Unit 3 主题写作讲解学案 2025-2026学年沪教版英语七年级上册

写作讲解:季节主题描述及活动 一、作文题目 假设你是李华,你的加拿大笔友 Mike 即将来深圳交换学习三个月,他想提前了解深圳的四季以及最适合体验本地生活的季节。请根据以下信息要点给 Mike 回一封邮件。 信息要点: 1. 简单介绍深圳的四季特点; 1. 推荐来深圳的最佳季节,并简要说明理由(如天气舒适、适合户外活动、传统节日等); 1. 设计三天的行程框架(每天包含 1 个景点或活动,需体现深圳特色); 1. 给出一个旅行小贴士(如穿衣建议、交通方式等)。 要求: 1. 覆盖所有的信息要点,不能缺漏; 1. 词数 80 词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 1. 可适当发挥,但要注意语言通顺、流畅、准确。 参考词汇:主题公园(theme park);乳鸽(roast pigeon);公共交通(public transportation);轻便衣服(light clothes) 二、重点词汇表达 词汇 音标 中文含义 season / si zn/ 季节 subtropical / s b tr p kl/ 亚热带的 climate / kla m t/ 气候 comfortable / k mf rt bl/ 舒适的 outdoor / a td r/ 户外的 activity / k t v ti/ 活动 schedule / edju l/ 行程 attraction / tr k n/ 景点 local / lo kl/ 本地的 recommend / rek mend/ 推荐 transportation / tr nsp r te n/ 交通 exchange / ks t e nd / 交换 pleasant / pleznt/ 宜人的 humid / hju m d/ 潮湿的 三、短语表达 1. subtropical climate 亚热带气候 1. four seasons 四季 1. best season 最佳季节 1. outdoor activities 户外活动 1. three-day plan 三天行程 1. local food 本地美食 1. public transportation 公共交通 1. light clothes 轻便衣服 短语填空 请用上面的短语补全句子,每空填 1 个短语: 1. Shenzhen has a _ with distinct seasonal features. 1. Let me tell you about Shenzhen’s _ first. 1. Autumn is the _ to visit Shenzhen. 1. The cool weather is perfect for _. 1. I’ve prepared a _ for your stay. 1. Don’t miss the delicious _ like roast pigeon. 1. It’s convenient to take _ in Shenzhen. 1. You’d better wear _ since the weather is still warm. 四、写作句型及仿写 1. 原句:Shenzhen has a subtropical climate. Spring is warm and rainy, summer is hot and humid, autumn is cool and pleasant, and winter is mild. 仿写结构:... has a... climate. Spring is..., summer is..., autumn is..., and winter is... 仿写句中文:广州是亚热带气候。春天温暖多雨,夏天炎热潮湿,秋天凉爽宜人,冬天温和。 仿写句英文: . 1. 原句:I recommend autumn because the weather is comfortable, perfect for outdoor activities and traditional festivals. 仿写结构:I recommend... because..., perfect for... and... 仿写句中文:我推荐春天去杭州,因为天气宜人,很适合赏花和户外野餐。 仿写句英文: . 1. 原句:For a three-day plan: Day 1, visit Window of the World theme park; Day 2, try local food like roast pigeon; Day 3, explore Shenzhen Bay Park. 仿写结构:For a... plan: Day 1,...; Day 2,...; Day 3,... 仿写句中文:三天行程安排:第一天,参观故宫;第二天,品尝北京烤鸭;第三天,游览颐和园。 仿写句英文: . 1. 原句:Remember to wear light clothes and use public transportation for convenience. 仿写结构:Remember to... and... for convenience. 仿写句中文:记得带雨伞并乘地铁出行,这样更方便。 仿写句英文: . 1. 原句:I’m sure you will have a great time here. 仿写结构:I’m sure you will... here. 仿写句中文:我确信你会在成都玩得很开心。 仿写句英文: . 五、写作思路及结构 1. 开头(邮件承接) 1. 主体 1(四季特点) 1. 主体 2(最佳季节) 1. 主体 3(三天行程) 1. 主体 4(旅行小贴士) 1. 结尾 六、整篇文章示例 七、写作练习 假设你是李华,你的美国笔友 Lisa 即将来上海交换学习两个月,她想了解上海的四季及最佳体验季节。请根据以下要点回邮件: 1. 介绍上海的四季特点(亚热带气候:春暖湿、夏炎热、秋凉爽、冬湿冷); 1. 推荐最佳季节(秋季)及理由(天气舒适、适合逛外滩、有中秋等节日); 1. 设计三天行程(Day1:逛外滩;Day2:尝生煎包等本地美食;Day3:游上海迪士尼乐园); 1. 旅行小贴士(穿轻便外套、乘地铁出行)。 要求:词数 80 词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:the Bund(外滩);pan-fried buns(生煎包);Shanghai Disneyland(上海迪士尼乐园);subway(地铁) 1 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 写作讲解：季节主题描述及活动 一、作文题目 假设你是李华，你的加拿大笔友 Mike 即将来深圳交换学习三个月，他想提前了解深圳的四季以及最适合体验本地生活的季节。请根据以下信息要点给 Mike 回一封邮件。 信息要点： 1. 简单介绍深圳的四季特点； 1. 推荐来深圳的最佳季节，并简要说明理由（如天气舒适、适合户外活动、传统节日等）； 1. 设计三天的行程框架（每天包含 1 个景点或活动，需体现深圳特色）； 1. 给出一个旅行小贴士（如穿衣建议、交通方式等）。 要求： 1. 覆盖所有的信息要点，不能缺漏； 1. 词数 80 词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 1. 可适当发挥，但要注意语言通顺、流畅、准确。 参考词汇：主题公园（theme park）；乳鸽（roast pigeon）；公共交通（public transportation）；轻便衣服（light clothes） 二、重点词汇表达 词汇 音标 中文含义 season /ˈsiːzn/ 季节 subtropical /ˌsʌbˈtrɒpɪkl/ 亚热带的 climate /ˈklaɪmɪt/ 气候 comfortable /ˈkʌmfərtəbl/ 舒适的 outdoor /ˈaʊtdɔːr/ 户外的 activity /ækˈtɪvəti/ 活动 schedule /ˈʃedjuːl/ 行程 attraction /əˈtrækʃn/ 景点 local /ˈloʊkl/ 本地的 recommend /ˌrekəˈmend/ 推荐 transportation /ˌtrænspɔːrˈteɪʃn/ 交通 exchange /ɪksˈtʃeɪndʒ/ 交换 pleasant /ˈpleznt/ 宜人的 humid /ˈhjuːmɪd/ 潮湿的 三、短语表达 1. subtropical climate 亚热带气候 1. four seasons 四季 1. best season 最佳季节 1. outdoor activities 户外活动 1. three-day plan 三天行程 1. local food 本地美食 1. public transportation 公共交通 1. light clothes 轻便衣服 短语填空 请用上面的短语补全句子，每空填 1 个短语： 1. Shenzhen has a ____________ with distinct seasonal features. 1. Let me tell you about Shenzhen’s ____________ first. 1. Autumn is the ____________ to visit Shenzhen. 1. The cool weather is perfect for ____________. 1. I’ve prepared a ____________ for your stay. 1. Don’t miss the delicious ____________ like roast pigeon. 1. It’s convenient to take ____________ in Shenzhen. 1. You’d better wear ____________ since the weather is still warm. 短语填空参考答案 1. subtropical climate 1. four seasons 1. best season 1. outdoor activities 1. three-day plan 1. local food 1. public transportation 1. light clothes 四、写作句型及仿写 1. 原句：Shenzhen has a subtropical climate. Spring is warm and rainy, summer is hot and humid, autumn is cool and pleasant, and winter is mild. 仿写结构：... has a... climate. Spring is..., summer is..., autumn is..., and winter is... 仿写句中文：广州是亚热带气候。春天温暖多雨，夏天炎热潮湿，秋天凉爽宜人，冬天温和。 仿写句英文：Guangzhou has a subtropical climate. Spring is warm and rainy, summer is hot and humid, autumn is cool and pleasant, and winter is mild. 1. 原句：I recommend autumn because the weather is comfortable, perfect for outdoor activities and traditional festivals. 仿写结构：I recommend... because..., perfect for... and... 仿写句中文：我推荐春天去杭州，因为天气宜人，很适合赏花和户外野餐。 仿写句英文：I recommend spring to visit Hangzhou because the weather is pleasant, perfect for enjoying flowers and outdoor picnics. 1. 原句：For a three-day plan: Day 1, visit Window of the World theme park; Day 2, try local food like roast pigeon; Day 3, explore Shenzhen Bay Park. 仿写结构：For a... plan: Day 1,...; Day 2,...; Day 3,... 仿写句中文：三天行程安排：第一天，参观故宫；第二天，品尝北京烤鸭；第三天，游览颐和园。 仿写句英文：For a three-day plan: Day 1, visit the Forbidden City; Day 2, try local food like Beijing Roast Duck; Day 3, explore the Summer Palace. 1. 原句：Remember to wear light clothes and use public transportation for convenience. 仿写结构：Remember to... and... for convenience. 仿写句中文：记得带雨伞并乘地铁出行，这样更方便。 仿写句英文：Remember to take an umbrella and take the subway for convenience. 1. 原句：I’m sure you will have a great time here. 仿写结构：I’m sure you will... here. 仿写句中文：我确信你会在成都玩得很开心。 仿写句英文：I’m sure you will have a wonderful time in Chengdu. 五、写作思路及结构 1. 开头（邮件承接） 1. 主体 1（四季特点） 1. 主体 2（最佳季节） 1. 主体 3（三天行程） 1. 主体 4（旅行小贴士） 1. 结尾 六、整篇文章示例 Dear Mike, I’m so happy to hear you’ll come to Shenzhen for an exchange! I’d like to tell you about the city’s seasons and some travel tips to experience local life. Shenzhen has a subtropical climate. Spring is warm and rainy, summer is hot and humid, autumn is cool and pleasant, and winter is mild. I recommend autumn because the weather is comfortable, perfect for outdoor activities and traditional festivals. For a three-day plan: Day 1, visit Window of the World theme park; Day 2, try local food like roast pigeon; Day 3, explore Shenzhen Bay Park. Remember to wear light clothes and use public transportation for convenience. Welcome to Shenzhen! I’m sure you will have a great time here. Yours, Li Hua 七、写作练习 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友 Lisa 即将来上海交换学习两个月，她想了解上海的四季及最佳体验季节。请根据以下要点回邮件： 1. 介绍上海的四季特点（亚热带气候：春暖湿、夏炎热、秋凉爽、冬湿冷）； 1. 推荐最佳季节（秋季）及理由（天气舒适、适合逛外滩、有中秋等节日）； 1. 设计三天行程（Day1：逛外滩；Day2：尝生煎包等本地美食；Day3：游上海迪士尼乐园）； 1. 旅行小贴士（穿轻便外套、乘地铁出行）。 要求：词数 80 词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：the Bund（外滩）；pan-fried buns（生煎包）；Shanghai Disneyland（上海迪士尼乐园）；subway（地铁） 参考范文 Dear Lisa, I’m excited to know you’re coming to Shanghai for an exchange! Let me share the city’s seasons and travel tips with you. Shanghai has a subtropical climate. Spring is warm and wet, summer is hot, autumn is cool, and winter is wet and cold. I recommend autumn—it’s comfortable, perfect for visiting the Bund and celebrating festivals like Mid-Autumn Festival. For a three-day plan: Day1, visit the Bund; Day2, try local food like pan-fried buns; Day3, enjoy Shanghai Disneyland. Remember to wear a light coat and take the subway for convenience. I’m sure you’ll love Shanghai! Yours, Li Hua 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $