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基础
必练
主题01通知
01
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市第五十二中学期末)
本周日,同学们将去美术博物馆(the Art Museum)参观。假如你是学生会主席,请根据下面要点和
要求,用英文向你校国际交换生发布一则不少于40词的通知。
要点:
(1)早7:30在学校门口集合;
(2)将会乘坐校车前往美术博物馆;
(3)将会在中午12:00返回:
(4)记得带笔和笔记本;
(⑤)参观时做好记录。
要求:要点齐全:表述通顺;简洁得体。
Notice
Dear students.
Student Union
LiHua
02
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市德惠市第三中学期末)
2.传统节日是承载优秀文化历史的重要载体,假如你是学生会主席,即将举办一场以“中秋节”为主
题的演讲比赛(speech competition),请根据以下要点提示和要求,用英语发布一则不少于40词的通知。
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要点:1、活动时间。2、活动地点。3、演讲内容。4、报名方式。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体。
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主题02电子邮件
01
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市双阳区·期末)
假如你是李华,你的笔友David想了解中国的传统手工艺术形式。请用英语给他写一封不少于40词
的邮件,向他介绍一种你最喜欢的中国传统手工艺术形式,对其做简要描述,并谈谈你喜欢它的原因。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体。
Dear David.
How is it going?
LiHua
02
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市朝阳区长春外国语学校·期末)
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Lu©y对中国文化很感兴趣。她给你发来邮件,询问中国人日常生活中
的基本社交礼仪,如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复她。要求40词左右,开头己给出,不计入总
词数。
Dear Lucy,
I'm glad to know that you're interested in Chinese social manners.Let me tell you some of them.
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I hope the above is helpful.Please feel free to ask for more information
Yours,
LiHua
主题03书信
01
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市净月高新技术产业开发区·期末)
2025年1月,长春市净月潭将举办盛大的冰雪节,特邀请一些外国友人参加,现需招募志愿者数名。
假如你是李华,想申请成为一名志愿者。请根据所给要点写一封不少于40词的申请信。
要点:1.表达意愿;
2.说明优势。
要求:1.要点齐全;表达通顺;简洁得体:
2.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Li,
Li Hua
02
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市绿园区·期末)
临近寒假,长春冰雪大世界(Changchun Ice and Snow World)开通多条专线直通车,面向全国游客开
放,并在全市范围内招募志愿者,要求应聘者具备良好的沟通能力和充足的闲暇时间。假如你是李华,对
此十分感兴趣,请你用英语写一则不少于40词的申请信。
要求:
(1)要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体:
(2)开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
进阶提升
主题01话题作文
01
(2425九年级上·吉林省长春市农安县·期末)
每当朋友之间即将分手的时候,耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我,如果你正享
受幸福,请你忘记我..”。请围绕Friends这一主题,写一篇40词左右的短文,阐述交友的重要性和好处。
02
(23-24九年级上·吉林省长春市新解放学校期末)
表扬是一种鼓励也是一种欣赏,每个人都渴望得到别人的赞赏。你有过被别人表扬的经历吗?是通过
努力学习上取得了进步还是学会了某项技能?是帮助了他人还是与队友团结协作取得胜利?还是请你
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以Once I Was Praised为题,自选角度用英语写一篇短文叙述一次被表扬的经历,并谈一谈从中得到的感悟
或收获。
要求:
1.要点齐全,行文连贯:
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名或校名;
3.不少于80词。
Once I Was Praised
主题02材料作文
01
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市净月高新技术产业开发区·期末)
同学们,初中生活丰富多彩,你们也都成为了更好的自己。在这三年中,你们肯定遇到过困难与挫折。
你校英语报正在举办一个主题“Trouble makes me grow”的征文活动,请你向校英语报投稿,分享自己克服困
难的经历,并谈谈自己的感受。
要求:1.适当增加情节、行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不少于80词。
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(24-25九年级上·吉林省吉林市亚桥中学恒山校区·期末)
近日,在公共场所,人们身着汉服拍照,演奏古筝、二胡等传统乐器;在校园,学生吟诵古典诗词,
写毛笔字,讲中国故事..处处彰显着中华传统文化的魅力。你校英文报正在组织题为Spreading Traditional
Chinese Culture”的征文活动,请你任选一种传统文化的形式,写一篇短文投稿。
要点提示:(I)你最喜欢的一种传统文化形式(穿汉服wearing Hanfu;写毛笔字learn calligraphy;讲中国
故事tell Chinese stories;演奏中国传统乐器play traditional Chinese musical instrument).;
(2)你体验该传统文化的经历;
(3)你的收获及感受。
写作要求:(1)文中须包含以上所有要点提示,可适当发挥;
(2)行文流畅,书写规范,词数90一100
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture
主题03话题作文
01
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市东北师大附中明珠学校·期末)
生活中的困难在所难免,重要的是该如何面对它们。请结合自己的经历,用英语写一篇不少于80词
的短文,讲述你是怎样克服生活中某个困难的,并分享这一过程对你的影响。
要求:1文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;2语言流畅,字迹清楚。
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(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市双阳区·期末)
幸福是体验、是经历、是味道。请你以“The Taste of Happiness'”为题,结合自己的经历,用英文写一篇
不少于80词的短文进行投稿。
要求:
1.讲述一个自己或他人与“幸福味道”相关的经历:
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
专题09 书面表达
主题01 通知
01
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市第五十二中学·期末)
本周日,同学们将去美术博物馆 (the Art Museum) 参观。假如你是学生会主席,请根据下面要点和要求,用英文向你校国际交换生发布一则不少于40词的通知。
要点:
(1) 早7: 30在学校门口集合;
(2) 将会乘坐校车前往美术博物馆;
(3) 将会在中午12: 00返回;
(4) 记得带笔和笔记本;
(5) 参观时做好记录。
要求:要点齐全:表述通顺;简洁得体。
Notice
Dear students,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Student Union
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Notice
Dear students,
This Sunday we will go to the Art Museum by bus. We will meet at 7: 30 am at the school gate. Please don’t be late. You had better bring a pen and a notebook. There are some English guides in the museum. If you have any question, you can ask them for help. You should take notes carefully, and get ready for further discussion. We will return at 12: 00.
Hope you will have a good time.
Student Union
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一则通知;
②时态:一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:根据提示为学校学生会发布一则通知,写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍去美术博物馆参观的注意事项;
第三步,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①had better bring a pen 最好带一支钢笔
②ask them for help 向他们寻求帮助
③get ready for further discussion 准备进一步讨论
[高分句型]
①Please don’t be late. (否定祈使句)
②There are some English guides in the museum. (there be句型)
③If you have any question, you can ask them for help. (If引导的条件状语从句)
02
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市德惠市第三中学·期末)
2.传统节日是承载优秀文化历史的重要载体,假如你是学生会主席,即将举办一场以“中秋节”为主题的演讲比赛 (speech competition),请根据以下要点提示和要求,用英语发布一则不少于40词的通知。
要点:1、活动时间。 2、活动地点。 3、演讲内容。 4、报名方式。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体。
Notice
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Notice
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional Chinese holidays. It is on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. In order to promote traditional Chinese culture, our school will organize a speech competition. I hope you will actively participate in the activity.
The activity will be held on the Lecture Hall at 9:00 a.m., September 30, 2024. The speech competition shall be with the theme of “Mid-Autumn Festival”. If you want to participate in the competition, please email us at studentsunion@163.com.
We look forward to your participation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一则通知;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏。可适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题;
第二步,介绍演讲比赛的时间、地点、内容和报名方式;
第三步,期待大家的参与。
[亮点词汇]
① in order to 为了……
② with the theme of 以……为主题
③ participate in 参与……
[高分句型]
① I hope you will actively participate in the activity. (省略that的宾语从句)
②If you want to participate in the competition, please email us at studentsunion@163.com. (if引导条件状语从句)
主题02 电子邮件
01
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市双阳区·期末)
假如你是李华,你的笔友 David想了解中国的传统手工艺术形式。请用英语给他写一封不少于40词的邮件,向他介绍一种你最喜欢的中国传统手工艺术形式,对其做简要描述,并谈谈你喜欢它的原因。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体。
Dear David,
How is it going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
How is it going? Today I’d like to tell you something about Chinese paper cutting.
