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Section Ⅳ Writing
Unit 1 Science And Scientists
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My idol is Qian Xuesen
is known as
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one of the greatest scientists in China
who is one of the greatest scientists in China
was devoted to pursuing his dreams
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What is more important is that
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learn and pass on his scientific spirits
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My idol is Qian Xuesen,who is known as “the father of China's aerospace”.
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一篇关于科学精神的短文
本单元的写作目标是就有关科学家的精神进行分析,并针对这些故事说出自己的看法。文章应有一定的人物描写,主要是介绍某位科学家的基本信息及其事迹,针对科学家在生活、工作和学习中发生的故事,发表自己的看法。
[文章架构]
[必备词汇]
(1)be born in出生于
(2)be engaged in从事于;忙于
(3)internationally influential 在国际上有影响力的
(4)a pioneer of reform改革先锋
(5)devote oneself to献身于;致力于
(6)be at the forefront of... 在……的前沿
(7)serve the people heart and soul 全心全意为人民服务
(8)share sorrow as well as happiness with sb 与某人同甘共苦
(9)think highly of/speak highly of 对……高度评价
(10)have a gift/talent for 在某方面有天赋
[必备句型]
1.介绍人物的成就或取得的成绩
①During her career life,she obtained 132 championships,including 4 Olympic championships.
在她的职业生涯中,她获得了132个冠军,包括4个奥林匹克冠军。
②When he was still a boy,he showed great interest in literature.当他还是个孩子的时候,他就对文学表现出了极大的兴趣。
③He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers.
他/她擅长英语口语甚至更擅长使用电脑。
④Her story tells us that we should value what we have,and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
她的故事告诉我们:我们应该重视我们所拥有的,尽最大努力克服生活中的任何困难。
2.介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价
①He became famous for his new theory.
他因他的新理论而出名。
②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.
人们把他作为一位激励人心的领导而爱戴他。
③We regard him as our model.
我们把他视为我们的榜样。
④Lei Feng was praised for his communist spirit.
雷锋因为他的共产主义精神而受到表扬。
假定你是李华。为了响应国家“了解中国科技发展的伟大成就,坚定文化自信”的号召,你校计划举办一场主题为“What Makes a Great Scientist?”的征文比赛,请你写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。内容包括:
1.列举一位伟大的科学家;2.伟大的原因;3.你的感想。
注意:1.词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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[写作步骤]
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
1.我的偶像是钱学森。
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2.钱学森被公认为“中国航天之父”。
Qian Xuesen ___________ “the father of China's aerospace”.
3.作为中国最伟大的科学家之一,钱学森一直被我们当作模范。
Qian Xuesen,_____________________________________,is always regarded as our model.(同位语)
→Qian Xuesen,____________________________________________,is always regarded as our model.(定语从句)
4.他是一位致力于追求梦想的先驱人物。
He was a pioneer who __________________________________.
5.更为重要的是,他非常爱国,用努力、成就和忠诚服务于我们的国家。
________________,he was patriotic and served our country with effort,achievements and devotion.(副词短语)
→______________________________ he was patriotic and served our country with effort,achievements and devotion.(主语从句)
6.毫无疑问,作为一名社会主义事业接班人的青少年,我应该学习并传承的不仅是他在面临挫折时的持之以恒,还有他的科学精神。
___________,as a teenager,the successor of socialism,I should ________________________________________ as well as his perseverance
_______________ frustrations.
第三步 词句升级
7.用定语从句提升句1和句2
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第四步 妙笔成篇
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【参考范文】
What Makes a Great Scientist?
Everyone has an idol. My idol is Qian Xuesen,who is known as “the father of China's aerospace”.
Qian Xuesen,one of the greatest scientists in China,is always regarded as our model. He was a pioneer who was devoted to pursuing his dreams. More importantly,he was patriotic and served our country with effort,achievements and devotion. All of this makes him a great scientist.
Undoubtedly,as a teenager,the successor of socialism,I should learn and pass on his scientific spirits as well as his perseverance in the face of frustrations.
(2025·云南红河阶段考)假设你校英语角将开办一次演讲比赛,致敬中国伟大的科学家,请你写一篇英语演讲稿赞颂一位科学家的事迹和精神。要点如下:
1.科学家的事迹;
2.赞颂科学家精神;
3.呼吁大家继承和发扬科学家精神。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Honoring Yuan Longping
Hello,everyone! Known as “the Father of Hybrid Rice”,the great scientist I admire most is Yuan Longping.He devoted over sixty years to developing hybrid rice,helping to feed billions of people.Yuan Longping's hybrid rice significantly improved crop yields,making a crucial impact on global food security.His selflessness and perseverance embody the spirit of dedication and service.He cared little for fame or fortune,focusing instead on improving humanity's well-being.Despite his global recognition,he remained a modest and hardworking scientist,always passionate about innovation.
Let us follow his example,work hard,and contribute to society by embracing the same spirit of innovation and compassion.
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