专题05 书面表达（期末专项训练）六年级英语上学期（人教新起点）

· 专题05书面表达（专项训练） 书面表达主题和写作技巧 单元 核心主题 核心内容 书面表达相关词汇 书面表达关键句型 书面表达技巧 1 中国城市与旅行 1. 介绍中国城市的地理位置、特色景点及美食 2. 描述旅行经历与所见所闻 3. 表达对城市的感受与推荐 Beijing、Xi’an、Guilin、the Great Wall、the Terracotta Army、West Lake、seafood、morning tea、spicy food、travel、visit、taste、famous for 1. ... is in the ... of China. 2. It’s famous for ... 3. I went to ... with my parents. We visited ... and tasted ... 4. I think ... is a wonderful place to travel. 1. 按 “城市位置→特色景点→美食→感受” 逻辑展开，条理清晰。 2. 用具体景点和美食名称（如兵马俑、早茶）让内容更真实。 2 世界各国与文化 1. 介绍世界各国的地理位置、特色建筑及文化 2. 描述理想中的海外旅行计划 3. 对比中西方文化差异 the UK、Canada、Australia、London、Sydney、the British Museum、kangaroo、maple leaves、Opera House、speak、hiking、sunrise 1. What do you know about ...? 2. ... is famous for ... in ... 3. I want to go to ... because I want to visit ... 4. People in ... speak ... and love ... 1. 介绍国家时，突出文化符号（如澳大利亚的袋鼠）。 2. 用 “want to do” 句型表达旅行愿望，语气自然。 3 动物世界 1. 描述动物的类别、外形特征及生活习性 2. 介绍动物的生存环境与独特能力 3. 表达对动物的喜爱与保护意识 mammal、bird、fish、insect、elephant、panda、shark、whale、trunk、tusks、climb、swim、eat、live in 1. What kind of animal is ...? It’s a ... 2. It has ... and can ... 3. ... live in ... and like to eat ... 4. We should protect ... because they are our friends. 1. 按 “动物类别→外形→习性→保护意义” 展开，逻辑连贯。 2. 用准确的身体部位词汇（如象鼻 trunk）增强专业性。 4 情感与原因 1. 描述不同的情感（开心、难过、骄傲等） 2. 说明产生情感的原因 3. 表达对他人情感的理解与安慰 happy、sad、angry、proud、excited、scared、worried、because、ill、win、lose、test、competition 1. You look ... Why? 2. I am/was ... because ... 3. He/She felt ... because he/she ... 4. Don’t worry. Everything will be fine. 1. 用 “情感 + 原因” 的经典句型，直接明了。 2. 结合具体场景（如考试获奖、宠物生病）让情感更真实。 5 名人故事 1. 介绍名人的国籍、职业及成就 2. 描述名人的优秀品质与奋斗经历 3. 表达对名人的敬佩与学习意愿 scientist、artist、poet、writer、astronaut、invent、paint、write、famous for、hard-working、brave、successful 1. Who is your favourite famous person? 2. He/She was ... He/She was famous for ... 3. He/She worked hard and became ... 4. I want to learn from him/her because ... 1. 按 “名人身份→成就→品质→学习意义” 展开，层层递进。 2. 用具体事例（如爱迪生发明电灯）支撑品质描述。 6 寒假计划与节日 1. 制定寒假旅行、学习或活动计划 2. 描述春节或圣诞节的庆祝习俗 3. 表达对假期的期待与收获 winter vacation、plan、travel、ski、make dumplings、visit grandparents、Spring Festival、Christmas、ice lantern、gift、prepare for 1. What are you going to do in your winter vacation? 2. I am going to ... with my family. 3. We usually ... to celebrate Spring Festival. 4. I am looking forward to ... 1. 用 “be going to” 句型明确计划，结构清晰。 2. 加入节日具体习俗（如贴春联、吃饺子）让内容更生动。 书面表达练习 一、介绍你最喜欢的中国城市 要求：1. 说明城市的地理位置、特色景点及美食； 2. 描述你在该城市的旅行经历或感受； 3. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰，不少于 6 句话。 二、根据表格提示，写一写你和家人的动物爱好 要求：1. 涵盖表格中所有信息，可补充活动细节（如 “visit the zoo every month”）； 2. 用 “like/love/enjoy” 体现情感，时态为一般现在时； 3. 条理清晰，不少于 6 句话。 人物 喜欢的动物 动物类别 喜欢的原因 我 大象 哺乳动物 聪明、强壮，有长长的鼻子 爸爸 鲨鱼 鱼类 游泳速度快，外形很酷 妈妈 蝴蝶 昆虫 颜色漂亮，飞行姿态优美 三、以 “My Favourite Famous Person” 为题写一篇短文 要求：1. 说明名人的国籍、职业及主要成就； 2. 描述名人的优秀品质与对你的影响； 3. 题目已给出，语句连贯，不少于 6 句话。 My Favourite Famous Person 四、写一封邮件给笔友 Tom，介绍你的寒假计划 要求：1. 邮件格式正确（称呼、正文、落款）； 2. 正文说明寒假的旅行计划、节日安排及学习计划； 3. 语气友好，不少于 7 句话。 Dear Tom, How are you? The winter vacation is coming soon. I’m so excited to share my plan with you. Yours, Li Ming 五、【新考法・图文】根据图片提示，描述一次难忘的旅行经历 要求：1. 按图片顺序叙述旅行过程，涵盖所有场景； 2. 时态为一般过去时，加入个人感受； 3. 不少于 6 句话。 六、以 “My Favourite Animal” 为题，写一写你最喜欢的动物 要求：1. 说明动物的类别、外形特征及生活习性； 2. 描述动物的独特能力与可爱之处； 3. 题目已给出，不少于 6 句话。 My Favourite Animal 七、根据提示，写一写你上周的心情变化 要求：1. 说明至少三种不同的心情及对应的原因； 2. 用 “I was ... because ...” 句型，时态为一般过去时； 3. 不少于 5 句话。 八、【新考法・跨文化】以 “Spring Festival vs Christmas” 为题，比较中西方重要节日 要求：1. 从庆祝时间、习俗（食物、活动）方面对比； 2. 用 “In China... But in Western countries...” 句型，语句通顺； 3. 题目已给出，不少于 6 句话。 Spring Festival vs Christmas 九、根据表格提示，写一写你理想的海外旅行计划 要求：1. 涵盖表格中所有信息，补充 “出行方式”； 2. 用 “I want to...” 或 “I am going to...” 表愿望，语句连贯； 3. 不少于 6 句话。 项目 具体内容 目的地 Australia（澳大利亚） 特色景点 the Opera House（歌剧院）、kangaroo zoo（袋鼠动物园） 活动 看袋鼠、海滩游泳、品尝海鲜 期待收获 了解澳大利亚文化、拍很多照片 十、以 “Why We Should Protect Animals” 为题写一篇短文 要求：1. 结合 Unit3 内容，说明保护动物的重要性； 2. 举 1-2 个具体动物的例子（如大象、熊猫）； 3. 题目已给出，不少于 6 句话。 Why We Should Protect Animals 参考答案 一、介绍你最喜欢的中国城市 范文： My favourite Chinese city is Xi’an. It is in the northwest of China, and it has a long history. Xi’an is famous for the Terracotta Army—those life-sized soldiers are really amazing. When I visited Xi’an last year with my parents, we spent a whole morning in the Terracotta Army Museum. We also tasted delicious local food, like noodles and dumplings. The city has many old buildings and friendly people. I think Xi’an is not only a city of history but also a nice place to eat. I really want to visit it again. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：需围绕“最喜欢的中国城市”展开，介绍城市位置、特色（历史、景点、美食等）及个人经历与感受，用第一人称叙述，结合一般现在时与一般过去时。 2. 参考词汇与句型：northwest, long history, Terracotta Army, local food, visit, taste；My favourite city is...；It is in the... of China；It is famous for...；I want to visit it again. 二、根据表格提示，写一写你和家人的动物爱好 范文： My family and I all love animals, and we have different favourite ones. My favourite animal is the elephant. It is a mammal with a long trunk and big ears. I like it because it is smart and strong. My dad’s favourite animal is the shark. It is a fish that swims very fast. He thinks sharks are cool. My mom loves butterflies best. They are insects with beautiful colorful wings. She likes watching them fly around flowers. We often visit the zoo together on weekends and talk about our favourite animals. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：需介绍自己及家人各自喜爱的动物，说明动物类别、特征及喜欢的原因，提及相关活动，用第一人称叙述，时态为一般现在时。 2. 参考词汇与句型：mammal, trunk, insect, wings, zoo, favourite；My favourite animal is...；It is a...；I like it because...；We often visit the zoo together. 三、以 “My Favourite Famous Person” 为题写一篇短文 范文： My Favourite Famous Person My favourite famous person is Li Bai. He was a great Chinese poet. Li Bai was famous for writing many wonderful poems. His poems about the moon and nature are still popular today. He loved traveling around China. Li Bai was very talented. I admire him because his poems make me love Chinese culture more. I want to learn more about his poems and read more books. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：需以“我最喜欢的名人”为主题，介绍名人身份、成就、特点及自己敬佩的原因，用第一人称叙述，介绍过去人物用一般过去时。 2. 参考词汇与句型：poet, poem, famous, travel, admire；My favourite famous person is...；He was a...；He was famous for...；I admire him because... 四、写一封邮件给笔友 Tom，介绍你的寒假计划 范文： Dear Tom, How are you? The winter vacation is coming soon. I’m so excited to share my plan with you. First, I am going to Harbin with my parents. We are going to see ice lanterns and learn to ski. Harbin’s winter is cold but fun. Then, we will go back home to celebrate Spring Festival. We will make dumplings with my grandparents and watch the Spring Festival Gala. Besides, I am going to finish my homework and read some books about Canada. I want to know more about your country. What’s your winter vacation plan? Please tell me in your next email. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】 1. 题干解读：需以邮件格式给笔友介绍寒假计划，包含旅行、节日活动及学习安排，开头问候、结尾询问对方计划并署名，用第一人称，时态以一般将来时为主。 2. 参考词汇与句型：winter vacation, ice lantern, ski, Spring Festival, dumplings, finish, plan；The winter vacation is coming；I am going to...；We will...；What’s your plan? 五、根据图片提示，描述一次难忘的旅行经历 范文： Last summer, I had a great trip to Beijing with my family. On the first day, we went to the Great Wall. It was so long and grand that I felt very proud. We took many photos there. In the evening, we tasted the famous Beijing duck—it was delicious. On the second day, we climbed the Fragrant Hills. The air was fresh and the leaves were red. We laughed and talked all the way. This trip let me see beautiful scenery and learn more about Chinese history. It was one of the best trips I’ve ever had. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：需按时间顺序描述一次难忘的旅行，介绍目的地、行程中的活动、景色及美食，说明旅行意义，用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主。 2. 参考词汇与句型：trip, proud, delicious, scenery, take photos, taste；Last summer, I had a trip to...；We went to...；We took many photos；This trip let me... 六、以 “My Favourite Animal” 为题，写一写你最喜欢的动物 范文： My Favourite Animal My favourite animal is the panda. It is a mammal that lives in the mountains of China. Pandas have black and white fur, round faces and cute black eyes. They like to eat bamboo and sleep in the trees. Pandas are very gentle. What’s interesting is that they can climb trees. Now pandas are in danger because their home is getting smaller. We should protect them. I think pandas are very cute and they are a symbol of China. I hope I can see them in the zoo again. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：需介绍最喜欢的动物，说明其类别、栖息地、外形、习性，提及生存现状及保护措施，用第一人称，时态为一般现在时。 2. 参考词汇与句型：fur, bamboo, in danger, protect, symbol, cute；My favourite animal is...；It lives in...；They like to...；We should protect them. 七、根据提示，写一写你上周的心情变化 范文： Last week I had different feelings. On Monday, I was happy because I got an A in my English test. My teacher praised me in class, and I felt very proud. On Wednesday, I was sad because my pet cat was ill. I stayed at home to look after it after school. On Friday, I was excited because our class won the school football match. We cheered happily. It was a meaningful week. I know happiness and sadness are part of life. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：需按时间顺序描述上周的心情变化，说明不同心情的原因及相关事件，总结感悟，用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主。 2. 参考词汇与句型：happy, proud, sad, excited, test, win；I was... because...；Our class won...；Last week I had... 八、【新考法・跨文化】以 “Spring Festival vs Christmas” 为题，比较中西方重要节日 范文： Spring Festival vs Christmas Spring Festival and Christmas are important festivals in China and Western countries. In China, Spring Festival usually comes in January or February. People clean their houses, put up red couplets and make dumplings. Families get together and give red envelopes to kids. In Western countries, Christmas is on December 25th. People decorate Christmas trees, give gifts and eat turkey. Children wait for Santa Claus to bring them presents. Both festivals are about family and love. I think both are wonderful because they bring happiness to people. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：需对比春节与圣诞节，介绍两者的时间、习俗及特色活动，总结共性意义，客观叙述为主，时态为一般现在时。 2. 参考词汇与句型：Spring Festival, Christmas, family, gift, Santa Claus, dumplings, turkey；... and... are important festivals；People... on...；Both are about... 九、根据表格提示，写一写你理想的海外旅行计划 范文： My ideal overseas trip is to Australia. I am going to go there by plane with my best friend next summer vacation. Australia is famous for its beautiful beaches and unique animals. First, I want to visit the Sydney Opera House—it looks very beautiful. Then, I am going to a zoo to see cute kangaroos and take photos with them. I also want to go swimming on the beach and taste fresh seafood. I hope this trip can help me learn more about Australia and make new friends. I am looking forward to this trip. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：需介绍理想的海外旅行，说明目的地、出行方式、时间、行程安排及旅行期望，用第一人称，时态以一般将来时为主。 2. 参考词汇与句型：overseas, Australia, Sydney Opera House, kangaroo, seafood, plane, vacation；My ideal trip is to...；I am going to... by plane；It is famous for...；I hope this trip can... 十、以 “Why We Should Protect Animals” 为题写一篇短文 范文： Why We Should Protect Animals I think protecting animals is very important. First, animals are our friends. For example, dogs can help blind people walk. Second, every animal is important for nature. If sharks disappear, the ocean will be not good. Third, many animals are in danger now, like pandas and elephants. Some people hunt them. We should protect them by building nature reserves and stopping hunting. Animals make our world colorful. Protecting them is protecting ourselves. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：需围绕“为何保护动物”展开，从动物的作用、生态意义及生存现状等方面阐述原因，提出保护措施，用第一人称，时态为一般现在时。 2. 参考词汇与句型：animal, friend, in danger, protect, nature, hunt；Protecting animals is important；Animals are our friends；We should protect them；Many animals are in danger. 答案第1页，共2页 第8页，共12页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $