摘要:
该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦应用文写作核心考点,涵盖推荐建议类邮件等高频题型,按“写作思路-范文解析-词汇句型”逻辑架构梳理知识点,通过考点梳理(如人称时态、布局结构)、方法指导(重点句型解析)、真题训练(模拟高考写作任务)等环节,帮助学生构建写作框架,突破内容要点覆盖与语言规范难点。
资料以提升语言能力和思维品质为核心,创新采用“句型功能分类+写作思路分层”教学法,如解析推荐理由时,引导学生用过去分词作状语(Located in...)和定语从句(where...)增强表达逻辑,通过词汇积累与布局模板结合,确保学生在有限时间内掌握高分写作策略。分层设计写作任务与即时反馈,助力教师精准把控复习节奏,有效提升学生应考实战能力。
内容正文:
范文(一)
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tony发来邮件说他对中国古建筑很感兴趣,希望有机会来中国参观。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐要参观的建筑及理由;
2.提出参观建议;
3.你的希望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作思路:
主题
向外国朋友推荐中国的古建筑
人称/时态
第一人称为主,第二、三人称为辅;时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时
布局
第一段
提出推荐的地点(the ancient Chinese architecture;the Forbidden City)
第二段
推荐地点的有关介绍(the center of Beijing; has a history of over 600 years; the largest wooden royal palace in the world; various buildings and decorations),提出参观建议(start your tour with a professional guide)
第三段
表达期望(come and visit; won’t fail you)
Dear Tony,
Learning that you are fond of the ancient Chinese architecture, I strongly recommend the Forbidden City to you.提出推荐的地点
Located in the center of Beijing, the Forbidden City has a history of over 600 years. It is the largest wooden royal palace in the world, where you can see various buildings and decorations featuring the splendid Chinese culture and reflecting the wisdom of ancient Chinese architects.推荐地点的有关介绍To get a better knowledge of it, I suggest you start your tour with a professional guide.提出参观建议
I heartily hope you will come and visit the Forbidden City. I'm sure it won't fail you.表达期望
Yours,
Li Hua
词汇积累:
be fond of... 对…感兴趣;喜欢…
architecture n.建筑风格
(be) located in…坐落于…
have a history of...有…的历史
royal adj.皇家的
decoration n.装饰品
feature v.以…为特色n.特色;特征
reflect v.反映;显示
wisdom n.智慧
architect n.建筑师,设计师
get a better knowledge of...对…有更好的了解
句型掌握:
① Located in the center of Beijing, the Forbidden City has a history of over 600 years. (过去分词短语作状语)故宫位于北京市中心,拥有600多年的历史。
② It is the largest wooden royal palace in the world, where you can see various buildings and decorations featuring the splendid Chinese culture and reflecting the wisdom of ancient Chinese architects. (where引导定语从句;现在分词作定语)
它是世界上最大的木制皇宫,在这里你可以看到各种建筑和装饰,(这些建筑和装饰)以展现辉煌的中国文化为特色,并反映了中国古代建筑师的智慧。
③ To get a better knowledge of it, I suggest you start your tour with a professional guide. (不定式作目的状语:you start your tour with a professional guide 为宾语从句)为了更好地了解它,我建议你请一位专业导游陪同参观。
参考范文:
亲爱的托尼:
得知你对中国古代建筑感兴趣,我强烈推荐你去故宫。
故宫位于北京市中心,拥有600多年的历史。它是世界上最大的木制皇宫,在这里你可以看到各种建筑和装饰,(这些建筑和装饰)以展现辉煌的中国文化为特色,并反映了中国古代建筑师的智慧。为了更好地了解它,我建议你请一位专业导游陪同参观。
我衷心希望你能来参观故宫。我相信它不会让你失望。
你的,
李华
范文(二)
假定你是李华,你校交换生Hans在策划一档名为“Approaching Chinese Students”的栏目,需要用短视频介绍高中学生的校园生活,为此咨询你的意见。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐拍摄内容;
2.陈述理由;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作思路:
主题
推荐拍摄内容以介绍高中生的学校生活
人称/时态
第一人称为主,第三人称为辅;时态采用一般现在时
布局
第一段
得知对方想要寻求的建议(introduce high school students' school life; short videos)
第二段
具体建议的拍摄内容(the video of students' morning exercise; affects their mental outlook of the day; videos of students in class; show their learning status; various extra-curricular activities; discover and develop their interests and hobbies)
第三段
表达祝愿(wish your program a success)
Dear Hans,
I am very glad to hear that you are going to introduce high school students' school life with short videos.说明写信目的
I'd like to recommend you something to shoot. First of all, I recommend the video of students' morning exercise to you. I think students' morning exercise is very important, which affects their mental outlook of the day. Then there are videos of students in class. This is also the most critical period for students, which can show their learning status. Last but not least, there are various extra-curricular activities for students. Students can discover and develop their interests and hobbies through extra-curricular activities.具体建议内容
Finally, I wish your program a success.表达祝愿
Yours,
Li Hua
词汇积累:
shoot v.拍摄
morning exercise 晨练
mental outlook 精神面貌
critical adj.关键的;挑剔的
status n.状态
last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
extra-curricular adj.课外的
develop one's interests 培养某人的兴趣
句型掌握:
①I am very glad to hear that you are going to introduce high school students' school life with short videos. (that 引导宾语从句)
我非常高兴得知你将通过短视频介绍高中生的学校生活。
②I think students' morning exercise is very important, which affects their mental outlook of the day. (students' morning exercise is very important 是省略了that的宾语从句;which引导非限制性定语从句) 我认为学生的晨练非常重要,这影响着他们一天的精神面貌。
③ This is also the most critical period for students, which can show their learning status. (which引导非限制性定语从句) 这也是学生最关键的时刻,可以展示他们的学习状态。
④ Last but not least, there are various extra-curricular activities for students. (there be句型)最后但同样重要的是,学生们有各种各样的课外活动。
参考译文:
亲爱的汉斯:
我非常高兴得知你将通过短视频介绍高中生的学校生活。
我想给你推荐一些可以拍摄的内容。首先,我建议你拍摄学生晨练的视频。我认为学生的晨练非常重要,这影响着他们一天的精神面貌。然后是学生上课的视频。这也是学生最关键的时刻,可以展示他们的学习状态。最后但同样重要的是,学生们有各种各样的课外活动。学生可以通过课外活动发现并发展自己的兴趣和爱好。
最后,我祝你的节目成功。
你的,
李华
范文(三)
假设你是李华,作为校英文广播栏目 Teenage Life的忠实听众,你认为栏目的播放频率和内容还有待改进。请你给栏目负责人写一封英文信,内容包括:
1.收听感受;2.存在问题;3.提出建议。注意:写作词数应为80左右。
写作思路:
主题
建议改进 Teenage Life 英文广播栏目
人称/时态
第一人称为主,第三人称为辅;时态采用一般现在时
布局
第一段
自我介绍(Class 1,Senior3;a loyal listener;Teenage Life)
第二段
说明写信目的(some problems;fails to cater for more students and keeps potential fans from tuning in)
第三段
具体建议内容(increasing the frequency;explore more interactive and inclusive topics; mental health; interpersonal relationships; career guidance)
第四段
表达感谢(Thanks for your time and consideration.),期望(Looking forward to the improvement.)
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Senior 3. As a loyal listener, I enjoy every minute with Teenage Life, which has become a highlight of my week.自我介绍
However, I've noticed some problems. The programme airs only once a week and mainly focuses on subject learning, which fails to cater for more students and keeps potential fans from tuning in.说明写信目的
To make the show more engaging, I first suggest increasing the frequency to twice a week, which would allow wider coverage and further discussions. Additionally, it is a good idea to explore more interactive and inclusive topics regarding mental health, interpersonal relationships or career guidance.具体建议内容
Thanks for your time and consideration. Looking forward to the improvement.表达感谢和期待
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
词汇积累:
focus on 集中于
cater for 满足所需或所求
potential adj.潜在的
tune in 收听
additionally adv.另外,此外
interactive adj.互动的;相互配合的
inclusive adj.范围广泛的,包容广阔的
mental health 心理健康
interpersonal relationships 人际关系
career guidance 职业指导
句型掌握:
① As a loyal listener, I enjoy every minute with Teenage Life, which has become a highlight of my week. (which引导非限制性定语从句)作为一名忠实的听众,我享受(收听)《青少年生活》的每一分钟,它已成为我一周的亮点。
② To make the show more engaging, I first suggest increasing the frequency to twice a week, which would allow wider coverage and further discussions. (动词不定式短语作目的状语;which引导非限制性定语从句) 为了使节目更具吸引力,首先我建议将播出频率增加到每周两次,这将允许更广泛的覆盖和进一步的讨论。
参考译文:
亲爱的先生/女士:
我是高三.一班的李华。作为一名忠实的听众,我享受(收听)《青少年生活》的每一分钟,它已成为我一周的亮点。
然而,我注意到了一些问题。该节目每周只播出一次,且主要集中在学科学习上,这无法满足更多学生的需求,也使得潜在听众无法收听。
为了使节目更具吸引力,首先我建议将播出频率增加到每周两次,这将允许更广泛的覆盖和进一步的讨论。此外,探讨关于心理健康、人际关系或职业指导等更具互动性和更广泛的话题也是一个好主意。
感谢您的时间和考虑。期待会有改进。
您忠实的,
李华
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