Unit 7 Films 最喜欢的电影及演员（单元写作精练）英语牛津译林版九年级上册

Unit7 Films 最喜欢的电影及演员 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题： 最喜欢的电影及演员 本单元的话题是“电影及演员”，要求学生能简单介绍自己或他人喜爱的电影及演员，本单元写作要求同学们能根据相关信息提示简单地介绍自己或他人电影及演员。内容包括电影及其简介、真爱的理由、观后感、真爱的演员及其简介、演员对自己的影响等。在具体的写作中， 学生应做到以下几点： 1.能用让步、结果和目的状语从句组织内容： 2. 能用正确的时态介绍电影剧情或者演员的经历； 3.能正确使用标点符号： 4.能正确书写英语句子： 二、写作步骤 步骤一：确定喜爱的电影及演员的内容和顺序。 步骤二：列举介绍喜爱的电影及演员的句型，多多益善。 步骤三：成段成篇，修改完卷。 写作框架： 建议采用经典的“总—分—总”三段式结构，清晰又稳妥。 1. 开头段：引入主题，亮出观点 用1-2句话开门见山，引出话题。 直接点明你最喜爱的电影和演员是谁。 2. 主体段：详细阐述理由 关于电影： 简要介绍电影的类型和主要内容（切忌详细复述剧情）。 说明你喜欢它的原因：情节精彩？视觉效果震撼？主题深刻（如关于爱、勇气、梦想、友情）？让你学到了什么？ 关于演员： 可以就在这部电影中，也可以是他/她的其他作品。 说明你喜欢他/她的原因：演技精湛？角色塑造成功？有个人魅力？是你的榜样？ 3. 结尾段：总结全文，升华情感 用1-2句话总结这部电影和演员对你的意义。 可以表达你的期望，例如：“我希望将来也能像他一样勇敢”或“我强烈推荐大家去看这部电影”。 真题示例： 假如你是张明，你们学校英语社正在举办关于影视作品的征文比赛。请你以“My Favorite Movie”为题写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一部电影，包括电影的名称、类型、主要情节以及你喜欢它的原因，以下电影海报仅供参考： 要求： 1. 语句通顺，行文连贯，书写工整： 2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息： 3. 100词左右，可适当发挥。 My Favorite Movie __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Movie Zootopia is my favorite movie. It is an animated comedy-adventure film that tells a wonderful story. The movie is about a young rabbit named Judy Hopps who dreams of becoming a police officer in the big city of Zootopia. There, she meets a clever fox named Nick Wilde. Together, they uncover a big mystery. The film is full of fun and excitement, but it also teaches us important lessons about friendship, perseverance, and believing in ourselves. I love it because it shows that anyone can achieve their dreams, no matter how big or small they are. Zootopia is not just a movie. It is a story that makes me smile and think. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，电影的名称、类型、主要情节以及喜欢它的原因都要写清楚，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。文章开头直接表明《疯狂动物城》是自己最喜欢的电影，引出下文对电影的介绍； 第二步，具体阐述。先介绍电影的基本信息，如类型和故事背景；再详细讲述主角的故事和电影情节；接着分析电影所传达的深层含义，以及自己喜欢这部电影的原因； 第三步，书写结语。总结电影给自己带来的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①animated动画的 ②comedy-adventure喜剧冒险 ③dream of梦想 ④police officer警察 ⑤uncover揭开 ⑥mystery谜团 ⑦perseverance毅力 ⑧achieve one’s dreams实现梦想 [高分句型] ①It is an animated comedy-adventure film that tells a wonderful story.（定语从句） ②I love it because it shows that anyone can achieve their dreams, no matter how big or small they are.（because引导原因状语从句；宾语从句；no matter how引导让步状语从句） 有用表达 1. 开头万能句 When it comes to my favorite movie/movie star, it must be... Among all the films I have seen, ... is the one that impressed me the most. I have seen many movies, but my all-time favorite is... The film that holds a special place in my heart is... 2. 介绍电影 介绍类型：It's a/an... movie. (science fiction, action, comedy, cartoon, fantasy, documentary) 介绍内容： The story is set in... / It tells the story of... The movie is about a boy who... 表达喜爱原因： I was deeply moved/touched by the story. The plot is so exciting and full of twists. （情节曲折） The special effects are amazing and breathtaking. （特效令人惊叹） It's not only entertaining but also thought-provoking. （发人深省） I learned a lot from it, such as the importance of never giving up. 3. 介绍演员 点明演员：The main character is played by... / My favorite actor/actress is... 赞美演技： He/She is a highly talented actor/actress. His/Her performance was brilliant/outstanding. He/She brought the character to life. （他/她赋予了角色生命） 说明喜爱原因： I admire him/her not only for his/her acting skills but also for his/her kindness. The character he/she played taught me to be brave and optimistic. He/She is my role model because... 4. 结尾万能句 In a word, this movie and its star have brought me great joy and inspiration. All in all, it's more than a movie; it's an unforgettable experience. I would highly recommend this movie to anyone who loves a good story. This movie has become a precious memory in my life. 1．“花木兰替父从军”是大家耳熟能详的一个故事。假如你是李斌，上周末看了电影《木兰》。请你根据以下表格内容的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下这部电影。 The name of the movie Mulan Language English Directed by Niki Caro The kind of the movie action movie What the movie is about dressed up like a boy (女扮男装), took her father’s place to fight in the army (代父参军), brave, protect the country and people,... What do you think of the movie meaningful, educational , be worth doing 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) Last weekend, I saw the movie Mulan. It’s the most exciting movie that I have ever seen. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你叫李华，学校将在下周五举办一场主题为“我最喜欢的电影”的英语角活动，请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇演讲稿，分享你最喜欢的一部电影。 要点： 1. 喜欢的电影类型及原因； 2. 介绍最喜欢的一部电影及其主要内容； 3. 看电影的好处。 注意：1. 可在要点提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名； 3. 语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 My Favorite Movie Dear friends, what kind of movies do you like? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．请根据学校电影爱好者俱乐部发出的调查问卷，结合自身情况，写一封100词左右的回信。 Hello, This is the Film-lover Club! We’d like to know something about your favourite films. Can you tell us what kind of films you like best, cartoons, action films, romantic films or any other type? Why do you like them best? Who’s your favourite film star? What does he/she impress you with? What do you think we should pay attention to when we watch films? We’re looking forward to your reply. Dear chairperson, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Liu Qi 4．Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个关于电影的帖子。假如你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的观影经历，用英语写一篇短文跟帖。 Teens Around the World Subject: movies Hey, guys! We have seen many movies. Good movies can teach us something and make us laugh or cry. Which movie do you like? What is it about? And why do you like it? Looking forward to your replies. Eric, Canada 注意： （1）短文不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （2）短文须回答原帖中的三个问题，可适当发挥； （3）词数80个左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua, China 5．假如你是九年级的学生Dean，你的美国好友Aileen给你发邮件想了解你的近况，现在你每天忙于学习，上个月看了一部电影，看后心情愉悦。请根据以下提示，给Aileen回一封邮件。 写作要点： 1. 表达你看电影的愉悦心情。 2. 电影的相关事宜： ①时间和地点：晚上5点到7点，万达电影院； ②观影后评价：人物尽管不是很完美，但幽默风趣的对话和快乐的结局使你发笑。 3. 谈一谈作为九年级的学生如何在繁忙的学习中放松自己。 写作要求： 1. 可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 2. 字迹工整，书写规范，语言精练，条理清晰； 3. 至少80词。 Dear Aileen, How’s everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Dean 6．你校英语话剧社将排练《爱丽丝梦游仙境》，话剧负责人Miss Miller在学校网站上发布了演员招募信息。假如你是九年级三班学生李想，希望参演该话剧。请根据下面的提示给Miss Miller发一封邮件，咨询具体情况。 提示： 1. 想要咨询的内容 (至少两条)； 2. 陈述自身优势； 3. 表达期望。 写作要求： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 词数100左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：rehearse 排练 Dear Miss Miller, My name is Li Xiang and I’m from Class 3, Grade 9. I really hope to act in the play Alice in Wonderland. Could you please provide more information about it? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Xiang 7．某英文报社正在征稿, 题目是“My favorite movie”。假如你叫李华， 请你根据以下要点提示写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的一部电影，给该英文报社投稿。 要点提示： 1. What kind of movie is it? 2. What’s the movie about? 3. Why do you like the movie? 要求： 1 恰当运用定语从句； 2.词数：80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My favorite movie My name is Li Hua. I like movies very much. I think a good movie can teach us about life, or explain what the meaning of life is, what a real friendship is and so on. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．在众多的艺术形式中，有人喜欢音乐、有人喜欢绘画……，假如你最喜欢的艺术形式是英语电影，请根据表格中的提示，以 I like English films best 为题，写一篇英语短文。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假如你是李平，请根据以下《流浪地球》的电影海报给外教Maggie写一封邮件，简单介绍该电影的主要剧情，并询问她是否愿意在本星期六下午跟你一起去观看4:30场的电影。 注意： 1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文章必须要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Dear Maggie, I hear that a new film is on these days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to see you then. Sincerely, Li Ping 示写一篇70词左右的英语短文，开头已给出，但不计入总词数： (1) 最初的电影不是彩色的，而且只是动的画面，只有几个人在摄像机前表演。 (2) 现在拍摄一部电影需要好几千人甚至好几年的时间才能完成。 (3) 电影的种类很多，比如：喜剧片、卡通片、动作片等。那么你最喜欢看的是……并说出原因。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit7 Films 最喜欢的电影及演员 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题： 最喜欢的电影及演员 本单元的话题是“电影及演员”，要求学生能简单介绍自己或他人喜爱的电影及演员，本单元写作要求同学们能根据相关信息提示简单地介绍自己或他人电影及演员。内容包括电影及其简介、真爱的理由、观后感、真爱的演员及其简介、演员对自己的影响等。在具体的写作中， 学生应做到以下几点： 1.能用让步、结果和目的状语从句组织内容： 2. 能用正确的时态介绍电影剧情或者演员的经历； 3.能正确使用标点符号： 4.能正确书写英语句子： 二、写作步骤 步骤一：确定喜爱的电影及演员的内容和顺序。 步骤二：列举介绍喜爱的电影及演员的句型，多多益善。 步骤三：成段成篇，修改完卷。 写作框架： 建议采用经典的“总—分—总”三段式结构，清晰又稳妥。 1. 开头段：引入主题，亮出观点 用1-2句话开门见山，引出话题。 直接点明你最喜爱的电影和演员是谁。 2. 主体段：详细阐述理由 关于电影： 简要介绍电影的类型和主要内容（切忌详细复述剧情）。 说明你喜欢它的原因：情节精彩？视觉效果震撼？主题深刻（如关于爱、勇气、梦想、友情）？让你学到了什么？ 关于演员： 可以就在这部电影中，也可以是他/她的其他作品。 说明你喜欢他/她的原因：演技精湛？角色塑造成功？有个人魅力？是你的榜样？ 3. 结尾段：总结全文，升华情感 用1-2句话总结这部电影和演员对你的意义。 可以表达你的期望，例如：“我希望将来也能像他一样勇敢”或“我强烈推荐大家去看这部电影”。 真题示例： 假如你是张明，你们学校英语社正在举办关于影视作品的征文比赛。请你以“My Favorite Movie”为题写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一部电影，包括电影的名称、类型、主要情节以及你喜欢它的原因，以下电影海报仅供参考： 要求： 1. 语句通顺，行文连贯，书写工整： 2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息： 3. 100词左右，可适当发挥。 My Favorite Movie __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Movie Zootopia is my favorite movie. It is an animated comedy-adventure film that tells a wonderful story. The movie is about a young rabbit named Judy Hopps who dreams of becoming a police officer in the big city of Zootopia. There, she meets a clever fox named Nick Wilde. Together, they uncover a big mystery. The film is full of fun and excitement, but it also teaches us important lessons about friendship, perseverance, and believing in ourselves. I love it because it shows that anyone can achieve their dreams, no matter how big or small they are. Zootopia is not just a movie. It is a story that makes me smile and think. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，电影的名称、类型、主要情节以及喜欢它的原因都要写清楚，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。文章开头直接表明《疯狂动物城》是自己最喜欢的电影，引出下文对电影的介绍； 第二步，具体阐述。先介绍电影的基本信息，如类型和故事背景；再详细讲述主角的故事和电影情节；接着分析电影所传达的深层含义，以及自己喜欢这部电影的原因； 第三步，书写结语。总结电影给自己带来的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①animated动画的 ②comedy-adventure喜剧冒险 ③dream of梦想 ④police officer警察 ⑤uncover揭开 ⑥mystery谜团 ⑦perseverance毅力 ⑧achieve one’s dreams实现梦想 [高分句型] ①It is an animated comedy-adventure film that tells a wonderful story.（定语从句） ②I love it because it shows that anyone can achieve their dreams, no matter how big or small they are.（because引导原因状语从句；宾语从句；no matter how引导让步状语从句） 有用表达 1. 开头万能句 When it comes to my favorite movie/movie star, it must be... Among all the films I have seen, ... is the one that impressed me the most. I have seen many movies, but my all-time favorite is... The film that holds a special place in my heart is... 2. 介绍电影 介绍类型：It's a/an... movie. (science fiction, action, comedy, cartoon, fantasy, documentary) 介绍内容： The story is set in... / It tells the story of... The movie is about a boy who... 表达喜爱原因： I was deeply moved/touched by the story. The plot is so exciting and full of twists. （情节曲折） The special effects are amazing and breathtaking. （特效令人惊叹） It's not only entertaining but also thought-provoking. （发人深省） I learned a lot from it, such as the importance of never giving up. 3. 介绍演员 点明演员：The main character is played by... / My favorite actor/actress is... 赞美演技： He/She is a highly talented actor/actress. His/Her performance was brilliant/outstanding. He/She brought the character to life. （他/她赋予了角色生命） 说明喜爱原因： I admire him/her not only for his/her acting skills but also for his/her kindness. The character he/she played taught me to be brave and optimistic. He/She is my role model because... 4. 结尾万能句 In a word, this movie and its star have brought me great joy and inspiration. All in all, it's more than a movie; it's an unforgettable experience. I would highly recommend this movie to anyone who loves a good story. This movie has become a precious memory in my life. 1．“花木兰替父从军”是大家耳熟能详的一个故事。假如你是李斌，上周末看了电影《木兰》。请你根据以下表格内容的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下这部电影。 The name of the movie Mulan Language English Directed by Niki Caro The kind of the movie action movie What the movie is about dressed up like a boy (女扮男装), took her father’s place to fight in the army (代父参军), brave, protect the country and people,... What do you think of the movie meaningful, educational , be worth doing 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) Last weekend, I saw the movie Mulan. It’s the most exciting movie that I have ever seen. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last weekend, I saw the movie Mulan. It’s the most exciting movie that I have ever seen. Mulan is directed by Niki Caro. It is an action movie which tells a story about a brave and smart woman soldier, together with another soldier, trying their best to fight against enemies. She dressed up like a boy and took her father’s place to fight in the army. At last, they won and protected their people. I think it is a fantastic movie and it tells us that if we don’t give up and keep on fighting, we will win at last. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰并突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题； 第二步，介绍这部电影的基本信息； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①together with和……一起 ②fight against与……作斗争 ③give up放弃 ④keep on doing继续做 [高分句型] ①It is an action movie which tells a story about a brave and smart woman soldier, together with another soldier, trying their best to fight against enemies. (which引导的定语从句) ②I think it is a fantastic movie and it tells us that if we don’t give up and keep on fighting, we will win at last. (that引导宾语从句；if引导条件状语从句) 2．假设你叫李华，学校将在下周五举办一场主题为“我最喜欢的电影”的英语角活动，请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇演讲稿，分享你最喜欢的一部电影。 要点： 1. 喜欢的电影类型及原因； 2. 介绍最喜欢的一部电影及其主要内容； 3. 看电影的好处。 注意：1. 可在要点提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名； 3. 语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 My Favorite Movie Dear friends, what kind of movies do you like? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Movie Dear friends, what kind of movies do you like? I’m really into science fiction movies because they can take me to a world full of imagination and advanced technology. My favorite one is “Interstellar”. In this movie, the Earth is facing a serious environmental crisis. A group of astronauts are sent on a mission to find a new habitable planet for humanity. They travel through a wormhole and experience various adventures in different galaxies. The special effects are extremely stunning, making the space scenes look so real. Watching movies is a great way to relax. It broadens our horizons and enriches our knowledge. We can also learn different cultures and values from them. That’s why I love movies so much. Thank you! 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿。 ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。开头以提问引出自己对电影类型的喜好，为下文介绍最喜欢的电影做铺垫。 第二步，具体阐述。先说明喜欢科幻电影的原因，再详细介绍《星际穿越》的故事背景、主要情节和特效，让听众了解电影内容，随后分析看电影的好处，阐述各好处的具体表现及意义。 第三步，书写结语。 ［亮点词汇］ ①science fiction movies 科幻电影 ②imagination 想象力 ③advanced technology 先进技术 ④Interstellar《星际穿越》 ⑤environmental crisis 环境危机 ⑥astronaut 宇航员 ⑦habitable planet 可居住星球 ⑧wormhole 虫洞 ⑨galaxy 星系 ⑩stunning 令人惊叹的 ［高分句型］ I’m really into science fiction movies because they can take me to a world full of imagination and advanced technology.（because引导原因状语从句） 3．请根据学校电影爱好者俱乐部发出的调查问卷，结合自身情况，写一封100词左右的回信。 Hello, This is the Film-lover Club! We’d like to know something about your favourite films. Can you tell us what kind of films you like best, cartoons, action films, romantic films or any other type? Why do you like them best? Who’s your favourite film star? What does he/she impress you with? What do you think we should pay attention to when we watch films? We’re looking forward to your reply. Dear chairperson, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Liu Qi 【答案】例文 Dear chairperson, As a film-lover, I like action films best. Action films are always exciting with amazing actions. They make me relax after a hard day’s study. Of all the film stars, I like Jackie Chan best. He is a Chinese kung fu superstar, but his achievements are far more than that. He has spent many years doing charity work. He has helped people not only in China but also in other countries. So I admire him very much. We should learn from him. Keep trying until we succeed. Many films are meaningful and they open up a new world to us. We should learn to choose good ones. And we students shouldn’t spend too much time on films. Yours, Liu Qi 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封回信，为应用文中的书信类； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，用于描述个人喜好和观点； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括最喜欢的电影类型、原因、最喜欢的电影明星及其印象、观看电影时的注意点。