Unit 4主题写作讲解 2025-2026学年外研版七年级英语上册

该初中英语单元复习讲义通过表格和列表系统梳理了节日工作人群写作的知识体系，将重点词汇、短语表达、写作句型等要点按照“词汇积累-短语运用-句型仿写-篇章构建”的递进关系组织，并用分点写作思路明确开头、主体、结尾的结构要点，清晰呈现写作要素的内在联系。 讲义的亮点在于“情境化写作训练”的设计，如通过短语填空“Li Jun is ______ during the Spring Festival”巩固核心短语，结合句型仿写“她在中秋节值班，而不是和家人吃月饼”培养语言表达能力，同时融入节日文化背景，提升学生的文化意识。基础学生可通过词汇表格和短语练习夯实基础，优秀学生能借助仿写和篇章写作拓展思维，教师据此可实施分层教学，支持学生自主复习与精准提升。

写作讲解：介绍节日期间的工作人群 一、作文题目 春节是中国最具温情的传统团圆节日 —— 年夜饭的热气、烟花的光亮，将 “团圆” 的暖意送进千家万户。但总有一些人会暂别自家的团圆，默默坚守在岗位上：可能是守着小区平安的保安，可能是护着道路通畅的交警，也可能是守着健康防线的医护人员。我们社区的李军叔叔，就是今年春节里坚守值班的一员。 请你写一篇短文，介绍李军叔叔的春节值班故事，需包含以下要点： 1. 介绍李军的基本信息； 1. 描述李军在春节值班期间的主要工作，以及他值班过程中发生的一件具体经历； 1. 谈谈你对像李军这样在节日里坚守岗位的人员的看法。 注意： 1. 词数 80-100； 1. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 二、重点词汇表达 单词 音标 中文含义 duty /ˈdjuːti/ 值班；职责 community /kəˈmjuːnəti/ 社区 guard /ɡɑːd/ 守卫；保安 Spring Festival /sprɪŋ ˈfestɪvl/ 春节 reunion /ˌriːˈjuːniən/ 团圆 check /tʃek/ 检查；巡查 resident /ˈrezɪdənt/ 居民 warmth /wɔːmθ/ 温暖 respect /rɪˈspekt/ 尊敬 emergency /ɪˈmɜːdʒənsi/ 紧急情况 fix /fɪks/ 修理 responsible /rɪˈspɒnsəbl/ 负责任的 三、短语表达 1. on duty（值班） 1. get together（团聚） 1. check around（巡查） 1. in need（需要帮助的） 1. be busy with（忙于） 1. send warmth（传递温暖） 1. look after（照看） 1. deal with（处理） 1. Spring Festival Eve（除夕夜） 1. stick to（坚守） 请用上面的短语填空（每空 1 个短语）： 1. Li Jun is ______ during the Spring Festival. 1. Families usually ______ to have dinner on Spring Festival Eve. 1. As a guard, Li Jun needs to ______ the community every hour. 1. He always helps residents who are ______. 1. He ______ his work and has no time to watch the gala. 1. The kind guard likes to ______ to old people. 1. We should learn to ______ people around us. 1. He knows how to ______ small emergencies. 1. ______ is the most important night of the Spring Festival. 1. Many people ______ their jobs during festivals. 【参考答案】 1. on duty 1. get together 1. check around 1. in need 1. is busy with 1. send warmth 1. look after 1. deal with 1. Spring Festival Eve 1. stick to 四、写作句型表达及仿写 1. 原句：Li Jun is a security guard who works in our community. 仿写结构：[人名] is a [职业] who works in [地点]. 仿写中文：张明是一名在我们学校工作的老师。 仿写句：Zhang Ming is a teacher who works in our school. 1. 原句：He is on duty during the Spring Festival instead of getting together with his family. 仿写结构：He/She is [状态] during [节日] instead of [和家人做的事]. 仿写中文：她在中秋节值班，而不是和家人吃月饼。 仿写句：She is on duty during the Mid-Autumn Festival instead of eating mooncakes with her family. 1. 原句：His main duties include checking the community and helping residents. 仿写结构：His/Her main duties include [动作 1（动名词形式）] and [动作 2（动名词形式）]. 仿写中文：她的主要职责包括批改作业和辅导学生。 仿写句：Her main duties include correcting homework and helping students. 1. 原句：On Spring Festival Eve, he helped an old grandma fix her broken light. 仿写结构：On [节日时间], he/she helped [某人] [做的事（动词原形）]. 仿写中文：在中秋夜，她帮助生病的小朋友喝水。 仿写句：On Mid-Autumn Night, she helped a sick kid drink water. 1. 原句：These people bring warmth to others with their hard work. 仿写结构：These people [带来的事物] to others with their [方式]. 仿写中文：这些志愿者用行动给他人带来希望。 仿写句：These volunteers bring hope to others with their actions. 1. 原句：We should show our respect to these great people. 仿写结构：We should [表达的情感动作] to these [人群]. 仿写中文：我们应该对这些可爱的老师表达感谢。 仿写句：We should show our thanks to these lovely teachers. 五、写作思路及结构 1. 开头（2 句）：引出春节团圆的背景→介绍李军。 1. 主体（3 句）：说明他的值班主要工作。 1. 结尾（2 句）：评价价值→表达自己对他们的态度。 六、整篇文章示例 For Chinese people, festivals usually mean getting together with family and having a big dinner. But for Li Jun, festivals only mean staying on duty carefully. Li Jun is a security guard in our community. Li Jun’s duty means checking around the community every hour and helping residents in need. On Spring Festival Eve, he helped an old grandma fix her broken light and the grandma thanked him warmly. But Li Jun never regrets giving up his own reunion. Li Jun is only one of the millions of people who stick to their jobs. They choose to answer the call of duty during festivals, making others’ holidays warmer. 七、写作练习 中秋节是中国的传统节日，人们常和家人围坐赏月、分享月饼，享受团圆的温馨。但医院的医护人员常常需要坚守岗位，照顾生病的患者。我们小区的王阿姨是一名护士，今年中秋节她就在医院值班。 写作要求：请写一篇短文介绍王阿姨的中秋节值班故事，需包含以下要点： 1. 介绍王阿姨的基本信息； 1. 描述她中秋节值班的主要工作，以及一件具体经历； 1. 谈谈你对这类节日里坚守岗位人员的看法。 注意： 1. 词数 80-100； 1. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 参考范文 For Chinese people, festivals usually mean enjoying mooncakes and watching the full moon with family. But for Wang Yi, festivals only mean taking care of patients in the hospital. Wang Yi is a nurse near our community. Festivals are a challenge because she has to leave her family to look after sick people. Wang Yi’s duty means taking patients’ temperatures and giving them medicine on time. On Mid-Autumn Night, she helped a sick little boy eat a sweet mooncake— the boy smiled happily at her. But Wang Yi never regrets her choice. In the heart of many people, their hard work shines brighter than festive lights. We all feel thankful to these kind people. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 写作讲解：介绍节日期间的工作人群 一、作文题目 春节是中国最具温情的传统团圆节日 —— 年夜饭的热气、烟花的光亮，将 “团圆” 的暖意送进千家万户。但总有一些人会暂别自家的团圆，默默坚守在岗位上：可能是守着小区平安的保安，可能是护着道路通畅的交警，也可能是守着健康防线的医护人员。我们社区的李军叔叔，就是今年春节里坚守值班的一员。 请你写一篇短文，介绍李军叔叔的春节值班故事，需包含以下要点： 1. 介绍李军的基本信息； 1. 描述李军在春节值班期间的主要工作，以及他值班过程中发生的一件具体经历； 1. 谈谈你对像李军这样在节日里坚守岗位的人员的看法。 注意： 1. 词数 80-100； 1. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 二、重点词汇表达 单词 音标 中文含义 duty /ˈdjuːti/ 值班；职责 community /kəˈmjuːnəti/ 社区 guard /ɡɑːd/ 守卫；保安 Spring Festival /sprɪŋ ˈfestɪvl/ 春节 reunion /ˌriːˈjuːniən/ 团圆 check /tʃek/ 检查；巡查 resident /ˈrezɪdənt/ 居民 warmth /wɔːmθ/ 温暖 respect /rɪˈspekt/ 尊敬 emergency /ɪˈmɜːdʒənsi/ 紧急情况 fix /fɪks/ 修理 responsible /rɪˈspɒnsəbl/ 负责任的 三、短语表达 1. on duty（值班） 1. get together（团聚） 1. check around（巡查） 1. in need（需要帮助的） 1. be busy with（忙于） 1. send warmth（传递温暖） 1. look after（照看） 1. deal with（处理） 1. Spring Festival Eve（除夕夜） 1. stick to（坚守） 请用上面的短语填空（每空 1 个短语）： 1. Li Jun is ______ during the Spring Festival. 1. Families usually ______ to have dinner on Spring Festival Eve. 1. As a guard, Li Jun needs to ______ the community every hour. 1. He always helps residents who are ______. 1. He ______ his work and has no time to watch the gala. 1. The kind guard likes to ______ to old people. 1. We should learn to ______ people around us. 1. He knows how to ______ small emergencies. 1. ______ is the most important night of the Spring Festival. 1. Many people ______ their jobs during festivals. 四、写作句型表达及仿写 1. 原句：Li Jun is a security guard who works in our community. 仿写结构：[人名] is a [职业] who works in [地点]. 仿写中文：张明是一名在我们学校工作的老师。 仿写句： . 1. 原句：He is on duty during the Spring Festival instead of getting together with his family. 仿写结构：He/She is [状态] during [节日] instead of [和家人做的事]. 仿写中文：她在中秋节值班，而不是和家人吃月饼。 仿写句： . 1. 原句：His main duties include checking the community and helping residents. 仿写结构：His/Her main duties include [动作 1（动名词形式）] and [动作 2（动名词形式）]. 仿写中文：她的主要职责包括批改作业和辅导学生。 仿写句： . 1. 原句：On Spring Festival Eve, he helped an old grandma fix her broken light. 仿写结构：On [节日时间], he/she helped [某人] [做的事（动词原形）]. 仿写中文：在中秋夜，她帮助生病的小朋友喝水。 仿写句： . 1. 原句：These people bring warmth to others with their hard work. 仿写结构：These people [带来的事物] to others with their [方式]. 仿写中文：这些志愿者用行动给他人带来希望。 仿写句： . 1. 原句：We should show our respect to these great people. 仿写结构：We should [表达的情感动作] to these [人群]. 仿写中文：我们应该对这些可爱的老师表达感谢。 仿写句： . 五、写作思路及结构 1. 开头（2 句）：引出春节团圆的背景→介绍李军。 1. 主体（3 句）：说明他的值班主要工作。 1. 结尾（2 句）：评价价值→表达自己对他们的态度。 六、整篇文章示例 七、写作练习 中秋节是中国的传统节日，人们常和家人围坐赏月、分享月饼，享受团圆的温馨。但医院的医护人员常常需要坚守岗位，照顾生病的患者。我们小区的王阿姨是一名护士，今年中秋节她就在医院值班。 写作要求：请写一篇短文介绍王阿姨的中秋节值班故事，需包含以下要点： 1. 介绍王阿姨的基本信息； 1. 描述她中秋节值班的主要工作，以及一件具体经历； 1. 谈谈你对这类节日里坚守岗位人员的看法。 注意： 1. 词数 80-100； 1. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $