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在正式上课之前,想问同学们两个问题:
Question 1:
有没有参加过什么令你印象深刻的活动?比如学校的运动会、社团表演、节日庆祝……哪个场景让你至今难忘?
celebration / performance / family dinner / fireworks
在正式上课之前,想问同学们两个问题:
Question 2:
每个人都有自己难忘的活动。那在中国,最重要、最盛大的活动是什么呢?
Chinese New Year / The Spring Festival
同学们,今天我们就来练习一篇和新年有关的应用文题目:短文投稿类:介绍中国新年活动。写作的方法很简单,大家跟着一步一步来,就能写好!
(2025浙江ZFJ联盟)请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Splendid Chinese Culture”栏目投稿,向同学们介绍新年活动。
内容包括:1. 介绍活动内容;2. 说明活动意义。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
先看题目!
一审文体:短文投稿,那么短文投稿要怎么写?
第一步 审题
二审话题:节日与传统文化,让我们来看看话题常用词块!
the most important traditional festival 最重要的传统节日
celebrate the festival 庆祝节日
carry on traditions 传承传统
show cultural charm 展现文化魅力
rich in history and culture 历史文化丰富
第一步 审题
二审话题:节日与传统文化,让我们来看看话题常用词块!
enjoy festive activities 享受节日活动
express good wishes 表达美好祝愿
pass down traditions from generation to generation 代代相传
play an important role in… 在……中发挥重要作用
strengthen cultural identity 增强文化认同感
第一步 审题
及时巩固!请用刚才学过的词块,完成下面的练习。
1、The Spring Festival is ________________________________ in China, full of joy and family love.
2、People ___________________________ with fireworks, family dinners and various activities.
第一步 审题
the most important traditional festival
celebrate the festival
3、These activities help us ________________________, keeping our culture alive.
4、The Spring Festival is not only for fun but also to _______________________ for the future.
5、Such celebrations _________________________ passing on Chinese culture and family values.
第一步 审题
carry on traditions
express good wishes
play an important role in
6、Lantern Festival is ___________________________, which attracts many visitors from home and abroad.
7、Dragon Boat Festival is a day to remember Qu Yuan and _______________________________________________________.
8、Mid-Autumn Festival allows families to gather together and ________________________.
第一步 审题
rich in history and culture
pass down traditions from generation to generation
enjoy festive activities
9、Traditional festivals __________________________________ building our sense of cultural identity.
10、By introducing Chinese festivals, we can _______________ to the world.
第一步 审题
strengthen cultural identity
show cultural charm
小试牛刀!再来试一下话题句子仿写!遇到这个话题不再害怕!
1、春节是中国最重要的传统节日,此时家人团聚,共庆佳节。
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
2、它帮助我们传承传统,表达对美好未来的祝福。
_______________________________________________________
第一步 审题
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China, when families get together and enjoy festive activities.
It helps us carry on traditions and express good wishes for a better future.
我们的文章可以按照三段式进行写作。
第二步 构思
开头部分要点:
1、为了让文章开头自然,我们需要在开头进行一个引入,说明自己要介绍的节日是……
2、需要简单的进行介绍这个节日,作为进一步的引入。
可以阐述一些基础信息:什么时候庆祝?为什么庆祝?
第二步 构思
开头部分通用句式:
1、The festival I’d like to talk about is …, which is widely celebrated in China.
2、It is considered one of the most important traditional festivals, and people usually ….
3、Every year, this festival is celebrated with …, making it a time of ….
第二步 构思
中间部分要点:
1、写 2–3 个典型习俗就可以了,比如吃团圆饭、贴春联、放烟花、看春晚、舞龙舞狮、收红包。句子要简洁明了,避免写太多个,会导致文章很乱。
2、当写多个项目的时候,要注意用并列结构(not only…but also, besides, in addition)。
第二步 构思
中间部分通用句式:
1、Families usually get together to …, which stands for ….
2、People often … to show their wishes for ….
3、Children are excited to …, which brings them ….
4、In addition, activities like … add great fun to the festival.
第二步 构思
结尾部分要点:
1、强调春节的家庭意义(团聚、温情)。
2、强调春节的文化意义(传承、展示魅力)。
3、(进阶版)可以尝试提升到文化传播层面(向世界展示中华文化)。
第二步 构思
结尾部分通用句式:
1、These activities not only …, but also …, making the festival meaningful.
2、The festival provides a chance to … and helps us ….
3、It plays an important role in … and shows the charm of Chinese culture.
第二步 构思
看下优秀范文,学习里面的优秀表达!
Dear editors,
I’d like to share with you the most important festival in China—the Spring Festival. It is a time when people celebrate the arrival of a new year with joy and hope, and it has been passed down for thousands of years.
第三步 成文
·开头自然:
用 I’d like to share with you… 引出投稿目的,语气亲切,符合投稿语境。
·点明主题:
直接说明春节是中国最重要的节日。
👉 技巧:开头=“交代对象 + 点明主题 + 加一句背景/意义”。
第三步 成文
On New Year’s Eve, families gather together to have a big dinner, often including dumplings and fish, which stand for reunion and good fortune. People decorate their houses with red couplets and lanterns, creating a lively atmosphere. Children are especially excited to receive red envelopes, while fireworks and the Spring Festival Gala add more joy to the night. In some places, dragon and lion dances are also performed to bring good luck.
第三步 成文
·习俗具体多样:
覆盖家庭(团圆饭)、装饰(春联灯笼)、娱乐(春晚、烟花)、民俗(舞龙舞狮),内容全面。
·句式多样:
有定语从句 which stand for reunion and good fortune,有伴随结构 creating a lively atmosphere。
👉 技巧:正文=“挑选2–3个典型活动 + 细节描写 + 多样句式”。
第三步 成文
These activities not only strengthen family bonds but also carry on our cultural traditions. The Spring Festival plays a vital role in passing down Chinese culture and showing its unique charm to the world. I hope more friends can experience the joy of this festival in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第三步 成文
·结构清晰:
先写家庭意义,再写文化意义,层次分明。
·表达高级:
play a vital role in, show its unique charm 都是高分词块。
·展望未来:
最后一句 I hope more friends… 把视野扩大到传播中华文化,收束自然。
👉 技巧:结尾=“总结作用 + 升华主题 + 适当展望”。
第三步 成文
精句详解1:
On New Year’s Eve, families gather together to have a big dinner, often including dumplings and fish, which stand for reunion and good fortune.
不定式短语:to have a big dinner → 作目的状语,说明聚会是为了吃团圆饭。
现在分词短语:often including dumplings and fish → 作伴随状语,补充说明团圆饭的细节。
非限制性定语从句:which stand for reunion and good fortune → 修饰 dumplings and fish,解释其象征意义。
第三步 成文
·语法层面:
该句综合了 时间状语 + 不定式 + 现在分词 + 定语从句,是一个典型的“多层结构句”。
·内容层面:
这句话不仅写了“吃团圆饭”,还加入了 具体食物(dumplings, fish),让描写更生动。更重要的是,它点出了文化象征意义(reunion and good fortune),把“活动”上升到了“文化内涵”。
👉 学生要学会:写活动时,不仅写“做什么”,还要补充“代表什么”,这样内容更丰富,更 有内涵。
第三步 成文
精句详解2:
These activities not only strengthen family bonds but also carry on our cultural traditions.
主语:These activities → 指代前文提到的春节活动。
谓语动词并列:strengthen … but also carry on … → 使用 not only…but also 并列结构,表示递进关系。
宾语:family bonds 和 our cultural traditions → 两个并列宾语,分别体现情感和文化层面。
第三步 成文
·语法层面:
句中考察 并列结构与逻辑关系表达,是高考作文加分句式,既简洁又有逻辑。
·内容层面:
这句话把春节的意义分成了 两个层面:家庭情感(family bonds)+ 文化传承(cultural traditions)。
用并列结构表达,逻辑清晰,符合高考作文对“意义升华”的要求。
👉 学生要学会:结尾段要写“意义”,最好从 情感+文化 两方面总结,层次感更强。
第三步 成文
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