My favorite traditional Chinese art form is paper cutting. Paper cutting has been around for over 1,500 years. It sounds very easy but it can be difficult to do. The paper, usually red is folded before it is cut with scissors. The most common pictures are flowers, animals, and things about Chinese history. During the Spring Festival, they are put on windows, doors and walls as symbols of wishes and good luck and a happy new year. I like paper cutting because it shows the things that are important in life, such as love, beauty and family.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中你喜欢的原因,注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步,由于短文开头已给出,故接下来介绍写邮件的目的;
第二步,具体介绍自己最爱的中国传统艺术形式——剪纸;
第三步,介绍喜欢剪纸的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①put on张贴
②as symbols of作为……的象征
[高分句型]
①The paper, usually red is folded before it is cut with scissors.(before引导时间状语从句)
②I like paper cutting because it shows the things that are important in life, such as love, beauty and family.(because引导原因状语从句;that引导定语从句)
02
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市朝阳区长春外国语学校·期末)
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友 Lucy对中国文化很感兴趣。她给你发来邮件,询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪,如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复她。要求40词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. Let me tell you some of them.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to know that you are interested in Chinese social manners. Let me tell you some of them.
Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup.
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直接交代写邮件的目的;
第二步,详细介绍中国的一些风俗习惯;
第三步,书写总结,表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①shake hands握手
②point at指向
③be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to know that you are interested in Chinese social manners.(that引导宾语从句)
②Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time.(when引导时间状语从句)
主题03 书信
01
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市净月高新技术产业开发区·期末)
2025年1月,长春市净月潭将举办盛大的冰雪节,特邀请一些外国友人参加,现需招募志愿者数名。假如你是李华,想申请成为一名志愿者。请根据所给要点写一封不少于40词的申请信。
要点:1. 表达意愿;
2. 说明优势。
要求:1. 要点齐全;表达通顺;简洁得体;
2. 开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Li,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m Li Hua from Changchun. I’d like to be a volunteer to help you do some work during the Ice and Snow Festival. I’ve been learning English for many years and can talk freely with foreigners. Also, I’m quite outgoing and warm-hearted. I believe that I’ll be qualified for this job. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:一般现在时;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍个人信息并表明写信目的;
第二步,介绍自己的优势;
第三步,表达“希望得到回复”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① talk freely with 和……自由交谈
② outgoing and warm-hearted 外向且热心
③ be qualified for 胜任……
④ Looking forward to 期待……
[高分句型]
I believe that I’ll be qualified for this job.(that引导宾语从句)
02
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市绿园区·期末)
临近寒假,长春冰雪大世界 (Changchun Ice and Snow World) 开通多条专线直通车,面向全国游客开放,并在全市范围内招募志愿者,要求应聘者具备良好的沟通能力和充足的闲暇时间。假如你是李华,对此十分感兴趣,请你用英语写一则不少于40词的申请信。
要求:
(1)要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体;
(2)开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua and I am very interested in the volunteer recruitment for Changchun Ice and Snow World. I have good communication skills and plenty of free time during the winter vacation. I believe I can offer great service to the tourists. I really hope to be a part of this wonderful event.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封申请信;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写作意图开头已给出,写作时可直接介绍自己并表达写信的目的。
第二步,表达自己的能力。
第三步,书写结语,表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②recruitment招聘
③communication沟通
④plenty of许多的
⑤offer sth to sb提供某物给某人
⑥hope to do sth希望做某事
[高分句型]
I believe I can offer great service to the tourists. I really hope to be a part of this wonderful event. (宾语从句)
主题01 话题作文
01
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市农安县·期末)
每当朋友之间即将分手的时候,耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我,如果你正享受幸福,请你忘记我……”。请围绕Friends这一主题,写一篇40词左右的短文,阐述交友的重要性和好处。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Friends
What are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble. Don’t forget the saying “A friend in need is a friend indeed”. Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You can’t walk any step without a friend. So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:从朋友可以指正错误,分享快乐等方面阐述交友的重要性和好处。
[写作步骤]
第一步,以问题引出主题。
第二步,阐述交友的重要性和好处。
[亮点词汇]
①talk about谈论
②be in trouble处于痛苦之中
③listen to听……
[高分句型]
①I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble.(think后是省略that的宾语从句;who引导的定语从句,修饰people;when引导的时间状语从句。)
②Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you to listen to.(though引导的让步状语从句)
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(23-24九年级上·吉林省长春市新解放学校·期末)
表扬是一种鼓励也是一种欣赏,每个人都渴望得到别人的赞赏。你有过被别人表扬的经历吗?是通过努力学习上取得了进步还是学会了某项技能?是帮助了他人还是与队友团结协作取得胜利?还是……请你以Once I Was Praised为题,自选角度用英语写一篇短文叙述一次被表扬的经历,并谈一谈从中得到的感悟或收获。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名或校名;
3. 不少于80词。
Once I Was Praised
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【答案】例文
Once I Was Praised
Praise is a powerful form of encouragement that can boost our confidence and motivate us to achieve more.
I have been praised for my efforts in learning a new skill. During my high school years, I was interested in playing the guitar. I spent countless hours practicing. One day, my music teacher approached me. He said, “Your hard work is paying off, and I can see how much you’ve improved.” His words of praise were a turning point for me. They inspired me to continue pushing forward.
This experience taught me the importance of praise and how it can positively influence someone’s journey. It also made me more aware of the influence of my words on others, encouraging me to be more supportive.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一篇话题作文。
② 时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③ 提示:注意分析题干中的提示,适当添加细节。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明赞赏或表扬的作用,引出下文被表扬的经历;
第二步,描述被表扬的经历;
第三步,写出自己的感悟并总结。
[亮点词汇]
①was interested in对……感兴趣
②spent countless hours practicing花了无数时间练习
③paying off得到好结果
[高分句型]
①Praise is a powerful form of encouragement that can boost our confidence and motivate us to achieve more. (that引导的定语从句)
②Your hard work is paying off, and I can see how much you’ve improved. (省略that的宾语从句)
主题02 材料作文
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(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市净月高新技术产业开发区·期末)
同学们,初中生活丰富多彩,你们也都成为了更好的自己。在这三年中,你们肯定遇到过困难与挫折。你校英语报正在举办一个主题“Trouble makes me grow”的征文活动,请你向校英语报投稿,分享自己克服困难的经历,并谈谈自己的感受。
要求:1. 适当增加情节、行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不少于80词。
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【答案】例文:
Trouble makes me grow
When talking about solving problems in my life, I’ll never forget my experience in Grade Seven. I still clearly remember my experience of dealing with the difficult math problem I met last year.
The math problem was so hard that I could not work it out in twenty minutes. I didn’t want to give up. I decided to try some ways to overcome the difficulty. At first, I found some similar questions from the Internet. I studied them and tried to find out the rules. I did the test over and over again until I could truly understand it and know how to solve this kind of problem. At last, I worked the math problem out!
We may meet lots of difficulties in our lives, but if we can take them seriously and try different ways, they will be solved finally.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单描述遇到的困难;
第二步,具体描述克服困难的经历;
第三步,描述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②find out发现
③work out解决
[高分句型]
①I decided to try some ways to overcome the difficulty. (不定式作目的状语)
②We may meet lots of difficulties in our lives, but if we can take them seriously and try different ways, they will be solved finally. (if引导条件状语从句)
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(24-25九年级上·吉林省吉林市亚桥中学恒山校区·期末)
近日,在公共场所,人们身着汉服拍照,演奏古筝、二胡等传统乐器;在校园,学生吟诵古典诗词,写毛笔字,讲中国故事……处处彰显着中华传统文化的魅力。你校英文报正在组织题为“Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture”的征文活动,请你任选一种传统文化的形式,写一篇短文投稿。
要点提示:(1)你最喜欢的一种传统文化形式(穿汉服 wearing Hanfu;写毛笔字 learn calligraphy;讲中国故事 tell Chinese stories;演奏中国传统乐器 play traditional Chinese musical instrument);
(2)你体验该传统文化的经历;
(3)你的收获及感受。
写作要求:(1)文中须包含以上所有要点提示,可适当发挥;
(2)行文流畅,书写规范,词数90—100。
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture
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【答案】例文
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture
Nowadays, more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture. My favorite traditional culture is calligraphy, which has a long history and has influenced many people. I started learning calligraphy at eight. At first, it was challenging for me to use the brush to write. My hand was sore after holding the brush for a long time. But with the help of my teacher, I gradually improved. Now, I can write spring couplets for my family every year. It makes me proud. Learning calligraphy has a great influence on me. I became more patient and careful. I also feel honored to be able to pass down this traditional Chinese vulture.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:要求包含所有提示内容且适当发挥,要注意符合逻辑,语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步:阐述自己最喜欢的传统文化;
第二步:阐述个人体验该传统文化的经历;
第三步:阐述个人的收获及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①show great interest in对……表现出极大兴趣
②with the help of在……帮助下
③more patient and careful更加有耐心和细心
④have a great influence on对……有很大影响
[高分句型]
①My favorite traditional Chinese culture is calligraphy, which has a long history and has influenced many people.(定语从句)
②Learning calligraphy has a great influence on me.(动名词作主语)
主题03 话题作文
01
(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市东北师大附中明珠学校·期末)
生活中的困难在所难免,重要的是该如何面对它们。请结合自己的经历,用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文,讲述你是怎样克服生活中某个困难的,并分享这一过程对你的影响。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名; 2.语言流畅,字迹清楚。
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【答案】例文:
Everyone meets difficulties on the way to success. I got a big one three years ago.
I had trouble in English speaking. My pronunciation was poor. It made me nervous to speak in front of others because I worried about making mistakes. After noticing that, my English teacher Mr. Zhang advised me to listen to recordings and try to repeat them every day. I followed his suggestions and my pronunciation improved a lot. I even gave a short speech in front of my classmates with his encouragement and help!
After that, I realized that overcoming difficulties helped me grow up. And now, I’m willing to face it bravely whenever I meet something difficult.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;
② 时态:以“一般过去时”为主;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体介绍每个人都会遇到困难;
第二步,具体描述自己遇到困难的经历;
第三步,最后分享这一过程对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
① be worried about 担心
② advise sb. to do sth. 建议某人做某事
③ be willing to do sth. 愿意做某事
[高分句型]
①It made me nervous to speak in front of others because I worried about making mistakes.(原因状语从句)
②After that, I realized that overcoming difficulties helped me grow up.(宾语从句)
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(24-25九年级上·吉林省长春市双阳区·期末)
幸福是体验、是经历、是味道。请你以“The Taste of Happiness”为题,结合自己的经历,用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文进行投稿。
要求:
1.讲述一个自己或他人与“幸福味道”相关的经历;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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【答案】例文
The Taste of Happiness Happiness is like a piece of sweet chocolate, melting in your heart. I still remember the time when I was feeling low and stressed out because of my exams. My mom noticed my anxiety and decided to make my favorite dessert, chocolate cake. When she handed me the first piece, the rich and creamy taste brought an instant smile to my face. It wasn’t just the flavor, but the love and care she put into making it that made me feel truly happy. Her small act of kindness touched my heart deeply and reminded me that happiness often lies in the simplest gestures of love and compassion. So, happiness, to me, is not just a taste but a profound experience of feeling loved and cherished.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是话题作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:讲述一个自己或他人与“幸福味道”相关的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“幸福就像一块甜巧克力,在心中融化。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容,讲述作者在考试期间因母亲制作巧克力蛋糕而感受到幸福的经历。
第三步:书写结语。幸福不仅是味道,更是关爱和爱的体现。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②because of因为
[高分句型]
①When she handed me the first piece, the rich and creamy taste brought an instant smile to my face. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Her small act of kindness touched my heart deeply and reminded me that happiness often lies in the simplest gestures of love and compassion. (宾语从句)
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