专题09 写作满分范文（期末真题汇编，上海专用）六年级英语上学期

专题09 写作满分范文 1．(24-25六上·上海中学东校·期末)Write a passage with at least 60 words on the topic “I have a good ________ (father, mother, friend…)” (以“我有一个好________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Use the following points as a reference (请参考以下问题): 1. What job does he/she do? 2. What do you do together? 3. What can you learn from him/her? I have a good ________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．(24-25六上·上海兰生中学·期末)Write a passage of at least 50 words according to the following suggestions. （根据以下建议，写一篇短文不少于50字的短文。）（注：短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息，否则不予评分。） 1、假如你被学校评为“运动之星”，学校邀请你在下周的升旗仪式上和同学们分享你平时的运动情况和此次运动会上的表现，请准备一篇相关内容的发言稿。 Dear classmates, I’m happy being a Sports Star this term. ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．(24-25六上·上海宝山区·期末) Write at least 50 words about the topic “The place I want to visit most”. (以“我最想去的地方”为题。写一篇不少于50个单词的短文，要求语句正确通顺，内容连贯，标点符号不占空格。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．(24-25六上·上海静安区·期末)Write a passage of at least 50 words with the title “Better habits, better life”.（以 “更好的习惯，更好的生活” 为题，写一篇不少于50个词的短文，要求内容适当，意思连贯，标点符号不占格） Reference: You can refer to eating habits and exercise habits to structure your passage.（提示：你可以围绕饮食和运动等方面的习惯展开你的写作。） （注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．(24-25六上·上海崇明区（五四制）·期末)Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “A plan to visit________”.（以“计划一次去……的参观”为题，写一篇不少于50个单词的短文。） （注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名等相关信息，否则不给分。） Suggested questions:（以下内容仅供参考） Which place are you going to visit? How are you going to get there? What are you going to do there? What do you think of your plan? A plan to visit________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．(23-24六上·上海徐汇区位育中学·期末)Write a passage with at least 60 words about the topic “A Birthday Party”. (一次生日聚会) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．(24-25六上·上海嘉定区·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据所给情境, 写一篇不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom和他的家人将在寒假要来中国旅游。以下有三个城市供他们参考，请你根据表格信息及提示内容写一封邮件进行旅游城市的推荐，开头已给出。 City Location Attractive point Shanghai East of China The Bund / Yu Garden / Disneyland... Harbin North of China Snow World / Skiing... Sanya South of China warm weather / beautiful beaches... 内容: 1. Which city do you recommend (推荐)? 2. Why do you recommend the city? Dear Tom, I’m glad to know that you will come to China for your winter holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．(24-25六上·上海闵行区·期末)Write a sports report for the school newspaper about a sports highlight in the picture below with at least 50 words. （根据下面的图片，为学校校报写一篇运动精彩瞬间的报道。） 下列问题仅供参考： Who’s in the picture? Where are they? What sport is it? What is/are the person(s) doing? 注意： 1. 文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分； 2. 照抄本卷语篇，不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．(24-25六上·上海建平中学西校·期末)Write at least 50 words about the topic “My favourite sport” （以“我最喜欢的运动”为题写一篇不少于 50 个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 要点提示：1.你最喜欢的运动是什么？ 2.你为什么喜欢这项运动？强身健体，放松身心，…… 3.做这项运动的注意事项，如：要有家长陪同，做好准备活动，…… （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．(23-24六上·上海闵行区·期末)如果将人生比作银河，那么你的好朋友就是这银河里闪亮的星光，散发着他（她），选择你的一个好朋友，说一说他（她），写一篇不少于60个单词的短文。 注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．(24-25六上·上海浦东模范中学·期末)Clubs in your school are collecting ideas for their animal logos. Please design an animal logo for one of the clubs and give reasons. （请为学校的某一个社团设计一个动物图案的标志） Step 1: Choose I want to pick a/an ___________ (animal) for the __________ Club. Step 2: Give reasons What is special about this club? (at least three sentences) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What are the reasons for choosing this animal as a club logo?(at least two reasons) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Step 3: Draw Please draw the logo. 6．(24-25六上·上海兰生中学·期末)假设你是李军，热爱动物。你新交的英国笔友Eric与你志趣相投，为此你们有很多共同语言。请你根据以下提示给Eric写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你在热爱和保护动物方面的相关情况。 Dear Eric, I’m happy to hear from you again. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题09 写作满分范文 1．(24-25六上·上海中学东校·期末)Write a passage with at least 60 words on the topic “I have a good ________ (father, mother, friend…)” (以“我有一个好________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Use the following points as a reference (请参考以下问题): 1. What job does he/she do? 2. What do you do together? 3. What can you learn from him/her? I have a good ________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I have a good mother I have a good mother. She is a teacher and works hard every day. She helps students with their studies and often tells me stories at night. We like to go shopping and cook together on weekends. From her, I learn to be kind, patient, and hardworking. She teaches me how to become a good person. I’m lucky to have such a wonderful mother in my life. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤]   第一步，补充主题，并引出本文主题；   第二步，介绍妈妈的职业，经常和妈妈一起做的事情以及从她身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇]   ①work hard努力工作   ②help sb with sth帮助某人做某事   ③like to do sth喜欢做某事   [高分句型]   ①She teaches me how to become a good person.（疑问词+动词不定式的结构） 2．(24-25六上·上海兰生中学·期末)Write a passage of at least 50 words according to the following suggestions. （根据以下建议，写一篇短文不少于50字的短文。）（注：短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息，否则不予评分。） 1、假如你被学校评为“运动之星”，学校邀请你在下周的升旗仪式上和同学们分享你平时的运动情况和此次运动会上的表现，请准备一篇相关内容的发言稿。 Dear classmates, I’m happy being a Sports Star this term. ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear classmates,      I’m happy being a Sports Star this term. I’d like to share my sports experiences with you. My favorite sports is playing basketball. I like to play basketball with my friends after school. I also like running. I take part in the school sports meeting every year. This year, I won the first place in the 100-meter race. I think sports can make me strong and healthy. I hope you can also take part in sports activities and enjoy the fun of sports. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，引出话题； 第二步、介绍自己平时的运动情况以及此次运动会上的表现； 第三步、介绍自己的感受并希望大家喜欢运动。 [亮点词汇] ①share…with…与……分享…… ②like to do sth.喜欢做某事 ③win the first place赢得第一名 ④take part in参加 [高分句型] ①I think sports can make me strong and healthy.(省略that的宾语从句) 3．(24-25六上·上海宝山区·期末) Write at least 50 words about the topic “The place I want to visit most”. (以“我最想去的地方”为题。写一篇不少于50个单词的短文，要求语句正确通顺，内容连贯，标点符号不占空格。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： The place I want to visit most The place I want to visit most is Xiamen. First of all, I have never been to Xiamen before, so I want to go there very much. Secondly, it is said that the scenery is so fascinating that it is truly worth visiting. There are so many things I can do there. For example, Gulangyu Island is a good place for sightseeing. Then I can taste the delicious seafood. At last, I hope to visit Xiamen University, which is very famous in China and it is also my dream university. I can’t wait to go there! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：以 “一般现在时” 为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍你最想参观的地方； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all 首先 ②for example 例如 ③at last 最后 ④can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待地想做某事 [高分句型] ①First of all, I have never been to Xiamen before, so I want to go there very much. (so连接的并列句) ②At last, I hope to visit Xiamen University, which is very famous in China and it is also my dream university.  (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 4．(24-25六上·上海静安区·期末)Write a passage of at least 50 words with the title “Better habits, better life”.（以 “更好的习惯，更好的生活” 为题，写一篇不少于50个词的短文，要求内容适当，意思连贯，标点符号不占格） Reference: You can refer to eating habits and exercise habits to structure your passage.（提示：你可以围绕饮食和运动等方面的习惯展开你的写作。） （注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Better habits, better life I’m Liu Tao. I have many good habits. I often get up early every morning and run for half an hour. I also play ball games with my classmates at school. Doing sports makes me happy and strong. At the same time, good eating habits are necessary. I eat different kinds of fruits and vegetables. I read books every day. Reading gives me a lot of pleasure. As you can see, good habits help me live a wonderful life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以 “更好的习惯，更好的生活” 为题进行写作，可适当发挥，注意表述清晰，并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，表达自己有好的习惯； 第二步，从运动和饮食方面介绍自己的习惯； 第三步，进行总结，介绍好习惯的好处。 [亮点词汇] ①get up early 早起 ②at the same time 同时 ③different kinds of... 不同种类的…… [高分句型] Doing sports makes me happy and strong.  (动名词作主语) 5．(24-25六上·上海崇明区（五四制）·期末)Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “A plan to visit________”.（以“计划一次去……的参观”为题，写一篇不少于50个单词的短文。） （注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名等相关信息，否则不给分。） Suggested questions:（以下内容仅供参考） Which place are you going to visit? How are you going to get there? What are you going to do there? What do you think of your plan? A plan to visit________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A plan to visit Hainan Here is my plan for my trip. I will visit Hainan with my parents next week. We are going to stay there for a week. We will go there by plane. We will swim in the sea, walk along the beach, eat local food and buy something for my friends and relatives. Of course we will visit the flower market and buy some beautiful flowers. I think we will have a good time. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：一般将来时为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏“提示信息”中的任何信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体阐述旅行的计划，包括要去的地方，出行方式以及在那里要做的事情等； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① by plane乘飞机 ② of course当然 [高分句型] ① We will swim in the sea, walk along the beach, eat local food and buy something for my friends and relatives.（and连接的并列句） ② I think we will have a good time.（宾语从句） 6．(23-24六上·上海徐汇区位育中学·期末)Write a passage with at least 60 words about the topic “A Birthday Party”. (一次生日聚会) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Birthday Party Last weekend was my thirteenth birthday. It’s on April 10th. I had a birthday party at home. I invited all my friends to the party. First, we decorated my house with some flowers and balloons. Then, I shared my birthday cake with my friends. And we also played games and told funny stories. The party lasted two hours. I think we all had a good time. 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，是一篇记叙文。 ②时态：时态为一般过去时。 ③提示：根据所给题目完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 【写作步骤】 第一步，介绍生日派对举行的时间、地点以及多少岁生日； 第二步，具体介绍为生日派对都做什么了； 第三步，最后总结生日派对很好。 【亮点词汇】 ①at home在家 ②decorate…with…用……装饰…… ③play games玩游戏 ④have a good time玩得开心 【高分句型】①I think we all had a good time. (I think+宾语从句) 1．(24-25六上·上海嘉定区·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据所给情境, 写一篇不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom和他的家人将在寒假要来中国旅游。以下有三个城市供他们参考，请你根据表格信息及提示内容写一封邮件进行旅游城市的推荐，开头已给出。 City Location Attractive point Shanghai East of China The Bund / Yu Garden / Disneyland... Harbin North of China Snow World / Skiing... Sanya South of China warm weather / beautiful beaches... 内容: 1. Which city do you recommend (推荐)? 2. Why do you recommend the city? Dear Tom, I’m glad to know that you will come to China for your winter holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, I’m glad to know that you will come to China for your winter holiday. I understand you’re exploring different cities, and I’d like to suggest Shanghai. Shanghai, located in the east of China, offers a unique blend of modern skyscrapers and traditional Chinese culture. You can stroll along the Bund, enjoying the stunning views of the city skyline. Exploring the beautiful Yu Garden will give you a taste of traditional Chinese architecture. Plus, if you’re interested in theme parks, Disneyland Shanghai is an exciting option. I believe Shanghai provides a perfect mix of experiences that your whole family would enjoy. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要推荐上海； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍上海的位置、景点及推荐的原因； 第三步，书写结语。祝对方旅行愉快。 [亮点词汇] ①explore探索 ②unique独特的 ③option选择 [高分句型] ①I understand you’re exploring different cities, and I’d like to suggest Shanghai. (宾语从句；并列句) ②Plus, if you’re interested in theme parks, Disneyland Shanghai is an exciting option. (条件状语从句) ③I believe Shanghai provides a perfect mix of experiences that your whole family would enjoy. (宾语从句；定语从句) 2．(24-25六上·上海闵行区·期末)Write a sports report for the school newspaper about a sports highlight in the picture below with at least 50 words. （根据下面的图片，为学校校报写一篇运动精彩瞬间的报道。） 下列问题仅供参考： Who’s in the picture? Where are they? What sport is it? What is/are the person(s) doing? 注意： 1. 文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分； 2. 照抄本卷语篇，不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last week, our school had an exciting soccer match on the field. Our class played against Class Two. The players were all very energetic and excited. They all worked hard to help their team win. When our team’s top player, Zhang Wei, scored a fantastic goal, the crowd cheered loudly, and our teammates rushed to congratulate him. At last, our class won the match and we were proud of ourselves. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容和图片写一篇运动精彩瞬间的报道，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示内容和图片详细介绍这一运动精彩瞬间； 第三步，介绍比赛的结果。 [亮点词汇] ①work hard努力工作 ②at last最后 ③be proud of为……感到骄傲 [高分句型] When our team’s top player, Zhang Wei, scored a fantastic goal, the crowd cheered loudly, and our teammates rushed to congratulate him. (时间状语从句) 3．(24-25六上·上海建平中学西校·期末)Write at least 50 words about the topic “My favourite sport” （以“我最喜欢的运动”为题写一篇不少于 50 个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 要点提示：1.你最喜欢的运动是什么？ 2.你为什么喜欢这项运动？强身健体，放松身心，…… 3.做这项运动的注意事项，如：要有家长陪同，做好准备活动，…… （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My favourite sport My favourite sport is swimming. I love it because it makes me strong and healthy, and helps me relax. When I swim, I always feel refreshed and energized. However, it’s important to swim safely. We should be accompanied by parents and do warm-up exercises beforehand. It’s also crucial not to swim in unsafe waters. Swimming is a great way to keep fit, and I encourage everyone to engage in sports regularly to stay healthy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍最喜欢的运动是游泳，并表达这项运动的好处； 第二步，介绍做这项运动时的注意事项； 第三步，建议人们多运动。 [亮点词汇] ①be accompanied by sb在某人的陪同下 ②crucial至关重要的 ③keep fit保持健康 [高分句型] ①I love it because it makes me strong and healthy, and helps me relax. (because引导原因状语从句) ②When I swim, I always feel refreshed and energized. (when引导时间状语从句) 4．(23-24六上·上海闵行区·期末)如果将人生比作银河，那么你的好朋友就是这银河里闪亮的星光，散发着他（她），选择你的一个好朋友，说一说他（她），写一篇不少于60个单词的短文。 注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My good friend is Tony Smith. He is 12 years old. He is from England. His father is a doctor and his mother is a teacher. He is in Class One, Grade Seven. He likes basketball, which is his favorite sport. He plays basketball after school every day. His favorite season is spring, because he thinks it is warm and beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍“我”的好朋友； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍好朋友的个人信息； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①favorite最喜欢的 ②season季节 ③beautiful美丽的 [高分句型] ①He likes basketball, which is his favorite sport.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②His favorite season is spring, because he thinks it is warm and beautiful.（because引导的原因状语从句） 5．(24-25六上·上海浦东模范中学·期末)Clubs in your school are collecting ideas for their animal logos. Please design an animal logo for one of the clubs and give reasons. （请为学校的某一个社团设计一个动物图案的标志） Step 1: Choose I want to pick a/an ___________ (animal) for the __________ Club. Step 2: Give reasons What is special about this club? (at least three sentences) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What are the reasons for choosing this animal as a club logo?(at least two reasons) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Step 3: Draw Please draw the logo. 【答案】【小题1】panda   Environmental Protection 【小题2】例文： The Environmental Protection Club focuses on raising awareness about protecting nature. Members participate in activities like tree planting, recycling programs, and wildlife conservation. The club encourages students to care for the planet and create a sustainable future. First, the panda is a symbol of wildlife conservation and environmental awareness, making it perfect for this club. Second, pandas are widely loved and can inspire people to take action to protect animals and their habitats. 【小题3】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：设计并解释一个社团的动物图标，强调与社团特质和目标的关联性； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：选择与社团活动和目标相符的动物作为标志，并在设计中加入代表社团理念的元素。 [写作步骤] 第一步，选择一个与社团理念相符合的动物作为图标的核心元素； 第二步，描述社团的特殊性，包括其活动和目标。解释选择该动物作为社团图标的原因，考虑动物的象征意义和与社团目标的关联； 第三步，根据选择的动物和社团的特点设计一个简单的图标。 [亮点词汇] ①Environmental Protection 环境保护 ②wildlife conservation 野生动物保护 ③sustainable future 可持续的未来 ④raising awareness 提高认识 [高分句型] ①First, the panda is a symbol of wildlife conservation and environmental awareness, making it perfect for this club.(现在分词作伴随状语) 6．(24-25六上·上海兰生中学·期末)假设你是李军，热爱动物。你新交的英国笔友Eric与你志趣相投，为此你们有很多共同语言。请你根据以下提示给Eric写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你在热爱和保护动物方面的相关情况。 Dear Eric, I’m happy to hear from you again. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Eric,      I’m happy to hear from you again. I’m glad to know that we both love animals. I want to share with you my experiences in animal protection. I love pandas the most because they are so cute and gentle. I often go to the zoo to see them and learn about their living habits. I also participate in activities to protect animals. For example, I joined a volunteer group to help take care of animals last summer. I also try to spread the knowledge of animal protection to my friends and family. I hope to learn more about your experiences in animal protection. I believe that by working together, we can make a difference in protecting animals.     I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Jun 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，引出话题； 第二步、介绍自己在热爱和保护动物方面的相关情况； 第三步、询问对方在保护动物方面的经验并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①hear from…收到……的信 ②participate in参加 ③take care of照顾 ④make a difference in…对……产生影响 ⑤look forward to盼望 [高分句型] ①I love pandas the most because they are so cute and gentle.(because引导原因状语从句) 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $