Unit 1 Asia 旅游指南（单元写作精练）英语牛津译林版九年级下册

Unit 1 Asia 旅游指南 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题： 亚洲国家的旅行指南 一、话题分析 本单元主题是欣赏亚洲，话题是“亚洲”，涉及旅游景点的介绍。我们要到某个国家城市旅游,首先要了解那个国家的情况。学生在写作前可以通过网络、书籍、杂志、报纸或查阅图书馆资料等渠道去了解该这个国家的地理概况、自然环境、历史、语言文化、旅游景点等信息,把所了解的知识总结下来，撰写旅行计划并给出建议，完成一篇亚洲某个国家的旅游指南。 二、写作指南 1.时态一般情况下使用一般现在时,注意用词规范,要点齐全,行文连贯。 2.学生可以在课前准备一张亚洲地图，了解一些亚洲国家的名字。 3.学生可以用课本A部分的信息完成B部分Millie的旅行指南。 4.学生仿照课本第18页Millie的旅行指南，完成一篇介绍亚洲国家的旅行指南。 真题示例： 1．（2025·江苏盐城·中考真题）你校英文报正在组织题为“A Meaningful Trip”的征文活动。请根据所给提示，写一篇英语短文投稿，分享一次有意义的出行经历。 注意事项：1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 2. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 A Meaningful Trip I have been to many places. The most meaningful one I want to share is the trip to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Meaningful Trip I have been to many places. The most meaningful one I want to share is the trip to a small mountain village last summer. Instead of typical sightseeing, our class volunteered to help the local community. We taught English to the children and helped farmers pick fruits. Although the work was tiring, the smiles on the villagers’ faces made it all worthwhile. I was deeply touched by their kindness and simple way of life. This trip was meaningful not only because we offered help, but also because we learned the importance of giving and gratitude. It was an unforgettable experience that taught me to cherish what I have and to always be willing to help others. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇命题作文； ②时态：时态为“现在完成时”、“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要围绕“有意义的旅行”展开，涵盖旅行地点、活动、过程、感受及旅行意义，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，注意字数要求和语法拼写正确。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己去过很多地方，重点分享去年夏天去小山村的“最有意义”的旅行； 第二步，具体叙述旅行过程。先说明旅行的特殊形式，再描述具体志愿活动，并对比“工作累”与“村民笑容让一切值得”的感受，提及被村民善良与质朴打动； 第三步，书写结语。总结旅行的双重意义，点明这段难忘经历带来的成长——学会珍惜现有生活、愿意帮助他人。 ［亮点词汇］ ①typical sightseeing 典型的观光 ②volunteer to help 志愿帮助 ③local community 当地社区 ④worthwhile 值得的 ⑤gratitude 感恩 ⑥cherish 珍惜 ［高分句型］ ①The most meaningful one I want to share is the trip to a small mountain village last summer.（定语从句） ②Although the work was tiring, the smiles on the villagers’ faces made it all worthwhile.（although引导的让步状语从句） ③This trip was meaningful not only because we offered help, but also because we learned the importance of giving and gratitude.（“not only...but also...”连接两个并列的原因状语从句） ④ It was an unforgettable experience that taught me to cherish what I have and to always be willing to help others.（that引导的定语从句，what引导的宾语从句） 2．（2025·青海西宁·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike打算于7月10日至7月12日来青海旅游，请根据所给信息写一封80词左右的英文邮件，帮他制订一个合适的旅行计划。内容包括行程、饮食以及注意事项等，可适当发挥。文中不得出现真实校名和姓名，首句已给出，不计入总词数。 ✉EMAIL To: Mike.England@yahoo.com From: Li Hua.China@qq.com Dear Mike, I’m glad that you’ll come to Qinghai on vacation. Here is the travel plan I made for you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】A possible version: Dear Mike, I’m glad that you’ll come to Qinghai on vacation. Here is the travel plan I made for you. On the first day, it will be rainy in Qinghai Lake and Menyuan, so we’ll visit the Qinghai Museum and Ta’er Temple to learn more about the local history. We’ll also taste local food in Xining. On July 11, we will take a bus to Qinghai Lake. We can ride bikes, take photos and enjoy yogurt and beef there. Remember to wear warm clothes because the lake is cold. On July 12, we will go to Menyuan by train to see golden canola flowers. Bring your camera! Hope you’ll enjoy yourself in Qinghai. I really can’t wait to see you. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：本文主要是给朋友指定一个旅行计划，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引出话题； 第二步：根据图片从行程、饮食以及注意事项等方面介绍旅行计划； 第三步：表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①take photos拍照 ②remember to do sth.记得做某事 ③can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事 [高分句型] ①Remember to wear warm clothes because the lake is cold. (because引导的原因状语从句) 1．（2024·四川·中考真题）假如你是李平， 夏季是你的家乡最美的季节，请用英文写一封邮件介绍你的家乡，邀请你的英国笔友Peter来旅游。邮件内容包括： Location Sichuan Province, China Population 300, 000 Weather cool in summer Places to visit villages, mountains, lakes, grasslands. Things to eat mushrooms, yak meat (牦牛肉), yogurt.. ... ... 注意： (1)邮件必须包括表格中的信息，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯； (2)不得出现个人真实信息，如姓名、校名等； (3)词数：80~100，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, Have you ever seen a place as beautiful as my hometown in summer? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Li Ping 2．（2024·四川眉山·中考真题）假定你是李华，打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行，请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友 David写一封邮件，分享你的旅行计划。 注意： 1. 词数 100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Dear David, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 3．（2023·湖南长沙·中考真题）学校英文报正在以“Amazing Hunan”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： (1)短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）； (3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Word bank: transport 交通；convenient 方便的 Amazing Hunan Hunan is a lovable and livable place. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2023·湖北荆州·中考真题）假如你是荆州旅游形象大使，你将怎样用英语向外国朋友推介荆州呢？请根据以下要点，来试一试吧！ 要点：1.位置：湖北境内，长江之滨； 2.历史：悠久的历史，楚文化(Chu Culture)…… 3.景点：荆州博物馆，古城墙…… 4.美食：荆州鱼糕(fish cake)…… 5.补充一两点与荆州有关的信息。 要求：1.文章必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯； 2.不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息； 3.不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Ladies and gentlemen! I’m very honored to introduce Jingzhou Ancient City here.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     Thanks for listening! 5．（2023·江苏连云港·中考真题）走进江苏，游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“Go Jiangsu”旅游活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Welcome to Lianyungang”为题写一篇英语短文，邀请他们走进家乡连云港，品山海文化，游大圣故里。 注意： （1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Welcome to Lianyungang I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．秀甲天下，壮美广西。随着中国过境免签政策的推行，越来越多的外国人来到中国，感受东方之旅的独特魅力。学校英文报正在以“Most Beautiful Under Heaven, Grand Guangxi”为主题进行征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍广西的秀美风光和人文特色，为家乡的旅游做宣传。内容包括： 1. 概况：地理位置（位于祖国南部，历史悠久等）； 2. 著名旅游景点以及特色美食（桂林山水，北海涠洲岛，螺蛳粉，桂林米粉等）； 3. 表示欢迎。 注意：1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Most Beautiful Under Heaven, Grand Guangxi ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.你所在学校去年4月19号，星期五去宁夏隆德县六盘山红军长征纪念馆进行了研学活动，你的外国笔友Henry想了解此次研学情况，假如你是李华，请根据以下提示用英文给他写封信，分享你的活动经历及收获，活动和感受至少谈及两项。 要求: 1. 文中须包含思维导图中的所有信息；合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Henry, I’m glad to tell you something about my school trip. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to meeting you. Yours, Li Hua 8．假如你是林浩，你的美国笔友David想来中国旅游。请你根据表格中的提示内容给David发一封电子邮件，给他推荐一些旅游胜地。 要点如下： Beijing the capital of China; places of interest: the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace… Dalian, Qingdao surf in summer Harbin go skiing or skating in winter 写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 词数为100词左右。 Dear David, From your email I know you want to visit China. That’s a good idea. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun. Yours, Lin Hao 9．自2024年12月17日起，过境免签外国人在境内停留时间由原72小时和144小时均延长为240小时，贵州积极响应这一政策，热忱欢迎更多外国友人前来游玩。请你以”Welcome to Colorful Guizhou”为题，用英文写一篇80词的短文，向外国友人介绍贵州。 写作要求： 1.短文须包含图中的信息，并适当拓展； 2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 Welcome to Colorful Guizhou ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．宁夏这座宝藏地区，以其独特的自然风光和深厚的文化底蕴吸引了越来越多的关注。为了让更多的人了解宁夏，让宁夏走向世界，学校英文报正在组织一场以“Amazing Ningxia”为主题的英语征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。 写作要求： 1. 短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 词数80左右（文章标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：transportation交通         convenient方便的 Amazing Ningxia Ningxia is a lovable and livable place. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．假如你是李华，暑假将至，你的外国笔友Lucy要来辽宁研学旅行，她询问您有关辽宁的各地的风土人情，名胜古迹……，请你给她回复一封电子邮件，介绍一下美丽富饶充满迷人色彩的辽宁吧。 内容包括： 请回答Lucy来信中提出的儿个问题，可以重点介绍几个城市。 注意： (1)词数100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 参考词汇： remains 遗址, Shenyang Imperial Palace沈阳故宫, yangge dance秧歌, Errenzhuan 二人转,wetland湿地, red-crowned cranes丹顶鹤, the hometown of skits小品之乡 Dear Lucy, I’m so excited that you’re coming to Liaoning for a study tour. Now let me introduce something about it. It lies in the northeast of China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We are looking forward to your coming to Liaoning! I’m sure you’ll have an unforgettable experience in Liaoning! Yours, Li Hua 12．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jerry和家人计划在暑假期间来中国游玩，这将是他们第一次到中国。请你用英语写一封邮件，简介一下自己的家乡日照并邀请他们到日照来。内容包括： 1.地理位置：山东东南部；旅游胜地。 2.内容：金沙滩漫步，登山，黑陶艺术欣赏和制作，品日照绿茶，吃日照海鲜。 注意：1.参考词汇：海滨的coastal；黑陶艺术the black pottery； _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 Asia 旅游指南 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题： 亚洲国家的旅行指南 一、话题分析 本单元主题是欣赏亚洲，话题是“亚洲”，涉及旅游景点的介绍。我们要到某个国家城市旅游,首先要了解那个国家的情况。学生在写作前可以通过网络、书籍、杂志、报纸或查阅图书馆资料等渠道去了解该这个国家的地理概况、自然环境、历史、语言文化、旅游景点等信息,把所了解的知识总结下来，撰写旅行计划并给出建议，完成一篇亚洲某个国家的旅游指南。 二、写作指南 1.时态一般情况下使用一般现在时,注意用词规范,要点齐全,行文连贯。 2.学生可以在课前准备一张亚洲地图，了解一些亚洲国家的名字。 3.学生可以用课本A部分的信息完成B部分Millie的旅行指南。 4.学生仿照课本第18页Millie的旅行指南，完成一篇介绍亚洲国家的旅行指南。 真题示例： 1．（2025·江苏盐城·中考真题）你校英文报正在组织题为“A Meaningful Trip”的征文活动。请根据所给提示，写一篇英语短文投稿，分享一次有意义的出行经历。 注意事项：1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 2. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 A Meaningful Trip I have been to many places. The most meaningful one I want to share is the trip to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Meaningful Trip I have been to many places. The most meaningful one I want to share is the trip to a small mountain village last summer. Instead of typical sightseeing, our class volunteered to help the local community. We taught English to the children and helped farmers pick fruits. Although the work was tiring, the smiles on the villagers’ faces made it all worthwhile. I was deeply touched by their kindness and simple way of life. This trip was meaningful not only because we offered help, but also because we learned the importance of giving and gratitude. It was an unforgettable experience that taught me to cherish what I have and to always be willing to help others. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇命题作文； ②时态：时态为“现在完成时”、“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要围绕“有意义的旅行”展开，涵盖旅行地点、活动、过程、感受及旅行意义，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，注意字数要求和语法拼写正确。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己去过很多地方，重点分享去年夏天去小山村的“最有意义”的旅行； 第二步，具体叙述旅行过程。先说明旅行的特殊形式，再描述具体志愿活动，并对比“工作累”与“村民笑容让一切值得”的感受，提及被村民善良与质朴打动； 第三步，书写结语。总结旅行的双重意义，点明这段难忘经历带来的成长——学会珍惜现有生活、愿意帮助他人。 ［亮点词汇］ ①typical sightseeing 典型的观光 ②volunteer to help 志愿帮助 ③local community 当地社区 ④worthwhile 值得的 ⑤gratitude 感恩 ⑥cherish 珍惜 ［高分句型］ ①The most meaningful one I want to share is the trip to a small mountain village last summer.（定语从句） ②Although the work was tiring, the smiles on the villagers’ faces made it all worthwhile.（although引导的让步状语从句） ③This trip was meaningful not only because we offered help, but also because we learned the importance of giving and gratitude.（“not only...but also...”连接两个并列的原因状语从句） ④ It was an unforgettable experience that taught me to cherish what I have and to always be willing to help others.（that引导的定语从句，what引导的宾语从句） 2．（2025·青海西宁·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike打算于7月10日至7月12日来青海旅游，请根据所给信息写一封80词左右的英文邮件，帮他制订一个合适的旅行计划。内容包括行程、饮食以及注意事项等，可适当发挥。文中不得出现真实校名和姓名，首句已给出，不计入总词数。 ✉EMAIL To: Mike.England@yahoo.com From: Li Hua.China@qq.com Dear Mike, I’m glad that you’ll come to Qinghai on vacation. Here is the travel plan I made for you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】A possible version: Dear Mike, I’m glad that you’ll come to Qinghai on vacation. Here is the travel plan I made for you. On the first day, it will be rainy in Qinghai Lake and Menyuan, so we’ll visit the Qinghai Museum and Ta’er Temple to learn more about the local history. We’ll also taste local food in Xining. On July 11, we will take a bus to Qinghai Lake. We can ride bikes, take photos and enjoy yogurt and beef there. Remember to wear warm clothes because the lake is cold. On July 12, we will go to Menyuan by train to see golden canola flowers. Bring your camera! Hope you’ll enjoy yourself in Qinghai. I really can’t wait to see you. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：本文主要是给朋友指定一个旅行计划，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引出话题； 第二步：根据图片从行程、饮食以及注意事项等方面介绍旅行计划； 第三步：表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①take photos拍照 ②remember to do sth.记得做某事 ③can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事 [高分句型] ①Remember to wear warm clothes because the lake is cold. (because引导的原因状语从句) 1．（2024·四川·中考真题）假如你是李平， 夏季是你的家乡最美的季节，请用英文写一封邮件介绍你的家乡，邀请你的英国笔友Peter来旅游。邮件内容包括： Location Sichuan Province, China Population 300, 000 Weather cool in summer Places to visit villages, mountains, lakes, grasslands. Things to eat mushrooms, yak meat (牦牛肉), yogurt.. ... ... 注意： (1)邮件必须包括表格中的信息，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯； (2)不得出现个人真实信息，如姓名、校名等； (3)词数：80~100，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, Have you ever seen a place as beautiful as my hometown in summer? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Li Ping 【答案】例文： Dear Peter,     Have you ever seen a place as beautiful as my hometown in summer? I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown. My hometown is located in Sichuan Province, China. It is a beautiful place, especially during the summer .The weather is cool. It has a population of about 300, 000. There are many wonderful places to visit, such as beautiful villages, wonderful mountains, lakes and vast grasslands. You will love the natural beauty here. Moreover, you can enjoy delicious local foods like fresh mushrooms, yak meat and yogurt. I am sure you will have a wonderful time in my hometown. I would be more than happy to show you around.     Looking forward to your reply. Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的家乡，邀请笔友Peter来旅游，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍家乡的位置、人口、天气、景点和当地美食； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②have a wonderful time玩得开心 ③show sb. around 带领某人参观 [高分句型] I am sure you will have a wonderful time in my hometown. (宾语从句) 2．（2024·四川眉山·中考真题）假定你是李华，打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行，请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友 David写一封邮件，分享你的旅行计划。 注意： 1. 词数 100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Dear David, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】One possible version Dear David, How’s it going? With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing. Now I’d like to share my travel plan with you. We’ll go there by plane in July and stay for 5 days. During that period, we’re going to visit the Palace Museum to know about stories of the past. Besides, another place we must go is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world. We’re going to take a walk there and admire how great we Chinese are! I believe we’ll enjoy ourselves in Beijing. What about your summer plan? Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍文章的主题，即暑假去北京的旅行计划； 第二步，介绍什么时间出发、旅行的方式、和谁一起去以及计划待几天； 第三步，具体介绍计划在北京做什么活动以及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①promise to do sth.承诺做某事 ②share sth. with sb.和某人分享某事 ③admire钦佩 [高分句型] ①With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing.（that引导宾语从句） ②Besides, another place we must go is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world.（which引导定语从句） 3．（2023·湖南长沙·中考真题）学校英文报正在以“Amazing Hunan”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： (1)短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）； (3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Word bank: transport 交通；convenient 方便的 Amazing Hunan Hunan is a lovable and livable place. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Amazing Hunan Hunan is a lovable and livable place. Let me tell you something about Hunan. First, there are lots of places of interest, such as Zhangjiajie. Zhangjiajie is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where you can appreciate the beauty of nature. Second, the high-speed train is convenient and user-friendly, so you can go to Hunan by high-speed train. Third, Hunan cuisine consists of many kinds of delicious food that you can not miss anyway. If you like noodles, you must try the tasty and mouth-watering rice noodles in Hunan. What’s more, the people in Hunan are helpful and warm-hearted. You will feel at home here. Welcome to Hunan. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：要求以“Amazing Hunan”为题，结合所给要点进行写作，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，突出写作内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单介绍湖南，引出下文重点； 第二步，介绍湖南的名胜古迹、交通工具、美食和人等； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① lots of 许多 ② such as 比如 ③ consist of 由……组成 ④ what’s more 此外 ⑤ feel at home 感到自在 [高分句型] ① Let me tell you something about Hunan.（祈使句） ② Zhangjiajie is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where you can appreciate the beauty of nature.（where引导非限制性定语从句） ③ Third, Hunan cuisine consists of many kinds of delicious food that you can not miss anyway.（that引导定语从句） ④ If you like noodles, you must try the tasty and mouth-watering rice noodles in Hunan.（if引导条件状语从句） 4．（2023·湖北荆州·中考真题）假如你是荆州旅游形象大使，你将怎样用英语向外国朋友推介荆州呢？请根据以下要点，来试一试吧！ 要点：1.位置：湖北境内，长江之滨； 2.历史：悠久的历史，楚文化(Chu Culture)…… 3.景点：荆州博物馆，古城墙…… 4.美食：荆州鱼糕(fish cake)…… 5.补充一两点与荆州有关的信息。 要求：1.文章必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯； 2.不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息； 3.不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Ladies and gentlemen! I’m very honored to introduce Jingzhou Ancient City here.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     Thanks for listening! 【答案】例文 Ladies and gentlemen! I’m very honored to introduce Jingzhou Ancient City here. Jingzhou lies in the central part of Hubei Province, by the side of the Yangtze River. It has a large population and the people here are very friendly. The sky is blue and the air is fresh. Jingzhou is an ancient city with a long history. The Chu Culture is famous all over the world. There are many places of interest. You can walk along the ancient wall and visit Jingzhou Museum. There are also many kinds of delicious food, such as Jingzhou fish cake and rice balls. Today, the old city has become young. The transportation is becoming quicker and easier. A beautiful Yangtze River Bridge, like a dragon, is over the Yangtze River. That’s a good chance for Jingzhou to develop better and better. In a word, welcome to my beautiful hometown—Jingzhou! Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，文章开头已给； 第二步，具体介绍荆州古城的基本信息，包括位置、历史、景点、美食和现在的发展情况； 第三步，结尾呼吁大家来荆州古城游玩。 [亮点词汇] ①by the side of在……的旁边 ②places of interest名胜古迹 ③all over the world全世界 [高分句型] ①The transportation is becoming quicker and easier.（形容词作表语；形容词比较级） ②That’s a good chance for Jingzhou to develop better and better.（动词不定式作定语） 5．（2023·江苏连云港·中考真题）走进江苏，游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“Go Jiangsu”旅游活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Welcome to Lianyungang”为题写一篇英语短文，邀请他们走进家乡连云港，品山海文化，游大圣故里。 注意： （1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Welcome to Lianyungang I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Welcome to Lianyungang I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you. Lianyungang lies in the north-east of Jiangsu. It’s famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain, the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea. It’s cool in summer. Moreover, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you. Remember to try our local food. I’m sure you will enjoy it. Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”. Welcome to our hometown. We’re looking forward to meeting you soon. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明连云港的地理位置以及著名的景点； 第二步，介绍连云港丰富的文化和当地的人们以及食物； 第三步，最后邀请大家来连云港做客。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……而著名 ②moreover而且 ③look forward to doing期待做 [高分句型] Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”.（when引导的时间状语从句） 6．秀甲天下，壮美广西。随着中国过境免签政策的推行，越来越多的外国人来到中国，感受东方之旅的独特魅力。学校英文报正在以“Most Beautiful Under Heaven, Grand Guangxi”为主题进行征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍广西的秀美风光和人文特色，为家乡的旅游做宣传。内容包括： 1. 概况：地理位置（位于祖国南部，历史悠久等）； 2. 著名旅游景点以及特色美食（桂林山水，北海涠洲岛，螺蛳粉，桂林米粉等）； 3. 表示欢迎。 注意：1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Most Beautiful Under Heaven, Grand Guangxi ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Most Beautiful Under Heaven, Grand Guangxi Guangxi lies in southern China and has a long history with rich cultural traditions. It’s well-known for its fantastic natural views. Guilin’s scenery is famous all over the world—clear Li River winds around special mountains, just like a living painting. Weizhou Island in Beihai is another great place, where you can walk on soft white beaches and enjoy the blue sea. When it comes to local food, don’t miss Liuzhou luosifen, which tastes delicious, and Guilin rice noodles with fresh food materials. Many local people and visitors all like them. Welcome to Guangxi! You’re sure to have an unforgettable trip here. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作内容须涵盖地理位置、历史文化、自然景观和特色美食等方面，并适当运用衔接与修辞手法使行文流畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍广西的基本概况，包括地理位置、历史文化和总体特色，并具体描述广西的自然风光，如桂林山水和北海涠洲岛的景色； 第二步：推荐当地特色美食，如柳州螺蛳粉和桂林米粉； 第三步：表达欢迎并总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①be well-known for以……闻名 ②natural views自然风光 ③famous all over the world闻名世界 ④when it comes to ...当提到……时 [高分句型] ①Guilin’s scenery is famous all over the world—clear Li River winds around special mountains, just like a living painting. (使用破折号进行补充说明，并运用比喻修辞手法) ②When it comes to local food, don’t miss Liuzhou luosifen, which tastes delicious, and Guilin rice noodles with fresh food materials. (运用“When it comes to ...”引出话题，which引导非限制性定语从句) 7.你所在学校去年4月19号，星期五去宁夏隆德县六盘山红军长征纪念馆进行了研学活动，你的外国笔友Henry想了解此次研学情况，假如你是李华，请根据以下提示用英文给他写封信，分享你的活动经历及收获，活动和感受至少谈及两项。 要求: 1. 文中须包含思维导图中的所有信息；合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Henry, I’m glad to tell you something about my school trip. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to meeting you. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Henry,         I’m glad to tell you something about my school trip.       Last year, on April 19th, which was a Friday, we set off for Liupan Mountains at 5:00 a.m. It took us 5 hours to get there by bus. When we arrived, we first climbed the mountains. The view from the top was really amazing. Then we visited the museum. There, we learned many stories about the Red Army. We were deeply moved by their bravery and perseverance. Also, we had a group discussion about the Long March spirit. We came back at 4:00 p.m.       This trip was very meaningful. We not only learned about the Long March spirit but also realized the importance of working hard and never giving up.       I’m looking forward to meeting you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]   ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；   ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；   ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开篇引出话题，点明要分享研学活动；   第二步，按时间顺序和活动流程，依次介绍出发时间、交通方式、到达后的活动；并说明从中学到了长征精神；   第三步，结尾表达对见面的期待，使信件结构完整、语气友好。   [亮点词汇]   ① set off for 动身去往   ② the Long March spirit 长征精神   ③ the importance of ……的重要性   [高分句型]   ① When we arrived, we first climbed the mountains.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② We not only learned about the Long March spirit but also realized the importance of working hard and never giving up.（介词短语作后置定语） 8．假如你是林浩，你的美国笔友David想来中国旅游。请你根据表格中的提示内容给David发一封电子邮件，给他推荐一些旅游胜地。 要点如下： Beijing the capital of China; places of interest: the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace… Dalian, Qingdao surf in summer Harbin go skiing or skating in winter 写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 词数为100词左右。 Dear David, From your email I know you want to visit China. That’s a good idea. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun. Yours, Lin Hao 【答案】One possible version: Dear David, From your email I know you want to go to China. That’s a good idea. As you know, Beijing is the capital of China. It has a long history. In Beijing there are many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. The best time to come here is summer and autumn. It’s fun to go surfing in Dalian or Qingdao in summer. Besides, you can visit Harbin in winter. It’s a world of ice and snow. It’s a great place to go skiing or skating. You can also visit the Ice and Snow World that is famous around the world. I think you’ll enjoy yourself in China. I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun. Yours, Lin Hao 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：围绕大卫想去中国的想法，介绍中国的旅游相关情况，包含北京的历史与名胜、适合旅游的季节、其他城市的特色活动等要点。   [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇表明知晓大卫想去中国的想法，并对此表示肯定； 第二步，先介绍中国首都北京，包括其悠久历史和众多名胜古迹，如长城、故宫、颐和园，再说明来北京的最佳时间为夏季和秋季； 第三步，介绍中国其他城市的旅游特色，如夏季在大连或青岛冲浪，冬季在哈尔滨感受冰雪世界、滑雪滑冰以及参观闻名世界的冰雪大世界； 第四步，结尾表达希望大卫尽快来中国并祝其玩得愉快的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest名胜古迹 ②the best time最佳时间 ③go surfing去冲浪 ④enjoy yourself玩得愉快 [高分句型] ①It’s a great place to go skiing or skating. (动词不定式作后置定语) 9．自2024年12月17日起，过境免签外国人在境内停留时间由原72小时和144小时均延长为240小时，贵州积极响应这一政策，热忱欢迎更多外国友人前来游玩。请你以”Welcome to Colorful Guizhou”为题，用英文写一篇80词的短文，向外国友人介绍贵州。 写作要求： 1.短文须包含图中的信息，并适当拓展； 2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 Welcome to Colorful Guizhou ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Welcome to Colorful Guizhou Guizhou Province lies in the southwest of China, with a pleasant climate and four different seasons. It is known for its unique location and rich culture. It has a rich ethnic culture, especially the Miao and the Dong, with traditional festivals and activities. There are many tourist spots in Guizhou, among which the most famous one is Huangguoshu Waterfall. As you get closer, the waterfall’s water rushes down from the high mountain, looking like a huge white cloth hanging there. In addition, the local people are easy to get along well with and they are always ready to help others. Guizhou also offers great convenience in transportation. There are many international flights to Guizhou around the world, so you don’t need to change planes often. I sincerely invite all of you to come here! Guizhou is sure to leave you with unforgettable memories. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接说明贵州地理位置和气候特征； 第二步，描述当地的文化和历史； 第三步，介绍当地景点和当地人民的友好； 第四步，表达真诚邀请。 [亮点词汇] ①be known for以……知名 ②in addition此外 ③be ready to do sth乐意做某事 ④get along well with 相处融洽 [高分句型] As you get closer, the waterfall’s water rushes down from the high mountain, looking like a huge white cloth hanging there.（时间状语从句） 10．宁夏这座宝藏地区，以其独特的自然风光和深厚的文化底蕴吸引了越来越多的关注。为了让更多的人了解宁夏，让宁夏走向世界，学校英文报正在组织一场以“Amazing Ningxia”为主题的英语征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。 写作要求： 1. 短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 词数80左右（文章标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：transportation交通         convenient方便的 Amazing Ningxia Ningxia is a lovable and livable place. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Amazing Ningxia Ningxia is a lovable and livable place. Let me tell you something about Ningxia. First, there are lots of places of interest, such as Liupan Mountain and Sand Lake. Second, the high-speed train is convenient, so you can go to Ningxia by high-speed train. Third, Ningxia has many kinds of delicious food that you can’t miss anyway. If you like mutton, you must try the tasty and mouth-watering mutton in Ningxia. What’s more, the people in Ningxia are helpful and warm-hearted. You will feel at home here. Welcome to Ningxia. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍宁夏”来引出下文中对宁夏这座城市的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“景点、交通、美食和居民”四方面入手，重点介绍宁夏的风土人情； ③第三步，书写结语。欢迎大家来宁夏。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of 许多 ②places of interest 名胜古迹 ③such as 例如 [高分句型] ① Third, Ningxia has many kinds of delicious food that you can’t miss anyway.（that引导的定语从句） ② If you like mutton, you must try the tasty and mouth-watering mutton in Ningxia.（if引导的条件状语从句） 11．假如你是李华，暑假将至，你的外国笔友Lucy要来辽宁研学旅行，她询问您有关辽宁的各地的风土人情，名胜古迹……，请你给她回复一封电子邮件，介绍一下美丽富饶充满迷人色彩的辽宁吧。 内容包括： 请回答Lucy来信中提出的儿个问题，可以重点介绍几个城市。 注意： (1)词数100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 参考词汇： remains 遗址, Shenyang Imperial Palace沈阳故宫, yangge dance秧歌, Errenzhuan 二人转,wetland湿地, red-crowned cranes丹顶鹤, the hometown of skits小品之乡 Dear Lucy, I’m so excited that you’re coming to Liaoning for a study tour. Now let me introduce something about it. It lies in the northeast of China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We are looking forward to your coming to Liaoning! I’m sure you’ll have an unforgettable experience in Liaoning! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear friend, I’m so excited that you’re coming to Liaoning for a study tour. Now let me introduce something about it. It lies in the northeast of China. There are plenty of ancient remains in many places, telling the stories of the past. The folk culture is rich, with wonderful art forms like paper-cutting, yangge dance and Errenzhuan. Shenyang, our capital, has the grand Shenyang Imperial Palace and delicious Laobian Dumplings. In Dalian, enjoy beaches and fresh seafood. Anshan’s Qianshan is great for hikes. Dandong, lying next to North Korea, has the famous Yilu River Broken Bridge and a part of the Great Wall. It’s also famous for its super sweet strawberries and fresh, mouthwatering seafood. Panjin is well-known for its red-crowned crane wetland and the local rice has high: quality. Tieling city has many folk art shows, such as Errenzhuan, Manchu paper-cutting, Korean dance and so on. We people from Liaoning are warm and hospitable! The delicious food in Liaoning will make your mouth water, and the beautiful scenic spots will make you reluctant to leave! We are looking forward to your coming to Liaoning! I’m sure you’ll have an unforgettable experience in Liaoning! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：向朋友介绍辽宁的基本情况、各地特色（古迹、民俗文化、美食、景点等 ）以及辽宁人的特点，表达对朋友到来的期待。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头因朋友要来辽宁游学表示兴奋，开启对辽宁的介绍 。 第二步，中间依次介绍辽宁在中国的地理位置，多地的古迹、民俗文化（剪纸、秧歌、二人转等 ），省会及其他城市（沈阳、大连、鞍山、丹东、盘锦、铁岭 ）各自的特色（景点、美食、物产、民俗表演等 ），还有辽宁人的性格特点 。 第三步，结尾表达对朋友到来的期待，坚信朋友会有难忘体验 。 [亮点词汇] ①ancient remains古迹 ②folk culture民俗文化 ③mouthwatering令人垂涎的 ④hospitable好客的 [高分句型] ①Dandong, lying next to North Korea, has the famous Yalu River Broken Bridge and a part of the Great Wall.（现在分词短语“lying next to North Korea”作定语，对 “Dandong”进行补充说明，让句子结构更紧凑） ②There are plenty of ancient remains in many places, telling the stories of the past.（现在分词“telling...”作伴随状语，使句子简洁且表意丰富，生动展现古迹的作用 ） 12．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jerry和家人计划在暑假期间来中国游玩，这将是他们第一次到中国。请你用英语写一封邮件，简介一下自己的家乡日照并邀请他们到日照来。内容包括： 1.地理位置：山东东南部；旅游胜地。 2.内容：金沙滩漫步，登山，黑陶艺术欣赏和制作，品日照绿茶，吃日照海鲜。 注意：1.参考词汇：海滨的coastal；黑陶艺术the black pottery； _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Jerry,     I am so happy to learn that you and your family are planning a trip to China!     My hometown, Rizhao, is worth a visit. It is a beautiful coastal city in the south-east of Shandong Province. It attracts millions of tourists every year.     Rizhao is famous for its fine sand. You can take a walk on the Golden Beach. Mount Wulian is also worth climbing. Besides, Rizhao is home to the black pottery, which plays an important part in Chinese traditional culture. Why not try making a piece of pottery yourselves? It is really great fun. Rizhao is also famous for its green tea, which tastes really good. What’s more, the seafood here attracts so many tourists from home and abroad. I am sure you will like it.       Looking forward to seeing you in Rizhao this summer! Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：注意包括题干给出的所有要点，并进行适当补充使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍写邮件的意图； 第二步，根据题干要点介绍日照的相关内容并补充细节； 第三步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for以……闻名 ②take a walk散步 [高分句型] ①I am so happy to learn that you and your family are planning a trip to China! (宾语从句) ②Rizhao is also famous for its green tea, which tastes really good. 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