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2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 7 The secret of memory 单元话题（记忆奥秘）写作满分范文 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练4篇 1．假设你是Mary的好友Bill，Mary昨晚给你发了一封电子邮件，她向你请教如何锻炼大脑来提高记忆力，请你根据以下提示，给Mary回复一封电子邮件。 要求：80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示：1. 尝试新事物，改变日常习惯； 2. 做一些猜谜游戏或数学益智游戏； 3. 给大脑足够的时间休息，饮食要均衡，心情要放松。 参考词汇：relax，try to do，daily habit，what’s more， guessing game，maths puzzle，balanced diet Dear Mary, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Bill 【答案】例文： Dear Mary, Thank you for your email! It’s important to improve our memory. There are many ways for you to improve your memory. First, you can try doing some new things and change your daily habits. Besides, you can do some guessing games or maths puzzles. Your brain will get a lot of exercise if you do these things. Last but not least, you must give your brain enough time to rest and have a balanced diet. You also need to relax. I believe that you can improve your memory soon. Yours, Bill 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括尝试新事物、做猜谜或数学益智游戏、保证大脑休息、均衡饮食和放松心情等方面，写作时需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明收到邮件并引出提高记忆力的话题，强调其重要性，为后文介绍方法做铺垫。 第二步：按照提示信息，依次介绍提高记忆力的具体方法。首先提到尝试新事物和改变日常习惯；接着说明做猜谜游戏或数学益智游戏的作用；然后强调给大脑足够休息时间、保持均衡饮食和放松心情的必要性。 第三步：书写结语，表达相信对方能很快提高记忆力的鼓励话语，使邮件结尾积极向上。 [亮点词汇] ①daily habits日常习惯 ②a lot of 许多 ③last but not least最后但同样重要的是 [高分句型] ①Your brain will get a lot of exercise if you do these things. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②I believe that you can improve your memory soon. (宾语从句) 2．根据要求完成大作文：80-100词；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 很多学生都抱怨总是记不住学过的东西。请根据下面内容提示写一篇题“The Ways to Improve Memory”的短文。 （1）集中精神做事；(focus your attention) （2）要想记得长久，必须先理解文章； （3）及时复习，防止遗忘； （4）多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等； （5）多做运动、保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。 The Ways to Improve Memory Memory is very important in our daily life and study. Here are some ways to improve it. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文                                                                        The Ways to Improve Memory     Memory is very important in our daily life and study. Here are some ways to improve it.     Firstly, when you study, you should focus your attention and don’t think about other things. Secondly, you should understand what you are learning. If so, you can remember things for a long time. Thirdly, if you go over what you have learned in time, you will not forget the things easily. Fourthly, have more food, such as eggs, milk and fish. They can improve your memory. Finally, you should do more exercise, get enough sleep and enough rest after hard work. It’s the key to improving your memory.     If you can do so, you will have a good memory. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍提高记忆的方法； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示内容，不要遗漏，要求语法正确，语句通顺连贯。 [写作步骤］ 第一步，承接短文开头，引入主题； 第二步，介绍提高记忆的五种方法； 第三步，总结。 [亮点词汇］ ①focus one’s attention集中某人注意力 ②think about考虑 ③go over复习 ④in time及时 ⑤It’s the key to doing sth是做某事的关键 [高分句型］ ①Thirdly, if you go over what you have learned in time, you will not forget the things easily. (if引导条件状语从句，what引导宾语从句) 3．很多学生抱怨自己总是记不住学过的东西。请根据下面内容提示，写一篇题为“The ways to improve memory”的短文。 要点提示：（1）要想记得长久，必须先理解好文章； （2）多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等； （3）及时复习，防止遗忘； （4）多做运动，保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。 要求：（1）可以适当自由发挥； （2）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； （3）词数80个左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The ways to improve memory Memory is very important in our daily life and study. Here are some ways to improve it. Firstly, when you study, you should focus your attention and don’t think about other things. Secondly, you should understand what you are learning. If so, you can remember things for a long time. Thirdly, if you go over what you have learned in time, you will not forget the things easily. Fourthly, eat more food, such as eggs, milk and fish. They are good for your brains. Finally, you should do more exercise, get enough sleep and enough rest after hard work. It’s the key to improving your memory. If you can do so, you will have a good memory. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容详细介绍如何提高记忆力，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示要点详细介绍如何提高记忆力； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①go over复习 ②in time及时 ③such as例如 ④the key to doing sth.做某事的关键 [高分句型] ①Firstly, when you study, you should focus your attention and don’t think about other things.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②Thirdly, if you go over what you have learned in time, you will not forget the things easily. (if引导的条件状语从句) 4．假设你是李敏，你的英国笔友Danny记忆力不好，为此他感到非常苦恼。请你给他发一封电子邮件，给他提出一些提高记忆力的建议，100个单词左右。 【写作提示】 1) 锻炼你的大脑 (如，改变日常习惯，保持大脑活跃 active，努力学习新技能等) 2)过健康的生活(如，吃健康的食物，有足够的睡眠等等) 3)有好的记忆方法 (如，脑海想象图画，做笔记，写日记 keep a diary等等) 4)…… (补充一条你自己的想法) 文章开头已给出： Hi, Danny, I’m your pen pal Li Ming. In your last letter, you said you were worried about having a bad memory, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Look forwards to your reply soon. Yours, Li Min 【答案】例文 Hi, Danny, I’m your pen pal Li Ming. In your last letter, you said you were worried about having a bad memory. Here are some suggestions for you. First, exercise your brain. You can change your daily habits to keep your brain active. Try to learn new skills. Second, live a healthy life. Eat healthy food like fresh vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat junk food and takeaway food. You must get enough sleep. It is important to keep good memory. Third, use good memory methods. For example, imagine pictures in your mind, take notes, and keep a diary and so on. Also, you can try to relax and reduce stress. Stress can affect your memory. Look forwards to your reply soon. Yours, Li Min 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“补充一条你自己的想法”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体阐述改善记忆力的方法； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①keep your brain active保持大脑活跃 ②live a healthy life过健康的生活 ③for example例如 ④and so on等等 [高分句型] ①You can change your daily habits to keep your brain active. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②It is important to keep good memory. (it固定句型) 进阶拓展训练4篇 5．阅读是英语学习的重要途径，阅读可以提高我们的记忆力。除此之外，阅读的好处还有很多。请你结合下面导图的信息，以“How Reading Improves My English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。 要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3.词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How Reading Improves My English Reading plays an important role in my English learning. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How Reading Improves My English Reading plays an important role in my English learning. Firstly, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved through reading. It gives me confidence when I talk in English. Secondly, reading makes my writing easier. When I do English reading, it reminds me how words are spelled correctly. So I make fewer and fewer mistakes in my English writing. Thirdly, reading develops my thinking ability. What I’ve read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more. What’s more, reading helps me develop a good habit of learning English. In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English learning. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“阅读如何改善我的英语”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，肯定阅读在英语学习中的作用； 第二步，结合导图，详细介绍阅读是如何帮助自己学习英语的； 第三步，总结阅读的重要性，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在某方面起重要作用 ②develop a good habit of养成……的好习惯 ③in a word总而言之 [高分句型] ①Firstly, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved through reading. （that引导的宾语从句） ②When I do English reading, it reminds me how words are spelled correctly. （when引导的时间状语从句） ③What I’ve read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more. （what引导的主语从句） 6．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 我校英文报开设了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是负责该栏目的Henry。近日，你收到一封署名为Mr. Worried的求助信，信的内容大致如下：面对快节奏的初三学习生活，他感到压力很大，偶尔还会失眠。最近，他发现自己常常稀里糊涂，似乎记忆力也出现了问题，为此感到十分焦虑。请给他写一封回信，针对他遇到的问题谈谈你的看法并给出两条合理的建议。 注意： ●短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 ●照抄阅读语篇不得分。 Dear Mr. Worried, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Henry 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Worried, I’ve received your letter and understand your concerns about the stress and challenges of junior high life. It’s normal to feel this way. Here is my advice. First of all, you should balance study and rest. Make sure you have a schedule that includes time for both studying and relaxing. Taking breaks can actually improve your focus and memory. What’s more, it’s a good idea to stay active. Physical activity can help reduce stress and improve sleep. Try to do some exercise in your daily routine. Hope my advice can be helpful to you. Sincerely, Henry 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文主要是针对求助信中的问题谈谈你的看法并给出两条合理的建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，针对他遇到的问题，谈谈自己的看法； 第二步，介绍自己的建议； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②make sure确保 ③stay active保持活跃 [高分句型] Make sure you have a schedule that includes time for both studying and relaxing. (that引导的定语从句) 7．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给他写封回信，提出你的建议。短文需要包含以下要点。 要求： 1.词数：80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）。 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Tom,     I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory. First of all, in order to train your brain, it’s a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, living a healthy lifestyle also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to relax after a busy day. What’s more, I suggest you not be too nervous and keep relaxed, or you can’t focus on your study the next day. Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need. I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中提高记忆力的建议要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“很高兴提供关于如何提高记忆力的建议”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“锻炼大脑、健康生活、保持放松”几个方面重点介绍提高记忆力的具体建议； 第三步，书写结语，表达美好祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①in order to为了 ②what’s more此外 ③focus on专注于 ④make sense有意义 [高分句型] Besides, living a healthy lifestyle also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to relax after a busy day.（非限制性定语从句） 8．请以“A Good Memory”为题，根据下面的内容要点写一篇短文。 内容包括： (1)好的记忆力在我们的学习中起着越来越重要的作用，好成绩常和好的记忆力有关； (2)好的记忆力给我们带来很多好处，使我们的学习更轻松； (3)好的记忆力偶尔也给我们的生活带来麻烦——我们花更长时间忘记他人的错误等； (4)拥有好的记忆力很有必要。 要求： (1)词数不少于80 (标题已给出，不计入总词数)； (2)文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥； (3)条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。 A Good Memory __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】【参考范文】 A Good Memory A good memory plays a more and more important role in our study. It can bring us lots of benefits. On the one hand, a good memory often helps us get better marks. On the other hand, we can remember things more quickly and learn lessons more easily. So we can have more free time to do the things we like. However, we sometimes can have trouble with a good memory. For example, it takes us a longer time to forget others’ mistakes and we may be unkind to those people who hurt us. In my opinion, it is necessary for us to have a good memory if we want to live a better life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“A good memory”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“好的记忆力的好处和坏处”两方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①important重要的 ②quickly快速地 ③have trouble遇到麻烦 [高分句型] ①For example, it takes us longer time to forget others’ mistakes and we may be unkind to those people who hurt us.（who引导的定语从句） ②In my opinion, it is necessary for us to have a good memory if we want to live a better life.（it固定句式） 能力综合实践4篇 9．请以“How to Improve Our Memory” 为题，写一篇短文。内容包括： 1. 你对记忆的理解； 2. 提高记忆力的方法（至少三种，如关注信息、重复、关联已知知识、健康生活等）； 3. 这些方法对你的帮助。 要求：不少于60词，语句通顺，可适当发挥。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How to Improve Our Memory   Memory is like a mental notebook that helps us store and recall information. A good memory is important for learning and daily life. Here are three ways to improve memory. First, pay full attention when learning new things. Second, review information regularly to strengthen memory. Third, connect new knowledge with what you already know, as it makes remembering easier.   These methods have helped me a lot. By focusing in class, reviewing notes, and linking ideas, I remember things better and learn more efficiently. A healthy lifestyle, like enough sleep and exercise, also boosts memory. With these tips, we can all improve our memory and achieve better results! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，引出话题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“对记忆的理解”以及“高记忆力的方法”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，表达这些方法对你的帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ②pay full attention全神贯注 ③connect …with…把……和……联系起来 ④a lot许多 ⑤healthy lifestyle健康的生活方式 [高分句型] ①Memory is like a mental notebook that helps us store and recall information. (that引导的定语从句) ②First, pay full attention when learning new things. (祈使句和时间状语从句) ③Third, connect new knowledge with what you already know, as it makes remembering easier. (what引导的宾语从句) 10．初中生活里，校园时光与真挚友谊共同构成了我们珍贵的成长记忆。假设你是八年级学生李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问你的校园生活和人际关系。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，分享你的校园生活与友谊故事。 主题 内容 Friendship 一位对你意义非凡的朋友 (外形特点、性格品质、难忘经历、兴趣爱好、未来理想……任选2-3个方面即可。) School life 你眼中的校园生活 (喜欢的学科及理由、校园设施、校园活动……任选2个方面展现校园生活的独特之处。) 注意： 1. 词数100左右。回复邮件的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数： 2. 回复邮件须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通畅； 3. 回复邮件中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your email. You asked about my friendships and school life. Now I’ll tell you something about them. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing about your school life and friends. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your email. You asked about my friendships and school life. Now I’ll tell you something about them. My best friend is Lin Tao. He’s tall, and he’s always ready to help others. Last term, I got sick and missed many math classes. He spent his free time explaining difficult problems to me, which helped me catch up quickly. We both love playing basketball—we often practice after school and cheer for each other in games. My school life is busy but interesting. My favorite subject is science because we do cool experiments. Our school also has a great library with lots of books. I often go there to read storybooks during breaks, which makes my school days more colorful. Looking forward to hearing about your school life and friends. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的好朋友林涛，主要围绕外貌、性格、难忘经历和爱好展开； 第二步，描述自己的校园生活，从“喜欢的学科”和“校园设施”两个角度展开。 [亮点词汇] ①be ready to do sth.准备做某事 ②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事 ③each other彼此 [高分句型] ①He spent his free time explaining difficult problems to me, which helped me catch up quickly. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②My favorite subject is science because we do cool experiments. (because引导原因状语从句) 11．汪曾祺说：“家人闲坐，灯火可亲。”和家人在一起是一件幸福的事。假如你是李辉，你们班正在举行一个名为“家的记忆”的主题班会，请你回忆发生在你家里的一件有意义的事情，并描述为了让你的家更加美好，你打算怎么做。按照下图提示写一篇英语短文向同学们分享。 要求： 1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Family Memories Hi, everyone. I am very happy to ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Family Memories Hi, everyone. I’m very happy to share a warm memory. Last Mid-Autumn Festival, my whole family gathered on our balcony to admire the full moon. My grandmother told the legend of Chang’e, while my father played the guitar softly. I helped my mother lay out mooncakes and fruits on the table. The moonlight and lantern light made a magical atmosphere. This simple memory taught me that family bonding is life’s sweetest gift. Those laughs and stories under the moon will always warm my heart. To make my home better, I will spend more time with my family. 【详解】[总体分析]    ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；    ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。    [写作步骤]    第一步，自我介绍并点明将分享一段温暖的家庭回忆；    第二步，描写去年中秋节全家阳台赏月、各成员互动及温馨氛围； 第三步，提炼回忆意义，并谈谈自己打算为使家更好做些什么。    [亮点词汇]    ①admire the full moon赏月 ②lay out摆开，布置 ③be happy to do sth开心做某事 [高分句型] ①My grandmother told the legend of Chang’e, while my father played the guitar softly. (while连接并列句) ②This simple memory taught me that family bonding is life’s sweetest gift. (that引导的宾语从句) 12．你对英语周的辩论赛印象特别深刻，根据以下提示，向Mike分享你的想法。 英语周辩论赛主题： Is memory the key factor in English learning? 其他人的观点 支持：记忆力好能背大量词汇。 反对：讲究方法才能学好英语。 你的观点 (请补充) 参考词汇：debate 辩论赛；key factor 关键因素 注意：   1. 文中必须包含所有内容要点，请适当发挥； 2. 词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Mike, During our English Week, we had a debate on “Is memory the key factor in English learning?” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I had a good time in the English week. What do you think about it? Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, During our English Week, we had a debate on “Is memory the key factor in English learning?” I’m writing to share my unforgettable experience with you. Some students thought a good memory helps memorize numerous words, which is essential for English learning. However, others believed learning methods are more important. They said proper ways like watching English movies and reading English stories can improve English comprehensively. In my opinion, both memory and methods are crucial. Memory helps us store knowledge, while methods guide us to use it effectively. Only by combining them can we truly master English. I had a good time in the English week. What do you think about it? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍写信目的：分享辩论赛的难忘经历； 第二步，阐述辩论赛中其他人的观点； 第三步，表明自己的观点； 第四步，总结与期待。 [亮点词汇] ①hear from sb. 收到某人的来信 ②in one’s opinion 在某人看来 [高分句型] ①Only by combining them can we truly master English. (倒装句) ②Some students thought a good memory helps memorize numerous words, which is essential for English learning. (宾语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句) 18 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 19 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 7 The secret of memory 单元话题（记忆奥秘）写作满分范文 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练4篇 1．假设你是Mary的好友Bill，Mary昨晚给你发了一封电子邮件，她向你请教如何锻炼大脑来提高记忆力，请你根据以下提示，给Mary回复一封电子邮件。 要求：80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示：1. 尝试新事物，改变日常习惯； 2. 做一些猜谜游戏或数学益智游戏； 3. 给大脑足够的时间休息，饮食要均衡，心情要放松。 参考词汇：relax，try to do，daily habit，what’s more， guessing game，maths puzzle，balanced diet Dear Mary, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Bill 2．根据要求完成大作文：80-100词；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 很多学生都抱怨总是记不住学过的东西。请根据下面内容提示写一篇题“The Ways to Improve Memory”的短文。 （1）集中精神做事；(focus your attention) （2）要想记得长久，必须先理解文章； （3）及时复习，防止遗忘； （4）多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等； （5）多做运动、保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。 The Ways to Improve Memory Memory is very important in our daily life and study. Here are some ways to improve it. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．很多学生抱怨自己总是记不住学过的东西。请根据下面内容提示，写一篇题为“The ways to improve memory”的短文。 要点提示：（1）要想记得长久，必须先理解好文章； （2）多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等； （3）及时复习，防止遗忘； （4）多做运动，保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。 要求：（1）可以适当自由发挥； （2）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； （3）词数80个左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是李敏，你的英国笔友Danny记忆力不好，为此他感到非常苦恼。请你给他发一封电子邮件，给他提出一些提高记忆力的建议，100个单词左右。 【写作提示】 1) 锻炼你的大脑 (如，改变日常习惯，保持大脑活跃 active，努力学习新技能等) 2)过健康的生活(如，吃健康的食物，有足够的睡眠等等) 3)有好的记忆方法 (如，脑海想象图画，做笔记，写日记 keep a diary等等) 4)…… (补充一条你自己的想法) 文章开头已给出： Hi, Danny, I’m your pen pal Li Ming. In your last letter, you said you were worried about having a bad memory, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Look forwards to your reply soon. Yours, Li Min 进阶拓展训练4篇 5．阅读是英语学习的重要途径，阅读可以提高我们的记忆力。除此之外，阅读的好处还有很多。请你结合下面导图的信息，以“How Reading Improves My English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。 要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3.词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How Reading Improves My English Reading plays an important role in my English learning. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 我校英文报开设了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是负责该栏目的Henry。近日，你收到一封署名为Mr. Worried的求助信，信的内容大致如下：面对快节奏的初三学习生活，他感到压力很大，偶尔还会失眠。最近，他发现自己常常稀里糊涂，似乎记忆力也出现了问题，为此感到十分焦虑。请给他写一封回信，针对他遇到的问题谈谈你的看法并给出两条合理的建议。 注意： ●短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 ●照抄阅读语篇不得分。 Dear Mr. Worried, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Henry 7．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给他写封回信，提出你的建议。短文需要包含以下要点。 要求： 1.词数：80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）。 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Tom,     I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．请以“A Good Memory”为题，根据下面的内容要点写一篇短文。 内容包括： (1)好的记忆力在我们的学习中起着越来越重要的作用，好成绩常和好的记忆力有关； (2)好的记忆力给我们带来很多好处，使我们的学习更轻松； (3)好的记忆力偶尔也给我们的生活带来麻烦——我们花更长时间忘记他人的错误等； (4)拥有好的记忆力很有必要。 要求： (1)词数不少于80 (标题已给出，不计入总词数)； (2)文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥； (3)条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。 A Good Memory __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践4篇 9．请以“How to Improve Our Memory” 为题，写一篇短文。内容包括： 1. 你对记忆的理解； 2. 提高记忆力的方法（至少三种，如关注信息、重复、关联已知知识、健康生活等）； 3. 这些方法对你的帮助。 要求：不少于60词，语句通顺，可适当发挥。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．初中生活里，校园时光与真挚友谊共同构成了我们珍贵的成长记忆。假设你是八年级学生李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问你的校园生活和人际关系。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，分享你的校园生活与友谊故事。 主题 内容 Friendship 一位对你意义非凡的朋友 (外形特点、性格品质、难忘经历、兴趣爱好、未来理想……任选2-3个方面即可。) School life 你眼中的校园生活 (喜欢的学科及理由、校园设施、校园活动……任选2个方面展现校园生活的独特之处。) 注意： 1. 词数100左右。回复邮件的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数： 2. 回复邮件须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通畅； 3. 回复邮件中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your email. You asked about my friendships and school life. Now I’ll tell you something about them. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing about your school life and friends. Yours, Li Hua 11．汪曾祺说：“家人闲坐，灯火可亲。”和家人在一起是一件幸福的事。假如你是李辉，你们班正在举行一个名为“家的记忆”的主题班会，请你回忆发生在你家里的一件有意义的事情，并描述为了让你的家更加美好，你打算怎么做。按照下图提示写一篇英语短文向同学们分享。 要求： 1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Family Memories Hi, everyone. I am very happy to ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．你对英语周的辩论赛印象特别深刻，根据以下提示，向Mike分享你的想法。 英语周辩论赛主题： Is memory the key factor in English learning? 其他人的观点 支持：记忆力好能背大量词汇。 反对：讲究方法才能学好英语。 你的观点 (请补充) 参考词汇：debate 辩论赛；key factor 关键因素 注意：   1. 文中必须包含所有内容要点，请适当发挥； 2. 词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Mike, During our English Week, we had a debate on “Is memory the key factor in English learning?” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I had a good time in the English week. What do you think about it? Li Hua 4 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 9 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $