Unit3 Celebrations Lesson 3 Writing Workshop 课件-2025-2026学年高中英语北师大版必修第一册

该高中英语课件聚焦“庆祝活动”主题的叙事类记叙文写作，涵盖事件介绍、准备、高潮、感受的结构要素及时间、地点、人物等细节要素。课堂通过讨论激活学生节日活动经验，结对任务搭建写作细节框架，结合范文分析与结构排序训练，构建从输入到输出的学习支架。 其亮点在于以真实情境驱动写作，融合语言能力（提供prepare for等词汇及叙事句型训练）、思维品质（范文结构拆解培养逻辑排序能力）和学习能力（结对讨论与写作步骤指导）。例如通过爷爷生日范文分析事件结构，词汇辨析（event/incident/accident）助准确表达。学生能系统提升写作逻辑与表达，教师可借助完整流程资源高效实施教学。

Unit 3 Celebrations Writing Workshop Discussion Talk about the festivals and events that you have attended recently. GET READY FOR WRITING Pair Work You are going to write about a celebration event that you have had before. Discuss with your partner. 01 What celebration do you want to write about and why? What details do you want to include? Celebration events Time Reasons People Feelings Preparations READ FOR WRITING Read the description. Answer the questions. 02 1. Whose birthday was it? 2. What did the family do to prepare for it? 3. What gift did the writer make? 4. How did Grandpa feel and what did he say? 1. Whose birthday was it? It was Grandpa’s birthday. 2. What did the family do to prepare for it? Mum cooked special food. They invited Grandpa’s friends. 3. What gift did the writer make? The writer made a video of Grandpa’s life story for him. 4. How did Grandpa feel and what did he say? The event made Grandpa very excited. He said it was a “wonderful birthday celebration” and that he was “looking forward to my eightieth, ninetieth and even one hundredth birthdays already!” Find out some useful words and phrases. 为……做准备 穿衣服 收集照片 令人惊喜地是 一……就…… 充满…… 庆祝 期待 prepare for get dressed collect photos surprisingly as soon as fill with celebrate / celebration look forward to FOCUS ON STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE Read the description again. Place the phrases in the correct order. Then add details. 03 Preparation before the event The best part of the event Feelings about the event Introduction to the event 2 3 4 1 Introduction to the event Preparations before the event Feelings about the event　　 The best part of the event Introduction to the event Preparations before the event The best part of the event Feelings about the event Grandpa’s 70th birthday birthday lunch; gift (video) invitation to Grandpa’s old friends; when Grandpa and his friends appeared in an old photo in their school uniforms excited Read the text again. Underline the words used to link sentences and paragraphs. Then, write 2-3 similar sentences for your writing. Use the Sentence Builder to help you. 04 Adverbs of Time and Manner first / then / after that / finally First I got dressed. Then I headed downstairs. luckily / amazingly / surprisingly / excitedly Surprisingly, they were Grandpa's best friends from secondary school. Sentence Builder 叙事类记叙文 英语写作中的叙事类短文具有记叙文写作的一般特点，但要求相对比较低，其考查重点在语言运用正确、句子连贯通顺、信息表述完整等方面。 （1）交代故事发生的时间、地点与人物 ① 交代时间的常用表达： one day; the other day; last week; last month; a few days/ weeks/ months ago; when I was…years old; a long time ago; at six o'clock in the morning; at/ on the weekend; by the end of last term; during the summer holidays; on Sunday morning ② 交代地点的常用表达： in my office; on the way to school; on the way home; at the crossing; at the end of the street; at the foot of the mountain; at the airport （1）交代故事发生的时间、地点与人物 ③ 交代时间、地点和相关人物的典型句型： sb. was/ were doing…in someplace when… 某人正在某地做……这时…… sb. was about to do…when… = sb. was on the point of doing…when… 某人正要做……这时…… sb. had just done…when… 某人刚刚做了……这时…… （2）推动情节发展（事情经过） ① 常用词汇： then, suddenly, immediately, no sooner. . .than…, hardly…when…, while, when, as, not…until… ② 常用句型： At that moment, sb. did sth. Then sb. did sth. （3）介绍故事的结果或谈自己的感想 ① 常用词汇： at last; finally; luckily/ fortunately; to one's surprise; feel tired/ delighted ② 常用句型： Personally, I think that… What surprised/ attracted/ delighted us most was that… Tired as we were, we learned what we couldn't learn in/ at school. Through this meaningful activity, we learned something that can't be learned in class. I was deeply impressed/ moved/ touched by…I learned a lot from… What an unforgettable experience! COMPOSE YOUR WRITING Outlining Complete the outline of your event description based on Activity 3. 05 Drafting Used the outline and the Writing Help to write your first draft. 06 Editing Edit your description in pairs. Then share you have written in class. 07 Writing Help Describing an Event It’s important to: mention the reason why you want to describe the event; write the place, time, occasion and people of the event; use action verbs and linking words to put them in the right order; describe your feelings at the end of the event. 【词语辨析】event，incident 与 accident event 尤指重大事件或比赛项目。 one of the major sporting events of the year 年度重大体育赛事之一 incident 既可指小事件，又可指政治上具有影响的事件或事变。 a shooting incident 枪击事件 accident 强调偶然或意外发生的不幸的事故。 a car/plane/train accident 汽车 / 飞机 / 火车事故 event n. 事件；活动；比赛项目 write a description of 描写…… give a detailed/general/brief description of 对……作详尽的 / 概括性的 / 简短的描述 beyond description 无法形容，难以描述 describe vt. 描写，描述，叙述，形容 description n. 描述，描写，叙述，形容 be nowhere to be seen/found 哪儿也见不到 / 找不到 nowhere to go/live/sit 没地方去 / 住 / 坐 get/go nowhere 没有结果，没有进展 get/go sb nowhere 让某人一事无成 nowhere adv. 哪儿也见不到；无处 select sb to do sth 挑选某人做某事 select...for... 为……选择…… select...as... 挑选……作为…… select...from... 从……中选出…… 【词语辨析】select，choose，elect与pick select 指“精心挑选”。 choose 指一般意义的“选择”。 elect 指“投票选择”。 pick 指随意或慎重地“选择”。 select vt. 挑选，选拔；选择 calm（...） down（使）平静下来，（使）镇定下来 keep/stay/remain calm 保持镇静 【词语辨析】calm，quiet，still 与 silent calm 指风平浪静或人镇静。 quiet 安静，指没有噪音、吵闹声或心里不烦躁。 still 静止不动，指没有声音或动作。 silent 沉默，指没有声音或不讲话。 calm vi. & vt.（使）平静，（使）镇定 adj. 冷静的，沉着的；平静的，无风的；安静的 burst into tears（=burst out crying ）突然大哭起来 fight back one’s tears 忍住眼泪 tears of joy 高兴的泪水 move sb to tears 把某人感动得流泪 in tears 哭着，流泪 tear apart 撕毁，撕碎 tear down 拆除，拆掉 tear up 撕毁，撕碎（文件等） tear at 撕扯 tear n. 眼泪，泪水（一般用复数形式） v.（tore，torn） 撕破；撕掉，拔掉 THANKS $