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Section B (3a-SC)
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Sad movies make me cry.
Unit 11
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1.pull together 齐心协力
2.let…down 使……失望
3.kick sb. off 开除
4.be hard on sb 对某人苛刻;对某人要求严厉
5.learn from your mistakes 从错误中吸取教训
6. keep one's eyes on 用眼睛盯着看
7.rather than 而不是
8.continue to do sth 继续做某事
9.nod in agreement 点头同意
10.to one’s relief 令某人欣慰的是
Dictation
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Key sentences
1. 当他独自走回家时,他感到双肩沉重。
He felt like there was a heavy weight on his shoulders as he walked home alone.
2.另一半是学习怎样和你的队友沟通并从错误中吸取教训。
The other half is learning how to communicate with your teammates and learning from your mistakes.
3. 彼得什么也没说,但他父亲的话让他仔细考虑。
Peter didn’t say anything, but what his father said made him think carefully.
4.第二天,彼得心中没有害怕而是勇敢地去参加了足球训练。
The next day, Peter went to soccer practice with courage rather than fear in his heart.
5.如果我们继续齐心协力,我们会赢下一场比赛的。
If we continue to pull together, we’re going to win the next one.
6. 使他吃惊和轻松的是,他的所有队友都赞同地点头。
To his surprise and relief, his teammates all nodded in agreement.
7. 知道自己在一支胜利的队伍中,他感到很幸运。
It made him feel lucky to know that he was on a winning team.
Review
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To learn the key sentence:
Think of some experiences that made you feel very happy or sad.
To learn how to write a narrative composition similar to the one in 2b
To check yourself
Learning goals
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Positive
Negative
happy
relaxed
comfortable
...
unhappy nervous worried awful angry uneasy sad
uncomfortable
...
Task 1: Review
Expressions about feelings
Let’s review
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getting good/
bad grades
winning/losing
a competition
your first trip
outside your hometown
performing something well/badly
What makes you happy or sad ?
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• winning/losing a competition
• getting good/bad grades on an exam
• performing something well/badly in front of a big group of people
• getting into a fight with your best friend
• your first trip outside your hometown
Think of some experiences that made you feel very happy
or sad. Tell your partner about them.
Use the following ideas to help you.
3a
Which experiences gave you positive or negative feelings?
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Peter’s father gave him advice.
Do you remember the story—The Winning Team?
Peter missed a goal.
Peter realized that he was worried for no reason.
Peter talked to his teammates.
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How did it make you feel ?
experience
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and why?
1
What happened?
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What did you learn from the experience?
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When & Where did it happen?
How to talk about experiences ?
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本单元的话题是“Feelings(情感)”.
谈论人或事物或经历给人们的生活和情感带来的影响。
写作时,要求能针对日常生活中的一些人或事物或经历,描述事物经历以及自己或他人的感受。
语篇结构通常是记叙文。主要说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果,即5W1H( what, who, when, where, why)和(how)。
人称应是________人称,时态应是_________。
话题分析(Topic Analysis)
第一
过去时
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Make an outline
outline
Beginning
Body
Ending
开篇点题
事件及经历
总结感受
What
What I learned...
5W1H
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Write a story similar to the one in 2b using your notes in 3a.
3b
In your story, try to explain the following:
• What happened?
• When did it happen?
• Where did it happen?
• How did it make you feel? Why?
• What did you learn from the experience?
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A Regretful Thing
In the past three years, the life of middle school has impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. The following is one of them.
Xiao Ming was one of my good friends. One day, a little thing caused a serious quarrel between us. From then on, we didn’t talk to each other. I hoped to make peace with him but I finally failed to do that because I was afraid of losing face. Not until he moved to another city with his parents did I know I lost my friend forever.
The lesson I learned from this is that if you realize your mistakes, you should correct them at once, or you may leave yourself lasting regret.
Sample writing
Beginning
Ending
Body
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实
战
演
练
每个人都有幸运和不幸运的时候,在你的记忆中,
你所经历的最开心或最糟糕的一天是什么样子?
写出你的经历和感受。
不少于80词。
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I still remember the bad day I have experienced was a Tuesday.
I woke up late because my clock didn’t go off. I was nervous. I would be late for class. When I got to school, my English teacher was having class. As a result, my teacher punished me and I felt sad. At the beginning of the second class, my math teacher asked us to hand in math homework. I found I had left it at home, so I had to explain to him, which made me very afraid. After the lunch, I had a fight with my best friend. My headteacher was so angry that he kicked me off the classroom and sent me home. I realized I let my parents down.
That night I thought about these things carefully and decided to make a change and I believed I could be a better boy soon.
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Ending
Body
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【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,需要详细描述最开心或最糟糕的一天是什么样子,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首句点题,介绍作者经历过的糟糕的一天是周二;
第二步,具体阐述周二这一天,作者经历的一些不开心的事情;
第三步,最后作者决定改变,做一个好男孩。
[亮点词汇]
①go off(电器设备)停止运转
②ask sb to do sth要求某人做某事
③make sb adj使某人……
[高分句型]
①I still remember the bad day I have experienced was a Tuesday.(省略that的定语从句)
②I found I had left it at home, so I had to explain to him, which made me very afraid.(found后是省略that的宾语从句;which引导非限制性定语从句)
③My headteacher was so angry that he kicked me off the classroom and sent me home.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)
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Peer
-editing
Good Structure
Correct grammar/spelling
Good sentences
Linking words
Beautiful writing
Exchange your articles, help each other correct them.
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My First Template
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How did it make you feel ?
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and why?
1
What happened?
5
What did you learn from the experience?
2
When & Where did it happen?
How to talk about experiences ?
experience
开篇点题
事件及经历
5W1H
总结感受
outline
Summary
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Put the words in the appropriate place in the chart.
Self Check
nervous unhappy
uncomfortable worried
comfortable relaxed
angry awful
happy uneasy
Positive
Negative
nervous
unhappy
uncomfortable
worried
angry
awful
uneasy
happy
relaxed
comfortable
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Write sentences using the words given.
sad movies / cry
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2. speaking in front of many people / nervous
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3. money and fame / not always happy
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4. soft piano music / relaxed
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5. rainy days / stay at home and watch TV
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Sad movies make me cry.
Speaking in front of many people makes me nervous.
Money and fame cannot always make me happy.
Soft piano music makes me relaxed.
Rainy days make me want to stay at home and watch TV.
Practice
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1. Review the new words and expressions in Unit 11.
2. Polish your writing according to your group members’ advice.
3. Finish the exercises in workbooks.
4. Preview the new words and expressions in Unit 12.
Homework
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