第二部分 题型五 应用文写作-【成功方案】2025年高考英语艺术生文化课总复习教师用书(Word)

该高中英语高考复习教案聚焦应用文写作核心考点，涵盖审题四确定（体裁、时态、人称、要点）、格式规范、要点覆盖及语言准确连贯等考查要求，按“审题-列纲-成文-修改-誊写”逻辑层次系统梳理写作步骤。通过考点分析（如审题四确定方法）、方法指导（列纲三步走、修改十看策略）、真题训练（近五年高考真题及范文解析）三个教学环节，帮助学生突破应用文写作“瓶颈”，构建规范高效的写作流程。 资料特色在于“润色升级”策略与真题分层解析结合，如典型例题中引导学生将简单句升级为强调句、倒装句，提升语言表达的准确性与丰富性，培养语言能力和思维品质。设置“审题要点盘点-润色技巧迁移-满分范文赏析”教学活动，配合基础巩固与能力提升分层练习，确保学生在有限时间内掌握高分写作方法，既提升学生应考能力，又为教师把控复习节奏提供清晰教学路径。

题型五　应用文写作 应用文写作其实是对学生已获英语知识的一种输出测试。在高考英语测试中，尤为如此。它旨在测试考生的英语表达能力，看其是否能够运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。从历年高考试卷来看，应用文写作是指导性写作，即按照题目所给的目的、时间、对象、地点、内容、长度等条件去完成写作。它不同于命题作文，可以随意发挥；也不是简单的句子翻译。必须做到行文切题，紧扣中心思想，不漏要点，并且意思连贯，文理通顺，语言准确、得当。但是，从历年高考英语质量分析的结果来看，应用文写作是学生英语学习的“瓶颈”，平均得分值不高。了解了高考的测试要求，弄清高考应用文写作的题型特点，注意写作方法和技巧，在具备了一定量词汇，语法、句型等知识的积累，经过一定的练习，同样完全可以冲破这个“瓶颈”，写出精彩的文章，彰显个人的语言魅力，取得优良的高考成绩。 一、打造高分写作秘诀 写一篇好的应用文，必须按照一定的写作步骤进行。一般包括六个步骤：审题、列纲、成文、修改、誊写与检查。 1．审题四确定 审题是写作中最重要的一个环节，要做到“四确定”： (1)确定体裁和格式。先确定文章是应用文、记叙文、说明文还是议论文，再按照该体裁的写作要求和格式进行布局谋篇。 (2)确定主体时态。依据体裁确定时态，一篇书面表达中一般只有一种主体时态。 (3)确定中心人称。 (4)确定写作要点。高考写作一般有3至4个要点，审题时要逐一列出。 2．列纲三步走 (1)选好开头句和结尾句。开头句如果是主题句，要做到内容完整、概括性强、表达清楚。开头句不是主题句，要做到开门见山、直奔主题。 (2)安排好结构。根据表达内容合理分段。 (3)选好句型和词汇。在写作时，除了要熟练运用常用的句型和词汇以外，还要尽量用教材上重点学过的句型，如强调句、非限制性定语从句、倒装句、同位语从句等，和相对高级的词来表达，可以给写作增色不少，提升文章的等级，提高在阅卷老师心中的印象分。 3．成文依逻辑 根据要求把材料按照一定的逻辑顺序组织成一篇文章。恰当使用关联词，使上下文连贯。可以运用想象适度发挥，但不可随意乱写，要紧扣要点适当描述。 4．修改要十看 (1)看体裁和格式是否正确。 (2)看要点是否齐全。 (3)看主谓是否一致。 (4)看人称是否一致。 (5)看时态是否一致。 (6)看句子结构是否完整。 (7)看关联词是否准确。 (8)看拼写，大小写是否正确。 (9)看标点是否正确。 (10)看词数是否符合要求。 5．誊写四注意 (1)注意文体格式。例如：是否需要加标题；是否需要注明日期或签名；如果是应用文中的书信或通知等要弄清日期或签名的位置。 (2)注意标点符号。英语中没有顿号和书名号，英语中的句号是(.)而不是(。)。英语中的标点符号几乎不会额外占格。 (3)注意大小写。只有句子开头的字母和专有名词的首字母大写，不能随便使用大写字母。不能用汉语拼音代替英文单词。 (4)注意书写规范，卷面整洁。誊写要细心，避免涂改。注意不要连写，字母大小均匀，字母和单词间距适当，字母的上下占格比例协调等。 二、典型例题 假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．表示感谢； 2．回顾Alex对你的帮助； 3．临别祝愿。 注意： 1．词数：80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Step 1.审题立意 (1)体裁：感谢信。 (2)时态：一般现在时和一般过去时。 (3)人称：第一、二人称。 (4)要点：表示感谢；回顾Alex对你的帮助；临别祝愿。 Step 2.谋篇构局 ↓ ↓ Step 3.要点盘点 1．第一段——点题：表示感谢 ①I'm very excited to write this letter to express my thanks to you. 2．第二段——主体段落展开：对方对自己在英语学习上的帮助 ②永远不会忘记对方的帮助 I will never forget the help you offered to me. ③纠正我的错误 You corrected my mistakes. ④教给我英语学习的技巧 You also taught me tricks of studying English. ⑤鼓励我自信 Your constant encouragement inspired me to be confident. 3．第三段——再次感谢并给予临别祝愿 ⑥Many thanks again for your great help. ⑦Wish you all the best. Step 4.润色升级 1．句①中用thanks的高级词汇替代该词 I'm very excited to write this letter to express my gratitude to you. 2．句②增加细节信息，用非谓语动词形式拓展该句 Looking back on the process of studying with you，I will never forget the help you offered to me. 3．用not only...but also的倒装句连接句③和句④ Not only did you correct my mistakes，but you also taught me tricks of studying English. 4．用强调句升级句⑤ It was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident. 5．用and连接⑥和⑦ Many thanks again for your great help and wish you all the best. Step 5.满分作文 Dear Alex， I'm very excited to write this letter to express my gratitude to you.If it had not been for your help，I wouldn't have made great progress in English. Looking back on the process of studying with you，I will never forget the help you offered to me.Not only did you correct my mistakes，but you also taught me tricks of studying English.What's more，it was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident. Many thanks again for your great help and wish you all the best. Yours， Li Hua 一、(2025·全国Ⅰ卷) 假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．你的选择； 2．说明理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jenny， I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外教Jenny提出的校英文报增设一个栏目，在“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项中给出自己的推荐，并说明理由。 【参考范文】 Dear Jenny， I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. I'm writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”，which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents. The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds between students.Redoubling efforts to boost academic performance，we pay little heed to other classmates' personalities，hobbies，strengths，and even aspirations.Such an inviting column，adopting a “description and guess” approach，must expose everyone to others' characteristics，thus strengthening mutual understanding.More importantly，more friendships will be forged，since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength. This eye-catching column，I'm firmly convinced，won't fail to grant the whole class a harmonious atmosphere. Yours， Li Hua 【详解】 1．词汇积累 表达：express → convey 利用：capitalize on → use 担当：serve as → act as 注意：pay heed to → take notice of 2．句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Such an inviting column，adopting a “description and guess” approach，must expose everyone to others' characteristics，thus strengthening mutual understanding. 拓展句：Such an inviting column，which adopts a “description and guess” approach，must expose everyone to others' characteristics，thus strengthening mutual understanding. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]I'm writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”，which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.(运用了that引导的宾语从句，which引导的定语从句) [高分句型2]More importantly，more friendships will be forged，since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.(运用了since引导的状语从句) 二、(2025·全国Ⅱ卷) 假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．询问进展； 2．提醒交稿时间。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris， ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes， Li Hua 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Chris写一封邮件，询问他上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章的进展，并提醒交稿时间。 【参考范文】 Dear Chris， Hope this email finds you well！Last month，you kindly agreed to write an article about sports in Canada，and we're all looking forward to reading it. I'm writing to politely inquire about the progress of the article.Would you mind letting me know how it's going? Also，could I remind you that the deadline for submission is this Friday，June 14th? Your insights into Canadian sports will surely enrich our readers' understanding of global sports culture，which will be of benefit to us. Thank you again for your support! Best wishes， Li Hua 【详解】 1．词汇积累 询问：inquire →ask 理解：understanding →comprehension 此外：also →besides 肯定地：surely →certainly 2．句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I'm writing to politely inquire about the progress of the article. 拓展句：As you know，I'm writing to politely inquire about the progress of the article. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Would you mind letting me know how it's going？(运用了how引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]Your insights into Canadian sports will surely enrich our readers' understanding of global sports culture，which will be of benefit to us.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句 ) 三、(2025·1月浙江首考) 你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1．陈述看法； 2．提出建议。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于演讲稿。要求考生针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象陈述看法并提出建议。 【参考范文】 My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus Dear classmates， Recently，some of us have been filming short videos on campus.In my opinion，it can be a fun way to record campus life，but it also has its drawbacks.Not only may it distract us from our studies and even disrupt the school order，but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self-esteem when the videos don't get the expected response. I suggest we should limit the time for filming and choose proper places.Let's focus more on our academic tasks and make good use of our time on campus. Thank you! 【详解】 1．词汇积累 记录：record → document 缺点：drawback → disadvantage 分散注意力：distract → divert 建议：suggest → propose 2．句式拓展 并列句变复合句 原句：In my opinion，it can be a fun way to record campus life，but it also has its drawbacks. 拓展句：In my opinion，it can be a fun way that we can use to record campus life，but it also has its drawbacks. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Not only may it distract us from our studies and even disrupt the school order，but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self esteem when the videos don't get the expected response.(运用了not only...but also...并列结构和从属连词when 引导的时间状语从句) [高分句型2]I suggest we should limit the time for filming and choose proper places.(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句和虚拟语气) 四、(2025·北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加，为此发来邮件，就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1．提出的建议； 2．建议的理由。 提示词：倡议 proposal 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对外国好友Jim关于联合国全球青少年倡议征集活动的询问进行回复，给出倡议内容的建议及理由。 【参考范文】 Dear Jim， I'm glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN's initiative for global teenagers.Here's my advice. I suggest focusing on environmental protection.As we know，the environment is facing serious problems，which affect everyone's life.If we can raise awareness about it and encourage more people to take action，it will make a big difference.Another idea is to promote cultural exchange.We live in a world where different cultures coexist.By sharing our cultures and learning from each other，we can build a more harmonious global community. I hope these suggestions help！Let me know if you need more ideas. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 【详解】 1．词汇积累 高兴的：glad → delighted 建议：suggest→advise 关注：focus on → concentrate on 提高：raise→enhance 2．句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I'm glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN's initiative for global teenagers. 拓展句：Hearing that you want to take part in the UN's initiative for global teenagers，I feel glad. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]We live in a world where different cultures coexist.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]Let me know if you need more ideas.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 五、(2024·新高考Ⅰ卷) 假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： 1．你完成的作品； 2．你的感想。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Chris， I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Chris， I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most.Inspired by the fantastic scenery，I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond，surrounded by blooming flowers. The entire experience was incredibly refreshing.Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life.I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted. In a word，It was not just an art class；it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. Yours， Li Hua 六、(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷) 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．说明问题； 2．提出建议。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan， I'm Li Hua from Class 3. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely， Li Hua 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。 【参考范文】 Dear Ryan， I'm Li Hua from Class 3.I think it's not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.The reasons are as follows. To begin with，randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups.This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation，leaving little room for the other students to improve.Besides，students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with. My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.This way，everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 【详解】 1．词汇积累 首先：to begin with→first of all 提高：improve→progress 建议：suggestion→advice 选择：choose→select 2．句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation，leaving little room for the other students to improve.(运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2]Besides，Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with.(运用了省略句和who引导定语从句) 七、(2023·全国乙卷) 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。 注意： 1．词数：100左右； 2．题目已为你写好。 Learning A New Skill ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。 【参考范文】 Learning A New Skill When I was in my primary school，I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school.That was the first time I watched a live musical performance.The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.In the beginning，it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave.However，it did not demoralize me.I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano.Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice，I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. Even though I will not pursue as my life career，I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby.It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul. 【详解】 1．词汇积累 机会：opportunity→chance 使沮丧：demoralize→discourage 满意的：satisfied→content 空闲的：leisure→spare 2．句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply.I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. 拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply，so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]When I was in my primary school，I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句) [高分句型2]Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice，I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句) 八、(2023·全国甲卷) 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1．人物简介及事迹； 2．意义或启示。 注意： 1．词数：100左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。 【参考范文】 Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history.His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values，respect for elders，and social harmony.Confucius traveled throughout the country，imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated.His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture，fostering respect for authority，harmonious relationships，and the pursuit of knowledge.Even today，his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond. Confucius's life offers valuable lessons.He stressed the self-cultivation，respect for elders，and the pursuit of knowledge，which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world.His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity，compassion，and social responsibility. 【详解】 1．词汇积累 著名的：well-known→famous 人物：figure→person 强调：emphasize→stress 基础：foundation→basis 2．句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture，fostering respect for authority，harmonious relationships，and the pursuit of knowledge. 拓展句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture，which fostered respect for authority，harmonious relationships，and the pursuit of knowledge. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Confucius traveled throughout the country，imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语) [高分句型2]He stressed the self-cultivation，respect for elders，and the pursuit of knowledge，which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 九、(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷) 假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括： 1．节目介绍； 2．访谈的时间和话题。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Caroline， ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely， Li Hua 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。 【参考范文】 Dear Caroline， This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program—Talk and Talk.It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established.This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.Now，when having trouble in learning English well，plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.As our distinguished foreign language teacher，your aid can help us a lot.If you are available on this Sunday，I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming.I'd appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 【详解】 1．词汇积累 建立：establish→set up 了不起的：amazing→fabulous 帮助：aid→assistance 许多：plenty of→a lot of 2．句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher，your aid can help us a lot. 拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher，whose aid can help us a lot. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]Now，when having trouble in learning English well，plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了状语从句的省略) 十、(2022·1月浙江卷) 假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．回忆活动经历； 2．分享个人收获； 3．希望保持联系。 注意： 1．词数：80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris， ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。 【参考范文】 Dear Chris， How are you doing these days? It has been a year since you came back to Ireland.I miss you so much.I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago.It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together，through which I learned a lot about your food，culture and history.We really enjoyed ourselves there.What's far more important is that we became good friends then.Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year，I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown. I hope we can keep in touch often. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 【详解】 1．词汇积累 返回：come back to→return to 思念：miss→yearn 分享：share→exchange 玩得开心：enjoy oneself→have a good time→have fun 开心的：pleased→happy→delight→content 过着快乐的生活：lead a happy life→live a happy life 2．句式拓展 合并简单句 原句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland.I miss you so much. 拓展句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago.(运用了定语从句) [高分句型2]It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together，through which I learned a lot about your food，culture and history.(运用了强调句型和定语从句) [高分句型3]What's far more important is that we became good friends then.(运用了主语从句和表语从句) 十一、(2022·全国甲卷) 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1．海洋的重要性； 2．保护海洋的倡议。 注意： 1．词数：100左右； 2．短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 Our Oceans，Our Responsibility When it comes to ocean，its pollution is becoming more and more serious.World Ocean Day，________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。 【参考范文】 Our Oceans，Our Responsibility When it comes to ocean，its pollution is becoming more and more serious.World Ocean Day，falling on June 8th，is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. Ocean plays a key role in our world.Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food，but also it maintains the balance of nature.Thus，it is imperative to protect ocean.First of all，what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.For example，garbage can't be thrown into ocean.What's more，we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean.The more people are involved，the better the ocean environment is. All in all，it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean.To protect ocean is to protect ourselves. 【详解】 1．词汇积累 越来越：more and more→increasingly 重视：place importance on→attach importance to 重要的：key→significant 此外：what's more→furthermore 2．句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：World Ocean Day，falling on June 8th，is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. 拓展句：World Ocean Day，which falls on June 8th，is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food，but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运用了部分倒装结构) [高分句型2]When it comes to ocean，its pollution becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型) [高分句型3]First of all，what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句) 十二、(2022·全国乙卷) 学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1．学习活动状况描述； 2．简单评论； 3．你的建议。 注意： 1．词数：100左右； 2．短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 Learning English Beyond the Classroom Nowadays，with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers，an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。 【参考范文】 Learning English Beyond the Classroom Nowadays，with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers，an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways. It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%.However，those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. As far as I'm concerned，it is a disturbing trend.For students，what benefits most to their study is reading English books.Because of their lack of self-discipline，they're more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games.It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline，and it's also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance. 【详解】 1．词汇积累 选择：choose→select 提高：improve→strengthen 各种各样的：various→diverse 就我而言：as far as I'm concerned→from my perspective 2．句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Nowadays，with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers，an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways. 拓展句：Nowadays，because smartphones and computers are becoming more and more popular，an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%.(运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句) [高分句型2]It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline (运用了it作形式主语，to improve their self-discipline为真正的主语) 十三、(2021·全国乙卷) 你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括： 1．分析优势与不足； 2．提出学习建议。 注意： 1．词数：100左右； 2．题目和首句已为你写好。 Be smart online learners Learning online has become an important way to study recently. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达考查应用文中的发言稿，属于给提纲作文。要求学生以“Be smart online learners”为题，写一篇发言稿参赛，主题语境为人与自我中的善于学习，设置更加贴近真实生活的英语交际任务情境，考生非常熟悉并有话可说，虽给出了写作提纲，但仍具有一定的开放性和灵活性。 审题分析 思路点拨 在分析写作要求及所给提纲后，以所给标题和文章首句为依托对所给要点进行扩展，全文以三段式为宜，首句已经给出，第二段和第三段为写作重点。先介绍线上学习的优势，之后是线上学习的缺点，自然引出第三段的内容，也就是提出在线学习建议。写作内容要条理清晰，并恰当使用高级句式以提升文章档次，但所用语言要符合发言稿的长短句结合，朗朗上口的特点，同时应在结尾处发出呼吁以引起共鸣。 【参考范文】 Be smart online learners Learning online has become an important way to study recently.However，each coin has two sides.So is learning online.On the one hand，it is surely convenient and flexible for us to learn online，because it is up to us to decide what we learn and where and when we study.What's more，we can learn the lessons repeatedly.On the other hand，learning online has some weaknesses，the biggest of which is low efficiency caused by a lack of self discipline. So how can we be smart online learners？First，it's necessary to have a quiet and comfortable room，which contributes to focusing attention.Second，good time management can improve our learning efficiency.More importantly，we should form a learning group online to motivate each other. 十四、(2021·全国甲卷) 假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括： 1．阐明写信事由； 2．征求建议； 3．表示感谢。 注意： 1．词数：100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【语篇解读】　介绍中国文化给外国朋友，发布在英文网站上，这是班会的内容，因此求助外国友人，征求他们的意见。 [审题分析] [审题]　三审：人称，时态，题材 [人称]　第一人称 [时态]　将来时和一般现在时 [题材]　求助信(征求意见) 【参考范文】 Dear Chris， How is everything going with you lately？A class meeting will be held in my school about Chinese traditional cultural and it will be displayed on the English website.I am writing to ask some advice from you on what kind of Chinese conventional cultural attracts the foreigners like you most. As we all know，Chinese traditional culture includes calligraphy，Chinese knots，Chinese paintings，paper cutting，and so on.Besides，Chinese cultural also includes various cultural thoughts and spiritual concepts in the national history.How much do you want to know about each part，and would you please tell me which part you are curious about.What type of introduction will help foreigners to have a much clearer knowledge of their interested section? Your reply will be highly appreciated and thank you for your help.Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours， Li Hua 十五、(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷) 你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1．读报的经历； 2．喜爱的栏目； 3．期望和祝福。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Youth and Me ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Youth and Me Congratulations on the tenth anniversary of the launch of Youth. Youth has sparkled my interest in English and broadened my horizons.It enables me to keep pace with the latest news at home and abroad.Of all the Youth columns，I like Western World most.Written in simple but authentic English，the articles introduce me to Western society and culture.Amazingly，they also inspire me to appreciate my own culture more. I hope to continue benefiting from reading it and may Youth stay in youth forever. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $