Unit 5 Travel 旅行（单元写作精练）英语北师大版2024八年级上册

Unit 5 Travel 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题 本单元的主题是“旅行”,与此相关的主要写作维度有: ①介绍一次难忘的旅行经历; ②描述某个著名旅游景点的特色; ③分享旅行过程中的情感体验与收获感悟。 中考文段表达中和该主题有关的命题形式有很多,通常以 记叙文或应用文的形式出现,如写旅行游记、给旅游杂志投稿、回复关于旅行建议的帖子以及根据旅行经历绘制的思维导图进行文字描述等。 写作实例： 根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 　　旅游可以开阔视野,增长见识。请你描述你的一次旅行,你去了哪里,都做了些什么,有哪些最难忘或者最精彩的回忆,以及通过这次旅行你学到或感悟到了些什么。 提示词语:sightseeing, gift, culture... 内容提示:1.When and where did you go? 2.What did you do and see there? 3.What did you learn from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题指导 1.体裁:记叙文　2.时态:一般过去时　3.人称:以第一、三人称为主 4.必备词句:①unforgettable难以忘怀的　②be amazed by对……感到惊讶　③a huge number of...大量的……　④different kinds of 不同种类的　⑤deepen(使)加深　⑥not only...but also不仅……而且…… ⑦This trip not only deepened my understanding of Chinese history and culture, but it also became a valuable learning experience. 这次旅行不仅加深了我对中国历史和文化的了解,也是一次宝贵的学习经历。 谋篇布局 优秀范文 Last summer, I visited Xi'an with my parents, and it was an unforgettable trip. 　　We went sightseeing at the Terracotta Army, and I was amazed by a huge number of vivid warriors. We also tried different kinds of local snacks, all of which were absolutely delicious! I picked up some small gifts with traditional designs for my friends. This trip not only deepened my understanding of Chinese history and culture, but it also became a valuable learning experience. 1．（25-26八年级上·河北·阶段练习）“读万卷书，行万里路”。请以“A Wonderful Trip”为题写一篇英语短文，说说你的旅行经历以及你的旅行感触，在英语课上与同学们分享。内容包括： 1. Where did you go?    2. What did you do?    3. How did you feel? 要求：     1. 参考以上提示内容，可适当发挥。 2. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。 3. 词数：80词左右。 A Wonderful Trip ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： A Wonderful Trip Last summer, I went to Qingdao with my parents. It is a beautiful coastal city. We went to the beach every morning. I built sandcastles and swam in the sea happily. In the afternoon, we tasted delicious seafood like crabs and shrimps. We also visited the Beer Museum and learned about the history of beer. This trip was wonderful. I not only enjoyed the beautiful scenery and delicious food but also spent happy time with my parents. It left me precious memories. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、介绍旅行的目的地； 第二步、介绍从事的活动，如：堆沙堡、游泳、品尝美味的海鲜以及参观啤酒博物馆等； 第三步、介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①coastal city沿海城市 ②in the afternoon在下午 ③not only…but also不仅……而且 [高分句型] In the afternoon, we tasted delicious seafood like crabs and shrimps. (like用于举例说明) 2．（25-26八年级上·山东·阶段练习）假如你校英文报正在举办一场主题为“An unforgettable trip”的英语演讲比赛，你有意参加。请你根据以下思维导图，用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己一次特殊的旅游经历，为比赛做准备。 要求：1. 短文须包含思维导图中所有的提示，可适当发挥； 2. 语言表达要准确，语句要通顺、连贯； 3. 词数为80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文     Last autumn, I joined a charity trip to a mountain village. It was an unforgettable trip.     During our three-day stay, we painted the school, donated books, and taught children simple English songs. What touched me most was their thirst for knowledge and joyful laughter.     This trip was meaningful because it taught me the true meaning of gratitude and giving. I realized how lucky I was and decided to try my best to help others in need. It wasn’t just a trip—it was a life lesson. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己参加的一次难忘的旅行； 第二步，具体描述其中的经过； 第三步，总结上文，表达自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①an unforgettable trip一次难忘的旅行 ②thirst for knowledge渴望知识 ③try one’s best尽最大努力 ④help others in need帮助有需要的人 [高分句型] ①This trip was meaningful because it taught me the true meaning of gratitude and giving.（because引导原因状语从句） ②I realized how lucky I was and decided to try my best to help others in need.（宾语从句） 3．（25-26八年级上·四川·阶段练习）假如你校微信公众号正在开展“假期游记”的英语征文活动，请你根据下面的图示信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你和家人的暑假旅行经历。 要求： 1.须包含所给的全部要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 2.词数不少于80词； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： My Summer Vacation This summer, my family and I visited Sanya in early July. We spent five wonderful days there.   We enjoyed many fun activities. We swam in the clear sea and built sandcastles on the beach. One day, we visited a tropical forest park where we saw many beautiful plants. In the evenings, we tasted fresh seafood at the local market.   I felt very happy throughout the trip. The beach was beautiful, and the local people were friendly. This trip brought our family closer and helped me learn about nature. It was an unforgettable vacation. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。 ②时态：一般过去时。 ③提示：需包含时间、地点、人物、活动和感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，交代旅行基本信息； 第二步，描述具体活动内容； 第三步，表达感受和收获 [亮点词汇] ①tropical forest park 热带森林公园 ②fresh seafood 新鲜海鲜 ③brought closer 拉近距离 ④unforgettable vacation 难忘的假期 [高分句型] ①One day, we visited a tropical forest park where we saw many beautiful plants.（where引导定语从句） ②The beach was beautiful, and the local people were friendly.（and连接并列句） 4．（25-26八年级上·新疆·阶段练习）One’s destination (目的地) is never a place, but a new way of seeing things. 请以“Enjoy Travel, Enjoy Life”为题写篇短文，分享你的某次旅行经历及对旅行的看法。 内容要点： 1.你本次旅行的时间、地点、和谁一起去、交通方式、天气状况等(至少包含三点)； 2.你的旅游经历，如游去了哪些景点、玩了哪些项目、吃了什么特色菜等； 3.对这次经历的感悟，如旅行的注意事项、收获、意义等。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实人名。 Enjoy Travel, Enjoy Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文： Enjoy Travel, Enjoy Life Last winter, I visited Xi’an with my family by train. The weather was cold but sunny. In the morning, we went to Shaanxi History Museum. The ancient treasures took our breath away, especially the Terracotta Warriors. The guide told us stories about the first emperor and his army. During lunch, we tried some local food. Everything tasted good, especially “Yangrou Paomo”, a delicious mutton soup. What a wonderful experience I had! And I learned that we should know about a place before visiting, which helps us understand more. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者一家去年冬天去西安旅游的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细描述作者一家旅游的经历； 第三步，书写结语。总结此次旅游的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①take one’s breath away 令人惊叹 ②tell sb. about sth.告诉某人关于某事 ③help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①What a wonderful experience I had! (what引导的感叹句) ②And I learned that we should know about a place before visiting, which helps us understand more. (含有that的宾语从句；含有which的定语从句) 5．（24-25八年级上·福建厦门·期中）假设你是李华，学校上周组织了一次主题为“乐享闽南”的研学旅行活动，你的外国友人Helen对此很感兴趣。请你结合以下图文提示，用英语给她写一封信，分享旅途中的活动及感想，词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear Helen, I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Helen, I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last week. Let me tell you about it. On the first day, we went to Xiamen. We visited Gulangyu Island, which is really beautiful. Then we flew kites on the beach. On Day 2, we traveled to Quanzhou. We visited Quanzhou West Street and enjoyed lots of delicious local food there. On the third day, we went to Zhangzhou. We visited Nanjing Tulou and picked fruit on the farm. It was so interesting to learn about different cultures and enjoy nature. I really had a great time during the study tour. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：以一般过去时为主； ③提示：需完整涵盖三天行程的核心活动，并适当补充个人感受，突出研学的乐趣与收获。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题。通过“I’m glad that... Let me tell you about it.”自然开启分享； 第二步，分述行程。按“Day 1→Day 2→Day 3”的时间顺序，清晰描述每天的地点与活动，逻辑连贯； 第三步，总结感受。用“I really had a great time...”表达整体体验，收尾自然。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in…对……感兴趣 ②delicious local food美味的当地食物 ③pick fruit摘水果 ④have a great time度过美好时光 [高分句型] ①We visited Gulangyu Island, which is really beautiful.（which引导非限制性定语从句） ②It was so interesting to learn about different cultures and enjoy nature.（It is+形容词+to do sth句型） 6.(2025北京西城期末)根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 　　假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Tony计划来北京旅游,发来邮件向你咨询。请你用英文写一封回信,向他推荐来北京旅游的最佳时间、旅游景点及推荐理由,并就其他方面(如穿衣、出行方式等)给出一些建议。 提示词语:autumn, the Great Wall, beautiful, enjoy, underground 内容提示:·When is the best time to visit Beijing? · What places can he visit, and why? ·What else would you like to tell him? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear, Tony, I'm glad to receive your email. The best time to visit Beijing is in September because the weather is perfect and the leaves turn golden. It's the most beautiful season in the city. Besides the famous attractions like the Great Wall and the Palace Museum, be sure to visit Lao She Teahouse. You can drink tea, try local snacks, and enjoy Beijing Opera, traditional music, and magic shows. For getting around, the underground is the best option—fast, cheap, and efficient, helping you avoid heavy traffic. 　　I hope this helps you plan your trip! Have a wonderful time in Beijing! Yours, Li Hua 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Unit 5 Travel 单元写作精练 写作主题 ////////////////// 写作主题 本单元的主题是“旅行”，与此相关的主要写作维度有： ①介绍一次难忘的旅行经历； ②描述某个著名旅游景点的特色； ③分享旅行过程中的情感体验与收获感悟。 中考文段表达中和该主题有关的命题形式有很多，通常以记叙文或应用文的形式出现，如写旅行游记、 给旅游杂志投稿、回复关于旅行建议的帖子以及根据旅行经历绘制的思维导图进行文字描述等。 写作实例： 根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供 选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 旅游可以开阔视野，增长见识。请你描述你的一次旅行，你去了哪里，都做了些什么，有哪些最难忘或者最 精彩的回忆，以及通过这次旅行你学到或感悟到了些什么。 提示词语：sightseeing,gift,culture. 内容提示：l.When and where did you go?2.What did you do and see there'?3.What did you learn from it'? 1/6 函学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 审题指导 1.体裁：记叙文2.时态：一般过去时3.人称：以第一、三人称为主 4.必备词句：①unforgettable难以忘怀的②be amazed by对…感到惊讶③a huge number of..大量的… ④different kinds of不同种类的⑤deepen(使)加深⑥not only.but also不仅…而且… 7This trip not only deepened my understanding of Chinese history and culture,but it also became a valuable learning experience..这次旅行不仅加深了我对中国历史和文化的了解，也是一次宝贵的学习经历。 谋篇布局 第一步：门见山， Last summer,I visited with my parents,and it was an 介绍旅行时间、地点 unforgettable trip. 介绍 We went sightseeing at ,and I was amazed by】 旅行 第二步：具体介绍旅 We also tried different kinds of all of which 经历 行经历 delicious!I picked up some small gifts for my friends. 第三步：表达自己的 This trip not only of Chinese history and culture,but also 感悟 became a valuable learning experience. YWiWMnwWMWnwWwwWMimWnWinnnw 徐题型通关 awaawwnwiwwwwwWwa 1.(25-26八年级上·河北阶段练习)“读万卷书，行万里路”。请以“A Wonderful Trip”为题写一篇英语 短文，说说你的旅行经历以及你的旅行感触，在英语课上与同学们分享。内容包括： 1.Where did you go?2.What did you do?3.How did you feel? 要求： 1.参考以上提示内容，可适当发挥。 2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。 2/6 多学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 3.词数：80词左右。 A Wonderful Trip 2.(25-26八年级上山东阶段练习)假如你校英文报正在举办一场主题为“An unforgettable trip”的英语 演讲比赛，你有意参加。请你根据以下思维导图，用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己一次特殊的旅游经历，为 比赛做准备。 Where did you go? When did Who did you take the you go with? trip? A special trip How did you feel? What did you do? 要求：1.短文须包含思维导图中所有的提示，可适当发挥： 2.语言表达要准确，语句要通顺、连贯： 3.词数为80左右。 3/6 函学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 3.(25-26八年级上·四川阶段练习)假如你校微信公众号正在开展“假期游记”的英语征文活动，请你 根据下面的图示信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你和家人的暑假旅行经历。 When How Where My Summer Vacation Activities Who Feeling 要求： 1须包含所给的全部要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯： 2.词数不少于80词： 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 4. (25-26八年级上·新疆阶段练习)One's destination(目的地)is never a place,but a new way of seeing things. 请以“Enjoy Travel,,Enjoy Life"”为题写篇短文，分享你的某次旅行经历及对旅行的看法。 内容要点： 1.你本次旅行的时间、地点、和谁一起去、交通方式、天气状况等（至少包含三点）： 2你的旅游经历，如游去了哪些景点、玩了哪些项目、吃了什么特色菜等： 3对这次经历的感悟，如旅行的注意事项、收获、意义等。 注意： 1.词数80左右： 2短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实人名。 4/6 函学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Enjoy Travel,Enjoy Life 5.(24-25八年级上·福建厦门期中)假设你是李华，学校上周组织了一次主题为“乐享闽南”的研学旅 行活动，你的外国友人Helen对此很感兴趣。请你结合以下图文提示，用英语给她写一封信，分享旅途中 的活动及感想，词数80左右。 戴浪屿 然难 Day 1 Xiamen Day 3 Zhangzhou visit Gulangyu Island ☆visit Nanjing Tulou ☆fly a kite on the beach ☆pick fruit on the farm Day 2 Quanzhou visit Quanzhou West Street ☆enjoy local food 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数： 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范： 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear Helen, I'm glad that you're interested in our school study tour last week 5/6 函学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Yours, Li Hua 6.(2025北京西城期末)根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。 所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Toy计划来北京旅游，发来邮件向你咨询。请你用英文写一封回信，向他推 荐来北京旅游的最佳时间、旅游景点及推荐理由，并就其他方面（如穿衣、出行方式等）给出一些建议。 提示词语：autumn,the Great Wall,beautiful,.enjoy,underground 内容提示：When is the best time to visit Beijing? What places can he visit,and why? What else would you like to tell him? 学科网 黄金8卷 WWW.ZXXK.COM 优选好题·赢在中考 6/6