考生需根据调查问卷的内容，结合自身情况，逐一回答，不可遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接回应电影爱好者俱乐部的来信，表明自己是来回答问卷的； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。指出自己最喜欢的电影类型，并简述喜欢的原因；提及自己最喜欢的电影明星，并说明其给自己留下的印象；分享观看电影时认为应该注意的方面； 第三步，书写结语。表达对电影爱好者俱乐部活动的期待或感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①film-lover电影爱好者 ②amazing actions令人惊叹的动作 ③do charity work做慈善工作 ④open up打开，展现 [高分句型] ①Of all the film stars, I like Jackie Chan best.（运用最高级） ②He has spent many years doing charity work.（动名词作宾语） ③We should learn to choose good ones.（动词不定式作宾语） 4．Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个关于电影的帖子。假如你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的观影经历，用英语写一篇短文跟帖。 Teens Around the World Subject: movies Hey, guys! We have seen many movies. Good movies can teach us something and make us laugh or cry. Which movie do you like? What is it about? And why do you like it? Looking forward to your replies. Eric, Canada 注意： （1）短文不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （2）短文须回答原帖中的三个问题，可适当发挥； （3）词数80个左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua, China 【答案】例文 The Lion King is my favorite movie. It tells the story of Simba, a young lion prince who overcomes countless challenges to reclaim his rightful place as king of the Pride Lands. The movie shows the circle of life, friendship and courage. I am fond of The Lion King because it teaches that only a friend in need is a friend indeed and only through perseverance can one reach his goals. The beautiful animation, memorable songs, and lovable characters make it a great movie for viewers of all ages. Li Hua, China 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给的帖子中提到的信息，结合自己的观影经历，介绍自己喜欢的电影，注意逻辑清晰，语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题——最喜欢的电影； 第二步，具体介绍电影内容； 第三步，讲述喜欢这部电影的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①overcomes countless challenges克服无数的挑战 ②be fond of喜欢 ③reach one’s goals达到目标 ④of all ages各个年龄段 [高分句型] ①It tells the story of Simba, a young lion prince who overcomes countless challenges to reclaim his rightful place as king of the Pride Lands.（who引导的定语从句） ②I am fond of The Lion King because it teaches that only a friend in need is a friend indeed and only through perseverance can one reach his goals.（because引导的原因状语从句；倒装句） 5．假如你是九年级的学生Dean，你的美国好友Aileen给你发邮件想了解你的近况，现在你每天忙于学习，上个月看了一部电影，看后心情愉悦。请根据以下提示，给Aileen回一封邮件。 写作要点： 1. 表达你看电影的愉悦心情。 2. 电影的相关事宜： ①时间和地点：晚上5点到7点，万达电影院； ②观影后评价：人物尽管不是很完美，但幽默风趣的对话和快乐的结局使你发笑。 3. 谈一谈作为九年级的学生如何在繁忙的学习中放松自己。 写作要求： 1. 可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 2. 字迹工整，书写规范，语言精练，条理清晰； 3. 至少80词。 Dear Aileen, How’s everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Dean 【答案】例文： Dear Aileen, How’s everything going? I’ve been quite busy with my study lately! I was very happy when seeing the movie last week. We went to Wanda Cinema at 5:00 p.m. and spent two hours watching the film. Although the characters weren’t perfect, the dialogues were really humorous and the ending made me laugh. I will remember this film forever. As a student who is in Grade Nine, I do a lot of homework every day. Sometimes, I try to find some ways to relax myself. I love to listen to pop and rock songs. I also do some sports at weekends. Best wishes! Yours, Dean 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时，一般过去时； ③提示：结合写作要点，介绍你看完电影时的心情、电影的相关事宜以及自我放松的方式。 [写作步骤] 第一步：看完电影时的心情——愉快； 第二步：介绍看电影的时间、地点以及你的评价； 第三步：介绍你自己的放松方式。 [亮点词汇] ①listen to 听…… ②do some sports 做一些运动 [高分句型] ①Although the characters weren’t perfect, the dialogues were really humorous and the ending made me laugh.  (although引导的让步状语从句) ②As a student who is in Grade Nine, I do a lot of homework every day. (who引导的定语从句) 6．你校英语话剧社将排练《爱丽丝梦游仙境》，话剧负责人Miss Miller在学校网站上发布了演员招募信息。假如你是九年级三班学生李想，希望参演该话剧。请根据下面的提示给Miss Miller发一封邮件，咨询具体情况。 提示： 1. 想要咨询的内容 (至少两条)； 2. 陈述自身优势； 3. 表达期望。 写作要求： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 词数100左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：rehearse 排练 Dear Miss Miller, My name is Li Xiang and I’m from Class 3, Grade 9. I really hope to act in the play Alice in Wonderland. Could you please provide more information about it? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Xiang 【答案】例文： Dear Miss Miller, My name is Li Xiang and I’m from Class 3, Grade 9. I really hope to act in the play Alice in Wonderland. Could you please provide more information about it? Where will we practice the play? What’s more, I want to know when we will put on the play so that I can manage my time properly. I think I have some advantages. First of all, I am very outgoing and can communicate with others well, so I am easy to work with. Besides, my English is so good that I can read the lines without any difficulty. What’s more, I have read Alice in Wonderland many times. I will feel honored if I can be given this chance. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Xiang 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：主要为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示中的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，列出想询问的信息； 第二步，陈述自己的优势； 第三步，表达自己的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate with交流 ②be easy to work with很容易合作 ③without any difficulty毫无困难 [高分句型] ①What’s more, I want to know when we will put on the play so that I can manage my time properly. (when引导的宾语从句，so that引导的目的状语从句) ②I will feel honored if I can be given this chance. (if引导条件状语从句) 7．某英文报社正在征稿, 题目是“My favorite movie”。假如你叫李华， 请你根据以下要点提示写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的一部电影，给该英文报社投稿。 要点提示： 1. What kind of movie is it? 2. What’s the movie about? 3. Why do you like the movie? 要求： 1 恰当运用定语从句； 2.词数：80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My favorite movie My name is Li Hua. I like movies very much. I think a good movie can teach us about life, or explain what the meaning of life is, what a real friendship is and so on. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文欣赏 My favorite movie My name is Li Hua. I like movies very much. I think a good movie can teach us about life, or explain what the meaning of life is, what a real friendship is and so on. Zootopia is one of my favorite movies. It is a cartoon movie. The story is about a rabbit that joins the police and solves a difficult case with a fox. I like the movie because it teaches me to stick to my dream and then to achieve it. “If you don’t try anything new, you’ll never fail.” These words from the movie influenced me a lot. What’s more, the theme song of the movie influenced me a lot, too. Try Everything is a great song. I like listening to it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，为应用文； ②时态：主要是“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，包括喜欢的电影种类，这部电影的内容，喜欢这部电影的原因；另外要恰当运用定语从句。 [写作步骤] 第一步，认真阅读第一段已经给出的内容； 第二步，写出自己喜欢的电影名字，电影种类，电影的主要内容以及自己喜欢这部电影的原因； 第三步，再次点明主题。 [亮点词汇] ①one of my favorite movies 喜欢的电影之一 ②solves a difficult case with和……解决了一个困难的案件 ③stick to my dream坚持我的梦想 [高分句型] ①The story is about a rabbit that joins the police and solves a difficult case with a fox.（定语从句） ②If you don’t try anything new, you’ll never fail.（If引导的条件状语从句） 8．在众多的艺术形式中，有人喜欢音乐、有人喜欢绘画……，假如你最喜欢的艺术形式是英语电影，请根据表格中的提示，以 I like English films best 为题，写一篇英语短文。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I like English films best Among all kinds of art forms, I like English films best because I can learn a lot from them. First of all, I can learn lots of English words and idioms. Watching English films can also help me improve my listening ability. Also, I can know some of the famous actors and actresses from the films, such as Audrey Hepburn, Natalie Portman and so on. What’s more, I can learn about the history, the geography and local customs of different countries as well. Last but not the least, when I watch an English film, I can enjoy the places of interest in different parts of the world, such as Big Ben in London and the Opera House in Australia. Of course, I can see different kinds of delicious food too. However, I have no time to watch films because I have much homework to do every day. I hope I can achieve a balance between my study and my hobbies. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示信息介绍自己喜欢英语电影的原因以及存在的问题。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己喜欢英语电影的原因； 第三步，介绍存在的问题以及自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of各种各样的 ②such as例如 [高分句型] ①when I watch an English film, I can enjoy the places of interest in different parts of the world, such as Big Ben in London and the Opera House in Australia.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②I have no time to watch films because I have much homework to do every day.(because引导的原因状语从句) 9．假如你是李平，请根据以下《流浪地球》的电影海报给外教Maggie写一封邮件，简单介绍该电影的主要剧情，并询问她是否愿意在本星期六下午跟你一起去观看4:30场的电影。 注意： 1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文章必须要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Dear Maggie, I hear that a new film is on these days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to see you then. Sincerely, Li Ping 【答案】例文： Dear Maggie, I hear that a new film is on these days. It’s called “The Wandering Earth”. This movie is based on a popular Chinese science fiction novel and it tells the story of a future where the Sun is dying, and humans have to build giant engines to move the Earth out of the solar system to find a new home. It’s an epic space adventure with stunning special effects and a thrilling storyline. In order to save our home, our country works together with other countries. I am wondering if you will be interested in watching this movie with me this Saturday afternoon. The 4:30 show seems to be a good time. Let me know if you’re available and if you’d like to join me. Hope to see you then. Sincerely, Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作方向已给出，写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容，注意表述清晰，逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍电影的主要剧情； 第二步，说明去看电影的时间以及发出一起去看电影的诚挚邀请； 第三步，表达一起去看电影的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be called被叫作 ②in order to do sth.为了做某事 ③be interested in doing sth.有兴趣做某事 ④hope to do sth.希望做某事 [高分句型] ①In order to save our home, our country works together with other countries.（in order to do sth.为了做某事） ② Let me know if you’re available and if you’d like to join me.（if引导的宾语从句） 10．看电影可以帮我们缓解压力，同时也可以教给我们许多知识。那你了解电影吗？请你根据内容提示写一篇70词左右的英语短文，开头已给出，但不计入总词数： (1) 最初的电影不是彩色的，而且只是动的画面，只有几个人在摄像机前表演。 (2) 现在拍摄一部电影需要好几千人甚至好几年的时间才能完成。 (3) 电影的种类很多，比如：喜剧片、卡通片、动作片等。那么你最喜欢看的是……并说出原因。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Watching movies can help us relax and we can learn a lot at the same time. But do you know anything about movies? When movies were first created, they were not in colour. They were just moving pictures and only a few people acted in front of the camera. But now making a movie needs thousands of people and even spending a few years. There are many kinds of movies, such as comedy movies, cartoons, action movies and so on. For me I like comedy movies, because I think comedies can make people feel happy and laugh. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍最初的电影的情况； 第二步，介绍现在电影的情况； 第三步，最后介绍电影的种类及自己喜欢的类型。 [亮点词汇] ① at the same time同时 ② a few几个 ③ thousands of成千上万 [高分句型] ① When movies were first created, they were not in colour.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② For me I like comedy movies, because I think comedies can make people feel happy and laugh.（because引导的原因状语从句） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $