读后续写【个人成长类：勇敢参加艺术营】讲义-2026届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦读后续写核心考点，依据高考命题规律构建“审题分析-思路构建-语言表达”三层架构，通过考点梳理（如续写逻辑连贯性）、模板指导（10句话简单易上手版本）、真题演练（2024年广州二模题）等环节，帮助学生突破内容衔接与主题升华难点，体现复习教学的系统性和针对性。 资料亮点在于采用分层教学策略与思维引导结合，针对基础薄弱学生设计简单翻译模板，通过改编原文句子（如将紧张情绪比作“风暴中的小船”）培养语言能力，借助松树生长哲理引导主题升华，提升思维品质。10句话模板快速搭建续写框架，确保学生在有限时间内高效输出，助力教师精准把控复习节奏，提升学生应考能力。

【思路2】（10句话模板思路） 简单易上手版本 Para.1 His words made me pause and think. ①衔接首句：Westons的话(对话在倒数3段)让我不禁把松树的生长方式和我自己的处境联系起来。 ②思考的内容：我一直像一棵把根埋得太深的松树，因为害怕而没有向外伸展。 ③回去将自己的想法告诉母亲。 ④母亲很支持我。 ⑤最后我决定好报名参加艺术营，母亲脸上洋溢着喜悦。 Para.2 The next Monday, I signed up for the camp. ①衔接首句：写到了之后发生的事情，新环境我紧张(事情发展曲折性)，可以将原文句子进行改编： Para.5 My stomach felt like a little boat tossed in a heavy storm when I was surrounded by strangers. ②大家热情主动，我们因对艺术共同的热爱很快便聊了起来。 ③5天下来，在艺术营中学习到了新技能 ④交了很多新朋友，变得很自信。 ⑤升华：只要迈出第一步，就能克服困难。 用最简单的话翻译：适用于基础薄弱的同学。 Para.1 His words made me pause and think. ①衔接首句：Westons的话(对话在倒数3段)让我不禁把松树的生长方式和我自己的处境联系起来。(他的话让我反思我自己) His words made me reflect on myself. ②思考的内容：我一直像一棵把根埋得太深的松树，因为害怕而没有向外伸展。 原话：If you plant the root ball too deep, the tree dies. Their roots grow out,not down —to get enough water and grow tall. I realized that planted my root ball too deep and I was too afraid to talk with strangers. ③回去将自己的想法告诉母亲。 When I got home, I told my mom about my thoughts and the pine tree. ④母亲很支持我。 My mother supported me as she did at the beginning. ⑤最后我决定好报名参加艺术营，母亲脸上洋溢着喜悦。 Finally, I decided to sign up for the art camp. A bright smile spread across her face. Para.2 The next Monday, I signed up for the camp. ①衔接首句：写到了之后发生的事情，新环境我紧张(事情发展曲折性)，可以将原文句子进行改编： Para.5 My stomach felt like a little boat tossed in a heavy storm when I was surrounded by strangers. The first day when I came to the art camp, my stomach felt like a little boat in a storm again. ②大家热情主动，我们因对艺术共同的热爱很快便聊了起来。 However, other campers were very friendly and enthusiastic. We soon became familiar with each other because of the topic of art. ③5天下来，在艺术营中学习到了新技能。 After five days, I learned new skills in the art camp. ④交了很多新朋友，变得很自信。 I also made many new friends, which made me more confident. ⑤升华：只要迈出第一步，就能克服困难。 This experience taught me that as long as I take the first step, I can overcome any difficulty. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2024年广州二模) This Friday brought a mix of emotions—both excitement and disappointment —all because of a flyer from school. When I got home, Mum saw the flyer in my hand and asked, “What’s this?” “A flyer for a five-day art camp,” I explained. “But Emily can’t go.” “Would you like to attend?” Mum asked. “You’ve always loved art.” Her words reminded me of what Emily had said earlier ,“Tessa, you’re the real artist. My brother thought the roses I painted were rocket ships.” I sighed. Mum patted my back. She knew I had a hard time jumping into something with no familiar faces around. “Maybe next year.” “Maybe,” I echoed. Then I told Mum I wanted to go outside to draw the Westons’ pine tree(松树). She nodded with an encouraging smile. As I walked into the bright sunshine, I couldn’t help but think about the art camp. I wished I felt a little bit braver. Emily could make friends with a whole bus of kids in ten minutes, but my stomach felt like a little boat tossed in a heavy storm when I was surrounded by strangers... By the time I started drawing, I had made up my mind to forget about the art camp. I began by drawing the pine tree’s strong and straight trunk, and then added the beautiful branches, making sure the upper ones lifted gently towards the sun. Lost in my work, I jumped when I heard Mr.Weston speak up, “You’ve done a great job showing the strength of that tree on paper.” “Thanks,” I smiled, glancing up. As I drew the needles to the branches, Mr.Weston told me something I never knew about pines: If you plant the root ball too deep, the tree dies. Their roots grow out,not down —to get enough water and grow tall. “You have a good eye, Tessa.” With these words, Mr.Weston nodded goodbye. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: His words made me pause and think. Paragraph 2: The next Monday, I signed up for the camp. 文章大意 Tessa 在拿到学校艺术夏令营传单后既兴奋又失望。在与母亲交谈后，她对独自参加夏令营感到犹豫，因她担心自己在陌生人面前会表现出社交恐惧。最终，她决定放弃夏令营，去屋外面画画去了。但在画松树的时候，她意外地得到了松树主人 Mr. Weston 的鼓励和赞扬，并且了解到松树为了自我的更好发展，是如何向“外”汲取养分的，这些一方面激发了她的自信，另一方面也引发了她对于松树和自身发展的深入思考，让她对原本万不得已作出的抉择产生了动摇，带来了转机。 参考答案 1 Paragraph 1: His words made me pause and think. As I reflected on his wisdom, I realized that I had been burying my own roots too deep, suffocating my growth and potential, no matter how often I was told about my talent in drawing. I had always unknowingly tuned a deaf ear, forgetting to spread my roots outward, to seek nourishment and reach for the sky. Encouraged by Mr. Weston’s words, I decided to reassess my approach to life and started branching out. Paragraph 2: The next Monday, I signed up for the camp. Once I was there, I discovered that I didn't have to be like Emily, jumping into some unfamiliar faces around to prove I was a real artist. From landscapes to portraits, and water color to oil painting, each brushstroke on the canvas was proof and brought me a lot of attention I had never experienced before. I began to make friends with other kids, the boat in my stomach rocking gently in calm waters. It was here that I truly flourished, drawing my own way to reach out for a whole new world. 参考答案 2 Paragraph 1: His words made me pause and think. Mr. Weston’s words lingered/echoed in my mind. It struck on me that I had been burying my roots too deep. I kept everything to myself and dared not to open my world up to others. Maybe, just like the pine, I needed to reach out and grow in a different direction to flourish. A gentle breeze swept through the pine branches, softly stirring up the courage within me. Later that evening, Mum was thrilled at my decision. With her encouraging gaze, I felt a surge of determination and confidence to step out of my comfort zone. Paragraph 2: The next Monday, I signed up for the camp. The first day of the camp was nerve-wracking. I felt like that little boat in a storm again as I walked into a room full of unfamiliar faces. But as the days went by, I found myself opening up, making friends with other campers who shared my love for art, and together, we explored new techniques and styles. The camp ended too soon, but I left with a newfound confidence in myself and new friendships. As I looked back at the pine tree in the Westons’ yard, I realized that, just like the tree, I had grown and reached new heights. 【思路2】（10句话模板思路） 简单易上手版本 Para.1 His words made me pause and think. ①衔接首句：Westons的话(对话在倒数3段)让我不禁把松树的生长方式和我自己的处境联系起来。 ②思考的内容：我一直像一棵把根埋得太深的松树，因为害怕而没有向外伸展。 ③回去将自己的想法告诉母亲。 ④母亲很支持我。 ⑤最后我决定好报名参加艺术营，母亲脸上洋溢着喜悦。 Para.2 The next Monday, I signed up for the camp. ①衔接首句：写到了之后发生的事情，新环境我紧张(事情发展曲折性)，可以将原文句子进行改编： Para.5 My stomach felt like a little boat tossed in a heavy storm when I was surrounded by strangers. ②大家热情主动，我们因对艺术共同的热爱很快便聊了起来。 ③5天下来，在艺术营中学习到了新技能 ④交了很多新朋友，变得很自信。 ⑤升华：只要迈出第一步，就能克服困难。 【思路2】（10句话模板思路） Para.1 His words made me pause and think. ①衔接首句：Westons的话(对话在倒数3段)让我不禁把松树的生长方式和我自己的处境联系起来。(他的话让我反思我自己) His words made me reflect on myself. ②思考的内容：我一直像一棵把根埋得太深的松树，因为害怕而没有向外伸展。 原话：If you plant the root ball too deep, the tree dies. Their roots grow out,not down —to get enough water and grow tall. I realized that planted my root ball too deep and I was too afraid to talk with strangers. ③回去将自己的想法告诉母亲。 When I got home, I told my mom about my thoughts and the pine tree. ④母亲很支持我。 My mother supported me as she did at the beginning. ⑤最后我决定好报名参加艺术营，母亲脸上洋溢着喜悦。 Finally, I decided to sign up for the art camp. A bright smile spread across her face. Para.2 The next Monday, I signed up for the camp. ①衔接首句：写到了之后发生的事情，新环境我紧张(事情发展曲折性)，可以将原文句子进行改编： Para.5 My stomach felt like a little boat tossed in a heavy storm when I was surrounded by strangers. The first day when I came to the art camp, my stomach felt like a little boat in a storm again. ②大家热情主动，我们因对艺术共同的热爱很快便聊了起来。 However, other campers were very friendly and enthusiastic. We soon became familiar with each other because of the topic of art. ③5天下来，在艺术营中学习到了新技能。 After five days, I learned new skills in the art camp. ④交了很多新朋友，变得很自信。 I also made many new friends, which made me more confident. ⑤升华：只要迈出第一步，就能克服困难。 This experience taught me that as long as I take the first step, I can overcome any difficulty. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $