Unit 5 Art world 艺术形式与欣赏（单元写作精练）英语牛津译林版九年级上册

Unit 5 Art world 艺术形式与欣赏 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题： 艺术形式与欣赏 本单元的话题是“艺术形式与欣赏”，要求学生能简单介绍自己对艺术的了解，本单元写作要求同学们能根据相关信息提示简单地介绍自己对艺术形式的了解和喜好/欣赏。内容包括某种艺术形式的简介、喜好的原因、个人欣赏经历、艺术活动安排等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点： 1.能用原因状语从句组织内容； 2.能用正确的人称和时态； 3.能正确使用标点符号； 4.能做到要点齐全、逻辑清晰。 写作框架： 二、写作步骤 步骤一：确定艺术形式与欣赏的内容和顺序。 步骤二：列举介绍艺术形式与欣的句型，多多益告。 步骤三：成段成篇，修改亮答。 真题示例： 1．艺术陶冶情操，涵养生命。你喜欢的艺术形式是什么，有过怎样的经历，用英语写一篇短文。 注意: 1. 词数90左右, 短文开头已给出 2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 Art plays an important role in our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Art is an important part of our life. My favourite art is making kites. According to my grandparents, I looked forward to flying. One year, my grandfather made a kite for me. That made me quite excited. When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of fliying came true. As I’m growing older, I will leave my parents. But I know the line is still in my parents’ hand. With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther. Art teaches us a lot. It makes our life rich and colourful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：采用一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据图片内容，阐述自己最喜欢的艺术以及怎样的经历。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述自己最喜欢的艺术形式； 第二步，阐述自己的经历； 第三步，总结艺术的魅力。 [亮点词汇] ①look forward to期盼； ②make sb adj.使某人……； ③come true实现 [高分句型] ①When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of fliying came true.（when引导时间状语） ②With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther.（with复合结构） 2．假定你是九年级学生李华，准备向校英语报“Traditional Arts of China”专栏投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一种中国传统艺术形式，写作内容包括以下要点： ①简单介绍这种传统艺术； ②喜欢的原因 (2点)； ③如何传承 (2点)； ④呼吁传承。 要求： 1. 词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇： Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favourite is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy. It is a beautiful art of writing Chinese characters with brushes and ink, which has a history of thousands of years. I love calligraphy for two reasons. First, it helps me relax and focus. When I write with a brush, I feel peaceful. Second, it shows the beauty of Chinese culture. Every stroke has its own meaning and style. To pass down this art, we can take calligraphy classes and practice regularly. Also, schools can organize calligraphy competitions to encourage more students to learn it. Let’s work together to keep this wonderful tradition alive! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，直接点明最喜欢的艺术形式，并简要介绍其特点； 第二步，讲述喜欢的原因以及传承方式； 第三步，书写结尾，总结呼吁。 [亮点词汇] ①pass down传承 ②stroke笔画 ③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①It is a beautiful art of writing Chinese characters with brushes and ink, which has a history of thousands of years.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②When I write with a brush, I feel peaceful.（when引导的时间状语从句） 写作积累： What kind of literature do you like? classic 名著 story 故事 novel (长篇)小说 poem诗；韵文 play 剧本 magazine 杂志 fairy tale 童话故事 fiction 小说 What do you think of the characters in it? brave 勇敢的 kind 善良的 smart 聪明的 optimistic 乐观的 humorous 幽默的 calm 冷静的 serious 严肃的 patient 耐心的 have a strong will 有坚强的意志 What do you think of it? amazing 令人惊奇的 attractive 吸引人的 exciting令人兴奋的 moving 动人的 famous 著名的 fantastic 极好的 enjoyable 有乐趣的 interesting 有趣的 meaningful 有意义的 wonderful 精彩的 educational 有教育意义的 传统文化元素 1.I’d like to introduce Chinese paper cutting， which is widely used in our everyday life. 我想介绍中国的剪纸，它在我们的日常生活中被广泛使用。 2.The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals. 春节是最重要的中国传统节日之一。 3.The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. 端午节在中国农历五月初五。 4.I’m very glad to tell you something about the traditional Chinese culture. 我很高兴告诉你一些关于中国传统文化的事情。 传统文化内容 1.China is the hometown of tea， and it is also the birthplace of tea culture. 中国是茶的故乡，也是茶文化的发源地。 2.In China， it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into food. 在中国，把筷子插进食物里是不礼貌的。 3.We usually take part in the dragon boat race during the Dragon Boat Festival. 在端午节期间，我们通常会参加龙舟赛。 4.Paper cutting is a kind of traditional Chinese folk art. 剪纸是一种中国传统民间艺术形式。 5.On the eve of the Spring Festival， all the families stay up to welcome the New Year after a big dinner. 在除夕，家家户户在吃完一顿丰盛的晚餐后都熬夜迎接新年。 对传统文化的认识 1.In short， the history makes Chinese culture colorful. 总之，历史使中国文化丰富多彩。 2.So it’s a good choice to learn more about traditional Chinese culture. 所以它是一个了解更多中国传统文化的好选择。 3.It’s our duty to spread Chinese culture to the world. 向世界传播中国文化是我们的责任。 4.As a national treasure， it plays an important role in Chinese culture. 作为国宝，它在中国文化中扮演着重要的角色。 ＞开头中间结尾模板 开头段 1. What I am going to share is the Spring Festival. It’s a traditional festival in China. It’s on January 1st of the lunar calendar every year. 我要分享的节日是春节。它是中国的一个传统节日。它在每年的农历正月初一。 2. There are many important festivals in China， like the Dragon Boat Festival. 中国有许多重要的节日，比如端午节。 中间段 People have the tradition of guessing lantern riddles. It’s interesting and a little difficult. It’s also traditional for people to watch the dragon dance and the lion dance， and even enjoy the performance named walking on stilts. At the same time， eating yuanxiao is a must for the Lantern Festival. 人们有猜灯谜的传统。这很有趣，也有点难。人们观看舞龙、舞狮，甚至欣赏高跷表演，这也是一种传统。同时，元宵节必须吃元宵。 结尾段 1. How about visiting China next year and celebrating the Lantern Festival with us？ I believe you will have great fun here. 明年来中国和我们一起庆祝元宵节怎么样？我相信你在这里会玩得很开心。 2. I think the Spring Festival makes me fonder of traditional Chinese culture， gives us the chance to meet， and also brings new hope. 我认为春节使我更喜欢中国传统文化，给我们相聚的机会，同时也带来新的希望。 3. I like the Mid－Autumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious mooncakes but also because it’s a family get－together time. I really enjoy the love among the family members. 我最喜欢中秋节，不仅因为我喜欢美味的月饼，还因为这是家庭团聚的时刻。我非常享受家人之间的爱。 ＞话题俗语谚语 1.Do as Romans do when in Rome. 入乡随俗。 2.A snow year， a rich year. 瑞雪兆丰年。 3.Courtesy on one side only lasts not long. 来而不往非礼也。 1．艺术陶冶情操，艺术使生活丰富多彩。你校英文报正举办以My favourite art form为题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式，内容包括： 1.你最喜欢的艺术形式； 2.分享一个与之相关的自己的故事； 3.你的感受。 注意： 1.词数：90左右； 2.短文需包括所给要点，可适当发挥； 3.短中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 提示词汇：绘画 painting    书法 calligraphy     戏剧 drama             剪纸 paper-cutting 舞蹈 dancing       唱歌singing      摄影 photography      乐器 musical instrument ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite art form Art is an important part of my life. My favourite art is making kites. As a kid, I had a big dream of flying. One day when I was five, my grandfather made me a bird kite. That made me really excited. When I held a line to let the bird kite fly into the sky, I had a feeling that my dream of flying came true. Since then, I have made it a rule to make a kite every spring. Now my study is full of colourful kites. As I’m growing older, like a kite, I will leave my parents. But I know the line is always in my parents’ hands. They will watch me as I fly higher and farther. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式；   第二步，分享一个与之相关的自己的故事； 第三步，表达自己的感受。   [亮点词汇]   ①have a dream of doing sth梦想做某事 ②come true实现 ③be full of充满 [高分句型]   ①One day when I was five, my grandfather made me a bird kite.（when引导的时间状语从句）   ② They will watch me as I fly higher and farther.（as引导时间状语从句） 2．舞狮（Lion Dance）是在广东地区非常流行的一种表演，请根据以下提示，介绍广东舞狮。开头已给出，不算入总词数。 1. 舞狮是传统表演； 2. 结合功夫、舞蹈和音乐； 3. 在节日、重要活动中有舞狮；也有举行舞狮竞赛； 4. 现状：练习很辛苦，越来越少人喜欢舞狮； 5. 发展：自由发挥两点。 Lion Dance Lion Dance is very popular across Guangdong Province. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Lion Dance Lion Dance is very popular across Guangdong Province. Lion dance is a traditional performance. It is a form of performance that combines Kung Fu, dance and music. Lion Dance is to celebrate a festive day or moment. In some festivals or important activities, there will be a Lion Dance. There are many people who enjoy watching performances. Lion dance competitions are now held in some places. But this traditional performance is less and less now. Because practice is very hard. Fewer and fewer people like Lion Dance, and more and more young people like modern dance. I hope people can like Lion Dance and spread this traditional art. I hope we can learn more about Lion Dance in our spare time. Let’s join the Lion Dance and protect the traditional culture. 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍舞狮的情况以及舞狮的现状以及发展等，可以适当发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要承接已给出的开头，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 3．假如你是李华，你有一位非遗传承人朋友，请你根据以下的提示信息，向大家介绍你的朋友。 Name Mr. Wang (Wang Li) What does he look like young, thin, tall, black hair Traditional skill paper cutting Tools needed scissors, paper Steps fold (折叠) the paper, draw the pattern on the paper, use the scissors to cut the paper What do you think of his skill? Would you like to learn his skill? 要求： 1. 短文必须包含所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息； 4. 词数：不少于60。 Today I will introduce my friend Mr. Wang to you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Today I will introduce my friend Mr. Wang to you. He is a young, tall and thin man with black hair. What makes him special is that he’s an inheritor of paper cutting, which is a traditional Chinese intangible cultural heritage. Mr. Wang needs only simple tools, scissors and paper to create amazing artworks. The process includes three main steps. First, fold the paper. Then, draw patterns on it. Finally, cut the paper carefully with scissors. Watching him work is like seeing magic happen! His skilled hands can turn ordinary paper into beautiful patterns of flowers, animals or Chinese characters. I think his paper-cutting skill is not only creative but also meaningful as it carries our cultural traditions. I would love to learn this skill from him because it’s both fun and valuable. Maybe someday I can make my own paper cuts to decorate my home during festivals! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”； ③提示：材料所给表格提示需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山，介绍非遗传承人朋友外貌及非遗技能； 第二步：详细阐述剪纸所需要的工具及步骤； 第三步：表达对剪纸的看法以及期待。 [亮点词汇] ①Chinese intangible cultural heritage中国非物质文化遗产 ②amazing artworks令人惊奇的艺术作品 ③cultural traditions文化传统 ④fun and valuable有趣且有价值 [高分句型] ①What makes him special is that he’s an inheritor of paper cutting, which is a traditional Chinese intangible cultural heritage.（what引导的主语从句+which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②I think his paper-cutting skill is not only creative but also meaningful as it carries our cultural traditions.（宾语从句） 4．如今，越来越多的外国友人开始喜爱中国传统艺术。假如你是黄英，你想向外国友人介绍你最喜爱的中国传统艺术，请根据以下图示，撰写一篇作文。 要点包括： 1. 请在给出的四种传统艺术中选出其中一种并详细介绍 (至少3点)； 2. 须全面反映图文信息； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art—Chinese Calligraphy Among all the four traditional Chinese arts, Chinese calligraphy holds a special place in my heart. It is a special art form using a brush to create beautiful characters on paper. It carries deep meanings and the artist’s feelings. I got interested in it when I saw a calligrapher’s work at a show. I expect more people around the world can enjoy its beauty. Also, I hope to see more creative forms with modern styles with traditional calligraphy in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图，点出自己最喜欢的传统艺术形式。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己喜欢的原因。 第三步：书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①deep meanings深刻含义 ②around the world全世界 ③hope to do sth.希望做某事 [高分句型] ①I got interested in it when I saw a calligrapher’s work at a show. (when引导的时间状语从句) 5．坚定文化自信，弘扬中国优秀传统文化，是新时代中国青少年的责任与使命。假如你是李华，近期，一批外国留学生要到你所在的学校参观访问，你将作为学生代表向他们介绍中国优秀传统文化。请根据下面表格中的要点提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。 总体介绍 中国传统文化种类多、历史悠久、影响广泛。 京剧 国粹（national treasure）之一，包含唱（singing）念（speaking）做（acting）打（acrobatic fighting）；讲述了很多故事，受各个年龄段人们的喜欢。 茶文化 茶的种类多，对健康有益。 瓷器（china） 中国是瓷器之乡，技术世界领先，闻名于世。 写作要求： 1.字迹工整，书写规范，不逐字翻译，包含全部要点，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear friends, Welcome to our school. Today, I want to share something about traditional Chinese culture with you. There are many kinds of traditional Chinese culture. Some of them have a long history. And they also have a wide influence. Beijing Opera comes first. As one of Chinese national treasures, Beijing Opera includes singing, speaking, acting and acrobatic fighting. It tells stories of history, politics, society and daily life. And it’s loved by Chinese people of all ages. Next, let’s talk about tea. In China, there are many different kinds of tea in different areas, such as green tea and black tea. It is good for our health. The last one is about china. China is the hometown of china. Our china-making technology is the best in the world, and it’s famous all over the world. Thanks for your listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态是“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步、根据提示，分别介绍京剧、茶文化以及瓷器； 第三步、书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①have a wide influence具有广泛的影响力 ②people of all ages各个年龄段的人 ③many different kinds of许多不同种类的 [高分句型] ①Our china-making technology is the best in the world, and it’s famous all over the world.(并列句) 6．中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化，请你用英语写一封回信，向外国友人介绍下面两种传统艺术，要求包含以下要点，不少于100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 中国结（Chinese knot）                       剪纸 材料：丝线（silk thread）                  材料：纸和剪刀（scissors） 颜色：红色                                  特点：剪出各种图案 形状：像花、动物等                        用途：张贴在门、窗等地 寓意：带来好运                              寓意：表达喜悦 1.你对传统艺术的看法（请补充） 2.你的期望（请补充） Dear friends, China is a country with over five thousand years. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes Yours, Lily 【答案】例文： Dear friends, China is a country with over five thousand years. Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese arts. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shapes of flowers, animals and so on. Chinese knot means good luck. Another traditional Chinese art is paper-cuts. We can use paper and scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put them on doors, windows, etc. Paper-cuts often mean happiness. I think traditional Chinese arts are Chinese treasure. I hope more and more young people like them and develop them. Yours, Lily 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要点”中所列举的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍中国历史五千年，引出主题； 第二步，介绍中国结和剪纸两种传统艺术； 第三步，表达对传统艺术的看法和期望。 [亮点词汇] ①be made of 由……组成 ②pattern 图案 [高分句型] ①I think traditional Chinese arts are Chinese treasure. (宾语从句) ②I hope more and more young people like them and develop them. (宾语从句) 7．假如你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友David想了解你家乡的情况和中国的传统艺术，请你给他写一封邮件，描述一下你家乡的著名景点，并介绍一种中国传统艺术（如剪纸、中国结等）。 家乡的基本情况 1.地理位置：在中国的东部 2.著名景点以及景点的体验： ①骆马湖（Luoma Lake） ②三台山森林公园：Santaishan Forest Park 介绍一种中国传统民间艺术 1.从材料、形状、用途和寓意等方面描述一种传统民间艺术形式； 2.你对传统艺术的看法 表达你对家乡的热爱 家乡很美；欢迎来到宿迁；你一定会在宿迁玩得开心。 要求： 1.包含所给要点，可适当发挥； 2.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 3.词数：80词左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear David, I’m very happy to tell you something about my hometown and traditional Chinese folk art. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear David, I’m very happy to tell you something about my hometown and traditional Chinese folk art. My hometown Suqian is a beautiful city in the east of China. When you visit Suqian, go for a walk by Luoma Lake. The view along the lake is wonderful. Then go to Santaishan Forest Park to see the amazing flowers. It’s also nice to walk around the park and take in the forest air. Paper-cutting is one of the traditional Chinese folk art. We just need a pair of scissors or a knife and some paper. The paper-cuts are in the shape of flowers, bird, fish and landscapes. We use them to express our wishes. At the Spring Festival, we put them up on windows and doors for good luck. I think traditional Chinese folk art is an important part of Chinese culture. I hope young people like it and learn more about it. Welcome to Suqian. You will have a great time here! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时态； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山，点明分享家乡与民俗艺术； 第二步：描述家乡景点：骆马湖、三台山森林公园；介绍剪纸艺术：工具材料、图案主题、文化象征及价值；   第三步：书写结语，欢迎来访。 [亮点词汇] ①go for a walk去散步 ②walk around四处走 ③take in吸入 ④have a great time玩得高兴、过得愉快 [高分句型]   ①I think traditional Chinese folk art is an important part of Chinese culture. （宾语从句） ②I hope young people like it and learn more about it.（宾语从句） 8．中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化。皮影戏、京剧、剪纸、捏面人儿等都是中国古老的传统艺术。在创新的同时，传承优秀的中国传统文化和艺术是每个中华儿女的责任。在众多的中国传统艺术中，有什么是你特别钟爱的吗？请以“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art”为题，写一篇英语短文。 内容包括： 1.你最喜欢的中国传统艺术是什么； 2.简单介绍该传统艺术，并指出你喜欢它的原因； 3.你的期望。 注意： 1.包含以上信息，可适当进行发挥。 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何真实的个人信息。 3.不少于 80词，已给出部分不计入总词数。 My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favorite is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favorite is paper cutting. It’s a kind of folk art in China, with a history of more than 1,500 years. People cut different pictures of people, animals or plants with knives or scissors on red paper. I’ve been practicing paper cutting for more than five years. It’s such a wonderful art form that I fell in love with it the first time I came across it. Firstly, it’s a perfect way to train me to be patient and careful. Secondly, paper cutting works are great presents for my family and friends on special occasions. Paper cutting is part of Chinese culture that all Chinese people should be proud of. And I want to spread it to others. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的传统艺术是什么； 第二步，介绍喜欢这种传统艺术的原因； 第三步，表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①a kind of一种 ②fell in love with爱上 ③be proud of为……感到骄傲 [高分句型] It’s such a wonderful art form that I fell in love with it the first time I came across it.（It固定句型） 9．假设你是李辉。你的英国朋友Tom向你咨询中国传统技艺。请你给他写一封信介绍中国某一种传统技艺（如：paper cutting；Chinese knots；shadow puppet plays等）。 要点如下： （1）写信的目的； （2）介绍此项传统技艺； （3）期待对方来访一同体验。 注意： （1）词数80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Tom, You asked me about some traditional Chinese skills in your letter. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hui 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, You asked me about some traditional Chinese skills in your letter. I’m delighted to introduce you to paper cutting, a beautiful and ancient craft deeply rooted in our culture. Paper cutting, as the name suggests, involves cutting intricate designs from paper using scissors or a sharp knife. It’s amazing how a single sheet of paper can be transformed into such delicate and lively artworks. This craft is often used during festivals and celebrations to decorate homes and temples, bringing joy and good luck to the people. I really enjoy the process of paper cutting, which requires patience, creativity, and a steady hand. It’s a fantastic way to express emotions and stories without using words. I'd love to show you how it’s done when you visit. We could even try our hands at it together, creating our own designs. Looking forward to your visit and sharing this wonderful tradition with you. Best wishes, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括写信的目的、介绍传统技艺以及期待对方来访。考生需根据要求详细介绍所选的传统技艺，如历史背景、制作工艺、文化意义等，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开头部分直接回应Tom的询问，明确写信的目的是为了介绍中国传统技艺； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细介绍所选的传统技艺，如以“paper cutting”（剪纸）为例，可以从其历史悠久、制作工艺精细、图案寓意丰富、在节庆活动中的应用等方面展开介绍，让读者对剪纸这一传统技艺有全面而深入的了解； 第三步，书写结语。表达期待Tom来访中国，一同亲身体验这一传统技艺的愿望，并可以通过亲身体验更加深入地了解和感受中国传统文化的魅力。 [亮点词汇] ①deeply rooted in深深植根于 ②intricate designs复杂的设计 ③bring joy and good luck to给…带来欢乐和好运 [高分句型] ①Paper cutting, as the name suggests, involves cutting intricate designs from paper using scissors or a sharp knife.（as引导的非限制性定语从句） ②This craft is often used during festivals and celebrations to decorate homes and temples, bringing joy and good luck to the people.（现在分词短语作结果状语） ③I really enjoy the process of paper cutting, which requires patience, creativity, and a steady hand.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 10．中国结是中国特有的民间手工编结艺术，具有独特的东方特色。假如你是来自中国的交换生，现就读于英国的一所学校。请你根据下面所给的提示，写一篇短文介绍中国结。 历史 出现在古代；在唐宋时期发展成为一种艺术形式；明清时期开始流行 颜色 使用各种颜色的线，红色使用最多，因为红色代表好运 用途 用作装饰品，可挂于房屋、汽车、手机等不同的地方 要求： 1.包含以上给出的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.80—100词。 参考词汇：appear出现；thread线；decoration装饰品 A Special Form of Traditional Art —Chinese Knots ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Special Form of Traditional Art —Chinese Knots The Chinese knot is a form of traditional Chinese art. Chinese knots appeared in ancient times. It became an art form in the Tang and Song dynasties. Later it became popular in the Ming and Qing dynasties. People use colorful thread to make Chinese knots. They use red thread the most because red stands for good luck. The knots can be used as car or mobile phone decorations. Also, people hang the knots in rooms. People can see Chinese knots in different parts of China. Both the young and the old like them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，介绍中国传统艺术的一种特殊形式 —— 中国结； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，在介绍中国结起源时使用一般过去时； ③提示：介绍中国结的历史、制作材料、用途及受欢迎程度。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明中国结是中国传统艺术的一种形式。 第二步，中间阐述中国结的起源发展，制作材料，用途。 第三步，结尾表明中国结在中国各地都受欢迎，老少皆宜。 [亮点词汇] ①traditional传统的 ②appear出现 ③stand for代表 ④decoration装饰 [高分句型] ①The Chinese knot is a form of traditional Chinese art.（简单直接地表明中国结所属类别，清晰明确。） ②They use red thread the most because red stands for good luck.（运用“because”引导原因状语从句，解释为何多用红线制作中国结。） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 5 Art world 艺术形式与欣赏 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题： 艺术形式与欣赏 本单元的话题是“艺术形式与欣赏”，要求学生能简单介绍自己对艺术的了解，本单元写作要求同学们能根据相关信息提示简单地介绍自己对艺术形式的了解和喜好/欣赏。内容包括某种艺术形式的简介、喜好的原因、个人欣赏经历、艺术活动安排等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点： 1.能用原因状语从句组织内容； 2.能用正确的人称和时态； 3.能正确使用标点符号； 4.能做到要点齐全、逻辑清晰。 写作框架： 二、写作步骤 步骤一：确定艺术形式与欣赏的内容和顺序。 步骤二：列举介绍艺术形式与欣的句型，多多益告。 步骤三：成段成篇，修改亮答。 真题示例： 1．艺术陶冶情操，涵养生命。你喜欢的艺术形式是什么，有过怎样的经历，用英语写一篇短文。 注意: 1. 词数90左右, 短文开头已给出 2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 Art plays an important role in our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Art is an important part of our life. My favourite art is making kites. According to my grandparents, I looked forward to flying. One year, my grandfather made a kite for me. That made me quite excited. When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of fliying came true. As I’m growing older, I will leave my parents. But I know the line is still in my parents’ hand. With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther. Art teaches us a lot. It makes our life rich and colourful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：采用一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据图片内容，阐述自己最喜欢的艺术以及怎样的经历。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述自己最喜欢的艺术形式； 第二步，阐述自己的经历； 第三步，总结艺术的魅力。 [亮点词汇] ①look forward to期盼； ②make sb adj.使某人……； ③come true实现 [高分句型] ①When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of fliying came true.（when引导时间状语） ②With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther.（with复合结构） 2．假定你是九年级学生李华，准备向校英语报“Traditional Arts of China”专栏投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一种中国传统艺术形式，写作内容包括以下要点： ①简单介绍这种传统艺术； ②喜欢的原因 (2点)； ③如何传承 (2点)； ④呼吁传承。 要求： 1. 词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇： Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favourite is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy. It is a beautiful art of writing Chinese characters with brushes and ink, which has a history of thousands of years. I love calligraphy for two reasons. First, it helps me relax and focus. When I write with a brush, I feel peaceful. Second, it shows the beauty of Chinese culture. Every stroke has its own meaning and style. To pass down this art, we can take calligraphy classes and practice regularly. Also, schools can organize calligraphy competitions to encourage more students to learn it. Let’s work together to keep this wonderful tradition alive! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，直接点明最喜欢的艺术形式，并简要介绍其特点； 第二步，讲述喜欢的原因以及传承方式； 第三步，书写结尾，总结呼吁。 [亮点词汇] ①pass down传承 ②stroke笔画 ③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①It is a beautiful art of writing Chinese characters with brushes and ink, which has a history of thousands of years.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②When I write with a brush, I feel peaceful.（when引导的时间状语从句） 写作积累： What kind of literature do you like? classic 名著 story 故事 novel (长篇)小说 poem诗；韵文 play 剧本 magazine 杂志 fairy tale 童话故事 fiction 小说 What do you think of the characters in it? brave 勇敢的 kind 善良的 smart 聪明的 optimistic 乐观的 humorous 幽默的 calm 冷静的 serious 严肃的 patient 耐心的 have a strong will 有坚强的意志 What do you think of it? amazing 令人惊奇的 attractive 吸引人的 exciting令人兴奋的 moving 动人的 famous 著名的 fantastic 极好的 enjoyable 有乐趣的 interesting 有趣的 meaningful 有意义的 wonderful 精彩的 educational 有教育意义的 传统文化元素 1.I’d like to introduce Chinese paper cutting， which is widely used in our everyday life. 我想介绍中国的剪纸，它在我们的日常生活中被广泛使用。 2.The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals. 春节是最重要的中国传统节日之一。 3.The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. 端午节在中国农历五月初五。 4.I’m very glad to tell you something about the traditional Chinese culture. 我很高兴告诉你一些关于中国传统文化的事情。 传统文化内容 1.China is the hometown of tea， and it is also the birthplace of tea culture. 中国是茶的故乡，也是茶文化的发源地。 2.In China， it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into food. 在中国，把筷子插进食物里是不礼貌的。 3.We usually take part in the dragon boat race during the Dragon Boat Festival. 在端午节期间，我们通常会参加龙舟赛。 4.Paper cutting is a kind of traditional Chinese folk art. 剪纸是一种中国传统民间艺术形式。 5.On the eve of the Spring Festival， all the families stay up to welcome the New Year after a big dinner. 在除夕，家家户户在吃完一顿丰盛的晚餐后都熬夜迎接新年。 对传统文化的认识 1.In short， the history makes Chinese culture colorful. 总之，历史使中国文化丰富多彩。 2.So it’s a good choice to learn more about traditional Chinese culture. 所以它是一个了解更多中国传统文化的好选择。 3.It’s our duty to spread Chinese culture to the world. 向世界传播中国文化是我们的责任。 4.As a national treasure， it plays an important role in Chinese culture. 作为国宝，它在中国文化中扮演着重要的角色。 ＞开头中间结尾模板 开头段 1. What I am going to share is the Spring Festival. It’s a traditional festival in China. It’s on January 1st of the lunar calendar every year. 我要分享的节日是春节。它是中国的一个传统节日。它在每年的农历正月初一。 2. There are many important festivals in China， like the Dragon Boat Festival. 中国有许多重要的节日，比如端午节。 中间段 People have the tradition of guessing lantern riddles. It’s interesting and a little difficult. It’s also traditional for people to watch the dragon dance and the lion dance， and even enjoy the performance named walking on stilts. At the same time， eating yuanxiao is a must for the Lantern Festival. 人们有猜灯谜的传统。这很有趣，也有点难。人们观看舞龙、舞狮，甚至欣赏高跷表演，这也是一种传统。同时，元宵节必须吃元宵。 结尾段 1. How about visiting China next year and celebrating the Lantern Festival with us？ I believe you will have great fun here. 明年来中国和我们一起庆祝元宵节怎么样？我相信你在这里会玩得很开心。 2. I think the Spring Festival makes me fonder of traditional Chinese culture， gives us the chance to meet， and also brings new hope. 我认为春节使我更喜欢中国传统文化，给我们相聚的机会，同时也带来新的希望。 3. I like the Mid－Autumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious mooncakes but also because it’s a family get－together time. I really enjoy the love among the family members. 我最喜欢中秋节，不仅因为我喜欢美味的月饼，还因为这是家庭团聚的时刻。我非常享受家人之间的爱。 ＞话题俗语谚语 1.Do as Romans do when in Rome. 入乡随俗。 2.A snow year， a rich year. 瑞雪兆丰年。 3.Courtesy on one side only lasts not long. 来而不往非礼也。 1．艺术陶冶情操，艺术使生活丰富多彩。你校英文报正举办以My favourite art form为题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式，内容包括： 1.你最喜欢的艺术形式； 2.分享一个与之相关的自己的故事； 3.你的感受。 注意： 1.词数：90左右； 2.短文需包括所给要点，可适当发挥； 3.短中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 提示词汇：绘画 painting    书法 calligraphy     戏剧 drama             剪纸 paper-cutting 舞蹈 dancing       唱歌singing      摄影 photography      乐器 musical instrument ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．舞狮（Lion Dance）是在广东地区非常流行的一种表演，请根据以下提示，介绍广东舞狮。开头已给出，不算入总词数。 1. 舞狮是传统表演； 2. 结合功夫、舞蹈和音乐； 3. 在节日、重要活动中有舞狮；也有举行舞狮竞赛； 4. 现状：练习很辛苦，越来越少人喜欢舞狮； 5. 发展：自由发挥两点。 Lion Dance Lion Dance is very popular across Guangdong Province. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是李华，你有一位非遗传承人朋友，请你根据以下的提示信息，向大家介绍你的朋友。 Name Mr. Wang (Wang Li) What does he look like young, thin, tall, black hair Traditional skill paper cutting Tools needed scissors, paper Steps fold (折叠) the paper, draw the pattern on the paper, use the scissors to cut the paper What do you think of his skill? Would you like to learn his skill? 要求： 1. 短文必须包含所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息； 4. 词数：不少于60。 Today I will introduce my friend Mr. Wang to you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．如今，越来越多的外国友人开始喜爱中国传统艺术。假如你是黄英，你想向外国友人介绍你最喜爱的中国传统艺术，请根据以下图示，撰写一篇作文。 要点包括： 1. 请在给出的四种传统艺术中选出其中一种并详细介绍 (至少3点)； 2. 须全面反映图文信息； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．坚定文化自信，弘扬中国优秀传统文化，是新时代中国青少年的责任与使命。假如你是李华，近期，一批外国留学生要到你所在的学校参观访问，你将作为学生代表向他们介绍中国优秀传统文化。请根据下面表格中的要点提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。 总体介绍 中国传统文化种类多、历史悠久、影响广泛。 京剧 国粹（national treasure）之一，包含唱（singing）念（speaking）做（acting）打（acrobatic fighting）；讲述了很多故事，受各个年龄段人们的喜欢。 茶文化 茶的种类多，对健康有益。 瓷器（china） 中国是瓷器之乡，技术世界领先，闻名于世。 写作要求： 1.字迹工整，书写规范，不逐字翻译，包含全部要点，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化，请你用英语写一封回信，向外国友人介绍下面两种传统艺术，要求包含以下要点，不少于100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 中国结（Chinese knot）                       剪纸 材料：丝线（silk thread）                  材料：纸和剪刀（scissors） 颜色：红色                                  特点：剪出各种图案 形状：像花、动物等                        用途：张贴在门、窗等地 寓意：带来好运                              寓意：表达喜悦 1.你对传统艺术的看法（请补充） 2.你的期望（请补充） Dear friends, China is a country with over five thousand years. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes Yours, Lily 7．假如你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友David想了解你家乡的情况和中国的传统艺术，请你给他写一封邮件，描述一下你家乡的著名景点，并介绍一种中国传统艺术（如剪纸、中国结等）。 家乡的基本情况 1.地理位置：在中国的东部 2.著名景点以及景点的体验： ①骆马湖（Luoma Lake） ②三台山森林公园：Santaishan Forest Park 介绍一种中国传统民间艺术 1.从材料、形状、用途和寓意等方面描述一种传统民间艺术形式； 2.你对传统艺术的看法 表达你对家乡的热爱 家乡很美；欢迎来到宿迁；你一定会在宿迁玩得开心。 要求： 1.包含所给要点，可适当发挥； 2.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 3.词数：80词左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear David, I’m very happy to tell you something about my hometown and traditional Chinese folk art. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8．中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化。皮影戏、京剧、剪纸、捏面人儿等都是中国古老的传统艺术。在创新的同时，传承优秀的中国传统文化和艺术是每个中华儿女的责任。在众多的中国传统艺术中，有什么是你特别钟爱的吗？请以“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art”为题，写一篇英语短文。 内容包括： 1.你最喜欢的中国传统艺术是什么； 2.简单介绍该传统艺术，并指出你喜欢它的原因； 3.你的期望。 注意： 1.包含以上信息，可适当进行发挥。 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何真实的个人信息。 3.不少于 80词，已给出部分不计入总词数。 My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favorite is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假设你是李辉。你的英国朋友Tom向你咨询中国传统技艺。请你给他写一封信介绍中国某一种传统技艺（如：paper cutting；Chinese knots；shadow puppet plays等）。 要点如下： （1）写信的目的； （2）介绍此项传统技艺； （3）期待对方来访一同体验。 注意： （1）词数80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Tom, You asked me about some traditional Chinese skills in your letter. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hui 10．中国结是中国特有的民间手工编结艺术，具有独特的东方特色。假如你是来自中国的交换生，现就读于英国的一所学校。请你根据下面所给的提示，写一篇短文介绍中国结。 历史 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