专题05 书面表达（期末专项训练）六年级英语上学期（牛津上海版三起）

书面表达8题 01 【解题小技巧】 02【题型】书面表达 解题小技巧 一、审题：明确“3W”原则 Who（写给谁）： 确定读者（如朋友、老师、动物园管理员），调整语气（朋友用轻松语气，正式场合用礼貌语气）。 例：给朋友写信可用“Hi Tom!”，给老师写信需用“Dear Teacher,”。 What（写什么）： 圈出题目关键词，明确写作内容（如“家庭照片”需写人物、场景；“暑假”需写活动、感受）。 例：题目要求“介绍三餐”，需包含breakfast/lunch/dinner，不可只写一种。 Why（为什么写）： 明确写作目的（如分享经历、提建议、表达情感），避免偏离主题。 ▶ 例：“保护动物”主题需突出“建议”，而非单纯描述动物外貌。 二、构思：用“思维导图”列提纲 步骤： 确定主题句（开头句）：直接点明核心内容。 例：写家庭照片：“This is a photo of my family on my birthday.” 分点展开：用3-4个细节支撑主题（时间、地点、动作、感受）。 例：暑假经历：①去游泳（时间+和谁）→ ②看电影（电影名+感受）→ ③拜访祖父母（做了什么）。 结尾句：总结感受或表达希望。 例：“I had a happy holiday. I hope next summer will be fun too!” 专项练习 一、请写一则参观博物馆的日记，可从博物馆概况、你的所见和所感等方面分享你的经历。60个单词左右。 Day:_________ Date:__________ Weather:_____________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、同学们,请参考提示信息,以“Shenzhen”为题写一篇短文介绍一下深圳吧。短文需包含提供的信息内容。要求:使用正确的时态表达,语句通顺,书写规范,卷面整洁,60个单词左右。 Shenzhen Location(地理位置): the south of China; next to Hong Kong. Weather in different seasons Places to go: Dameisha Park; Wutong Mountain; Shenzhen Bay Park; Window of the World Food: seafood; lychees(荔枝) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三、请以“Air”为题参考思维导图,介绍一下空气的特点和重要性,以及我们应该怎样保持空气洁净。60个单词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、以“Trees”为题,参考下面的思维导图写一写树木对人类的贡献。60个单词左右。 Trees ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 五、地球是我们赖以生存的家园,但它现在生病了。我们应该做些什么来保护它呢?请参照思维导图,以“Saving the Earth”为题,谈谈你的看法。60个单词左右,注意书写规范。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 六、假如你是彼得,请你根据思维导图,为保护地球写一份倡议书,最少五句话。 Hello everyone! I am a student. The earth is our home. In the past________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanks, Peter 七、请你根据思维导图中Nancy 的基本信息,给她的网友Linda回一封电子邮件。 To:Linda Subject: Be my e-friend Dear Linda, Thank you for your email and photos. I'd like to be your e-friend too. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Nancy 八、Jill 的学校正在举行 Our hometown(家乡)主题展演活动。你了解你的家乡吗?先认真阅读表格中的问题,在Yes 或No选项下画“√”,再打开思路,想一想,写一写。 Questions Yes No Are there a lot of trees? Is there a lot of smoke from factories? Are there many cars and buses on the road? Are there many trees? Do people use a lot of plastic bags? Do people litter? Do people plant trees every year? Our hometown Our hometown is in the 1 .________(north/south ) of Shanxi. There 2.________________.There 4._______________________.There3.________________________________.We should keep our hometown clean and beautiful.The air is 5._________________.We shouldn't 6.________________________________. We should 7.________________________________ 参考答案 答案第1页，共2页 第9页，共9页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司zxxk.com 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 一、范文： Day:Thur. Date:15th Feb Weather: Sunny Today I went to an insect museum with my parents. There are many kinds of insects in the museum, such as ants, bees, butterflies and so on. Some are very beautiful. There are some insects that I never see in my life. I learnt a lot about them. Many insects can be found in our life, but there are also some insects that we can never see in other places. I had a good time there. I love the insect museum. 二、范文： Shenzhen Shenzhen is a modern and beautiful city. It's in the south of China, next to Hcng Kong. It's hot and sunny in summer. It's warm in winter. People like visiting Shenzhen Bay Park. They can watch birds and fly kites there.Window of the World is a place that people like to visit. They can see the models of famous buildings in the world. People can also visit Dameisha Park and Wutong Mountain. That's wonderful. People can eat different kinds of seafood and lychees. 三、范文： Air Air is very important to us. It has no colour or shape. We can't smell or taste it. We can't live without it. It keeps the plane and the bird high in the sky. However, the smoke from factories and gases from cars make the air dirty. It is bad for our health.We should plant trees to clean the air. Another way to keep the air clean is riding bikes instead of driving cars. 四、范文： Trees Trees are very important to us. We get a lot of things from them. Some fruits are growing on the trees. These fruits are deli- cious and they can help us keep healthy.We also get wood from trees. We use wood to make paper, pencils, desks and many other things in our life. Trees can keep the air clean too. Trees can help cool the air. We cannot live without trees. 五、范文： Saving the Earth Our Earth is sick because we do many bad things to it. Now we need to protect it. We should plant trees to clean the air.We should stop throwing rubbish into rivers and seas. We should use our own bags in- stead of plastic bags.We should walk or ride bikes more often. I believe our Earth will be well again. 6、 范文： Hello everyone! I am a student. The earth is our home. In the past, it was clean and beautiful—there were clear rivers and lovely animals everywhere. But now, things have changed: the water has become dirty, and many animals are in danger. We must do something to save our home! Let’s save water and protect wild animals. Small actions can make a big difference. Thanks, Peter 7、 范文： Dear Linda, Thank you for your email and photos. I'd like to be your e-friend too. I'm from China. I'm 11 years old. There are three people in my family: my mom, my dad and me. I go to Happy Primary School. My favourite subjects are Music and Science. I like dancing and playing the guitar. Yours, Nancy 8、 范文： Our hometown is in the 1. south (north/south) of Shanxi. There 2. are a lot of trees. There 3. are many cars and buses on the road, but there isn’t much smoke from factories. There 4. are few plastic bags because people don’t use them often. The air is 5. fresh and nice. We shouldn’t 6. litter or use too many plastic things. We should 7. plant more trees and keep the environment clean. We should keep our hometown clean and beautiful. $