Unit 4 Period 6 课时学案 写作(Writing)-【名师导航】2026-2027学年高中英语必修第二册教师用书word（外研版）

本讲义聚焦高中英语影评写作核心知识点，系统构建“框架指导—表达积累—分步实践”学习支架。先明确影评基本框架（电影简介、剧情简介、评论），再提供开头、主体、结尾常用表达，通过审题构思、遣词造句、句式升级（如定语从句、分词作状语）到连句成篇的步骤指导，辅以《流浪地球》等范文及练习巩固。 该资料特色在于融合语言能力、思维品质与学习能力培养。语言能力上，通过句式升级（如非限制性定语从句改写）和表达积累提升表达准确性；思维品质上，引导学生从主题、人物等角度客观评价电影，培养分析与评价能力；学习能力方面，设置分层练习（句子改写、补全短文）和课后作业，课中助力教师高效授课，课后帮助学生查漏补缺，如通过情感与人物描写词汇表拓展表达维度。

Period 6　 写作(Writing) 写影评 本单元的写作任务是写一篇影评，即根据所给电影或所给相关信息提炼重点，对电影做必要的介绍，并抒发自己的感想。介绍电影情节时要抓住重点，电影评论部分要客观公正，可从故事主题、人物塑造等方面作出评价。介绍剧情时以一般现在时或一般过去时为主，人称多用第三人称。 一、基本框架 1．开头：电影简介(上映日期、类型、导演等)； 2．主体：剧情简介； 3．结尾：发表评论。 二、常用表达 (一)开头 1．Have you seen the latest Tarantino movie? 你看过塔伦蒂诺最新的电影吗？ 2．The story takes place in France． 这个故事发生在法国。 3．The movie was directed/starred by... 这部电影由……导演/主演。 4．The movie，which was produced by...，is about... 这部由……制作的电影，是关于…… 5．The movie tells a simple but moving story． 这部电影讲述了一个简单但感人的故事。 6．The film is set in a remote mountainous village． 这部电影以一个偏远的山村为背景。 7．The film tells us the friendship between a boy and a tiger． 这部影片给我们讲述了一个男孩和一只老虎之间的友谊。 (二)主体 1．The most memorable scene is how the hero overcame difficulties and returned to his homeland． 最令人难忘的一幕是主人公是如何克服困难回到他的祖国的。 2．...is a wonderful example of the world cinema． ……是世界电影的典范。 3．My favourite part of the movie is... 电影中我最喜欢的部分是…… 4．I'm disappointed with the movie because... 我对这部电影很失望，因为…… 5．...plays the part of the main character，... ……扮演主角…… (三)结尾 1．I was deeply moved by the characters' bravery and kindness． 我被人物的勇敢和善良深深打动了。 2．This is a very touching film and a must-see． 这是一部非常感人的电影，一部必看的电影。 3．As far as I'm concerned，the film can be called the best film． 在我看来，这部影片堪称最佳影片。 4．It is a good movie that people of all ages can enjoy． 这是一部老少皆宜的好影片。 5．Even with these small problems，the film is still a great film，and I really enjoy it! 即使有这些小问题，这部电影仍然是一部很棒的电影，我非常喜欢它！ 假定你是李华，你校英语报开设了一个介绍影视作品的专栏，请根据下面表格中的提示为该栏目写一篇关于电影《流浪地球》的影评。 片名 The Wandering Earth《流浪地球》 剧情 影片讲述了在不久的未来，太阳即将毁灭，太阳系已经不适合人类生存。面临灭绝的危险境地，人类将开启“流浪地球”计划，试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类的新家园。 评论 …… 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ [审题构思]　 [遣词造句] 1．《流浪地球》是一部科幻影片，改编自一部同名小说。 The Wandering Earth is a sci-fi film，and it is adapted from a novel of the same name． 2．影片讲述了在不久的未来，太阳即将毁灭，太阳系已经不再适合人类生存。 The film tells the story that in the near future the sun is dying out and the solar system is no longer suitable for human survival． 3．面临灭绝的危险境地，人类将开启“流浪地球”计划。 When they are faced with the danger of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project． 4．他们试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类的新家园。 They try to escape the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings． 5．该影片自上映以来深受观众欢迎。 The film has been popular with audiences since its release． 6．它必定是一部你不容错过的令人惊奇的影片。 It is definitely an amazing film you shouldn't miss． [句式升级] 7．用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写句1 The Wandering Earth is a sci-fi film，which is adapted from a novel of the same name． 8．用动词-ed形式作状语改写句3，并用动词-ing形式作状语与句4合并 Faced with the danger of human extinction,people will start the“Wandering Earth”_project，trying to escape the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings． [连句成篇](注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语) ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] The Wandering Earth is a sci-fi film，which is adapted from a novel of the same name． The film tells the story that in the near future the sun is dying out and the solar system is no longer suitable for human survival．Faced with the danger of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project，trying to escape the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings． The film has been popular with audiences since its release．Therefore，it is definitely an amazing film you shouldn't miss． 假如你是李华，要参加一个关于电影评论的征文活动。请根据以下要点推荐一部电影投稿，要点如下： 1．选择一部你喜欢的电影； 2．简单描述电影情节； 3．你对影片的评价及感悟。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Favourite Movie ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] My Favourite Movie The movie I adore most is The Million Pound Bank Note，which is based upon a story by Mark Twain． In the movie，Henry Adams，the main character，landed in England by accident with no money or friends．By chance，he is made the subject of a bet by two wealthy brothers on whether someone could live in London for a month with a million pound bank note．With the large bank note，Henry finds that people's attitudes towards him change greatly． The film，with excellent acting，beautiful music and interesting plots，tells me success is not measured by how much money you have．It is totally worth seeing． 情感描写 ①surprised adj．吃惊的 ②emotion n．强烈的情感 ③love n．&v．爱 ④anger n．愤怒，怒火 ⑤fear n．&v．害怕 ⑥grief n．悲痛 ⑦grateful adj．感谢的，感激的 ⑧discouraged adj．泄气的，气馁的 人物描写 ①energetic adj．精力充沛的，充满活力的 ②strict adj．严格的 ③talented adj．有天赋的 ④intelligent adj．聪明的 ⑤rude adj．粗鲁的 ⑥judge v．判断 ⑦admire v．羡慕，钦佩 ⑧behave v．表现 第一步：完成句子雏形现 1．Last Monday，I had a rather eventful day． 上周一，我度过了一个相当多事的一天。 2．I was surprised to receive a call from my old friend，Tom． 接到了老朋友汤姆的电话我很惊讶。 3．When we met，I could sense a mixture of emotions in him． 当我们见面时，我能感觉到他内心的复杂情绪。 4．He told me that he had lost his job due to his rude behaviour towards a strict boss． 他告诉我，由于他对一位严厉的上司态度粗鲁，他失去了工作。 5．He was filled with anger at himself and fear about the future． 他对自己充满了愤怒，对未来感到恐惧。 6．I could also see the grief in his eyes． 我也能从他的眼中看到悲伤。 7．After he was encouraged，he stopped being discouraged and said he was grateful for this chance to reflect on his mistakes． 在被鼓励之后，他不再气馁，说，他感激这个反思自己错误的机会。 8．By the end of our conversation，he seemed more energetic and determined to make a fresh start． 在我们谈话结束时，他似乎更有活力，决心重新开始。 第二步：句式升级造亮点 9．把句7合并升级为过去分词和现在分词作状语 Encouraged，he stopped being discouraged，saying he was grateful for this chance to reflect on his mistakes． 10．把句8合并升级为it seemed that句型 By the end of our conversation，it seemed that he was more energetic and determined to make a fresh start． 第三步：过渡衔接连成篇 Last Monday，I had a rather eventful day．I was surprised to receive a call from my old friend，Tom．When we met，I could sense a mixture of emotions in him．He told me that he had lost his job due to his rude behaviour towards a strict boss．He was filled with anger at himself and fear about the future．I could also see the grief in his eyes．Encouraged，he stopped being discouraged，saying he was grateful for this chance to reflect on his mistakes．By the end of our conversation，it seemed that he was more energetic and determined to make a fresh start． 课时提升作业(十二)　(Unit 4　Developing ideas & Writing) (建议用时：45分钟　总分：102分) Ⅰ．品句填词(共5小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分) 1．It was stupid of Lee to let them escape (逃离)． 2．The wait was brief (短暂的)，less than an hour． 3．Her question was embarrassing，which made him awkward (紧张的，不舒适的)． 4．Children who behave (表现) well are receiving adult values． 5．I'd say it was pretty normal (正常的) to be sad if your house burned down． Ⅱ．词性转换(共5小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分) 1．He was disappointed (disappoint) at the grade he got in his maths exam． 2．His plan，as well as Mary's，sounds not only original (origin) but also practical． 3．She has responsibility (responsible)for public transport． 4．My father did all the cooking in my mother's absence (absent)． 5．The names of the shops are entirely fictional (fiction)． Ⅲ．短语填空(共5小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分) 馗end up，in one's own right，take...for example，live up to，to some extent 1．It is true that his father is a world-famous movie star，but Jack becomes famous in his own right． 2．To some extent，these problems affected the development of China's foreign trade． 3．I will do what I can to live up to your expectations． 4．We ended up sleeping around the floor after drinking too much last night． 5．Take mobile phones for example．They have both advantages and disadvantages． Ⅳ．完成句子(共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分) 1．父亲让打破窗户的儿子站了一个小时。 The father had his son who broke the window standing for an hour．(have) 2．以真实人物为原型的电影通常能打动观众。 The movies based on real persons usually move the audience．(based) 3．由于父母对儿子的进步感到满意，他们给他买了一件礼物。 With the parents pleased with their son's progress，they bought him a gift．(with复合结构) 4．我们必须承认的事实就是这项任务对我们来说太困难了。 A fact that/which we have to admit is that the task is too difficult for us． 5．你会发现自己被这部电影吸引住了。 You will find yourself glued to the film．(glued) Ⅴ．补全短文(共6小题；每小题2分，满分12分) Last year，I joined a drama club with high hopes of becoming a great actor．I was really excited about the upcoming performance and expected it to be a wonderful experience． However，things didn't 1．live up to my expectations (达到我的期望)．I found myself in an embarrassing situation during rehearsals(排练)．I couldn't remember my lines properly and my movements were stiff，which made me 2．feel extremely awkward(感到非常紧张)．I was 3．so disappointed in myself (对我自己很失望)as I watched others perform with ease． I realized that I couldn't 4．escape the fact (逃避这个事实) that I needed to improve．5．To some extent (在某种程度上)，it was my own fault for not preparing well enough．So，I decided 6．to take on the responsibility (承担责任)of learning my part thoroughly．I spent hours every day rehearsing，working on my expressions and body language． Eventually，when the performance day came，I was still a bit nervous but I managed to pull it off． Ⅰ．阅读理解(共7小题；每小题2.5分，满分17.5分) A You know that classics like Little Women and To Kill a Mockingbird started as novels．But you probably didn't know that these other famous movies also came from books． Hidden Figures This film told the story of real-life Katherine Johnson and other female African-American mathematicians who helped drive the United States into space in the 1960s． It was actually based on a 2016 non-fiction book and the movie did boost sales of the book． Forrest Gump The 1994 movie which was based on the book by Winston Groom won six Academy Awards，including Best Picture and Best Actor for the star Tom Hanks． Although the movie's critical and box-office success gave the book a huge boost，it's the film that made its mark on pop culture history． The Girl on the Train Paula Hawkin's psychological thriller，about a woman on a train who thinks she sees something strange out of the window，was a huge success．But unlike the fast-paced，can't be put down quality of the novel，the movie was boring． Field of Dreams It's hard to describe the plot of this movie：Ray Kinsella hears a voice telling him to build a baseball field in his Iowa cornfield，and what happens next explores the themes of lost dreams，childhood heroes，and healing the pain of the past． The 1989 movie is based on W．P．Kinsella's 1982 original，Shoeless Joe，but cuts out some extra characters． 【语篇解读】　本文是一篇应用文。文章介绍了四部根据文学作品改编的著名影片。 1．Which is the best choice for a person who loves math? A．Hidden Figures． B．Forrest Gump． C．The Girl on the Train． D．Field of Dreams． A　[细节理解题。根据Hidden Figures部分的第一句话“This film told the story...into space in the 1960s．”可知，Hidden Figures讲述了真实的凯瑟琳·约翰逊和其他非洲裔女性数学家的故事，所以喜欢数学的人可以选择这部电影。] 2．Who has won the Academy Award for Best Actor according to the text? A．Tom Hanks． B．Winston Groom． C．Paula Hawkin． D．W． P． Kinsella． A　[细节理解题。根据Forrest Gump部分的第一句话“The 1994 movie which was...the star Tom Hanks．”可知，Tom Hanks赢得了奥斯卡最佳男主角。] 3．What is special about Field of Dreams? A．It is a romantic comedy． B．It presents several themes． C．It shows all the figures in Shoeless Joe． D．It was released in 1982 for the first time． B　[细节理解题。根据Field of Dreams部分的第一句话“It's hard to describe the...the pain of the past．”可知，电影Field of Dreams探讨了失落的梦想、童年英雄和治愈过去痛苦的主题，由此可知，这部电影的特殊之处在于它有好几个主题。] B Could J．K．Rowling please leave Harry Potter in peace? 2010 was a good time to move on．We all know that Harry Potter's last adventures hit the bookstore in 2007，and three years later the Warner Bros' adaptations ran their course in cinema，too．For many fans，the young wizard had worked his magic through most of their childhood．But in 2018，a new Harry Potter extended universe film，Fantastic Beasts：The Crime of Grindelwald，was out． I love Harry Potter series and I always will．It's all there in my memory：I remember the first delight at reading “Mr and Mrs Dursley，of number four，Privet drive，were proud to say that they were perfectly normal”．The wizarding treasure hunt，thrown by my parents for my ninth birthday with my dad dressed as Hagrid in the garden，was so clear in my mind．I remember deciphering(破译)my copy of the Deathly Hallows，the first book I read in English，and having to check the French for “wand．” The 2001 trip to the cinema to see the Philosopher's Stone，and all the ones that followed are kept clearly． However，someone needs to call a halt to the endless afterlife of Potter's fictional universe．It was enough in the seven books and eight films．We didn't and don't need a community website，a theatre play，the printed script of said movie，and even more movies． Rowling has created 21st-century modern literary classic．I always look up to her as the textbook classy writer：respectfully drawing attention from readers，successful but wise enough to withdraw．She also cares much about the causes she holds dear．In 2011 alone，she donated 16% of her net worth to charities．Of all contemporary authors who hit gold，Rowling remains one of the very most inspirational． The saddest thing is that Rowling helped with the writing of the Cursed Child．She regularly “revealed” new details about Potter's magical world on Internet．Today，I decided to give up：I don't follow Rowling on Internet．I don't want to see the new film．Thank you，Joanne Kathleen Rowling．I have enough valued stories—I don't need new ones any more． 【语篇解读】　本文是一篇夹叙夹议文。作者在文章中表达了自己对《哈利· 波特》系列书籍和电影的喜爱，但同时希望停止对这部经典作品的继续改编和拍摄。 4．When was the last book of Harry Potter series published? A．In 2007．　 B．In 2010． C．In 2011．　 D．In 2017． A　[细节理解题。根据第一段中“We all know that Harry Potter's last adventures hit the bookstore in 2007” 可知，《哈利· 波特》系列的最后一本书于2007年在书店发售，由此可知，《哈利· 波特》系列的最后一本书出版于2007年。故选A项。] 5．What can we know about the author from paragraph 2? A．The author felt rather easy to understand Harry Potter series． B．The author was quite fond of Harry Potter series and its films． C．The author read Harry Potter series with the help of his parents． D．The author missed the time of watching Harry Potter movies with his parents． B　[推理判断题。根据第二段关键句“I love Harry Potter series and I always will．” 和“The 2001 trip to the cinema to see the Philosopher's Stone，and all the ones that followed are kept clearly．” 可知，作者喜欢《哈利· 波特》系列的书籍，也喜欢看该书籍改编成的电影，由此可知，从第二段可以看出，作者非常喜欢《哈利· 波特》系列书籍及其电影。故选B项。] 6．What does the underlined phrase “call a halt to” in paragraph 3 probably mean? A．Share．　 B．Appreciate． C．Stop．　 D．Change． C　[词义猜测题。根据画线短语下句“It was enough in the seven books and eight films．We didn't and don't need a community website，a theatre play，the printed script of said movie，and even more movies．” 可知，作者认为《哈利· 波特》系列的七本书和八部电影已经足够了，需要停止其他的改编，甚至更多的电影了。故选C项。] 7．What does paragraph 4 mainly talk about? A．The talent J．K．Rowling has． B．The author's praise for J．K．Rowling． C．The influence of J．K．Rowling's works． D．The author's expectations of J．K．Rowling． B　[段落大意题。根据第四段关键句“Rowling has created 21st-century modern literary classic．” 和“In 2011 alone，she donated 16% of her net worth to charities．Of all contemporary authors who hit gold，Rowling remains one of the very most inspirational．” 可知，作者在第四段中介绍罗琳创造了21世纪的现代文学经典，并且她热衷慈善，是最鼓舞人心的作家之一，由此可知，第四段主要介绍的是作者对J．K．罗琳的赞扬。故选B项。] Ⅱ．应用文写作(满分15分) 假定你是李华，你的英国好友Jim来信向你咨询哪部电影值得观看。请你写一封回信，评价一部你喜欢的电影，主要内容包括： 1．电影的名字； 2．电影的内容及优缺点； 3．推荐观看并希望得到反馈。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Dear Jim， Knowing you want to know which film is worth seeing，I'd like to recommend Roman Holiday to you． The film，directed by William Wyler，is about the love story between Princess Anne and American journalist Joe．The interesting story and the breathtaking scenery of Rome attract my attention．Besides，Hepburn starred opposite Gregory Peck in the film，who acted skillfully．However，the plot is a little unreasonable．All things considered，though，it must be one of the most romantic films． I highly recommend this film to you．Looking forward to your review after watching the film． Yours， Li Hua Ⅲ．读后续写(满分25分) 阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Ava，a fifth-grader，longed for a cell phone like her peers but had to wait until she was thirteen．To persuade her parents，she penned an essay，demonstrating she was mature enough for a cell phone．Her parents，impressed，gave her an old phone． “Ava，” her dad said seriously，“a cell phone isn't just for fun and games．It's a significant responsibility．You must keep your phone secure．You must silence it in public spaces．You must...” He listed all of the ways that she had to be responsible with her phone．But Ava，too busy with choosing the perfect wallpaper，downloading apps，and chatting with her best friend Sarah，only half-listened． Over the weekend，Sarah's mom took the girls to a movie．Normally Ava avoided horror films，but Sarah's pleading words with funny memes (表情包) had somehow convinced Ava that the movie might actually be enjoyable．Before the movie started，Sarah's mom instructed the girls to silence their phones out of respect for others．As the movie's tension built，Ava found herself growing increasingly uncomfortable．“I need to go to the bathroom，” Ava whispered to Sarah． After the movie，while waiting for Sarah's mom to fetch the car，Ava felt a sinking feeling．“I can't find my phone！” she shrieked，patting down all of her pockets．Panic-stricken，Ava searched her bag，yet her phone seemed to have vanished．Ava got into the car，her stomach in knots． “Are you going to tell your parents？” Sarah whispered to Ava on their ride back．Ava was silent，her mind racing with the consequences．She could envision her parents' disappointed faces and harsh words．She feared that this incident might lead to her parents taking away the privilege of having a phone altogether． As they arrived，Ava climbed out of the car and trudged home，her heart heavy with what had happened． 注意：1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 The moment Ava walked in，her parents greeted her with a smile． ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ Then her parents drove Ava back to the cinema．________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] The moment Ava walked in，her parents greeted her with a smile．She knew she had to tell them about the lost phone，but words stuck in her throat．Recalling the trust they had put in her with the phone，Ava felt a pang of distress as she prepared to confess．“I...I've lost my phone．” she murmured．Her parents asked anxiously what had happened．When Ava admitted that，in her panic，she had forgotten to go back and search properly or ask for help，her parents comforted her，promising they would help． Then her parents drove Ava back to the cinema．They went to the reception desk and asked the cinema staff for help．It turned out that someone had turned the phone in to the front desk．They took the phone back．Ava apologized to her father for her carelessness．Placing a hand on her shoulder，her father told Ava that maturity wasn't just about having a phone or not，but about how she handled situations，especially when they went wrong．She nodded，realizing her responsibility． 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $