Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals 单元话题（动物与植物）写作满分必背范文15篇-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（人教版2024）

2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals 单元话题（动物与植物）写作满分必背范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．为进一步培养和提高学生保护动物的意识，增强学生的责任感，学校英语社团开展了“My Favourite Animal”主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示问题，写一篇英文短文，描述你最喜欢的动物。 提示：Q1: What does it look like? Q2: What can it do? Q3: What is it like? Q4: Why do you like it so much? 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，包含所给信息，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 词数：不少于60词。(开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。) My Favourite Animal Animals are our good friends. My favourite animal is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favourite Animal Animals are our good friends. My favourite animal is the panda.     Pandas are cute and fluffy. They have black and white fur, with round faces and dark circles around their eyes. They can climb trees and eat bamboo skillfully. Though they look lazy, they are actually strong and playful.     I love pandas because they are gentle and symbolize peace. Protecting them reminds us to care for all endangered animals.     Let’s cherish these lovely creatures together!   【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接给出的开头，点明自己最喜欢熊猫； 第二步：介绍熊猫的长相、能做什么以及熊猫的性格特点等； 第三步：介绍自己喜欢熊猫的原因； 第四步：呼吁大家保护熊猫。 [亮点词汇] ①climb trees爬树 ②symbolize peace象征着和平 ③care for照料，照顾 [高分句型] ①Though they look lazy, they are actually strong and playful. (Though引导的让步状语从句) ②I love pandas because they are gentle and symbolize peace. (because引导的原因状语从句) 2．在当今世界，很多稀有动物都濒临灭绝。在我国，老虎是重点保护动物。为唤醒人们保护老虎、热爱老虎的意识，请你根据提示，以“Save the Tigers”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：1. 参考提示内容，选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Save the Tigers The tiger is one of the largest cats in the world. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Save the Tigers The tiger is one of the largest cats in the world. Tigers have orange fur and dark stripes. They can run very fast. Tigers are important to the environment because they help keep the number of the other wild animals in balance. However, tigers are in danger of disappearing now. Some people hunt and kill them for money. And people have cut down many trees. As forests disappear, tigers lose their homes. We should do something to help them. We should build some nature reserves for them and plant more trees. We must stop killing tigers. I hope that tigers can live peacefully on earth with people. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍老虎的基本信息以及它的重要性； 第二步，写出老虎的危险处境； 第三步，提出帮助老虎的方法，并呼吁大家保护老虎。 [亮点词汇] ①in danger of doing sth有……的危险 ②cut down砍倒 ③stop doing sth停止做某事 [高分句型] I hope that tigers can live peacefully on earth with people.（that引导的宾语从句） 3．假如你是Lisa，上周六你和朋友参观了蝴蝶馆（Butterfly House）。请根据表格中的提示信息，写一篇题为“A trip to the Butterfly House”的英文短语，介绍你上周六的活动。 A trip to the Butterfly House 时间 上周六 参观者 Lisa and Rose 地点 Butterfly House 活动内容 看蝴蝶、给蝴蝶拍照、听有关蝴蝶的故事、了解有关蝴蝶的知识 感受 ......... 要求： （1）短文必须包括表格中所有内容，可适当发挥，使行文通顺连贯； （2）词数70左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A trip to the Butterfly House Hey, I’m Lisa. Last Saturday I visited the Butterfly House with my friend Rose. There we saw many kinds of butterflies. They came from different countries and they were all very beautiful. We took lots of photos of them. The guide told us some stories about butterflies. They were very interesting. Well, we learned a lot and had a good time in the Butterfly House. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍和谁一起去的；   第二步，介绍所见所闻 第三步，表达感受。   [亮点词汇]   ①many kinds of各种各样的   ②come from来自 ③take photos拍照   [高分句型] ①Well, we learned a lot and had a good time in the Butterfly House.（and连接并列句）   4．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom想了解你最喜欢的动物。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件。 提示：1．你最喜欢的动物是什么； 2．它长什么样子； 3．它来自哪里； 4．它喜欢吃什么； 5．你为什么喜欢它。 要求：1．语句通顺，语法正确； 2．包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 3．不少于60词。 Dear Tom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, I’m glad to tell you about my favorite animal. My favorite animal is the panda.   Pandas are cute. They have black eyes, black ears and a white body. They are from Sichuan, China. Pandas love eating bamboo very much. They can eat a lot of bamboo every day. I like pandas because they are so lovely and unique. They are also a symbol of China. I hope I can see them in Sichuan one day. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要描述自己最喜欢的动物； 第二步，具体描述这种动物的外貌、生活习性等； 第三步，描述喜欢这种动物的理由。 [亮点词汇] ①be glad to ... 很高兴…… ②a symbol of ……的象征 [高分句型] I like pandas because they are so lovely and unique. (because引导原因状语从句) 5．所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。学校英语校刊Teens将要举行以“One Earth, One Home”为题的英语作文竞赛活动，请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇作文。 要点提示： 1. What problems are wild animals facing? 2. Why do we need to protect wild animals? 3. What can we do to protect them as students? 注意： 1. 词数不少于80； 2. 须包含全部提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，语意连贯，语法正确； 4. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 5. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 One Earth, One Home The earth is home to both humans and animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 One Earth, One Home The earth is home to both humans and animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans. People often cut down trees for money. What’s worse, people kill animals for their fur or bones. So many wild animals are in danger. It’s time for us to save the earth and the wild animals. If we take action to protect our earth and wild animals right away, our earth will become more comfortable for us to live in and wild animals can live safely and happily. First, as students, we can try to be volunteers. What’s more, we shouldn’t buy fur coats. Last but not least, we should make more people understand the importance of protecting the earth and the wild animals. Let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for us humans and wild animals as well. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“地球是我们的家园”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从动物面临的问题、为什么要保护动物和我们能做什么等方面阐述； 第三步，书写结语。表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①because of由于 ②in danger处于危险中 ③take action采取行动 ④What’s more除此之外，而且 ⑤Last but not least最后但同样重要的是 [高分句型] ①It’s time for us to save the earth and the wild animals.（It’s time for sb. to do sth.句型） ②If we take action to protect our earth and animals right away, our earth will become comfortable for us to live in and animals can live happily. （if引导的条件状语从句） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．某英文网站正在开展以“植物的力量”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍一种植物，并说说你为什么要选择这种植物。 提示问题: (1) What is its name? (2) Where does it grow? (3) Why did you choose it? (4) What are some interesting facts about it? 要求:1.词数80以上；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Power of Plants Plants are very important to us. They provide food, medicine, and beauty. Today, I want to introduce one of the most resilient plants I know—bamboo. Bamboo is truly a marvel of nature. It grows in many parts of Asia, particularly in mountainous areas. While other plants require specific conditions to survive, bamboo thrives as an incredibly strong and adaptable plant. I chose bamboo because it is one of the fastest-growing plants on Earth. Some bamboo can grow over 90 centimeters in just a single day! This rapid growth is not just fascinating but also highly beneficial. Moreover, it can be used to make furniture, paper, and even clothing. An interesting fact is that bamboo can also purify the air. Let’s protect plants like bamboo. They are not only useful but also demonstrate the power of nature. Every plant deserves our care and respect. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，以“植物的力量”为核心主题，聚焦竹子的生长特性、实用价值与独特优势，既传递植物知识，又升华对自然力量的敬畏，内容兼具科学性与感染力； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述竹子的生长分布、核心特点、实用价值及对植物的呼吁；使用情态动词强调竹子的能力与潜力，语气客观且富有肯定性，时态运用贴合逻辑，严谨流畅； ③提示：文章紧扣所有提示问题，完整覆盖“植物名称、生长地点、选择原因、有趣事实”，补充了“适应能力强、无需特定生存条件”等细节，结尾升华到“保护植物、尊重自然”，内容完整，逻辑连贯，无真实信息，词数满足80以上要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇承接已给主题，先总述植物对人类的重要性，再自然引出本文要介绍的植物——竹子，通过“most resilient”一词初步凸显竹子的特质，为下文展开铺垫； 第二步，围绕提示问题分层介绍竹子：先说明生长地点与生长特性；再解释选择原因；接着阐述实用价值与有趣事实，用具体数据和功能让竹子的“力量”更具象，增强说服力； 第三步，结尾发出呼吁，并升华主题，呼应征文“植物的力量”的核心，让文章从“介绍植物”上升到“传递环保意识”，提升文本深度，收束全文。 [亮点词汇] ①resilient有韧性的 ②marvel of nature自然界的奇迹 ③mountainous areas山区 ④adaptable适应性强的 ⑤fast-growing生长迅速的 ⑥purify the air净化空气 ⑦deserve值得 [高分句型] ①While other plants require specific conditions to survive, bamboo thrives as an incredibly strong and adaptable plant.（“While”引导让步状语从句） ②I chose bamboo because it is one of the fastest-growing plants on Earth. （“because”引导原因状语从句） ③They are not only useful but also demonstrate the power of nature.（运用“not only... but also...”结构） 7．用所学内容向同学介绍你最喜欢的一种植物。注意最高级的使用。(词数：50左右) 内容提示: the shape, the growth habits, the symbolic meaning, the changes __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Sunflowers are my favorite plants. They have large, bright-yellow flower heads, and the biggest ones can be over 30 cm across, with brown centers. Their tall stems, sometimes reaching 3 meters, are strong enough to hold up the huge blooms. They love sunlight and grow best in sunny and warm places. In many cultures, sunflowers symbolize honesty and positive energy because they always face the sun. As the sun moves across the sky, sunflowers follow it throughout the day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇小作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：需涵盖植物的形状、生长习性、象征意义、变化等内容，适当发挥使文章通顺完整，词数约50词。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接点明最喜欢的植物是向日葵，引出介绍对象； 第二步，分别从形状、生长习性、象征意义、变化等方面介绍向日葵； 第三步，通过对向日葵特点的描述，自然传达出对它的喜爱，完成介绍。 [亮点词汇] ①bright-yellow亮黄色的 ②symbolize象征 ③positive energy正能量 [高分句型] ①They have large, bright-yellow flower heads, and the biggest ones can be over 30 cm across, with brown centers. (“with + 形容词 + 名词”复合结构，补充说明花盘中心的颜色) ②In many cultures, sunflowers symbolize honesty and positive energy because they always face the sun.(because引导原因状语从句，解释向日葵象征意义的缘由) 8．你校英文报“人与自然”栏目对蓝鲸进行了报道，并决定在校内组织一次英语演讲活动，以此呼吁大家从小事做起，保护动物。假如你参加此次活动，请根据写作要点提示完成演讲稿。 写作要点： 1. What situation are the blue whales in? (very few blue whales, die ... ) 2. Why are they in such a situation? 3. How to protect them? 要求： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇: die out灭绝；throw litter扔垃圾；try one’s best尽力 Dear my friends, As we all know, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear my friends, As we all know, blue whales live in the deep sea and are the largest animals in the world. They feed on small fishes in the sea. Sadly, they are in danger now. There are very few blue whales left. They are dying out. There are some reasons. People are taking away their homes, so blue whales have fewer safe places to live. People kill them for different uses. People also kill other sea animals, so they don’t have enough food. In order to protect blue whales in the wild, we should make plans. Firstly, we shouldn’t throw litter into the sea. Secondly, we should stop people from killing them. We can do this by not buying things made of whales. At last, we can think of as many other ways as possible to protect sea animals. I really hope that we can try our best to save them! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇英语演讲稿； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：需包含蓝鲸的处境、处境形成的原因以及保护措施等信息，可适当发挥，使文章通顺、连贯，词数约80词，开头已给出。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，说明蓝鲸的现状； 第二步，阐述蓝鲸处于危险处境的原因； 第三步，提出保护蓝鲸的具体措施，并呼吁大家尽力保护它们； [亮点词汇] ①in danger处于危险中 ②die out灭绝 ③try one’s best尽力 [高分句型] ①Sadly, they are in danger now. There are very few blue whales left. They are dying out. (“in danger”“die out”短语的运用，清晰说明蓝鲸的处境) ②People are taking away their homes, so blue whales have fewer safe places to live. (“so”引导结果状语从句，说明人类行为对蓝鲸的影响) ③In order to protect blue whales in the wild, we should make plans. (“in order to”表目的，引出保护蓝鲸的举措) ④I really hope that we can try our best to save them! (“hope that”引导宾语从句，表达希望) 9．假如你是学校动物俱乐部的一名成员，最近你搜集了红袋鼠（Red Kangaroos）的相关资料。请你根据所给提示写一篇英语短文，向你的同学介绍一下这种动物。 分布：澳大利亚干燥地区 外形：最大的袋鼠；长尾巴，能帮助站立 食物：草和其他植物 特点：擅长跳跃；常于清晨或夜间活动；以群居为主 野外平均寿命：23岁 要求：70词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Red Kangaroos Do you know red kangaroos? They live in the dry places of Australia. They are the largest of all kangaroos. They have a long tail to help them stand. They like to eat grass and other plants. They are good at jumping. And they often go out in the morning or at night. They usually live in groups. And they can live up to 23 years old in the wild. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇说明文，根据提示写一篇介绍动物的英语短文； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：题目要求根据提示介绍红袋鼠，注意表述完整，行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍红袋鼠； 第二步，介绍红袋鼠的分布地区，外形，饮食，特点以及平均寿命等信息。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长于 ②live up to活到 [高分句型] They have a long tail to help them stand.（to do不定式表目的） 10．每年的10月4日是世界动物日。该节日的设立旨在号召人们保护动物，善待动物。然而，近年来，人类活动破坏了许多动物的生活环境，使它们面临灭绝的危险。我们应该如何保护那些濒危动物? 请以“How to Protect Animals in Danger”为题写一篇90词左右的英语短文。 How to Protect Animals in Danger ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Protect Animals in Danger Animals are an important part of our natural world, but many of them are in danger now. Here are some useful ways to protect them. First, we should find out the dangers these animals are facing. Then we can tell others about them by giving speeches at school or sharing online. We can also take part in some activities to help protect the animals. What’s more, we must stop buying things made from animals. Finally, we should build greener homes for animals. In a word, animals are our friends, so we should work together to protect them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当增加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引出问题，点明主题； 第二步：列举方法，有序展开，从调查了解、宣传倡导、亲身参与、抵制消费到保护栖息地，由浅入深地列出多项具体措施； 第三步：总结全文，发出号召。 [亮点词汇] ①important重要的 ②in danger在危险之中 ③useful有用的 ④take part in参加 [高分句型] We can also take part in some activities to help protect the animals. (动词不定式作目的状语) 能力综合实践5篇 11．动物作为人类最亲密的朋友，以其独特的魅力为我们的世界增添了绚丽色彩。你心中最情有独钟的动物是什么呢？请你根据提示，以“My Favourite Animal”为题，向大家介绍你最喜欢的动物。 提示： 1. What’s it? 2. What does it look like? 3. What does it like/dislike doing? 4. Why do you like it? 5. What are the rules (规则) for visiting or looking after the animal? 参考词汇：eyes, tail, be good at..., because, friendly/cute/loyal..., zoo, follow rules, feed, touch... 要求： 1. 短文必须包含所有提示要点，可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于70，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 My Favourite Animal Animals are our good friends. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favourite Animal Animals are our good friends. Of all the animals, I like the panda best. The panda is so cute. It’s black and white. It has big eyes, a round face and a short tail. The panda looks like a teddy bear. It likes eating bamboo. It’s good at climbing trees. I love the panda because it’s not only beautiful but also very friendly. If you go to the zoo to see pandas, you should follow some rules. First, don’t feed them. Second, don’t touch them. Third, keep quiet. In a word, the panda is my favourite animal. It brings me a lot of happiness. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第三人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主旨，表明在所有动物中，“我”最喜欢熊猫； 第二步，描述熊猫的外形、习性，并说明喜欢熊猫的原因； 第三步，列举去动物园看熊猫时应遵守的规则； 第四步，总结全文，强调熊猫是“我”最爱的动物，给“我”带来很多快乐。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at 擅长 ②in a word 总之 [高分句型] ①I love the panda because it’s not only beautiful but also very friendly. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②If you go to the zoo to see pandas, you should follow some rules. (if引导的条件状语从句) 12．学校阅读俱乐部举行主题为“Wild animals are our friends”的征文活动。请根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括：野生动物目前的现状、造成这种现状的原因、人们应该采取的措施等。 要求： (1)语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范； (2)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Wild animals are our friends.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Wild animals are our friends. We share the common nature, so the way we treat wild animals is very important. Many wild animals have nowhere to live because people cut down many trees and build houses in animals’ living areas. Besides, in order to make clothes, people have killed a large number of animals for their fur. As a result, animal species around the world are decreasing day by day. It’s time for people to take action! The government should make laws at first. If people kill or hunt animals, they will be punished. And people should know the importance of protecting animals and try their best to protect wild animals. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕保护野生动物展开，分析了野生动物面临的生存问题及解决措施； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述野生动物的现状、人类活动对它们的影响及相关建议，体现问题的普遍性和解决措施的时效性；使用现在进行时强调物种减少的持续状态，时态运用贴合论述逻辑； ③提示：文章紧扣主题，包含野生动物是人类朋友的观点、它们面临的困境、导致的后果及解决措施，内容完整，逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明野生动物是人类朋友，人与动物共享自然，强调对待它们的方式很重要，引出保护野生动物的话题； 第二步，分析野生动物面临的问题及原因。说明人类砍伐树木、侵占栖息地导致动物无家可归，为制衣捕杀大量动物获取皮毛，进而导致全球动物物种日益减少； 第三步，提出解决措施。呼吁人们采取行动，建议政府先立法，对捕杀动物者进行惩罚，同时倡导人们认识到保护动物的重要性并尽力保护它们，收束全文。 [亮点词汇] ①wild animals野生动物 ②common nature共同的自然 ③living areas栖息地 ④animal species动物物种 ⑤take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①We share the common nature, so the way we treat wild animals is very important.（定语从句） ②Many wild animals have nowhere to live because people cut down many trees and build houses in animals’ living areas.（“because”引导原因状语从句） ③If people kill or hunt animals, they will be punished.（“if”引导条件状语从句） 13．某英语报社针对人类为了自己的利益对动物滥捕滥杀，而导致越来越多的动物濒临灭绝的现象，举行“How to Protect the Wild Animals”为题的征文大赛，请你写一篇短文参赛。文章要包括以下几个要点。 1.如今，世界上的许多野生动物正处于危险中，这儿有很多原因。 人们砍伐树木，动物们没有地方可住。因为水污染问题，这儿没有足够干净的水可以喝。人们为了钱、皮毛、肉等而杀害动物。 2.动物是我们的朋友，我们应该与动物和平生活，因此保护动物是非常重要的。 我们该如何保护动物呢？首先，没有买卖就没有杀害，因此我们必须阻止人们杀害动物。其次，我们可以筹款去保护动物，同时，我们应该爱护环境。最后，为了保护野生动物，政府应该建立更多的自然公园并制定其他计划。 3.想起野生动物处于危险中是令人伤心的。但是如果我们可以做一些事情去帮助它们，地球上将会有更多的野生动物，世界也会更美丽。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How to Protect the Wild Animals     Let’s talk about some ways to protect the wild animals. Today, many wild animals in the world are in danger. There are many reasons for this. People cut down trees, so animals lose their homes. Water pollution also means there is not enough clean water for them to drink. Worst of all, people kill animals for money, for their fur, for meat, and for other things. Animals are our friends. We should live peacefully with them. So, protecting animals is very important. How can we protect them? First, we must stop people from killing wild animals. Remember, no buying, no killing! Second, we can raise money to help protect animals. At the same time, we should take good care of our environment. Finally, governments should build more nature parks and make other plans to protect wild animals. It is sad to think about wild animals in danger. But if we can do something to help them, there will be more wild animals living happily on Earth, and our world will become a more beautiful place. Let’s all work together to protect our animal friends!    I hope these ideas will help the wild animals. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍野生动物处于危险的原因； 第二步，介绍如何保护动物； 第三步，表达感受并号召大家保护动物。 [亮点词汇] ①cut down砍倒 ②worst of all最糟糕的是 ③at the same time同时 [高分句型] ①Water pollution also means there is not enough clean water for them to drink. (宾语从句) ②But if we can do something to help them, there will be more wild animals living happily on Earth, and our world will become a more beautiful place.  (if引导的条件状语从句) 14．假定你是李华，英语周报英文编辑Justin来信询问你对“养宠物是养猫好还是养狗好”这一话题的观点，请你用英文给他回信。 内容包括：（1）陈述观点； （2）陈述原因或事实； （3）发表结论。 要求：（1）词数80～100，格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Justin, Nowadays, many people like keeping pets. Most people choose to keep cats or dogs as their pets. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】参考范文： Dear Justin, Nowadays, many people like keeping pets. Most people choose to keep cats or dogs as their pets. As for me, I prefer to keep cats as my pets. First, it’s much easier to keep cats. You needn’t walk them or play with them all the time. Second, I think cats are lovelier than dogs. In general, cats are smaller than most dogs so it feels nicer to hold them in our arms. Finally, cats are cleaner than dogs. They seldom go outside and they can clean themselves by licking their hairs. So I think it’s a good idea to keep cats because they will bring me lots of happiness. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]    ①题材：本文是一篇书信体议论文；    ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时；    ③提示：围绕“养猫或养狗”话题陈述观点，需包含观点、理由、结论三部分，注意语言简洁连贯。     [写作步骤]    第一步，明确表达个人偏好；    第二步，分点说明理由；    第三步，总结观点。     [亮点词汇]    ①keep cats养猫    ②hold them in our arms抱在怀里    ③lick their hairs舔毛     [高分句型]    ①First, ... Second, ... Finally,...（罗列观点）    ②So I think it’s a good idea to keep cats because they will bring me lots of happiness.（宾语从句，原因状语从句）    15．假如你是李华，你最喜爱的动物是国家一级保护野生动物——丹顶鹤(red-crowned crane)。今年的某国际演讲比赛即将在加拿大举行，主题是“Animal World”。假如你要代表中国参加此次的比赛，请你根据以下写作提示和要求写一篇英语短文参赛，呼吁全世界的人共同保护丹顶鹤。 写作提示： 1.特征：体长为1.2-1.5米，雄性(the males)比雌性(the females)稍大一些； 2.栖息地：中国、俄罗斯、日本等； 3.濒临灭绝的原因：栖息地 (habitat) 丧失、人类捕杀等； 4.保护措施：…… 写作要求： 1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear judges and audience, I’m Li Hua from China. I’d like to introduce you to my favorite animal, the red-crowned crane. The red-crowned crane, a wild animal under first-class state protection in China, is 1.2-1.5 meters long, with males slightly larger than females. They mainly inhabit China, Russia, Japan and so on. However, they are endangered due to habitat loss and human hunting. Therefore, we should call on people all over the world to take measures to protect red-crowned cranes. Let’s work together to save these beautiful creatures! Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，具体为国际演讲比赛的参赛短文； ②时态：时态主要使用“一般现在时”，用于描述丹顶鹤的特征、栖息地、濒临灭绝的原因以及保护措施等； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生需要确保包含所有提示信息，并可以适当发挥以丰富内容，同时突出写作重点，即呼吁全世界的人共同保护丹顶鹤。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要介绍丹顶鹤，并引出其濒危的现状，为后文的保护呼吁做铺垫； 第二步，具体阐述丹顶鹤的特征、栖息地以及濒临灭绝的原因，这是文章的核心部分，需要详细且准确地描述； 第三步，提出保护措施，并表达呼吁全世界的人共同保护丹顶鹤的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①introduce...to...把……介绍给…… ②endangered濒危的 ③habitat栖息地 ④hunt捕杀 ⑤take measures to do sth.采取措施做某事 ⑥call on呼吁 [高分句型] ①The red-crowned crane, a wild animal under first-class state protection in China, is 1.2-1.5 meters long, with males slightly larger than females.（同位语结构） 16 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 21 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals 单元话题（动物与植物）写作满分必背范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．为进一步培养和提高学生保护动物的意识，增强学生的责任感，学校英语社团开展了“My Favourite Animal”主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示问题，写一篇英文短文，描述你最喜欢的动物。 提示：Q1: What does it look like? Q2: What can it do? Q3: What is it like? Q4: Why do you like it so much? 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，包含所给信息，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 词数：不少于60词。(开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。) My Favourite Animal Animals are our good friends. My favourite animal is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．在当今世界，很多稀有动物都濒临灭绝。在我国，老虎是重点保护动物。为唤醒人们保护老虎、热爱老虎的意识，请你根据提示，以“Save the Tigers”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：1. 参考提示内容，选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Save the Tigers The tiger is one of the largest cats in the world. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是Lisa，上周六你和朋友参观了蝴蝶馆（Butterfly House）。请根据表格中的提示信息，写一篇题为“A trip to the Butterfly House”的英文短语，介绍你上周六的活动。 A trip to the Butterfly House 时间 上周六 参观者 Lisa and Rose 地点 Butterfly House 活动内容 看蝴蝶、给蝴蝶拍照、听有关蝴蝶的故事、了解有关蝴蝶的知识 感受 ......... 要求： （1）短文必须包括表格中所有内容，可适当发挥，使行文通顺连贯； （2）词数70左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom想了解你最喜欢的动物。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件。 提示：1．你最喜欢的动物是什么； 2．它长什么样子； 3．它来自哪里； 4．它喜欢吃什么； 5．你为什么喜欢它。 要求：1．语句通顺，语法正确； 2．包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 3．不少于60词。 Dear Tom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 5．所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。学校英语校刊Teens将要举行以“One Earth, One Home”为题的英语作文竞赛活动，请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇作文。 要点提示： 1. What problems are wild animals facing? 2. Why do we need to protect wild animals? 3. What can we do to protect them as students? 注意： 1. 词数不少于80； 2. 须包含全部提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，语意连贯，语法正确； 4. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 5. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 One Earth, One Home The earth is home to both humans and animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．某英文网站正在开展以“植物的力量”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍一种植物，并说说你为什么要选择这种植物。 提示问题: (1) What is its name? (2) Where does it grow? (3) Why did you choose it? (4) What are some interesting facts about it? 要求:1.词数80以上；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．用所学内容向同学介绍你最喜欢的一种植物。注意最高级的使用。(词数：50左右) 内容提示: the shape, the growth habits, the symbolic meaning, the changes __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．你校英文报“人与自然”栏目对蓝鲸进行了报道，并决定在校内组织一次英语演讲活动，以此呼吁大家从小事做起，保护动物。假如你参加此次活动，请根据写作要点提示完成演讲稿。 写作要点： 1. What situation are the blue whales in? (very few blue whales, die ... ) 2. Why are they in such a situation? 3. How to protect them? 要求： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇: die out灭绝；throw litter扔垃圾；try one’s best尽力 Dear my friends, As we all know, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假如你是学校动物俱乐部的一名成员，最近你搜集了红袋鼠（Red Kangaroos）的相关资料。请你根据所给提示写一篇英语短文，向你的同学介绍一下这种动物。 分布：澳大利亚干燥地区 外形：最大的袋鼠；长尾巴，能帮助站立 食物：草和其他植物 特点：擅长跳跃；常于清晨或夜间活动；以群居为主 野外平均寿命：23岁 要求：70词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．每年的10月4日是世界动物日。该节日的设立旨在号召人们保护动物，善待动物。然而，近年来，人类活动破坏了许多动物的生活环境，使它们面临灭绝的危险。我们应该如何保护那些濒危动物? 请以“How to Protect Animals in Danger”为题写一篇90词左右的英语短文。 How to Protect Animals in Danger ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．动物作为人类最亲密的朋友，以其独特的魅力为我们的世界增添了绚丽色彩。你心中最情有独钟的动物是什么呢？请你根据提示，以“My Favourite Animal”为题，向大家介绍你最喜欢的动物。 提示： 1. What’s it? 2. What does it look like? 3. What does it like/dislike doing? 4. Why do you like it? 5. What are the rules (规则) for visiting or looking after the animal? 参考词汇：eyes, tail, be good at..., because, friendly/cute/loyal..., zoo, follow rules, feed, touch... 要求： 1. 短文必须包含所有提示要点，可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于70，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 My Favourite Animal Animals are our good friends. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．学校阅读俱乐部举行主题为“Wild animals are our friends”的征文活动。请根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括：野生动物目前的现状、造成这种现状的原因、人们应该采取的措施等。 要求： (1)语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范； (2)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Wild animals are our friends.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．某英语报社针对人类为了自己的利益对动物滥捕滥杀，而导致越来越多的动物濒临灭绝的现象，举行“How to Protect the Wild Animals”为题的征文大赛，请你写一篇短文参赛。文章要包括以下几个要点。 1.如今，世界上的许多野生动物正处于危险中，这儿有很多原因。 人们砍伐树木，动物们没有地方可住。因为水污染问题，这儿没有足够干净的水可以喝。人们为了钱、皮毛、肉等而杀害动物。 2.动物是我们的朋友，我们应该与动物和平生活，因此保护动物是非常重要的。 我们该如何保护动物呢？首先，没有买卖就没有杀害，因此我们必须阻止人们杀害动物。其次，我们可以筹款去保护动物，同时，我们应该爱护环境。最后，为了保护野生动物，政府应该建立更多的自然公园并制定其他计划。 3.想起野生动物处于危险中是令人伤心的。但是如果我们可以做一些事情去帮助它们，地球上将会有更多的野生动物，世界也会更美丽。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．假定你是李华，英语周报英文编辑Justin来信询问你对“养宠物是养猫好还是养狗好”这一话题的观点，请你用英文给他回信。 内容包括：（1）陈述观点； （2）陈述原因或事实； （3）发表结论。 要求：（1）词数80～100，格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Justin, Nowadays, many people like keeping pets. Most people choose to keep cats or dogs as their pets. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 15．假如你是李华，你最喜爱的动物是国家一级保护野生动物——丹顶鹤(red-crowned crane)。今年的某国际演讲比赛即将在加拿大举行，主题是“Animal World”。假如你要代表中国参加此次的比赛，请你根据以下写作提示和要求写一篇英语短文参赛，呼吁全世界的人共同保护丹顶鹤。 写作提示： 1.特征：体长为1.2-1.5米，雄性(the males)比雌性(the females)稍大一些； 2.栖息地：中国、俄罗斯、日本等； 3.濒临灭绝的原因：栖息地 (habitat) 丧失、人类捕杀等； 4.保护措施：…… 写作要求： 1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 9 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $