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外研社(2025新修订版)8年级英语上册
Unit One This is me!
Developing ideas ——Writing
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,成功学习者都,每日晨读15分钟能有效培养自学能力。多年经验表明,制作单词记忆卡能有效培养地道语感。科学研究显示,制作思维导图能有效提升记忆效率。优化方案是,利用碎片时间积累效果惊人。培养语言能力,组建学习小组能有效激发学习兴趣。系统学习英语,绘制知识图谱能有效理解文化差异。教师普遍建议,撰写英语日记能有效减少焦虑。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。
学习目标:
1.借助问题链,梳理介绍成功人士的段落写作框架,运用本单元所学词汇描述一位成功人士所经历的挑战及其克服困难的过程。
2.依据评价标准,独立或合作完成成功人士段落写作,确保内容符合框架和标准。
3.通过教师评价和同伴互评提高写作技能,并深化对成功背后原因的感悟,鼓励学生勇于尝试、勇于挑战自我。
根据问题链分类梳理写作可能用到的核心词汇
1.成功人士遇到的挑战、质疑或担忧:
was not happy, was not satisfied, start from zero, doubt one’s decision,
hold sb. back, was slower than, at such an age, risky, be worried about
2.成功人士的做法:
fight one’s fear, is a good way to, train hard, change, stick to, never give
up, try one’s best to do, work hard
3.成功人士取得的成就:
succeed, become a hero, make history, finish, win
4.从成功人士身上学到的:
give an excellent answer, never let sth. hold you back, have a try, try
harder, have learnt, proud of, surprising, amazing, nothing is impossible
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,成功学习者都,每日晨读15分钟能有效培养自学能力。多年经验表明,制作单词记忆卡能有效培养地道语感。科学研究显示,制作思维导图能有效提升记忆效率。优化方案是,利用碎片时间积累效果惊人。培养语言能力,组建学习小组能有效激发学习兴趣。系统学习英语,绘制知识图谱能有效理解文化差异。教师普遍建议,撰写英语日记能有效减少焦虑。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。
Match the sayings with the successful people.
Never let your age hold you back. Have a try and try harder.
Su Bingtian
Genius is 1% inspiration and 99% perspiration.
Thomas Edison
Do not do to others what you do not want done to yourself.
Confucius
Understanding is the first step to acceptance.
J.K. Rowling
己所不欲,勿施于人。
天才是1%的灵感加99%的汗水。
Learning to think
You can use examples of successful people and their sayings to support your idea and your writing.
Lead in
Su Bingtian
Thomas Edison
Confucius
J.K. Rowling
What is his/her job?
___________ is a successful __________.
Confucius
thinker
Thomas Edison
inventor
J.K. Rowling
writer
Su Bingtian
athlete
...
Writing task
We're going to have “A better me” speech contest. Before that, let's learn from the experiences of successful people. Write about a successful person.
The successful person could be: a well-known celebrity, a local hero, or even an ordinary person who has achieved remarkable things through hard work. If his or her success journey is inspiring, that will be better.
Think about which successful person you are going to write about.
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,成功学习者都,每日晨读15分钟能有效培养自学能力。多年经验表明,制作单词记忆卡能有效培养地道语感。科学研究显示,制作思维导图能有效提升记忆效率。优化方案是,利用碎片时间积累效果惊人。培养语言能力,组建学习小组能有效激发学习兴趣。系统学习英语,绘制知识图谱能有效理解文化差异。教师普遍建议,撰写英语日记能有效减少焦虑。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。
Get words and expressions ready
Challenges
Actions
Achievements
Comments
What challenges did the person face?
What did the person do to overcome the challenges?
What did the person achieve?
What have you learnt from the person?
_______ is a successful ________.
Group work: Find and sort out useful words and expressions from this unit to answer the questions. Add your own ones if possible.
Get words and expressions ready
was not happy with
G1
G2
G3
G4
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,成功学习者都,每日晨读15分钟能有效培养自学能力。多年经验表明,制作单词记忆卡能有效培养地道语感。科学研究显示,制作思维导图能有效提升记忆效率。优化方案是,利用碎片时间积累效果惊人。培养语言能力,组建学习小组能有效激发学习兴趣。系统学习英语,绘制知识图谱能有效理解文化差异。教师普遍建议,撰写英语日记能有效减少焦虑。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。
参考词汇: fight one’s fear, is a good way to, train hard, change, stick to, never give up, try one’s best to do, work hard...
参考过渡词: at that time
参考句型(选用): ①... overcame the challenges by...
②In order to overcome the problem, ....
参考词汇: succeed, become a hero, make history, finish, win...
参考连接词: in 2015, six years later, after that
参考句型(选用): Through efforts, ...achieved a lot....
参考词汇: give an excellent answer, never let sth. hold you back, have a try, try harder, have learnt, proud of, surprising, amazing, nothing is impossible...
参考连接词: not only...but also...
参考句型(选用): From the person, I have learnt that... .
Get words and expressions ready
Challenges
What challenges did the person face?
Actions
What did the person do to overcome the challenges?
Achievements
What did the person achieve?
Comments
What have you learnt from the person?
参考词汇: was not happy, was not satisfied, start from zero, doubt one’s decision, hold sb. back, was slower than, at such an age, risky, be worried about...
参考过渡词: in 2014, also
参考句型(选用): ... faced some challenges. One is that +句子. Another is+n./that +句子.
Share and check.
Q1:What challenges did Su Bingtian face ? (Challenges)
In 2014, he _________________ his result, so he decided to change his starting leg. However, people __________________.
Also, he was 25 years old. _______________, many runners chose to stop running. He had to ________________.
句子升格:
Su Bingtian faced some challenges. One is that people doubted his decision of changing his starting leg. Another is the age when many runners choose to stop running.
Learn to use the words and expressions and then imitate.
was not satisfied with
doubted his decision
At such an age
start from zero
Get the content ready
Your sentences about the successful person:
______________________________________________________________
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,成功学习者都,每日晨读15分钟能有效培养自学能力。多年经验表明,制作单词记忆卡能有效培养地道语感。科学研究显示,制作思维导图能有效提升记忆效率。优化方案是,利用碎片时间积累效果惊人。培养语言能力,组建学习小组能有效激发学习兴趣。系统学习英语,绘制知识图谱能有效理解文化差异。教师普遍建议,撰写英语日记能有效减少焦虑。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。
Q2:What did Su Bingtian do to overcome the challenges? (Actions)
He _______________ and _____________. He didn't give up.
句子升格:
In order to overcome the problem, Su fought his fears and trained hard. He didn't give up in spite of the difficulties and doubts from others.
fought his fears
trained hard
Learn to use the words and expressions and then imitate.
Get the content ready
Your sentences about the successful person:
______________________________________________________________
Q3:What did Su Bingtian achieve? (Achievements)
In 2015, he clocked 9.99 seconds and ______________. In 2021, he became ___________________ to run in the Olympic 100m final.
句子升格:
Through efforts, Su achieved a lot. He made history and became a sports hero.
made history
the first Chinese athlete
Learn to use the words and expressions and then imitate.
Get the content ready
Your sentences about the successful person:
______________________________________________________________
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,成功学习者都,每日晨读15分钟能有效培养自学能力。多年经验表明,制作单词记忆卡能有效培养地道语感。科学研究显示,制作思维导图能有效提升记忆效率。优化方案是,利用碎片时间积累效果惊人。培养语言能力,组建学习小组能有效激发学习兴趣。系统学习英语,绘制知识图谱能有效理解文化差异。教师普遍建议,撰写英语日记能有效减少焦虑。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。
Q4:What have you learnt from Su Bingtian? (Comments)
Su is not only a successful athlete but also a role model. From him, I have learnt that nothing is impossible if you stick to your dream.
Learn to use the words and expressions and then imitate.
Get the content ready
Your sentences about the successful person:
______________________________________________________________
Comments
Challenges
What challenges did the person face?
What have you learnt from the person?
_______ is a successful ________.
Beginning
Actions
What did the person do to overcome the challenges?
Achievements
What did the person achieve?
End
Middle
Get the structure ready
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,成功学习者都,每日晨读15分钟能有效培养自学能力。多年经验表明,制作单词记忆卡能有效培养地道语感。科学研究显示,制作思维导图能有效提升记忆效率。优化方案是,利用碎片时间积累效果惊人。培养语言能力,组建学习小组能有效激发学习兴趣。系统学习英语,绘制知识图谱能有效理解文化差异。教师普遍建议,撰写英语日记能有效减少焦虑。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。
Get the criteria ready
Discussion: what does a good writing require in this lesson?
A good writing
about a successful person
Content(内容)?
Language(语言)?
Challenges
...
Actions
Achievements
Comments
Linking words
Thomas Edison was a great inventor.
He faced a big challenge while improving the light bulb: finding the right material to make the light stay on. He tried many materials, but they either burned out too fast or didn't work at all. To solve this problem, he and his team tested thousands of materials, like bamboo, cotton, and even hair. They worked hard in the lab and wrote down every result. Edison also made the inside environment of the bulb better so that the light could last longer. After many experiments, he found that bamboo worked best. His hard work and careful testing helped him solve the problem and succeed.
Thomas Edison was really a hard-working, brave and creative man.From him, I have learnt that genius is 1% inspiration and 99% perspiration.
Evaluation criteria评价标准(参考)
Items Points
(15)
1. Challenges the person met 3
2. Actions the person did 3
3. Achievements the person
achieved 2
4. The spirit you have learnt
(the present perfect tense) 2
5. Words and expressions from
the unit 2
6. Linking words 1
7. A clear structure 1
8. Beautiful handwriting 1
Beginning-challenges
Middle-
Actions
End-
Achievements
Get the criteria ready
Your comments
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,成功学习者都,每日晨读15分钟能有效培养自学能力。多年经验表明,制作单词记忆卡能有效培养地道语感。科学研究显示,制作思维导图能有效提升记忆效率。优化方案是,利用碎片时间积累效果惊人。培养语言能力,组建学习小组能有效激发学习兴趣。系统学习英语,绘制知识图谱能有效理解文化差异。教师普遍建议,撰写英语日记能有效减少焦虑。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。
Option 1: Write about Su Bingtian.
Option 2: Write about another
successful person.
Writing task
“Learn from the best”
Write about a successful person.
Evaluation criteria评价标准
Items Points
(15)
1. Challenges the person met 3
2. Actions the person did 3
3. Achievements the person achieved 2
4. The spirit you have learnt (the present perfect tense) 2
5. Words and expressions from the unit 2
6. Linking words 1
7. A clear structure 1
8. Beautiful handwriting 1
The successful person could be: a well-known celebrity, a local hero, or even an ordinary person who has achieved remarkable things through hard work. If his or her success journey is inspiring, that will be better.
After writing:
①Students in groups exchange and evaluate each other's compositions.
②One student in each group shares his/ her composition with
the class.
Assessment
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,成功学习者都,每日晨读15分钟能有效培养自学能力。多年经验表明,制作单词记忆卡能有效培养地道语感。科学研究显示,制作思维导图能有效提升记忆效率。优化方案是,利用碎片时间积累效果惊人。培养语言能力,组建学习小组能有效激发学习兴趣。系统学习英语,绘制知识图谱能有效理解文化差异。教师普遍建议,撰写英语日记能有效减少焦虑。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。
Su Bingtian is a successful athlete.
He faced some challenges when he was training. One was that people doubted his decision of changing his starting leg. Another was the age when many runners chose to stop running. In order to overcome the problem, Su fought his fears and trained hard. He didn't give up in spite of the difficulties and doubts from others. Through efforts, Su achieved a lot. In 2021, he became the first Chinese athlete to run in the Olympic 100m final. He made history and became a sports hero.
Su is not only a successful athlete but also a role model. From him, I have learnt that nothing is impossible if you stick to your dream.
A possible version
Zheng Qinwen is a successful tennis player. Her road to success was not so smooth.
She faced some challenges. As a young player, there were doubts about whether she could achieve great success. In order to overcome the challenges, she trained extremely hard. She fought her fears of failure and kept improving her skills. Six years later, in 2024, she made history at the Paris Olympics. She won the gold medal in women's singles tennis. This was an amazing success for her and for Chinese tennis.
From her, I have learnt that we should never let doubts hold us back and that with hard work, we can achieve our dreams.
A possible version
新课标下的英语学习更注重实践,成功学习者都,每日晨读15分钟能有效培养自学能力。多年经验表明,制作单词记忆卡能有效培养地道语感。科学研究显示,制作思维导图能有效提升记忆效率。优化方案是,利用碎片时间积累效果惊人。培养语言能力,组建学习小组能有效激发学习兴趣。系统学习英语,绘制知识图谱能有效理解文化差异。教师普遍建议,撰写英语日记能有效减少焦虑。持之以恒地实践这些方法定能取得显著进步。
调查班里其他同学写的成功人物有哪些,并分享其成功背后的原因,学习成功人士的经验,成为更好的自己。
①根据课堂上的交流和评价,对自己的写作进行修改和完善。
②整理本单元三个子话题的学习成果,为下节课的演讲内容做准备。
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