)陈述你的理由。 话题3投稿 Passage 1 假设你是高一年级学生李明，国庆假期后学校安排高一年级集体前往上海东方绿舟(Oriental Land)进行了 为期一周的封闭式军训。请写一篇文章，给校报“My Impressive Military Training Experience'”板块投稿，内容 需包括： ●军训过程中让你印象深刻的活动： ●该活动后你的感受。 Passage 2 6月5日世界环境日International Environment Day将至，你所在的班级准备以此为契机筹划一次班级主题 活动，你积极参与筹划并设计了一个活动方案，请你在全班同学面前介绍你的方案。介绍包括以下两个方面： 1、简述你活动方案的主题和内容。 2、谈谈你设计该活动方案的理由。 (文中不能涉及真实信息) 话题4建议信 Passage 1 假如你是明启中学的李明。为鼓励学生践行雷锋精神，帮助他人，最近学校打算举行一次学雷锋日活动， 现在向师生征集活动建议。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包含： 1.为学雷锋日提出2-3条合理的活动建议： 2.给出你的理由。 Passage 2 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，收到年龄相仿的英国笔友May的邮件（如下），她将于下周末在家中接待 来自中国的几位同龄人，但不知道该做些什么准备。请回复她的邮件，内容须包括： (1)你的建议： (2)你的理由。 Subject:Seeking Advice on Hosting Friends from China Dear Li Ming, I hope you're well!I'm reaching out because I'll be hosting a few friends from China at my home next weekend,and I don't know what preparations I should make to ensure they feel comfortable and welcome.Do you have any suggestions? Thank you in advance for any advice you can share! Best, Mary 话题5表达想法 Passage 1 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。你校英文报正举行主题为“To change or not to change?”的征文比赛，你 决定参赛。请你撰写一篇参赛稿，内容包括： 1)你的观点； 2)你的理由。 Passage 2 明启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会，但王磊由于路远，交通不便等原因犹豫 不决，写封邮件说服他一起去。信的内容包括： (①)提出解决问题的方法： (2)阐释音乐会的重要性。 话题6个人经历 Passage 1 假如你是李华，今年暑假你们班分三组开展了一次志愿者活动，第一组去了社区敬老院，第二组去了市中 心的地铁站，第三组参加了环保组织的宣传活动，你也参加了其中一组，请给你的朋友王平写一封信，与 其分享本次经历和收获。信的开头己经写好。 敬老院the nursing home宣传活动campaign Dear Wang Ping, I am writing to share my volunteering experience in the summer holiday... Passage 2 假定你是李华，上周你参加了“青少年科技创新大赛”活动。请你给英国朋友Tom写一封邮件， 内容包括： 1.你的经历： 2.你的感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom. Yours, Li Hua考前押题08 英语作文题(期末专项训练) 话题1 申请信 话题4 建议信 话题2 议论文 话题5 表达想法 话题3 投稿 话题6 个人经历 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 话题1 申请信 Passage 1 学校正在招募暑期支教志愿者，你有意申请参加此次志愿服务，请写封申请信，需包含以下内容： 1. 你为什么申请这个岗位？ 2. 对此岗位，你有什么优势？ 3. 如果你被录用，你将会怎么做？ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam, Knowing that our school is recruiting summer teaching volunteers, I am willing to participate in this activity. Applying for this post is mainly to do something valuable for the society and put what I have learned into practice. For this position, I have some advantages. First of all, I like students and have a heart of loving children. Next, students are the future of our motherland and becoming a people's teacher is my lifelong pursuit. Besides, it is a very happy thing to teach scientific and cultural knowledge, which in turn will promote my business growth. I would be very grateful if hired. In the following work, I will try my best to serve every child and let children grow up in a happy and free environment. Yours, XXX 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校写封申请信, 申请参加暑期支教志愿者活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 得知：know→ learn 参加：participate in→ join in 此外：besides → what’s more 如果……将不胜感激：I would be very grateful if…→I would appreciate it if… 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For this position, I have some advantages. 拓展句：I have some advantages, which are fit for this position, 【点睛】【高分句型1】Applying for this post is mainly to do something valuable for the society and put what I have learned into practice.（运用了动名词短语Applying for this post作主语以及what引导宾语从句） 【高分句型2】Besides, it is a very happy thing to teach scientific and cultural knowledge, which in turn will promote my business growth.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） Passage 2 明启中学将组织学生开展为期三天的研学活动，现有三个主题，分别为：“访问友校”“走进大学”“深入企业”。假如你是该校学生李华，请写一封申请信给负责人，报名参加其中一项活动，内容须包括： 1. 你选择的主题； 2. 你希望学到的内容； 3. 你想学这些内容的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua, a student from Mingqi High School. I am writing to express my keen interest in participating in the research activity and apply for one of the themes. I choose the theme of "Walking into Universities". I hope to learn about the diverse majors offered in universities, the campus culture, and the learning atmosphere. Additionally, I am eager to understand the admission requirements and career prospects of different majors. The reasons for my choice are as follows. Firstly, as a senior high school student, I am facing the important decision of choosing a university and major. By visiting universities, I can gain a clearer understanding of my future study and career direction. Secondly, experiencing the campus culture and learning atmosphere will inspire me to work harder and pursue my academic goals. I believe this activity will be a valuable opportunity for my personal growth and future development. Looking forward to your approval. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 引言：介绍自己是明启中学的学生李华，表明写信目的是申请参加研学活动。 描述选择的主题：明确说明自己选择的主题是 “走进大学”。 说明希望学到的内容：详细阐述希望在这个主题活动中学到的内容，如大学的专业设置、校园文化、学习氛围、录取要求和专业前景等。 阐述选择的理由：解释为什么希望学到这些内容，从面临大学专业选择、受校园文化激励等方面说明理由。 强调活动的意义：强调参加这个活动对自己个人成长和未来发展的重要性。 总结：表达期待得到批准。 确定主题：从三个主题中选择 “走进大学”，并在信中明确说明。 描述期望内容：具体列出在大学主题活动中希望学到的各个方面，让负责人了解你的学习目标。 解释理由：结合自身情况，如面临大学选择、追求学术目标等，说明为什么这些内容对自己很重要。 强调意义：强调活动对自己成长和未来的积极影响，增加申请的说服力。 注意语言表达：使用恰当的语言和语气，表达自己的热情和诚意。 检查语法和拼写：确保申请信没有语法错误和拼写错误，提高信件的质量。 研学活动 research activity 申请 apply for 主题 theme 多样的专业 diverse majors 校园文化 campus culture 学习氛围 learning atmosphere 录取要求 admission requirements 职业前景 career prospects 个人成长 personal growth 介绍自己 Introducing oneself I am Li Hua, a student from Mingqi High School. 表明目的 Stating the purpose I am writing to express my keen interest in participating in the research activity and apply for one of the themes. 选择主题 Choosing a theme I choose the theme of "Walking into Universities". 说明希望学到的内容 Stating what one hopes to learn I hope to learn about the diverse majors offered in universities, the campus culture, and the learning atmosphere. 阐述理由 Explaining reasons The reasons for my choice are as follows. Firstly... Secondly... 强调意义 Emphasizing significance I believe this activity will be a valuable opportunity for my personal growth and future development. 结束语 Closing remarks Looking forward to your approval. 话题2 议论文 Passage 1 有些人喜欢把亲友参加某些活动的信息发布在微信朋友圈里，让大家为他的亲友投票。 针对这一现象，请谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包含： 是否赞成这种做法 赞成或反对的理由 你的建议 注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】       There exists a hot discussion whether it is acceptable to post the link that someone asks for voting after he or she takes part in an activity or a competition on the Moment or the chatting group of Wechat. I think it cannot be accepted. On one hand, personal information may be put on the street. Before voting, an official account need be added, by which a plenty of information may be collected and used for another commercial purpose. On the other hand, sometimes it can make a certain relationship broken between people. When receiving the message, he or she doesn’t vote for some reasons. The sender will feel disappointed and keep him or her at a distance. To sum up, be careful when getting noted or noting. A traditional way of voting can be a good choice to make someone stand out. 【分析】本文是一篇议论文。就现在微信中亲朋友发朋友圈投票的现象，谈谈你个人的看法。 【详解】第一步： 首先审题，议论文出现的频率较低，但也需要注意议论文的写作方法，第一部分提出需要讨论的主题，继而提出你个人的观点；第二部分就你个人的观点，提出论据，其中包括论点和论证；第三部分简单扣题，总结个人观点。需要注意的是：议论文尽量采用第三人称。 第二步： 确认时态，选用正确的人称和时态，本文可用一般现在时，第三人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。 第三步： 文章可以分为三段，第一段提出话题，并提出个人观点（不赞同）；第二段提出至少两点不赞同的原因；第三段总结自己的观点。 第四步： 注意事项：①写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏； ②这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可； ③写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题； ④尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的高级词汇、复合句和高级语法。例如： 存在句：There exists a hot discussion… whether引导的同位语从句：…whether it is acceptable to post the link… 介词+关系代词引导的定语从句：…, by which a plenty of information may be collected when引导的时间状语从句的省略：When receiving the message, he or she doesn’t vote for some reasons. Passage 2 假设你是明启中学高一学生李明。你校拟为高一学生增设“唐诗英译(Translating Tang Poems into English)”社团，并就此征询学生意见。请写封邮件给负责人朱老师，在邮件的主体段落： 1)表明你是否会加入该社团； 2)陈述你的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Mr. Zhu, I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to express my thoughts on the newly proposed “Translating Tang Poems into English” club for first-year students at Mingqi High School. As an avid reader of Tang poetry and someone who has always been fascinated by the art of translation, I would definitely consider joining this club. I believe that this opportunity would not only enhance my understanding of Chinese literature but also improve my English language skills, especially in the realm of literary translation. Moreover, I find the idea of bridging cultural gaps through translation incredibly appealing and think it would be a rewarding experience to share the beauty of Tang poems with others in a different language. Thank you for considering my feedback. I look forward to hearing more about the club’s development. Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写封邮件给负责人朱老师，表明是否会加入“唐诗英译”社团以及陈述理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 加强：enhance→strengthen 机会：opportunity→chance 此外：moreover→besides 考虑：consider→take into account 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Thank you for considering my feedback. 拓展句：I would appreciate it if you can consider my feedback. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I believe that this opportunity would not only enhance my understanding of Chinese literature but also improve my English language skills, especially in the realm of literary translation. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] Thank you for considering my feedback. (运用了动名词作宾语) 话题3 投稿 Passage 1 假设你是高一年级学生李明，国庆假期后学校安排高一年级集体前往上海东方绿舟（Oriental Land）进行了为期一周的封闭式军训。请写一篇文章，给校报“My Impressive Military Training Experience”板块投稿，内容需包括： ● 军训过程中让你印象深刻的活动； ● 该活动后你的感受。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 During the National Day holiday, our school organized a week-long military training at Oriental Land for all senior one students. One activity that left a deep impression on me was the team obstacle course. This challenging course required our team to climb walls, crawl under nets, and carry heavy loads. It was tough, and at times, I felt like giving up. However, the encouragement and support from my teammates motivated me to push through. In the end, we completed the course together, which taught me the importance of teamwork and perseverance. After this activity, I realized that I am capable of much more than I originally thought. The experience boosted my confidence and made me appreciate the strength found in unity. It was truly memorable and has left a lasting impact on me. 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。国庆假期后学校安排高一年级集体前往上海东方绿舟（Oriental Land）进行了为期一周的封闭式军训，要求考生以“My Impressive Military Training Experience”为题写一篇作文投稿。   【详解】1. 词汇积累： 难忘的：memorable→ unforgettable 活动：activity → event 激励：motivate→ stimulate 完成：complete → accomplish 2. 句式拓展： 同义句替换 原句：One activity that left a deep impression on me was the team obstacle course. 拓展句：What left a deep impression on me was the team obstacle course. 【点睛】[高分句型1]After this activity, I realized that I am capable of much more than I originally thought.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]In the end, we completed the course together, which taught me the importance of teamwork and perseverance.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 2 6月 5 日世界环境日 International Environment Day将至, 你所在的班级准备以此为契机筹划一次班级主题活动，你积极参与筹划并设计了一个活动方案，请你在全班同学面前介绍你的方案。介绍包括以下两个方面： 1、简述你活动方案的主题和内容。 2、谈谈你设计该活动方案的理由。 (文中不能涉及真实信息) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 As we all know, International Environment Day is approaching. To celebrate it, I have made a plan as follows. First, the theme of the activity is to know more about our environment . Through introducing something about the environment by videos and learning about something behind it, we may understand that we should protect it. Then, Let some students talk about their own experiences and feelings and how to protect the environment, which will be more convincing .Last, everyone is called on to make a poster, motivating more students to get involved. However, right now and right here, we should do something for it. This is my arrangement about this year’s International Environment Day, and I’m looking forward to your wise suggestions or better plans. Thank you. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。6月 5 日世界环境日 International Environment Day将至, 考生所在的班级准备以此为契机筹划一次班级主题活动，考生积极参与筹划并设计了一个活动方案，请考生在全班同学面前介绍考生的方案。 【详解】1.词汇积累 接近：approach→draw near 保护：protect→preserve 激励：motivate→inspire 建议：suggestion→advice 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：Through introducing something about the environment by videos and learning about something behind it, we may understand that we should protect it. 拓展句：It is through introducing something about the environment by videos and learning about something behind it that we may understand that we should protect it. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Then, Let some students talk about their own experiences and feelings and how to protect the environment, which will be more convincing .（运用which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】As we all know, International Environment Day is approaching.（运用as引导的非限制性定语从句） 话题4 建议信 Passage 1 假如你是明启中学的李明。为鼓励学生践行雷锋精神，帮助他人，最近学校打算举行一次学雷锋日活动，现在向师生征集活动建议。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包含： 1. 为学雷锋日提出2-3条合理的活动建议； 2. 给出你的理由。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear sir/madam,    Knowing that the school is going to hold a learning Lei Feng Day to encourage students to practice the spirit of Lei Feng and help others, I would like to offer some advice. To carry forward the Spirit of Lei Feng, our school can hold a meaningful activity in a nursing home. We could go to visit the elderly in their rooms in groups, presenting them with flowers, board games and self-made cards to show our sincere love and respect. It is traditional virtues in China and respect to each other is respect yourself. Besides, we can organize teachers and students to clean the streets to keep the city clean. It is the responsibility of every citizen to maintain our daily environment. A good environment can also make everyone happy. I would appreciate it if my advice could be considered. Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是明启中学的李明。为鼓励学生践行雷锋精神，帮助他人，最近学校打算举行一次学雷锋日活动，现在向师生征集活动建议。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：advice→suggestion 赠送：present→give away 老年人：the elderly→the senior citizens 开心：delighted→happy 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I would appreciate it if my advice could be considered. 拓展句：I would be more than grateful if my advice could be considered. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Knowing that the school is going to hold a learning Lei Feng Day to encourage students to practice the spirit of Lei Feng and help others, I would like to offer some advice.（运用了现在分词作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】 To carry forward the Spirit of Lei Feng, our school can hold a meaningful activity in a nursing home.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语） Passage 2 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，收到年龄相仿的英国笔友Mary的邮件 (如下)，她将于下周末在家中接待来自中国的几位同龄人，但不知道该做些什么准备。请回复她的邮件，内容须包括： (1) 你的建议； (2) 你的理由。 Subject: Seeking Advice on Hosting Friends from China Dear Li Ming, I hope you’re well! I’m reaching out because I’ll be hosting a few friends from China at my home next weekend, and I don’t know what preparations I should make to ensure they feel comfortable and welcome. Do you have any suggestions? Thank you in advance for any advice you can share! Best, Mary ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Mary, I’m glad to help you. Here are some suggestions. First, you can decorate your living room with some Chinese elements like Chinese knots or paper-cuts. It can make them feel more at home. Second, prepare some traditional Chinese tea and snacks. They will enjoy tasting them and it’s a good way to start a conversation. Third, learn a few simple Chinese greetings and phrases. It shows your respect and friendliness. The reason for these suggestions is that Chinese people usually like to see familiar things in a foreign country. Tea and snacks are an important part of Chinese culture. And knowing some Chinese words can make them feel closer to you. I hope your friends will have a great time at your home. Best regards, Li Ming 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对英国笔友Mary关于在家接待中国朋友的准备工作咨询给出建议并阐述理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 装饰：suggestion→advice 元素：element→ingredient 喜欢：enjoy→like 尊重：respect→esteem 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：First, you can decorate your living room with some Chinese elements like Chinese knots or paper-cuts. 拓展句：First, you can decorate your living room with some Chinese elements such as Chinese knots or paper-cuts, which can add a touch of Chinese flavor. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The reason for these suggestions is that Chinese people usually like to see familiar things in a foreign country. (运用了that引导的表语从句) 【高分句型2】 I hope your friends will have a great time at your home. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) 话题5 表达想法 Passage 1 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。你校英文报正举行主题为 “To change or not to change? ” 的征文比赛，你决定参赛。请你撰写一篇参赛稿，内容包括： 1) 你的观点； 2) 你的理由。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Embracing Change for Progress As a senior student at Mingqi High School, I firmly believe that change is not only inevitable but also essential for personal growth and development. Change allows us to adapt to new circumstances and to learn from our experiences, which in turn enriches our lives. Living in a world that is constantly evolving, we must be willing to change in order to keep pace with technological advancements and societal shifts. For instance, the rapid development of technology has made it necessary for us to update our skills continuously. Without embracing change, we risk becoming obsolete in a competitive job market. Moreover, personal growth often comes from stepping out of our comfort zones and trying new things, which requires a willingness to change. In conclusion, while change can be challenging, it is a crucial catalyst for progress. It is through change that we can discover our full potential and contribute positively to the world around us. Therefore, I advocate for change, as it is the key to unlocking new opportunities and ensuring that we remain relevant in an ever-changing world. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于书信写作。要求考生给校英文报举行的征文比赛写一篇参赛稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 不可避免的：inevitable→unavoidable 必要的：essential→fundamental 适应：adapt to→be accustomed to 舒适区：comfort zones→the status quo 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Living in a world that is constantly evolving, we must be willing to change in order to keep pace with technological advancements and societal shifts. 拓展句：When we live in a world that is constantly evolving, we must be willing to change in order to keep pace with technological advancements and societal shifts. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Change allows us to adapt to new circumstances and to learn from our experiences, which in turn enriches our lives.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】For instance, the rapid development of technology has made it necessary for us to update our skills continuously.（运用了it作形式宾语，不定式短语作真正宾语） Passage 2 明启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会，但王磊由于路远，交通不便等原因犹豫不决，写封邮件说服他一起去。信的内容包括： (1) 提出解决问题的方法； (2) 阐释音乐会的重要性。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Wang Lei， It's been a while since I heard from you. Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind. However, as far as I’m concerned, it's still worth our efforts. This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions. It must be a feast for all the audience. Moreover, chances are that we may have an album with performers autographs on it. You should never miss such a fabulous concert ! In terms of difficulties you are worried about, I have already found some solutions. My father will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene. I have managed to persuade him to make his promise. In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats. I am confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes. I am looking forward to hearing your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生写封邮件说服王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会， 告知王磊如何解决路远，交通不便等问题，并阐释音乐会的重要性。 【详解】1.词汇积累 阻碍某人做某事：hinder sb. from doing sth → keep/prevent sb. from doing sth 就我而言，在我看来：as far as I’m concerned → in my opinion/from my point of view 成功做……：manage to do →succeed in doing sth. 此外：in addition→ what’s more /besides 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats. 拓展句：In addition, in case it rains, I have prepared two raincoats. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park.（运用了which引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind.（运用了though引导的让步状语从句和what引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型3】This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions.（运用了where引导的定语从句） 话题6 个人经历 Passage 1 假如你是李华，今年暑假你们班分三组开展了一次志愿者活动，第一组去了社区敬老院，第二组去了市中心的地铁站，第三组参加了环保组织的宣传活动，你也参加了其中一组，请给你的朋友王平写一封信，与其分享本次经历和收获。信的开头已经写好。 敬老院the nursing home    宣传活动campaign Dear Wang Ping, I am writing to share my volunteering experience in the summer holiday... _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Wang Ping, I am writing to share my volunteering experience in the summer holiday. Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity.We were divided into three groups. The first group went to the community nursing home, the second went to the subway station in the city center, and the third participated in the publicity campaign of the environmental protection organization. Some classmates and I went to the nursing home near our school. We took a lot of presents to the elderly. Some of us performed wonderful program, such as singing, dancing. We also asked them to join us and they were very happy. Some of us talked with the elderly seriously. They told us a lot about their lives. All of us were happy because we did something good to others. The most touching moment was when the elderly held our hands and thanked us for coming. We felt so happy that we could make them smile. Through this experience, I learned to be humble and grateful to the elderly. They have experienced many difficulties in life and their contributions to the society are invaluable. In my opinion, we should spend more time helping the elderly. Love the elderly is Chinese people’s virtue. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，今年暑假你们班分三组开展了一次志愿者活动，第一组去了社区敬老院，第二组去了市中心的地铁站，第三组参加了环保组织的宣传活动，你也参加了其中一组，请给你的朋友王平写一封信，与其分享本次经历和收获。 【详解】1.词汇积累 礼物：present→gift 极好的：wonderful→excellent 对……感激：be grateful to→appreciate 以我看来：in my opinion→as far as I’m concerned/personally 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Some of us performed wonderful program, such as singing, dancing. 拓展句：Some of us performed wonderful program, which inluded singing and dancing. 【点睛】【高分句型1】All of us were happy because we did something good to others.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 【高分句型2】The most touching moment was when the elderly held our hands and thanked us for coming.（运用了when引导的表语从句） Passage 2 假定你是李华，上周你参加了“青少年科技创新大赛”活动。请你给英国朋友Tom 写一封邮件， 内容包括： 1.你的经历; 2.你的感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tom, Last week, I participated in the Youth Science and Technology Innovation Competition. I presented my project on renewable energy solutions. It was exciting to meet other young innovators and share our ideas. I learned a lot from the judges’ feedback and the discussions with my peers. This experience has inspired me to pursue my passion for science and technology even further. I believe innovation can significantly impact our future. I hope to participate in more competitions like this in the future! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于上周你参加了“青少年科技创新大赛”活动这一情况，给英国朋友Tom 写一封邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：participated in → took part in 激动的：exciting → thrilling 激励：inspire → motivate 影响：impact → influence 2.句式拓展 扩写句子 原句：I learned a lot from the judges’ feedback and the discussions with my peers. 拓展句：I learned a lot from the judges’ feedback and the discussions with my peers, which was very helpful for me. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It was exciting to meet other young innovators and share our ideas.（运用了It作形式主语，动词不定式to do作真正主语的固定句型） 【高分句型2】I believe innovation can significantly impact our future.（运用了省略从属连词that的宾语从句） $