专题09书面表达-2025-2026学年沪教版（2024）英语八年级上册期中重难点专项训练

2025-2026学年沪教版（2024）英语八年级上册期中重难点专项训练 专题09书面表达 1．现在正是AI发展迅猛的时代，学校机器人设计社的同学们制造了一个机器人Smart，你作为这项创造的主要成员，正在向同学们介绍这个新作品，并邀请同学们一起来制造更多的机器人，词数不少于80词。 主要内容如下： 1. 机器人Smart，高1米，白色。 2. 机器人很环保；使用太阳能来代替电池。 3. 功能：具有很强的计算能力，比我们快得多；和人类一样聪明，能够使主人远离危险；……(请你补充1-2点) 提示：主人owner   环保 environmentally friendly Dear friends, Welcome to our Robot Club. I am glad to introduce our invention—Smart. ___________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 2．假如你发明的“飞行单车”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的发明，内容包括表格中的信息。 “飞行单车” 外观 两个轮子；两只翅膀 用途 行驶于地面和空中；可拍照；能对话…… 特点 速度快；使用太阳能；环保…… 需改进的地方 1~2点（并给出理由） 注意： (1)参考词汇：太阳能solar power (2)词数80左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数)，可适当发挥。 (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My invention There are many different kinds of inventions in the world. Now, let me tell you something about one of my inventions. __________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．    发明改变了世界，改变了人们的生活。你们学校做了一项关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查。请你就以下表格写一篇英语短文，报告此次调查的全部结果，并谈谈你心目中最喜爱的一项发明是什么及其原因，短文需包括以下要点： The result of “What’s your favourite invention” and reasons Your idea Your favourite invention and reason(s). 要求： (1)不少于80词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； (2) 可适当发挥，但要注意语言通顺，流畅，准确； (3) 不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。     Inventions changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favourite invention” in our school, and here is the result. 30% of the students _________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是李华，是八年级1班学生，英语课代表，上周老师要求你对全班同学是否喜欢看新闻节目做一个调查并在下周口语课上介绍调查情况。请你根据下面的调查结果写一篇短文介绍调查情况，并结合自己的情况谈谈你的看法。 Do you like watching the news or not? 写作要点： 1. 描述调查结果； 2. 你的具体情况，是否喜欢看新闻， 为什么？ 写作要求： 1. 短文应包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 2. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，层次清楚，语法正确。 3. 词数80词左右 Hi, everybody. Last week, _________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．现在，几乎人人都拥有智能手机 (smart phone)。智能手机在带给我们便利的同时，也造成了一些问题， 请根据表格的内容，以“How to use smart phones properly (合理地)”为题写一篇短文。 参考词汇：advantage (n. 优点); disadvantage (n. 缺点) 要求： 1. 词数：80词左右； 2. 短文须包括所有内容要点，可以适当发挥，使短文连贯； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 How to Use Smart Phones Properly?  Nowadays, nearly everyone has a smart phone. _______________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．请以 “My Digital Life” 为题，写一篇短文。内容包括： 1. 你在数字生活中常做的事情； 2. 数字生活给你带来的好处； 3. 你对数字生活的看法（如存在的问题及应对方式）。 要求：不少于60词，语句通顺，可适当发挥。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．为了更全面地了解“双减”政策后学生的状况，羊城中学在全校范围内开展了一项问卷调查，调查结果如下： 1. 作业和体育锻炼的时间变化 2. 同学们课余生活的变化 有更多的空闲时间做自己感兴趣的事，例如踢足球、弹钢琴和画画等。 请根据以上调查结果写一份英文调查报告，并阐述你的看法。 注意： 1. 不少于80词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 The “double reduction” policy has been carried out since July, 2021. In order to learn about the changes of the students’ lives, Yangcheng Middle School did research. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．从原始的计数方式到今天的数字体系的发展历程展示了人类的伟大智慧。假如你是李华，你校正在举办以“我与数字”为主题的征文活动，请你以“Numbers in Daily Life”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 内容包括： （1）数字的重要性； （2）在日常生活中，数字有哪些用途； （3）讲述一段你与数字之间的故事，并说说你的个人感受。 要求： （1）词数80左右； （2）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我，某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题，对1127名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。 假如你是该校的学生，请结合以上图表信息以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题，用两段话写一篇短文。内容包括： 1. 简要说明图表内容； 2. 从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．请根据下面的内容提示写一篇关于马克·吐温的短文，不少于80词。 内容包括： （1）他是一位美国作家，写了许多著名的小说； （2）他1835年出生于佛罗里达的农村，4岁时和家人搬到城里，12岁时父亲去世； （3）他从童年就开始工作，曾做过许多不同的工作； （4）他最著名的小说之一：《汤姆·索亚历险记》； （5）他的写作才能来源于他个人的经历。 参考词汇：Mark Twain; novel; Florida; The Adventures of Tom Sawyer; personal experience ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．例文： Dear friends,     Welcome to our Robot Club. I am glad to introduce our invention—Smart. It’s 1 meter tall and white. Smart is environmentally friendly, using solar energy instead of batteries. It has strong computing power, much faster than us, and is as smart as humans to keep owners away from danger. Additionally, it can have simple conversations with people, telling stories and jokes to bring joy. It can also help with daily chores like cleaning and remind owners of important schedules. Let’s make more robots together!     Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，可适当补充细节，突出机器人的实用价值。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇问候并点明主题，向听众表示欢迎，介绍自己的身份； 第二步，详细描述机器人的外观特征； 第三步，依次介绍机器人的核心优势； 第四步，补充机器人的实用功能； 第五步，发出号召，呼吁大家一起研发更多机器人。 [亮点词汇] ①environmentally friendly环保的 ②solar energy太阳能 ③computing power计算能力 [高分句型] ①It’s 1 meter tall and white.（用“and”连接两个形容词） ②Let’s make more robots together! （祈使句发出号召） 2．例文： My invention There are many different kinds of inventions in the world. Now, let me tell you something about one of my inventions. My invention is called the “Flying Bike”. It has two wheels and two wings, so it looks like a bird. You can ride it on the ground like a normal bike, and it can also fly in the sky. It can even take pictures and talk with you! My bike is very fast. Best of all, it uses solar power, so it’s very good for the environment. However, it still has some problems. First, its wings are too big, so it’s sometimes hard to park. Second, when it’s cloudy, it doesn’t have enough power to fly for a long time. I hope I can make it smaller and find a better way to store energy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题； 第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍自己的发明； 第三步，点出需改进的地方，并给出理由。 [亮点词汇] ①looks like看起来像 ②for a long time长时间 [高分句型] ①Second, when it’s cloudy, it doesn’t have enough power to fly for a long time.（时间状语从句） ②I hope I can make it smaller and find a better way to store energy.（宾语从句） 3．例文： Inventions changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favourite invention” in our school, and here is the result. 30% of the students’ favourite invention is smart phones because they can use them to chat with friends. 25% of the students’ favourite invention is the computer because they can use it to do many important jobs. 20% of the students’ favourite invention is the car because it makes their life convenient. 15% of the students’ favourite invention is the air conditioner because it can keep the air cool. 10% of the students choose other inventions. My favourite invention is the Internet. Because of it, the world becomes smaller and smaller. We can keep abreast of the latest events around the world anytime and anywhere. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：描述学校关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查报告的结果，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明学校做了一项关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查，引出下文； 第二步，描述调查报告的结果，注意用词准确，行文流畅； 第三步，谈谈自己心目中最喜爱的一项发明是什么及其原因，注意细节充分，三观正确。 [亮点词汇] ①chat with…和……聊天 ②because of 因为，由于 ③keep abreast of及时了解 [高分句型] ①30% of the students’ favourite invention is smart phones because they can use them to chat with friends.（原因状语从句） ② Because of it, the world becomes smaller and smaller.（使用比较级） 4．例文： Hello, everyone. Last week, I asked our classmates if they like watching the news, here are the results. 50% of our classmates dislike watching the news. 35% don’t mind it. Only 15% love it. I love watching news. And I almost watch it every day. First, I think watching news is useful. I can know what’s going on around the world by watching news. Second, Watching news can help to open my mind. All in all, I believe it’s important for us to make times to watch news every day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文； ②时态：主体时态为“一般现在时”，描述上周调查用“一般过去时”； ③提示：向听众呈现同学对看新闻的态度调查结果，并表达自身观点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头点明背景，说明上周对同学看新闻喜好的调查及目的。 第二步，中间呈现调查结果，分别说明不同态度（不喜欢、不介意、喜欢）的同学占比。 第三步，结尾表达自身对看新闻的喜爱及原因，并重申每天看新闻的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①dislike不喜欢；厌恶 ②don’t mind不介意；不在乎 ③useful有用的；有益的 ④all in all总而言之；总的来说 [高分句型] ①50% of our classmates dislike watching the news. 35% don’t mind it. Only 15% love it. (此句用具体数据清晰呈现调查结果，使内容更具说服力和直观性。) ②First, I think watching news is useful. I can know what’s going on around the world by watching news. (运用“First”引出第一个观点，并用“by doing sth”结构说明看新闻的具体作用，逻辑清晰。) 5．例文： How to Use Smart Phones Properly?‌ Nowadays, nearly everyone has a smart phone. Smart phones have many advantages. For example, we can listen to music, search for information quickly, and stay connected with friends. However, they also have disadvantages. Using phones too much can be bad for our eyes, affect our study, and even reduce face-to-face communication. To use smart phones properly, here is my advice. First, set a time limit and avoid using them during meals or before sleep. Second, use phones for learning, such as reading e-books or watching educational videos. Finally, balance online activities with outdoor exercise. Remember, smart phones are tools, not our masters. Let’s use them wisely! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括智能手机的优缺点以及合理使用的建议，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当发挥使短文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。通过“智能手机有优点也有缺点”引出合理使用智能手机的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。先介绍智能手机的优点，如听音乐、快速搜索信息、与朋友保持联系等；再介绍其缺点，如对眼睛不好、影响学习、减少面对面交流等；最后给出合理使用智能手机的建议，如设定时间限制、利用手机学习、平衡线上活动与户外运动等； 第三步，书写结语。强调智能手机是工具而非主人，呼吁大家明智使用。 [亮点词汇] ①stay connected with 与……保持联系 ②be bad for 对……有害 ③set a time limit 设定时间限制 ④such as 例如 [高分句型] ①Using phones too much can be bad for our eyes, affect our study, and even reduce face-to-face communication. (动名词短语作主语) 6．例文： My Digital Life Digital tools play an important role in my life. I usually study online, watch educational videos, and chat with friends through social media. These activities make my life more convenient and efficient. For example, I can access global knowledge instantly. However, overusing devices may cause eye strain or privacy risks. To avoid wasting time, I set a daily screen time limit. Also, I never share passwords online. In my opinion, digital life is helpful if we use it wisely. Although digital life brings convenience, we must learn to balance it with offline activities. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入主题，介绍数字生活的重要性； 第二步，具体介绍你在数字生活中常做的事情，以及数字生活带来的好处； 第三步，发表自己的观点，介绍自己如何应对数字生活带来的问题。 [亮点词汇] ①convenient便捷的 ②efficient高效的 ③ balance平衡 [高分句型] ①To avoid wasting time, I set a daily screen time limit. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②Although digital life brings convenience, we must learn to balance it with offline activities. (Although引导让步状语从句) 7．例文： The “double reduction” policy has been carried out since July, 2021. In order to learn about the changes of the students’ lives, Yangcheng Middle School did research. As the graph shows, it took the students 2 hours to finish homework before carrying out the “double reduction” policy, but now they spend 80 minutes doing their homework. What’s more, they used to spend only 30 minutes doing exercise, while they can have 60 minutes to do exercise now. The students think that they can have more free time to take part in some interesting activities such as playing football, playing the piano and drawing. In my opinion, the “double reduction” policy is good for us. I believe we can study happily because of the “double reduction” policy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主； ③提示：注意语言准确，内容完整，语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，详细介绍调查结果。 第二步，介绍学生们课余生活的变化。 第三步，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①carry out 执行 ②used to do 过去常常 ③take part in 参加 ④be good for 对……有益 [高分句型] ①As the graph shows, it took the students 2 hours to finish homework before carrying out the “double reduction” policy, but now they spend 80 minutes doing their homework. （It takes sb.+时间+to do sth.句型结构） ②The students think that they can have more free time to take part in some interesting activities such as playing football, playing the piano and drawing.（that引导的宾语从句） 8．例文： Numbers in Daily Life Numbers are everywhere. Without numbers, modern society could hardly function. We rely on numbers for time management. They are essential for financial transactions, from counting money to checking bank balances. Moreover, phone numbers, ID numbers and postal codes help identify and connect us. Once, I failed a maths test due to carelessness in number calculations. I was frustrated but learnt a valuable lesson: precision matters. Since then, I’ve become more cautious, realizing that even a tiny error can lead to big mistakes. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍数字的重要性； 第二步，具体介绍在日常生活中，数字有哪些用途； 第三步，讲述一段自己与数字之间的故事，并说说自己的个人感受。 [亮点词汇] ① time management时间管理 ② financial transactions金融交易 ③ due to由于 ④ frustrated沮丧 [高分句型] Since then, I’ve become more cautious, realizing that even a tiny error can lead to big mistakes.（现在分词短语作伴随状语；that引导的宾语从句） 9．例文： I Find Myself Really Good Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. 86 percent of the students believe they can see the world with kind eyes, while 53 percent consider themselves positive. 47 percent think they don’t like to complain. As for me, I find myself really positive. Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise. In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：要求以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍调查结果； 第二步，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①As for至于 ②play a role in扮演角色 ③made an effort to尽力去做某事 ④all the time一直 [高分句型] ①I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English.（which引导的定语从句） ②In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.（强调句） 10．例文： Mark Twain is an American writer. He wrote many famous novels. Mark Twain was born in the countryside in Florida in 1835. He moved to the city with his family at the age of four. His father died when he was 12 years old. He began working when he was a child and did different jobs. The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is one of his most famous novels. He didn’t show his writing ability from an early age, and it came from his personal experiences. Mark Twain was hardworking and smart. His works are full of humor and popular in the whole world. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中的细节，适当补充内容，并突出写作重点。   [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍马克·吐温的作家身份；   第二步，具体叙述马克·吐温的早年生活情况；   第三步，介绍马克·吐温的主要作品，并总结他的精神品质。   [亮点词汇]   ①at the age of在……岁时   ②begin doing sth.开始做某事 ③come from来自   ④be full of充满   [高分句型]   ①His father died when he was 12 years old. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②The Adventures of Tom sawyer is one of his most famous novels in the world. (one of the+最高级+名词复数) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $