Unit 7 At the beach.（写作突破专项训练）英语牛津上海版三起五年级上册

Unit7仿写法介绍海边度假 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 Today is Saturday, 3rd November, The Browns are on holiday in Sanya. They are at the beach. （交代度假基本情况） Sally is swimming. I'm writing a letter.（介绍家人的活动） 02 写作方法指引-仿写法 例句：Today is Saturday, 3rd November, The Browns are on holiday in Sanya. They are at the beach. 结构：Today is…are on holiday in…They are at the beach. 仿写：Today is Sunday, 3rd June, The Smarts are on holiday in Qingdao. They are at the beach. 例句：Sally is swimming. I'm writing a letter. 结构：…is…(V-ing) I'm… 仿写：Linda is running. I'm playing baseball. 03写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 At the Beach It is a nice day. My family and I are at the beach.（交代度假基本情况）The sky is blue and the sand is soft. My father is swimming in the sea. My mother is enjoying the sunshine. I am building a sand house. （介绍家人的活动）We are all having a good time. （表达感受） 01 基础知识精讲-句型 1.交代度假基本情况 参考词汇：holiday（假期），beach（海滩），sunny/fine/lovely（晴朗的 / 好的 / 美好的），family（家人），on holiday（度假）vacation（假期，和 holiday 意思相近），nice（美好的），seaside（海边） 参考句型： My family are on holiday in... It is a... day. We are at the beach. We go to... for holiday.；Today is... and we are on holiday at the beach. 2.介绍家人的活动 参考词汇：swim（游泳），enjoy（享受），collect（收集），shell（贝壳），sunshine（阳光），build（建造），sandcastle（沙堡）play（玩），read（读），drink（喝），umbrella（雨伞），juice（果汁） 参考句型： ... is/are doing... My father is swimming in the sea. My mother is enjoying the sunshine. She is sitting under the umbrella.；He is drinking juice.；I am playing with sand. 3.表达感受 参考词汇：have a good time（玩得高兴），fun（乐趣），love（喜爱）happy（高兴的），like（喜欢） 参考句型： We are all having a good time. We have a lot of fun. I love... We are very happy.；I like this holiday. 02 基础知识精讲-语法 现在进行时 用法：表示现在正在进行或发生的动作。 构成：be 动词（am/is/are）+ 动词的 -ing 形式。 当主语是 I 时，be 动词用 am，如：I am swimming. 当主语是第三人称单数（he/she/it 等）时，be 动词用 is，如：He is swimming. 当主语是复数（we/they/you 等）时，be 动词用 are，如：They are swimming. 动词 -ing 形式变化规则： 一般情况下，直接加 -ing，如：swim→ swimming，play→ laying。 以不发音的 e 结尾的动词，去 e 加 -ing，如：have→ having。 以重读闭音节结尾，且末尾只有一个辅音字母的动词，双写这个辅音字母，再加 -ing，如：run→ running，sit→ sitting。 提分练 用所给动词的正确形式填空。 1.Look! The bird ________ (fly) in the sky. 2.We ________ (have) a party now. 3.She ________ (read) a book. 4.They ________ (play) football on the playground. 5.I ________ (draw) a picture. 参考解析 1.is flying：主语 “The bird” 是第三人称单数，be 动词用 is；fly 的 -ing 形式是 flying，所以填 is flying。 2.are having：主语 “We” 是复数，be 动词用 are；have 以不发音的 e 结尾，去 e 加 -ing 变为 having，所以填 are having。 3.is reading：主语 “She” 是第三人称单数，be 动词用 is；read 直接加 -ing 变为 reading，所以填 is reading。 4.are playing：主语 “They” 是复数，be 动词用 are；play 直接加 -ing 变为 playing，所以填 are playing。 5.am drawing：主语 “I”，be 动词用 am；draw 直接加 -ing 变为 drawing，所以填 am drawing。 模拟写作提升1 请根据以下表格内容，写一篇短文。 Place Weather Family members Activities Sanya Fine Father Swimming in the sea Mother Sitting under the umbrella and drinking juice I Building a sandcastle 参考句型 We are on holiday in Sanya. It is a fine day. My father is swimming in the sea. 参考单词 Sanya (三亚), fine (好的), swim (游泳), umbrella (雨伞), juice (果汁), build (建造), sandcastle (沙堡), fun (乐趣) 范文1 A Holiday in Sanya. We are on holiday in Sanya. It is a fine day. （交代度假基本情况） My father is swimming in the sea. My mother is sitting under the umbrella and drinking juice. I am building a sandcastle. （介绍家人的活动）We have a lot of fun at the beach. （表达感受） 模拟写作提升2 请根据以下问题，写一篇关于在海滩度假的短文。Questions: 1.Where are you on holiday? 2.What's the weather like? 3.What are your family members doing? 4.How do you feel? 参考句型 My family are on holiday in Xiamen. It is a sunny day. The beach is beautiful. Look! My father is swimming in the sea. 参考单词 holiday (假期), beach (海滩), sunny (晴朗的), swim (游泳), enjoy (享受), collect (收集), have a good time (玩得高兴) 范文2 My Holiday My family are on holiday in Xiamen. It is a sunny day. The beach is beautiful. （交代度假基本情况） Look! My father is swimming in the sea. My mother is enjoying the sunshine. My little brother is collecting shells. I am playing with sand. （介绍家人的活动）We are all having a good time. I love this holiday. （表达感受） 四、武汉汉阳区（真题作文） 请写一篇关于你和家人在海滩度假的短文，描述天气、你们的活动等。 参考句型 Today is Saturday. We go to the beach for holiday. It is sunny. My father is swimming. 参考单词 today (今天), beach (海滩), holiday (假期), sunny (晴朗的), swim (游泳), collect (收集), shells (贝壳), love (喜爱) 范文3 Our Beach Holiday Today is Saturday. We go to the beach for holiday. It is sunny. （交代度假基本情况） My father is swimming. My mother is sitting on the sand and reading a book. （介绍家人的活动） I am collecting shells. We love this beach holiday. （表达感受） 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $