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写作讲解:介绍家庭及家庭关系
一、作文题目
家庭是我们成长路上最温暖的港湾 —— 当我们陷入迷茫或胆怯时,家人的陪伴、鼓励与付出,总能帮我们找回前行的勇气。刚升入初中的你,第一次报名参加学校的英语演讲比赛,面对陌生的舞台和众多观众,你既期待又极度紧张,赛前甚至因害怕失误想放弃。这时,你的家人们察觉到了你的不安,用各自的方式温暖了你。请你以 “Family’s Warmth in My Speech Contest” 为题写一篇作文,要点如下:
(1)Who are your family members?
(2)What happened before and during the speech contest?(需包含 At first、Then、At last)
(3)What do you think of your family after this experience?
注意:1. 词数 80 - 100;
2. 请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3. 文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
开头:I just entered junior high school and signed up for the school English speech contest. At first, I was excited about it, but soon I felt so nervous that I even wanted to give up.
二、重点词汇表达
词汇
音标
词性
中文意思
speech
/spiːtʃ/
n.
演讲
contest
/ˈkɒntest/
n.
比赛
nervous
/ˈnɜːvəs/
adj.
紧张的
encourage
/ɪnˈkʌrɪdʒ/
v.
鼓励
prepare
/prɪˈpeə(r)/
v.
准备
stage
/steɪdʒ/
n.
舞台
audience
/ˈɔːdiəns/
n.
观众
support
/səˈpɔːt/
n.
支持
calm
/kɑːm/
v.
使平静
confident
/ˈkɒnfɪdənt/
adj.
自信的
experience
/ɪkˈspɪəriəns/
n.
经历
warmth
/wɔːmθ/
n.
温暖
三、短语表达
1. sign up for 报名参加
I _______ the school English speech contest last week.
参考答案:signed up for
1. give up 放弃
I almost wanted to _______ because I felt too nervous.
参考答案:give up
1. feel nervous 感到紧张
I _______ when I thought about standing on the stage.
参考答案:felt nervous
1. prepare for 为…… 做准备
My mom helped me _______ the speech every night.
参考答案:prepare for
1. cheer for 为…… 欢呼
My parents came to _______ me during the contest.
参考答案:cheer for
1. calm down 平静下来
My dad told me jokes to make me _______.
参考答案:calm down
1. stand on the stage 站在舞台上
At last, I _______ and started my speech.
参考答案:stood on the stage
1. finish smoothly 顺利完成
I _______ my speech with the audience’s claps.
参考答案:finished smoothly
1. in trouble 处于困境中
My family always helps me when I’m _______.
参考答案:in trouble
1. warm support 温暖的支持
I got _______ from my parents during the contest.
参考答案:warm support
四、写作句型表达及仿写结构
1. 结构:At first, I felt... because...
原句:At first, I felt so nervous that I wanted to give up because I was afraid of making mistakes on the stage.
仿写:At first, I felt so sad that I cried because I failed my math test.
中文:一开始,我因为数学考试不及格而难过地哭了。
1. 结构:Then, 家人的动作 + to encourage me.
原句:Then, my mom helped me practice the speech every night to encourage me.
仿写:Then, my dad taught me math problems carefully to help me.
中文:然后,我爸爸认真教我数学题来帮助我。
1. 结构:At last, I... and I saw 家人的反应.
原句:At last, I finished the speech smoothly and I saw my parents clapping loudly for me.
仿写:At last, I solved the math problem and I saw my teacher smiling at me.
中文:最后,我解出了这道数学题,看到老师对我微笑。
1. 结构:My family members, like... and..., always give me...
原句:My family members, like my mom and dad, always give me warm support when I’m in trouble.
仿写:My friends, like Lily and Tom, always give me help when I’m busy.
中文:我的朋友,比如莉莉和汤姆,总在我忙碌时帮我。
1. 结构:After this experience, I know that...
原句:After this experience, I know that my family is the warmest harbor in my life.
仿写:After this activity, I know that teamwork is very important.
中文:这次活动后,我知道团队合作很重要。
1. 结构:When I..., my 家人 did... to help me.
原句:When I felt nervous before the contest, my dad told me some jokes to calm me down.
仿写:When I felt tired after running, my friend gave me a bottle of water to refresh me.
中文:当我跑步后觉得累时,我的朋友给我一瓶水让我恢复精神。
五、整篇文章的写作思路及结构
1. 开头段:承接已给开头。
1. 中间段 :介绍家人及经历。
1. 结尾段:表达对家人的看法 。
六、整篇文章示例
I just entered junior high school and signed up for the school English speech contest. At first, I was excited about it, but soon I felt so nervous that I even wanted to give up.
My family members are my mom and dad. At first, I hid my anxiety, but they noticed it right away. Then, my mom helped me practice the speech every night, and my dad told funny jokes to calm me down. At last, I stood on the stage and finished my speech smoothly—I saw them clapping loudly in the audience.
After this experience, I know my family is the warmest support. Their love makes me brave enough to face any challenges.
七、写作练习
家庭是我们生活中最坚实的后盾 —— 当我们遇到困难或需要帮助时,家人总会用行动给予我们力量。刚升入初中的你,第一次要准备学校的手工展示活动,却因为手工做得不够好而着急,甚至想放弃展示。这时,你的家人(如爷爷、奶奶)察觉到了你的烦恼,一起帮你完善了作品。请你以 “Family’s Help in My Handicraft Show” 为题写一篇作文,要点如下:
(1)Who are your family members?
(2)What happened before the handicraft show?(需包含 At first、Then、At last)
(3)What do you think of your family after this experience?
注意:1. 词数 80 - 100;
2. 请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3. 文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
开头:I just entered junior high school and needed to take part in the school handicraft show. At first, I was eager to make a nice work, but soon I felt worried because my handicraft was not good enough.
参考范文
I just entered junior high school and needed to take part in the school handicraft show. At first, I was eager to make a nice work, but soon I felt worried because my handicraft was not good enough.
My family members are my grandpa and grandma. At first, I sat alone feeling upset, and they came to ask about my trouble. Then, grandpa taught me to fold paper neatly, and grandma helped decorate the work with colorful stickers. At last, we finished a beautiful paper flower together.
After this experience, I know my family is my best helper. Their care turns difficult things into easy and happy ones.
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写作讲解:介绍家庭及家庭关系
一、作文题目
家庭是我们成长路上最温暖的港湾 —— 当我们陷入迷茫或胆怯时,家人的陪伴、鼓励与付出,总能帮我们找回前行的勇气。刚升入初中的你,第一次报名参加学校的英语演讲比赛,面对陌生的舞台和众多观众,你既期待又极度紧张,赛前甚至因害怕失误想放弃。这时,你的家人们察觉到了你的不安,用各自的方式温暖了你。请你以 “Family’s Warmth in My Speech Contest” 为题写一篇作文,要点如下:
(1)Who are your family members?
(2)What happened before and during the speech contest?(需包含 At first、Then、At last)
(3)What do you think of your family after this experience?
注意:1. 词数 80 - 100;
2. 请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3. 文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
开头:I just entered junior high school and signed up for the school English speech contest. At first, I was excited about it, but soon I felt so nervous that I even wanted to give up.
二、重点词汇表达
词汇
音标
词性
中文意思
speech
/spiːtʃ/
n.
演讲
contest
/ˈkɒntest/
n.
比赛
nervous
/ˈnɜːvəs/
adj.
紧张的
encourage
/ɪnˈkʌrɪdʒ/
v.
鼓励
prepare
/prɪˈpeə(r)/
v.
准备
stage
/steɪdʒ/
n.
舞台
audience
/ˈɔːdiəns/
n.
观众
support
/səˈpɔːt/
n.
支持
calm
/kɑːm/
v.
使平静
confident
/ˈkɒnfɪdənt/
adj.
自信的
experience
/ɪkˈspɪəriəns/
n.
经历
warmth
/wɔːmθ/
n.
温暖
三、短语表达
1. sign up for 报名参加
I _______ the school English speech contest last week.
1. give up 放弃
填空:I almost wanted to _______ because I felt too nervous.
1. feel nervous 感到紧张
I _______ when I thought about standing on the stage.
1. prepare for 为…… 做准备
My mom helped me _______ the speech every night.
1. cheer for 为…… 欢呼
My parents came to _______ me during the contest.
1. calm down 平静下来
My dad told me jokes to make me _______.
1. stand on the stage 站在舞台上
At last, I _______ and started my speech.
1. finish smoothly 顺利完成
I _______ my speech with the audience’s claps.
1. in trouble 处于困境中
My family always helps me when I’m _______.
1. warm support 温暖的支持
I got _______ from my parents during the contest.
四、写作句型表达及仿写结构
1. 结构:At first, I felt... because...
原句:At first, I felt so nervous that I wanted to give up because I was afraid of making mistakes on the stage.
仿写: .
中文:一开始,我因为数学考试不及格而难过地哭了。
1. 结构:Then, 家人的动作 + to encourage me.
原句:Then, my mom helped me practice the speech every night to encourage me.
仿写: .
中文:然后,我爸爸认真教我数学题来帮助我。
1. 结构:At last, I... and I saw 家人的反应.
原句:At last, I finished the speech smoothly and I saw my parents clapping loudly for me.
仿写: .
中文:最后,我解出了这道数学题,看到老师对我微笑。
1. 结构:My family members, like... and..., always give me...
原句:My family members, like my mom and dad, always give me warm support when I’m in trouble.
仿写: .
中文:我的朋友,比如莉莉和汤姆,总在我忙碌时帮我。
1. 结构:After this experience, I know that...
原句:After this experience, I know that my family is the warmest harbor in my life.
仿写: .
中文:这次活动后,我知道团队合作很重要。
1. 结构:When I..., my 家人 did... to help me.
原句:When I felt nervous before the contest, my dad told me some jokes to calm me down.
仿写: .
中文:当我跑步后觉得累时,我的朋友给我一瓶水让我恢复精神。
五、整篇文章的写作思路及结构
1. 开头段:承接已给开头。
1. 中间段 :介绍家人及经历。
1. 结尾段:表达对家人的看法 。
六、整篇文章示例
七、写作练习
家庭是我们生活中最坚实的后盾 —— 当我们遇到困难或需要帮助时,家人总会用行动给予我们力量。刚升入初中的你,第一次要准备学校的手工展示活动,却因为手工做得不够好而着急,甚至想放弃展示。这时,你的家人(如爷爷、奶奶)察觉到了你的烦恼,一起帮你完善了作品。请你以 “Family’s Help in My Handicraft Show” 为题写一篇作文,要点如下:
(1)Who are your family members?
(2)What happened before the handicraft show?(需包含 At first、Then、At last)
(3)What do you think of your family after this experience?
注意:1. 词数 80 - 100;
2. 请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3. 文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
开头:I just entered junior high school and needed to take part in the school handicraft show. At first, I was eager to make a nice work, but soon I felt worried because my handicraft was not good enough.
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