摘要:
本讲义聚焦七年级上册外研版Unit 3 Presenting ideas单元主题写作,核心目标为引导学生运用所学词汇、句型及名词所有格描述家庭情况,涵盖家庭关系、职业等内容。通过教材佳句仿写(5组原句与仿写示例)、典题写作指导(含时态、人称、思路框架)及小试身手练习(附参考答案)构建完整学习支架,助力写作能力提升。
资料亮点突出,通过佳句仿写实现教材语言向实际表达的迁移,提升语言运用能力;典题“感恩父亲”征文结合情感表达,引导学生涵养感恩情怀,渗透文化意识;写作指导明确时态、人称及“开篇-叙事-感悟”逻辑,培养思维品质。课中便于教师系统开展写作教学,课后学生可借助仿写、练题及范文对照自主练习,弥补写作短板,提升学习效率。
内容正文:
2025- -2026学年 七上(外研版)
Unit 3 Presenting ideas 单元主题写作讲义
一、写作目标
通过本单元的学习,要求同学们能使用所学的词汇和句型以及名词的所有格,描述自己的家庭情况,谈论家庭关系,包括家庭传统、相处情况、家庭成员的职业以及工作生活情况等。
二、教材佳句仿写
1.教材原句: But now the son is taking over his father's position.
仿写:下星期他将接管5 班。
2.教材原句: It brings back the father's memory of carrying the son on his back.
仿写:那首歌总能勾起许多美好的回忆。
3.教材原句: Let's have a video call!
仿写:咱们把牛奶放到冰箱里吧。
4.教材原句: Who can you turn to in order to solve problems in your family?
仿写:我们可以一个接一个地解决这些问题。
5.教材原句: For the first time, Robert feels like the other kids.
仿写:我第一次同表妹 Sally见面,内心十分高兴。
三、典题呈现
在你的成长过程中,你的父亲一定做了许多令你感动或印象深刻的事情。Teen Times杂志正在组织“感恩父亲”征文活动,请以“Father and me”为题写一篇英语短文,参加本次活动。
内容包括:1.描述一件发生在父亲和你之间的事情;
2.你的感受或对你的影响;
3.表达对父亲的爱和感激之情。
要求:1.60词左右;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
【写作指导】
1.时态:主要用一般现在时,描述我和父亲之间的事情时用一般过去时;
2.人称:第一人称、第三人称;
3.思路:开篇点题,然后列举一件印象深刻的事情,最后表达自己的感受。
【佳作示范】
Father and me
We need love. We also need to love others.The person I love most is my father.
I remembered it was a Sunday morning. It was a very sad moment because of a“C” in my English test. My father saw my sad face and wanted to help me. He invited me to climb a mountain. It was very high. Soon I felt so tired that I wanted to give up. My father encouraged me to be strong and gave me a hand when I felt
like giving up. So I kept on climbing. At last, we reached the top of the mountain together. With the help of my father, I learnt that sticking to my dream is important. From then on,I studied hard and made great progress.
Father's love may be silent. But like a mountain, it is always there.
4、 小试身手
假如你是李林,这是一张你和爸爸一起放风筝的照片。请以“Father's love”为题,根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,简单介绍一下这张照片和从照片中你感受到的父爱。
要点提示:
1.你父亲的情况:他是一名医生,工作很忙,但会尽量抽时间陪你;
2.照片的内容:上周日他陪你放风筝,并教会了你如何放风筝;
3.表达你从中感受到的父爱:父亲的爱是深沉厚重的,像山一样。
要求:
1.短文须包含所有提示要点,语言流畅;
2.可围绕要点提示适当增加细节,以使短文意思连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名;词数90左右。
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参考答案
Father's love
My father is a doctor and he works in a big hospital. He is busy every day. But he tries his best to spend some time with me every week.
Last Sunday, we went to the seaside to fly a kite. My mother took the photo for us. In the photo, my father was teaching me how to fly the kite. It was a very touching moment. I like spending time with my father, because he can always teach me something new and we always play happily.
I love my father. I think Father's love is too heavy, just like a mountain.
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